I like the melody you put into it, and you can defently hear the drums or bass that's suppose to be in there. I wouldnt add a classic drum kit to it, since it leans more towards the techoish type. I'd probably lean more towards a hardsytle bass, or something along the lines. And what I'd do, instead of hearing "are you crazy" add some other qouts in there as well. Mix it up a bit