FaithDragon

Trust me, I'm very aware my vocals suck. XD But yeah, I still don't know what I was thinking when I was planning some of I Stand Alone, but as mentioned earlier, I'm gonna give both songs a full rewrite sometime in the future, but alongside that, I've got 2 finished instrumentals I'm trying to currently write lyrics for, and hopefully NOT suck at singing on. Worst comes to worst, I'll see if I can request someone to do some vocals for me, but not sure how that'll go. I approve of my growling/screaming skill more than my singing though, my singing is extremely cringe-worthy to myself, but I find myself liking my growls and screams, it's more so the lower growls I can do best, mid-high screams still need some work on my end.

No worries, thank you for all the help you're offering.

Not yet, about to look into it now.

SUPER late response is late. Sorry about that. BUT, thank you SO much for the critique, much appreciated and I definitely WILL be taking this all in, always knew I had problems and not only have you confirmed them, you've also supplied the answers I need to fix those problems, so THANK YOU SO MUCH! I am actually thinking about giving Deranged a full rewrite at some point in the future, at the time, I was happy with it, but looking back, it definitely isn't as good as it should be. But, if you're willing to help, I will DEFINITELY take you up on those offers to fix these tracks up, thanks a heap for the offer!

Sorry in advance for the double post. BUT. I have followed your advise and looked over the mixing of my drums for an upcoming song I'm working on, and have fixed the problems you have mentioned above. But as I stated, I'll save remixing the older songs for when I do an album eventually and will include those first two songs redone. For now, I'll continue working on lyrics for this third song I have done, and finish the instrumentals for songs 4 and 5. (Might start posting teasers on Soundcloud to keep you all entertained until full stuff comes out.)

Been getting back into Disturbed lately, this has been my main jam.

Sad or happy, A Day to Remember is where I go to get my dose of feeling good, no matter what.

I'm... Assuming you mean 'Who do we look up to', in which case, I'd have to say... Probably Princess Luna. I'd have to say Princess Celestia myself. Wait, really? Yeah, I've always looked up to her, she's just an amazing pony, and does an amazing job as Princess. I can say the same about Princess Luna, but yeah, I will agree, Celestia's pretty amazing as well.

Thanks for the question. Thunder? Shimmering? Well I actually play a lot of guitar, a lot of local shows and also a few albums recorded, but nothing major, enough to get me by. I play music with him, but as my name suggests, I play keyboard, but I occasionally sing as well. And your singing voice is absolutely beautiful. I... *Blush* Shush, you.

Deranged was the first song I released, therefore, mixing problems were expected. XD Same thing with I Stand Alone being the second song, mixing was a bit better but still pretty crap. XD Don't worry, in due time I will be releasing re-mixed versions of those songs, though I might save that opportunity for an album or something. Thanks for the critique though, much appreciated.

Australia, myself. The land of weather that never makes up it's mind. XD

Outline in Color Pretty underground band that's REALLY amazing (In my opinion) and deserve more love. Love the instrumentation, vocals (Both clean and screams) and especially the melodic guitar parts that tend to accompany the clean vocals, it just works so well. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlfA8LhxOVI

Awesome! Thank you so much for that!