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Summer Breeze

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  1. @@Blitz Boom, @@Frosty Frost, summer was so happy that lyriel would come live in the ever free forest now, this was going to be amazing! it couldn't have worked out any better. She hugged her big friend and couldn't wait to show her the forest. but the hug didn't last long because nerzhei came angry out of the door. that didn't look good at all. Summer was highly concerned about the dragon, even to the part where she almost felt sorry for her. Quietly she folowed her across the camp to the place that seemed to be her home. Before she could ask her what had happened frosty had already asked it and the answer didn't sound good. when the ground shook summer flew up scared and then she realised nerzhei did that. She landed again and took a step back. half of her wanted to give the dragon a hug but the other, smarter, side knew that she probably wouldn't want their sympathy right now. When she walked into the tent summer folowed her. "So, cronk just abandoned you from your home. What a big, mean, stinking, idiotic, mean, stupid jerk!" summer said angry, stumping her hoof on the ground with every mean word she said about cronk. "And it's totally not deserved, you did such a good job, you detected us and frightened us and brought us here. you couldn't have done it any better. He is probably, almost certainly, just jelous of you. you are so smart, look at all the study, thingys you got here!" she gestured to the gems and papers on the walls and all the other smart looking stuff that she didn't fully understand.
  2. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne nodded in agreement with Jacks statement about this being embaresing and then she and grinned. She walked to the windows and grabbed the fancy curtains "here we go" She said as she pulled it. the heavy, fancy curtain fell down, almosty burrying joanne but she managed to step aside just on time. "And that's how you take down a curtain." she said as she threw the curtain in a corner and walked to the next one.
  3. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Bella looked at the school, it was big and fancy just as she had imagined. but most of all it didn't look verry electronic music vriendly which slightly worried her but she hoped it would be alright, a music school couldn't call itself a music school if not every kind of music was welcome, right? Bella looked back at mikkel and felt the warmth of his hand around hers, she nodded "Together." She said and smiled.
  4. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne nodded, those coctails sounded good and quite apropriate for a pub. The only thing she oped is that they wouldn't screw it up, because if they did then she would have to kik someones ass again and that was soooo exhausting. she went to the main restaurand with jack and looked around, all those fancy things, it almost made her vomit. "Why did they ever call themselves a bar to begin with?" she wondered "This doesn't look like a bar at all, not even close." she shook her head. "okay, where to begin?" She then asked jack.
  5. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne nodded as she listened to Jack explain his recipe, it souded good to her. "you don't do anything without your whiskey, do you?" She said rolling her eyes. then she remembered something "and how about the drinks? I beleve that's your speciality." she said to him and put her hands in at her hips. "and who is going to organise the make over? come on, mr jack, what's the battleplan?"
  6. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne chuckled "no need to hire a demolition expert, I can do that aswell." she said but then she got serious again and took a deep breath before she started talking about the menu "of course we are going to make the traditional english dishes, we gotta have a traditional english breakfast on the menu obviously but we can spice it up a bit by adding adding some interesting spices. We could also make beef wellington pork pie, it's a fun mix between two traditional english dishes. and we want a sunday roast on the menu, roast beef with yorkshire pudding, toad in the hole with cumberland sausage... " She summed up some more dishes then she added "but no more chicken, never again." And grinned evil to the owners.
  7. whoa, it is soo beautifull! it looks so clean and detailed. I absolutely love the amount of details you put in it. and the shadows, they are just perfect! I also love how you only colored the necklase, bow and eyes, they really attract the eye to that area of the drawing which is really good! my rating: superamazingfantasticilicious/10
  8. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne walked over to Jack to help him unpack the new ingredients. seeing all the fresh food made her so happy, this was a billion times better as that slimey chicken. "Let's hope this won't end up the same as that poor chicken." Joanne said and then she chuckled as she thought of how luna would've reacted if she would see that chicken, the owners wouldn't be alive anymore, that was sure.
  9. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne kept an eye on the owners cleaning the kitchen. she rubbed the back of her neck out of frustration. "Come on guys, can't you two go fucking faster?" She asked and almost felt the need to start helping them because they were so slow. But she decided to help them another way, when one of the guys sat on his knees on the ground, trying to clean under a cabinet Joanne kicked his but "Does that make it clearer?" She asked with a sweet but deadly voice. now they finaly understood it and they suddenly got a whole lot faster while they kept looking over their shoulders to make sure joanne wasn't suddenly behind them.
  10. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne had gotten the staff to start with cleaning the kitchen, she had been nicer to them as to the owners since it wasn't their fault that the restaurand was like this. She had told the staff not to do too much since the owners had to do the most things. She could hear Jack screaming at them and she ordered the staff to stop working and sit down. "idiots, your lovely staff has already started with cleaning for you, be thankfull, and now fucking start cleaning!" She said to them and stared at them with a deadly look that told them that if they wouldn't start cleaning inmediately they would get in majour troubles.
  11. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne chuckled too "indeed, you know, someone had to record this, would be hilarious." she said, then she got serious again too "sounds good, you can keep an eye on those two to make sure it stays in controll then I'll go and get the staff to work. send them to me as soon as they can." she said then she turned around and went to the kitchen.
  12. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne nodded "let's do it." she said, then she grabbed the chicken and went to the main restaurand. Thank goodness it was still early and there were not many people. She climbed on the counter and coughed loudly, everyone looked at her. "ladies and gentlemen, stop eating right now! no, not one bite anymore!" she said and the people started mumbling confused "I wan you all to get up and go have breakfast somewhere else because this is what you're eating." she grabbed a hand of the slimey green chicken and showed them to all the people. "the idiots who call themselves owners use this as their chicken. if you have eaten chicken please go see a docter if you feel unwell. Now I want you all to go to this countere here and get your money back. scream at those two dickheads as much as you want because they deserve it. thanks you." she said as she jumped down from the counter She stood in a corner and looked with a sadistic smile how the people were all gathered around the counter and screaming at mr bald and mr bulky. some were even throwing food at them. she stuck her head into the kitchen "you gotta see this." she said to jack.
  13. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne had almost laughed out loud when Jack threw the slimey chicken in the bulky's face. she almost felt jelousy that she wasn't the one to throw it but since he dicovered it so he had the honour to do so. Then she nodded, Jack was right, some serious shit needed to happen here. She rubbed the back of her neck when she thought "We first need to make sure everyone who is eating here or is comming to eat here is warned and gets the fuck outta here. we also need new supplies pronto and those guys need to fucking learn how to cook." she said as she looked at the way the two men went. "I can go make sure the people will get the fuck out of here" she threw an evil look at the chicken "And then you can go take care of the new ingredients. when that's done we can clean up this fucking mess that they call kitchen together and then we'll see what's next. agreed?" she said and stuck out her hand.
  14. @@Love Doctor Blaze, joanne was standing in the kitchen, chrinching because the two men were so terribly slow and every move they made showed their lack of cooking skill. Then Jack walked into the kitchen and Joanne stared in horror at what he just threw on the table. "Santo merda!" she whispered in disbeleve, no fucking way that That was what they were cooking.
  15. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne wasn't the type for official greetings, she simply stuck up her hand "ciao". Then she rolled her eyes, of course he would order her around again but this wasn't the time to get into an argument again, they had to work right now, and she didn't have a door to slam with. She walked to the kitchen folowed by the the two men she called mr bold and mr bulky in her head. She gestured to the kitchen "go ahead, just act like I'm not here." she said to the men and she leaned lazy against the wall while she looked at the men.
  16. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne looked confused around. were they at the wrong place? was the pub further down the street? this didn't look like a pub at all, or maybe that's how english pubs were supposed to look. She looked at jack and was about to ask it this was how it was supposed to be but from the look on his face she could see that that wasn't the case. "Well, let's see how it's inside then." she said as she pushed open the door.
  17. does anyone have any tips for when writing a book for 10 year olds?

