Novaburst

Edited that part. 

The edits you've wished me to complete are done. 

I've added a piece of tech,  to fix that problem.  I believe I've corrected every issue.  And it's because of later plans I have for him that I'm not going to spoil. 

I've edited his magic to be acceptable,  I do believe. 

Edits have been completed. 

Would you allow it to be based off of seeing the Tortoise fly around Cloudsdale,  or would you prefer he lose the harness,  and the armor entirely?  And why so few spells?   Also,  I can't edit. 

Edited that. 

I believe I have made sufficient edits to solve the problems you have had with the application.  However,  if I am wrong please let me know right away. 

I have edited his description,  and expanded upon it as you have suggested.  I believe this should fix the first issue.  As for the personality,  I have done my best to correct the issues you have with that.  Furthermore, the third issue,  that about Dark Magic I've made it to where he has an interest but hasn't started studying it.  At all. Even though he wishes to.