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Silverwisp the Bard

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  1. Looks good so far. Maybe desaturate the hooves juuust a bit to avoid the drawing the eye away from the face. As for a cutiemark, maybe some celtic knot or spiral design? I feel it would go well with the Character as well as the whole "one with nature"angle. We did get some deer culture in the recent comics. Not canon, alas, but a nice source for inspiration/headcanon.
  2. The CMC. The Gguar becaus of my personal interest in ponies in armour and how different artist approach it. The pairing... not entirely sure. I do have a weak spot for pairings that include a height difference (Sparity, Shovel and Shield Knight etc.). It just works for me, I guess. Zecora: I do like this a whole lot more than the Big Mac piece. The white spots are still a bit irritating (do you have the means to photograph your works? It might work better for the colour pieces). -The line of her mohawk looks a bit odd; I feel witrh her head at that angle, the lower part of the comb should be further into the rotation. -The loak looks a bit to shiny to me (though this is mostly because I alaways imagined it to be roughspun, your interpretation could vary). -The lower white part of the comb seems a bit too bright compared to the upper one. If you're still planning on doing a background, maybe a somewhat stylized forest scape in ark greens? All that nagging side, I really like this, hope you can find the time to do more. Twilight vs Twilight (2nd version): Very cool piece, kudos on the perspective. -I feel the curve of Twilight's neck could be a bit closer to the first version -Twi's right wing could be a bit more outstretched -it looks like Tirek is looking juuust apast her Rainbow Dash: Awwwww Love it! Maybe attach the wing a bit lower on the body. Cadence: :wub: Royal Sisters: :wub: :wub: Celestias hindleg seem a bit too far apart for a standing position,
  3. Looks great. Maybe shorten the right foreleg a bit.
  4. Looks very nice. Kudos -The elbow joint on the right foreleg could sit a tad higher -maybe tweek the right antenna a bit, taking into consideration how it attaches to the head - Maybe add a tiny bit of blue to the wings to make them look a bit more organic
  5. Heh, Fluttershy with a German accent would be adorable. Also, agreed; please do more art.
  6. Bump! Cleaned up the categories and added some new stuff.
  7. A while back I did an armoured version of Celestia, so I thought it's only fitting that Twilight should get a turn as well. Vaguely based on an idea for a fanfic/RP that might or might not at some point see the light of day. R&R welcome.
  8. As a rule of thumb, a fire should always be brightest at it's core. I think taking a look at the gren fire Chrysalis used on Twilight might give you some good pointers.
  9. I meant if you were into drawing anything specific before (manga, Disney etc.). You're pretty darn good then, respect.
  10. Love it Looks great, though at first glance I thought it was Trixie. I guess I can chalk that up to Sunset'hair walking far better on a human. Come to think about it, are you planning on doing human versions at some point? Love the expressions. Cheerile looks maybe a bit too thin, not helped by the perspective. :wub: :wub: This is the only one I can't quite enjoy; the ointy nose in combination with the weak chin makes Mac look kiinda shifty/rodentlike. Also, this colouring doesn't really work for me; all the white spots make the whole thing look way too cold (maybe that's the scanning progress?). I don't know how good you are with digital colouring, but I think a Disney-esque cel shading would look absolutely great for your style. Looks great so far. You'll want to watch the perspective/curvature on the neck rings.
  11. So, due to my forced absence from the forums I haven't gotten the chance to post these around here yet, so I'll just dump them here. See if you can guess the references. Day1: A pony posing Day2: A pony moving it Day 3: A pony in the snow Day4:A pony stepping it up Day5: A pony falling Day6: A pony larger than life Day7: A pony taking a break Day8: A pony caroling Day9: A pony sledding Day10: A pony decorating/wrapping up - Day11: A ponystretching on thin ice - Day12: A pony by the hearth - Day13: A pony family Day14: A pony celebrating Day 15: Any of the previous themes - As you can see, I haven't gotten around to all just yet, though I'm planning to cor#rect that soon. Anyway, I encourage anyone willing to improve their skills to do these. And if you have already, drop me a link, so I can take a look
  12. Holy moly, that's some pretty great show accuracy there. Only thing I could point out is that the fiery parts of the leg need some desaturation/achcentuation, but I assume you're still getting to that. Also, I'd get rid of the tiny swords; they look to overdetailed to blen in with the rest of the pic.
  13. Well, if you don't make him too GRIMDARK, he certainly has potential. I do rather like the idea of something in the Everfree messing with dead bodies. Maybe some variaton on what Timberwolves are? I'd suggest you change the mane though; black and white hardly ever works for ponies. As for your sketch, the technique looks pretty good, but the anatomy looks more like a dog than a pony (unless that's intentional). Also, if you're still looking for an OC to draw, would you mind giving Muspel a try?
  14. Nice job on the colouring, especially on the mane. The heartshaped shines in the eyes are a nice touch too. For the future, consider making the wings' outlines in pencil rather than marker.
  15. I like the design; the colours go really well together. Some suggestions (feel free to ignore): -try desaturating the mane just a little bit -consider adding just a bit of green to the coat -brighten up the green in her her eye a bit PS: Does she have a backstory?
  16. IGotta say, that's one intriguig style you got going there, looks almost carved. May I ask what your artistic background is? Anyway, my only real critique would be that the shaded areas of Pinkie's ears look a bit too flat for me. Also, I feel at this level of detail you should put in the nostrils, but that's personal taste. I hope we'll get to see more of you in the future
  17. Okay, I'm back. For those who are wondering, 2014 has not been a great year for me and it ended with quite a bang. But now that I am back on my feet (and once again in possesion of a reliable internet access) I do intent to keep up with the forums again. Also, I finally got started on taking a proper drawing class (should be interesting). Speaking of drawing, I've quite the backlog build up, so this thread will see regular updates for a while: Thanks.
  18. Might not be entirely appropriate; enjoy with caution:
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