AmbientBeat

The reason I made this thread is because I wanted critique on my writing. Posts like yours are actually exactly what I was looking for

There is Equestrian Hype, but they seem to be inactive.

I have separated my pony music from my non pony music, meaning you can now listen to my brony tunes on Soundcloud! Here's a link to the Soundcloud, and my Youtube: https://soundcloud.com/stream https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxHi2DqrgwrnJZxVtSt_BFw

I seperated the songs I made for my Ambient Beat project from my Face for Radio site into its own Soundcloud account! Hopefully this will bring in attention. Here's the link, along with Ambient's youtube account: Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxHi2DqrgwrnJZxVtSt_BFw Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/erik-grovelona

Right now? A couple. But I'm listening to music right now, trying to complete me copy of 1001 Albums You Must Hear Before You Die. Though if you want an answer: M83's Kim and Jessie

I can help with music, if you still need help

That's a good point. I never made a reoccurring enemy in my stories, so I never thought of it that way

My problem with using old villains is that I ind them easier to drive out of character, moreso than the heroes, since after awhile, the effect the villain had would start to lose its effect if done incorrectly

When I make villains, I think of abilities it would have that would make people paranoid. I've been working on a good villain I would use ifthe situation would arise where I would have the opportunity of writing an episode of MLP. I want it to make you paranoid, but not super paranoid like my general monsters. After months of concept making, I now know it manipulates inaudible frequencies to make ponies insane. I want to outdo Changelings, which I admired(monsters disguising as people you love? Awesome!) My point is a good villain has an emotional impact on the audience.

It's on my bucket list to do this for a radio station.

What's the gameplay? I suck at Unity, but I've always dreamed of an awesome pony game

I'm not sure if it's the right place for this, but I started an Ask Tumblr for my OC and I need help getting it going. Anybody have any tips to get attention?

If it's still a thing, you could interview me. I could give you my contact info in case it isn't too late to do it.

Could you do mine? I'm trying to get as much feedback as I could, both good and bad.

I'll give a link to my account for those interested. http://www.fimfiction.net/user/BoCpony My story should be on there, along with another flop that became so because it was a satire of Mary Sue fics and nobody got the joke

Note that I'm not as upset as I am curious. I mean, none of the people who disliked it left a comment as to why, so Im wondering if it has to do with the way I handled certain situations in the story or if it's just writing style. Since the fic is far from over, I need criticism so I can improve the story in future chapters. And I can't link it as it's NSFW.

Thing is it was molded around the fact it was about ponies. It's actually a remake of an older fic I made. After a couple years I wanted to flesh out the story more. Everything that happens in the fic is caused by the ponies' mere presence.

Okay, I uploaded one of my most ambitious projects ever on Fimfiction.net, but within the first day of it being published, it got 10 thumbs down. It currently keeps that score, along with another thumbs down Inaccidently gave it and two thumbs up. I can't link the fic since it's VERY NSFW, so I'll give you the specifics. The fic is what would happen if Skins met My Little Pony. Twilight Sparkle finds herself in 2015 Seattle and in the company of an ensemble cast of really bratty teens, each one having their own unique problem. Each chapter equals one "episode". Each episode is focused on one of the teens, and the ponys' involvement in their private lives. It's a mixture of teen drama and science based horror. While the horror part is not the main drive of the story, it is the reason behind Twilight's arrival on Earth, and has to do with my recent existential anxiety and interest in noetic sciences. Basically, it supports the theory that several universes occupy the same space, just under different frequencies, and that our "souls" are capable of traveling between them. Of course, my fanfic is not advertising the concept, as I use it for paranoia inducing purposes. I'm not going to go into details other than that it has to with beings from another dimension using this to trigger a doomsday scenario. Of course, I haven't gone into that yet in the story. Other than that, the non horror story is a darkly humorous clash between Equestrian and Earth cultures, filled with music references, influenced by Neo noir films and art movies, but the most apparent influences are Skins and Life on Mars. If you want to read it, my fic is called Runaway, Houses, City, Clouds, named after the Tame Impala song.

I watch a lot of old movies. The visuals are what influence me. Also, music. When I listen to music, almost any song I hear, I make up a movie scene where the song would fit. When I write stories, I associate every character and location with their own song.

Sounds like something that'd use a lot of dialogue. I'd read it.

Advertising. Doing it here would work, unless it's NSFW, as in my case.

What makes one hate a Fanfiction? What makes a badfic? What's the difference between a good and bad fanfic?

When I started out I used Garageband to make music. I still do, it's a very useful tool. Figure is a great app as well. Alchemy is really neat. I use Audacity, but mainly for sound editing. Launchpad is VERY useful. And if you buy the custom sound option ou can add your own samples using Audiocopy, the greatest partner for ios musicians

I've always wanted to spend a month or two in NYC. I view it as the LA of the East Coast. I've learned to be careful in every city, but my visit to Boston showed a way different attitude than the West. But still, it's on my "to visit" list

Dang, rapping in Harlem is on my bucket list