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Is the cake really a lie?
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Grammar corrections to @Widdershins's Comment:
The* aforementioned cake.
"Ingesting processes" would have been better worded as "mastication""...plastic facsimile or 'prop,' as it were, ..." Incorrect use of quotations, apostrophes would suffice, and you forgot two commas.
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