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    2. El Duderino

      El Duderino

      Go to the library and read a couple books geared towards 10 year olds. Take note of the themes and type of language they use.

    3. Summer Breeze

      Summer Breeze

      thanks, that's a good idea. luckily we have enough of those books at home so I'll look into them :)

    4. Pez

      Pez

      I guess don't make the characters likable, make them relatable.

  18. bored but I feel like I want to do something but at the same time i don't feel like doing anything...
  19. Joanne nodded, just as she thought. "You really started cooking early." She said impressed. "And I am exited, I love seeing things from different countries. And I hope it's good, you get only one first impression ever and it has to be a good one. But I doupt that it's the greatest, nothing will ever beat a traditional italian restaurand." she said proudly, she was a typical proud italian sometimes.
  20. hey, I see you added me as a friend. nice to meet you and welcome to the forums :D

  21. summer breeze is born in manehatten but now she lives in ponyville silk shine is from canterlot, born in a rich family but she moved to manehatten quinty waves is born and lives in a little house, far away from everything in at the westcoast of equestia.
  22. I like your artstyle a lot! espeically the traditional one looks really pretty and detailed, good job on that one! overall I love the drawing, you're a really good artist keep up the good work!
  23. @@Love Doctor Blaze, now Joanne couldn't stand it anymore "you keep saying that this will be so nostalgic but why? did your parents own a pub or something?" she asked. then joanne shook her head "nope, I heard about them but I have never really been to one." Joanne admitted. "But I have been to plenty of other pubs and caffees, so I know what to expect of course." she added because she didn't want to give Jack a reason to boss her around when they were there.
  24. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne rolled her eyes when she saw Jack worrying about his appearance. "calm down diva-Jack, you look fine." She said to him. Then she stared out of the window, for the first time in a long time she could leave the school terrain. Not that she felt trapt there, not at all, but she really wanted to see what the USA looked like outside the school.
  25. @@Love Doctor Blaze, Joanne jumped up from the couch, made sure her wide fabric wristbands were right in place and grabbed a little backpack she packed for herself. she swung it on her back and stepped outside and jumped into the car. "let's go learn some pub owner a lesson." She said exited.
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