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That was the plan to begin with when it came to the 6. As for flaws, Chronikos has a lot of problems, including pride issues that got him into his predicament in the first place. His vengefulness can get him into a lot of trouble, and speaking of trouble, he has a lot of difficulty making friends. Despite this, as I have mentioned, he does have some redeeming qualities. Thanks. By the way, the only reason that I used Fluttershy is that she would be in there helping an animal. She finds him on her way back. After that, the Mane 6 are background ponies. Thanks for the feedback.

Umm... I have a question. I have an Alicorn OC. I want to know if he is overpowered or not. His name is Chronikos. He is a white colt with a dark blue mane and tail that have streaks of lighter blue running through it. (Think Dialga's coloring.) He holds sway over time, including precognition and recognition abilities. He is currently at a point where he isn't strong enough to manage time travel, or stop time. Before you ask, there's a good reason that he is a colt. You see, shortly after Tirek's escape, Chronikos, an adult at the time, stood in a temporal rift, overlooking time as usual. Despite his power, he was unaware of the darkness looming behind him until it was too late. Tirek attacked him, and drained some of his magic. Chronikos couldn't defend himself without magic, and the rift became unstable. Tirek lashed out at him in anger, furious that he couldn't take all of his magic, and fled, leaving Chronikos to die. What he didn't expect was what would happen next. Chronikos was transformed back into a colt and lost his cutie mark due to an unknown magical force, falling out of the deteriorating time rift and into the Everfree Forest. Battered, lost, and alone, he was soon found by Fluttershy, who took him to Ponyville. He has lost many of his memories, but often gets surprise attacked by visions of his past and the future. He has almost no control over it. Despite this, he has dedicated himself to solve the mysteries of his past, and find out who he really is. That's essentially the plot to the fanfiction I'm writing with him. Here are his personality traits. Good personality traits: Determined Adventurous Intelligent Caring Honest Slow to anger Bad personality traits: Pessimistic Stubborn Tends to explode in anger when pushed far enough Can be vengeful Socially awkward I know that this was long, but I felt that I needed to cover everything. Any and all feedback is appreciated. (Don't worry, I'm not the kind of person to freak the hay out over some honest constructive criticism.)