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Two plays that game, darling.

Too basic, darling, almost like your standard 'X ends up in the Everfree Forest' crossovers. The idea is there but you need to find a more specific premise to it. An overarching story if you will, maybe a reality-warping interdimensional monster. Also, I highly, HIGHLY recommend watching My Little Pony 'n Friends before writing a word about it. Simply knowing Surprise and Firely was in it will not fly, darling.

Apple Spider? Oh, okay, I kid you darling. As for the second, I highly suggest not taking the alicorn one. Instead, come up with your own reasons. Yes, he can be powerful AND immortal without being one, you just need some creativity. My ponysona is immortal as well because of a sacred well she found deep under the ground, which's water can make one not age for a certain amount of time. Considering your OC is desert themed this 'Well of Life' could be especially useful for you. Also, don't be afraid to give him a relic that makes him strong instead, some egyptian themed golden sickle would fit him very much.

Yes, darling blue-white Snow/Ice/Winter themed OCs are common enough to call them cliché. Unless you think you can pull a special spin on it I'd not attemt dripping another drop into the sea.

Page Turner doesn't sound bad, darling. Here're a few: Pen-pal, Parchment, Quill Cast, Storyboard, Fableworks, Fantasia

From a darling named 'Jewelfire' she definetly lacks both jewels and especially fire. Also, the plain FFFFFF white is a big no-no, you should never use that. Instead, try something that will completement that pink more, and try to adjust the saturation so the teal and the pink won't be that jarring. When done with that, I suggest adding some dark red somewhere for that 'fire', the headband + a ribbon on her tail could be used for having it guide one's eyes from top to bottom.

How did you find MLP Forums?: I typed MLP Forums into Google, darlings. Unfortunately it's yet another FiM-only site. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: It all happened around three or four years ago, darlings. I heard of it, gave it a try, and somehow found it surprisingly engaging. There was a whole world there awaiting to be explored and developed, not to mention its main character was one I could relate to completely.I learned alongside Twilight Sparkle, and while I highly enjoyed it, I was not blind to G4's bigger flaws. There was something magical in those lessons and those darlings that made up for those low point episodes. That magic lasted roughly two seasons, darlings. I'll make this short, darling and answer your questions right away: 1. No, I don't like what happened to the show. 2. No, I don't like what happened to the fandom. 3. I'm merely here to provide constructive feedback for those who need it. Artists, writers, OC makers, so forth. Now onto me: I'm Rainbow Dash, my darlings, the original and the most colorful. I have been creating art, fanfiction and other darling fan content for over three years by now. Over this time I've learned a lot of things which I'd love to share with the darlings who ask for assistance. I'm no expert by any means, of course, but I'll try my best. At this moment, my favourite generations are: 1. Pre-Core7 G3 2. Pre-Twilicorn G4 3. Tales As for my favourite characters, darlings, that list would be just far too long. Anyhow, we'll see how long this goes on or if I can even make a change. At the least I'll make sure to follow the saying 'Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer.'