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  1. This is something I've wanted to hear about for a while now. So, let's get to it: If an episode of Friendship is Magic could have any plot, or any event occur, as long as it stayed within the show's rating, what would you have it be? Essentially, what's your dream episode? Who would it star, what would happen in it, who would write it? Anything can happen, so go wild! Well, not anything anything. It has to stay within the show's rating and standards. I suppose the only real way to start off a thread like this is to give my own dream episode. You know, for example and all. And, well, I'm gonna go all out on mine. I in no way expect anyone else to go into as much depth as I'm going to, but I put a lot of thought into this. Like, an unhealthy amount. I have too much free time. I want an Evil Belle episode! I'm not kidding! I want an episode where Sweetie Belle turns evil! I don't care how they do it. Twilight spell gone wrong, Alicorn Amulet-esque artifact, I don't care. Make her evil. Why Sweetie Belle, you ask? Well, a lot of you have probably heard this before, but I'm gonna explain it for those who haven't. Take a good look at Sweetie Belle. She's cunning, manipulative, was bullied in childhood, has an off relationship with her older sister, and fell behind as one of the slower kids in her class. Yes, she has all the makings of a future super villain. The thing is, she has good morals, preventing her from doing anything despicable. She almost did do something despicable in For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils, the only thing holding her back being Princess Luna. Now imagine, for a moment, something strips away these morals. She no longer worries about hurting others or the reprucussions of her actions. The only thing she cares about is getting her way. And what's stopping her? The Mane Six don't want to hurt her, she's a good friend (family in Rarity's case) and they know that what she's doing isn't her fault. The Princesses have morals against hurting children, and it's not like they ever do anything anyway. Nothing's standing in her way. As for the episode itself, here's how I picture it: The first act should be spent setting up the catalyst. It has to be explained, whatever it is, but not through an exposition dump. Just enough explanation so that it makes sense. Of course, Sweetie Belle has to be there. She could be with Rarity, although being with Apple Bloom and Scootaloo would be preferable. Her reason for being there has to make sense. I'd say probably three or so minutes in, our catalyst strikes Sweetie Belle. The others ask if she's alright, and she replies that she's fine. She doesn't seem too out of the ordinary, but the audience can see that something is off. Throughout the rest of the first act, it should be shown that odd things are happening in the town. The Mane Six should be looking into what's happening, but be unable to find anything. The CMC should be there, and we should once again see that something's off with Sweetie. She shouldn't be acting malicious, just strange. At the end of the first act, Sweetie's true colors are relealed to the audience. The second act should be devoted to watching our now revealed-to-be-evil Sweetie Belle carry through with her plans. It can't be repetative, and it has to hold our attention. It would be good if she were pestered by the other Crusaders, in a way that annoys her, but not us. They're concerned about Sweetie, especially when she snaps at them to stop bothering her. Though we should be reminded that, even in this state, Sweetie Belle still cares about the other Crusaders and doesn't want them to come in harm's way. At this point, the Mane Six, most likely Twilight, should have started piecing things together, and just before the third act begins, she realizes what's happening and races away to go fix Sweetie Belle. But it's too late! The third act picks up and Sweetie Belle is well on her way to victory. Twilight can't get close enough to cure her and Rarity can't through to her. This would be a good place to see some drama between Sweetie and Rarity. Without her morals, Sweetie could really rip into everything that she hates about Rarity. This scene would have to be written very carefully, though. One misstep and the fandom will hate Sweetie's guts. So if nobody can touch her and her family can't get through to her, who will save the day? Apple Bloom and Scootaloo, of course! Think about it; this would be a great chance to show just how strong the bond between the CMC has grown. They remind her of her morals, who she really is, the good times she's had with them and Rarity and everyone else, all the reasons she has not to destroy Equestria and, most importantly, they remind her of their shared Cutie Marks. They can get through to her, if only enough for Twilight to carry through with the cure. The ending can't be a copy-paste of Secret of My Excess, though. That's one of the reasons I think Apple Bloom and Scootaloo are the prime contendors to save Sweetie, not Rarity. So blah blah blah Sweetie appologizes and everyone's happy and we get the moral. Moral? I don't really care what the moral is, just as long as we get Evil Belle. As for the writer... I'm thinking Megan McCarthy. Either her or Corey Powell. But Powell's track record is iffy, I mean she did Sleepless in Ponyville and Inspiration Manifestation, which were good episodes, but she also did Rainbow Falls, which was a bad episode, and Just for Sidekicks, which was a meh episode. So probably McCarthy. ...that was lengthy. So anyway, what do you guys want to see out of the show? I'm really interested to see everybody's ideas, and what everybody thinks of each other's ideas! I think we could probably create some really good ideas by building on top of each others' ideas. Who knows, maybe someday we'll actually get episodes similar to what we imagine here in the future! Oh, and if anybody says Slice of Life 2, they will get a... very stern talking to.
  2. Yeah so I made this thread and now I don't need help anymore. If a moderator finds this I have no problem if they delete it, if not I'll probably update this again sometime soon.
  3. Welcome to MLP Forums mpuppy4. I hope you have a great time here /)

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