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Actually if any one has read the fic... well fics in this case given the length of the thing, i'd love to hear the comments.

True . Correcting is one thing, condescending is another entirely. I generally don't delete comments , but if they are insulting they get the ax, whether they are helpful or not. http://www.egscomics.com/egsnp.php?id=176

My biggest issue tends to be what tense i use. What i write sounds good in my head and when i go back over it. Still it seems it's an issue. I don't mind the corrections in the comments, but i do agree i would rather have more comments about the story than the grammar.

Indeed. My Oc's are set more for a war story deal, while others might be steam punk or romance or high fantasy etc etc etc. We do need a little context.

Not sure if i am doing this right first time in these forums. I've been writing fanfics [mostly the same one ] for about 3 or 4 years now. The largest of which is the three Stories in Stone books. The premise came up before season 3 and is about what happened to cause the rise of Nightmare Moon. Granted as close as i followed the actual show it all became alternate universe after that as a lot of my head canon was shot down. Any way, here's the summery and link to the first part. It would be easier to simply check my name in Fim Fiction for everything in the end though. The order of the books however is Stories in Stone; Luna's Royal Guard, SiS; Memories of Twilight , and currently SiS; Lost Empire. There are a number of side stories and spin offs i've written as well as a prequel though all of those are works in progress. If you do start to read this make sure you have some free time, the first book is over half a million words and it's still under revision. Twilight discovers the true purpose for the Canterlot Royal gardens, much to Princess Celestia's annoyance. Knowing her student will seek answers with or without her permission, the Princess gives Twilight a new subject to study, the story of five of the garden's occupants, their connection to Nightmare Moon, and the dark days of the War of Night. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1918/stories-in-stone-lunas-royal-guard

Disco Pie just about always has my vote, though you have a number of good ones here. Spitfire and Soarin is a good one and the Fluttershy AJ one is rare. Trxie and Shimmer would be a good one too. Sorry i couldn't vote, guess i'm still limited.

Could be interesting. Are we talking FO:E modifications to the equipment or just glossing over how they work things with hooves?