Flying Vantas

So, I need critique and comments on this story. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/256053/fluttershy-obtains-an-afro It's considered funny, and updates will come along with every tumblr ask. Post your opinion and suggestions here.

What is the dumbest thing you have ever done? Post it here. I once pooped in my bathroom sink, in the dark I though it was the toilet. Yes, my sink is very low and small!

I have no Steam, but I do play the MLP: FIM Gameloft game.

Poniarcade, eh? Link me please...

Can somepony explain the ranks here? Please? Also, I'm used to communities who swear their f**king heads off, so please excuse my language...

I know what you did there.

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Rainbow Dash How did you find MLP Forums?: Googled the Gameloft bugs and found a thread. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: Found it on G+ whilst spying on a spammer. Thought it was stupid but found Season Four. Hiya! I'm Space Kitty. I have a bunch of other accounts such as: PonyMC: Space Kitty Brohoof: Space Kitty Gameloft Live: spacekitty320 Fimfiction: Space Kitty Minecraft: pompomkittyrocks Webkinz: NOPENOPENOPE! My mom mad me use my real name for that... Tumblr blogs I own: spacekittyanswers.tumblr.com , askgamerloo.tumblr.com , asknerdybelle.tumblr.com , askastronauttwilight.tumblr.com , and askafroshy.tumblr.com . This "space kitty" came from when I was on PonyMC (Minecraft server) wearing glass on my head. Someone looked at my gamertag (pompomkittyrocks), then at my helmet, and said "OH MY GOSH IT'S A SPACE KITTY!" and the nickname stuck. I love the fandom and hope to get some help with the app... ~Spacey~