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Kronos the Revenant

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  1. I was playing Besieged last time.. and there's no characters :lol:

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    But before that i was playing Sins of a solar empire with a friend who

    is REALLY good at it and is also a troll.. so I'm kinda screwed :P

    Hate to burst your bubble, but i also counted NPCs as well, so if you were playing Besiged last before replying to this topic, you'd be one of those enemies attempting to stop the creation, in which case, RIP :D
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    Foray simply stared at Kronos as he displayed a plethora of emotions and spouted off almost his entire life story to the group.

     

    Very unwise of him, she thought. Somepony might take advantage of that knowledge. Ah well, you can't expect someone that old to be very cunning.

     

    Still a tad taken aback by his projectile-vomit of information, Foray simply shook her head amusedly and said, "I take it you want to join our group, huh?" Her face assumed a much more serious look as she added, "Well, if you get yourself killed, it ain't gonna be my fault. Don't expect much help from me either, I already have plenty to worry about without you."

    "You dont need to worry about me getting myself killed." Kronos replied as he took a knife and slashed it across his chest. When he opened up his chest cavity, it revealed a disturbing sight. The only organic parts to him were half his heart and his left lung. "See?" Kronos said, "Im mostly mechanical. Albiet, these need updating every once in a while, but they managed to get me through the 1500 years I've been alive. Plus, they're mostly resistant to electric pulses." He closed his chest and welded it back together, showing his bare chest. He looked up and smiled, "Hehe, you like what you see? Anyways, I dont think I'll be needing anyone's help. I mean, i lasted this long in this wasteland on my own. I'll be fine, you dont need to worry too much about me." Kronos gave Foray a wink as he finished.
  3. Banned because right to parley is a pirate captive's right to see the captain of a pirate ship to discuss negotiations

  4. To elaborate, if YOU, not your avatar or OC, but YOU, were the main character or an NPC in the very last video game you played, how long could you survive?

     

    For me, Fallout 4. 

     

    As main character: Kick everyone's asses. :D

     

    As an NPC: Keep trading with the Lone Survivor and take all of his/her caps.  :D That or wait until he/she kills me, in which case, XP *ded*

  5. I had similar problems with my first OCs. My first one was a six-winged ancient alicorn that waited for war to fall upon Equestria. I realized that that was a pretty stupid concept in itself. My second OC was a possessed earth pony that turned alicorn after being possessed by three ancient spirits. But then, that also ended up making no sense whatsoever. I didn't scrap them, necessarily, I still have drawings of them, but I lost all of my focus on their development. However, for my third OC (Kronos, just like my username), I actually got some more positive feedback on him, like giving them a not-tragic backstory (Which, for the record, Kronos' backstory isn't tragic at all. His backstory is rather luxurious and I explained how he CHOSE to be in the position his is now as a bodyguard and soldier on a journey of self-discovery), and making them actually fit into the lore (Which in this case, I made Kronos a prince in his own society completely isolated from the rest of the populace of Equestria, allowing them to innovate and advance their technology at an accelerated rate, which explains Kronos' cyborg appearance.) It's weird details like that that everyone gets super critical on, but i fixed my perfect OC to fit the bill just right. I dont know, maybe I'm just rambling on my own soap box, but the point is is that it's your OC, thus, it's up to you whether or not you want to change your OC in terms of design and backstory. For me, personally, the feedback I got on Kronos actually allowed me to make him more interesting as I elaborated his story.

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    "Two centuries?" Foray echoed in disbelief. "Two centuries, and yet you don't know what Equestria was like before the war? Where were you all that time, in a tube?" She spiced her last statement with a hint to her own past, it was always fun to keep other ponies guessing.

    "I do know what Equestria was like before the war. I was once a guard for the Ministry Mares. Fat lot of good I was at that," Kronos angrily replied, "I watched them die in front of me one by one. Do you know what it feels like to roam this wasteland for two fucking centuries knowing that you could've saved those you loved and cared about!? DO YOU!?" He started sobbing. "I'm sorry," he said with tears rolling down his face, "I-I can get p-pretty em-emotiona-al whene-ever I ta-alk about the-them." He clenched his fist and punched himself in his solarplex, giving a growl as he knelt down to suck up the pain. "I once guarded the Ministry Mares of Equestria. In the sidelines, at least." Kronos explained, "I tried my best over the years I was in their service to protect them, but some of them unfortunately succumbed to circumstances beyond my control and authority at the time." Kronos then looked out into the horizon and said, "Since the fall of the Ministry, I've roamed the Wasteland doing the only thing I know to do: Hunt, kill and take orders from others. Like I said before, I've had some previous companions before your lot, but they didn't last long, unfortunately. Plus, being out here in these damn wastes with no friendly faces for years has caused massive amounts of trauma to my psyche and has made quite the negative impact to my social prowess. I'm not the silver-tongued prince I used to be before the war, hell, before I even meet the Ministry Mares." He stared blankly into the horizon again. "I'm sorry," he blinked, "I tend to get lost in my own thoughts, what were you saying again?"

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