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Would you allow it to be based off of seeing the Tortoise fly around Cloudsdale, or would you prefer he lose the harness, and the armor entirely? And why so few spells? Also, I can't edit.

Edited that.

Spike looked over at the Mercenary. "How does my entire hoard sound if you help us? We need at least one person who can fight in the Elements of Harmony, because unlike previously we don't have a period of relative peace to live in. " Spike then held out one claw and snapped. Runic circles surrounded each Element of Harmony who was present. "While I cannot give you the power of the Elements of Harmony... I can provide you temporary powers to hold us until we find the Elements of Harmony. For you, Honesty. As you are rigid, and unyielding like the Earth. You can now command the power of the Earth and bend it into weapons, and defenses." Scowling Spike would repeat the ritual, giving the others Elemental powers of their own that they could use. Spike then would collapse to one knee weakly. "I forgot how much the Heart of Heroes would require for me to cast. We are only missing Generosity."

I believe I have made sufficient edits to solve the problems you have had with the application. However, if I am wrong please let me know right away.

Spike stood up as he looked at the ponies that had been gathered. "As you are well aware the Elements of Harmony, and the Tree were destroyed by Princess Twilight. Yet there is one solution that could allow us the power we need to stop her. The Forge of Harmony. Once it is located, the Elements of Harmony can be recreated, and at the same time the seeds of a new Tree of Harmony can be planted. Yet the location of the Forge of Harmony is in the hooves of one pony... who may be difficult for us to persuade into giving us the location. Still between our combined efforts, persuading King Sombra into giving us the location of the Forge of Harmony may be easy. Still, I will require all of you to assist me. So are we all in this situation together?" As Spike spoke, he'd use a bit of magic to make his voice echo across the entirety of the Castle which wasn't really that difficult.

Spike looked over at Discord, and said. "Lord of Chaos..." With that he knelt before Discord. "... as the steward of friendship and Emperor of the Dragons, I humbly request that you would assist us to restore Harmony to the land, as it has lost it. Will you please grant my request, Honorable Draconnequis, in return for having Fluttershy restored to life?" As Spike asked this he unsheathed the sword he carried across his back, the blade of fire the symbol of Dragon Royalty and dropped it at the feet of Discord. Spike was doing his best to get Discord on their side. The absolute last thing they needed was for Discord to side with Twilight as she was nearly unbeatable presently. Still, their survival had to be guaranteed somehow. Spike then sighed and said to the other Elements of Harmony that were gathered. "On this day, Pony, Dragon and Draconequis unite for a common goal. We will gather the Elements of Harmony, and bring the Harmony that is needed back to the land. Princess Twilight Sparkle will be made to see the Light of Friendship if it is one of the last things we're able to do."

OOC: https://mlpforums.com/topic/150573-fall-of-the-kingdom/page-3#entry4474416 ---- At what was once Canterlot Castle, but now home to the Draconic Empire Spike walked around the palace he now ruled. Ever since Twilight had gone dark, things had changed. Friends had become enemies, and old enemies had been forced to become friends. Truly times were changing. Spike hated that Celestia, Luna had ascended, and that Cadence had been murdered. Annoyed he breathed fire and lit up the torches in the Canterlot Castle that had belonged to Celestia, Spike sighed. Twilight was powerful enough to pose a threat that couldn't be stopped by conventional means. Even though she'd turned Discord to Stone, Spike had a plan on how he could free Discord. Sighing, Spike walked through the castle to the Courtyard where Discord had been turned to stone. Closing his eyes, Spike began to inhale deeply... building up a massive burst of fire-breath within him but charging it with energy, energy that would allow Discord to be freed from his prison. Even though he didn't trust the Lord of Chaos, they'd need all hands on deck in order to stop this madness. "Discord, it's time you made yourself useful. We must re-awaken the Elements of Harmony and put Twilight's Eternal Reign to an end. She has lost herself... she's no longer my friend or sister." As he said this, Spike would also use his abilities as Dragon Lord to give a summons to any dragons who could answer his call, to come and aid them.

So I have an OC I'd like drawn. Here is a basic outline of him, minus his cutie mark and the fact the red needs to be more crimson. His cutie mark is a wrench, a crystal, a lightning bolt and three gears. If someone could also make it so he was wearing a red hoodie, I'd appreciate it.

I have edited his description, and expanded upon it as you have suggested. I believe this should fix the first issue. As for the personality, I have done my best to correct the issues you have with that. Furthermore, the third issue, that about Dark Magic I've made it to where he has an interest but hasn't started studying it. At all. Even though he wishes to.

As I've made characters, but believe I could use more help before I eventually try for any canon... would someone please mentor me?

For some reason even though I want to RP in both roleplays, I am incapable of adding characters. Please remedy this.

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