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  1. @@Drago Ryder

    Grace nodded and said, "I agree, thought I would be cowering in a corner, I don't think my voice would work on animatronics. Do you know if there's a towel, rag, or something I dry off?"

     

    @@Acnologia,

    The endoskeleton, walked in front of Kyubi and stop as it swung the flashlight around

     

    @,

    The animatronic looked up and jumped, barely missing flash's hind legs.

    As Flash landed after completing the flying jump, he dashed off down the path between the boxes. H took two lefts and a right and found himself back in front of his office.

     

    "Oh thank Celestia, I'm back." He said with a sigh of relief. He bolted back inside and mashed the button on the wall to close the door.

  2. @@Acnologia

    The animatronic just sat down outside the vent and watched Kyubi

     

    @@Drago Ryder,

    Grace got on top of the box and looked around as her tail slapped the side of the box. She grew some courage and said in her soothing/mellow voice, 

    "Name's Grace, pleasure to meet you."

     

    @

    a box that held an animatronic fell apart and the animatronic landed in front of Flash

    "Oh snap."

     

    I couldn't really see a way out of this one. I had an endoskeleton coming up behind me and an animatronic at my front, there was no escape. Unless... I looked up and noticed I had a fair amount of room between the top of the animatronic and the roof. Well, it was better than nothing. I took the chance and leapt up into the air, pushing hard with my wings to gain the necessary altitude, praying its reflexes weren't fast enough to catch me.

  3. @@Drago Ryder

    Grace jumped when she heard Maia talk. She opened her mouth, then closed it and shook her head no, then stepped out of the ways to show that it was just robot parts.

     

    @,

    The endoskeleton walked around and picked up the flashlight that flash had dropped, and started to walk with heavy footfalls on the other side of a few boxes from flash

     

    @@Acnologia,

    an animatronic, smaller than the other, with big blue eyes nudged Kyubi closer to the exit of the vent

     

    "Sweet Celestia Where is my office!" He silently cursed, not wanting to attract any unwanted attention. After a moment he heard heavy footfalls coming from the right and saw the beam of his flashlight.

     

    "Dang it, they took my flashlight. I guess now they'll see me better, I'd better get moving." And that he did, backtracking a few feet and hanging a left.

  4. @,

    The spider gave chase for a minute or two, then vanished.

     

    @@Drago Ryder,

    Grace looked around the room for anypony, when she didn't see anyone, she went over to a box that was hidden in the shadow, tore off a plank and started searching through the box,

     

    @@Acnologia,

    When the animatronic saw no one was there, it turned around and  headed in a different direction

     

    I could hear the spider-thing chasing me, I ran around a few corners, using my wings to help turn sharper. And after a while I had managed to loose it.

     

    "*pant pant* I think I *pant* lost it."

     

    I looked around, and realized that I was lost. And to top it off I had dropped my flashlight during the chase.

     

    "Well this is just peachy, let's see if I can find my way back."

     

    And with that, he set off in search of his office, navigating the maze of a warehouse cautiously.

  5. @,

    The spider stopped above Flash and watched with web-like liquid dripping in front of him 

     

    @@Drago Ryder,

    Grace was walking around, then the mole turned the corner. She held her breath and waited. It had no eyes, so if she was quiet, it wouldn't notice her. When it passed, She headed the way it came and ran into the room. Her tail moving across the ground, making a swishing noise.

     

    @@Acnologia

    an endoskeleton with most of it skin missing walked by the room and looked in

    Flash watched as the liquid dripped down in front of him, forming a small puddle on the floor. He looked up and saw the ghastly thing, eight soulless eyes staring back at him.

     

    "Oh buck, uh... Nice spider?" He said while slowly backing away. Then after a few steps ran down another hallway on his right, not daring to look back.

  6. @,

    The spider noticed that the camera above it was on. It lifted itself into view, smiled then cut the cable connecting the camera and head towards the room where the camera was connected to. 

     

    @@Drago Ryder

    the mole looking animatronic dragged it's bare hind leg past the room where Maia was. 

     

    @@Acnologia,

    Grace was cautiously looking left and right for any danger, that she didn't notice a leaking pipe was above her. She yelped as she felt something cold landed on her back

    "What the! Oh come on! Not even five minutes and I've already broken something. Welp, I'd better go fix it."

     

    And with that he hopped out of his chair, grabbed a flashlight and ventured out into the dark hallway, wondering if there was anypony else in the building.

  7. Mine would be my ponysona's cutie mark, which is two crossed lightning bolts. They represent my usually energetic personality and (in me) how quick I tend to be about things. I'm fast, I talk fast, think fast, do school fast, and (unfortunately) I tend to be quick to judge. And (in him) his skill with the weather, and his love of thunderstorms.

  8. Flash sat in his chair and listened to what the pony over the speakers was saying, "Hmm, I should be able to handle this. As long as there aren't any possessed animatronics running around. Welp, I'd better get to work."

     

    He began flipping through the different camera feeds, "Seems pretty quiet, hope it stays that way."

  9. Here is my latest work, The Newbie. A one-shot for an art trade with Pripyat Pony. So without further ado, here it is!

     

     

     

     

    The Newbie

     

     

     

    Have you ever had a dream that you've aspired towards all your life? Well I have. My name is Lightning, I'm a light and dark purple Pegasus whose coat is a patched combination of both aforementioned colors, and I have an indigo mane that sticks straight up, and blue eyes. And if you haven't guessed it yet, this is my story.

     

    Let's start by going back to my foal-hood, back when my mother, Swift, told me about her time in a flight team called the Cloud Chasers. The thought enthralled me, and from that moment on I knew just what I wanted to do with my life; I wanted to fly on a team like mom, and I had already heard of the Wonderbolts. So that was exactly where I set my sights.

     

    In junior high, I wasn't doing what you would call 'stellar' on my schoolwork, but I was doing incredibly well in advanced flight class and sports. This was also when I met Clover, and she roped me into this crazy plan to save another filly from a curse in a town somewhere in The Everfree Forest. But that's a story for another time, now I'm going to tell you what happened when I got accepted into the Wonderbolts.

     

    It was a day of average weather conditions, a lovely light blue sky dotted with a couple dozen puffy white clouds, a great day for flying. It was my first day, so I wanted to make a great impression. I trotted across the large floating landmass that was the Wonderbolts' HQ, and was just about to cross the runway when Soarin stopped me before I could put one hoof on the tarmac.

     

    "Seriously newbie? Don't forget rule number one: look both ways before crossing the runway." He said, sounding rather pleased with himself. "Wouldn't want our newest member to get all banged up now would we?"

     

    I scratched the back of my head with my hoof, "Sorry, I'm still getting used to the rules." ---

     

     

     

    Later that day, we were all practicing a new routine. Everypony in a V-shape to start, we were then going to reverse the V, then reverse it again, whoever was in the middle, in this case Spitfire, was going to shoot forward at the end of the last reversal, to emulate a slingshot. That was also the name of the routine, The Slingshot.

     

    Now I wanted to make a great first impression, so I was going to be absolutely perfect on this first run. So there we were, twenty-five of us, all standing on the runway in the V-shape, and ready for take off. Spitfire gave the signal, and we all took off. We shot up into the air, starting off at a forty-five degree angle before leveling out and accelerating.

     

    "And now!"

     

    I heard Spitfire yell from up ahead, and everypony did as we were told. The pegasi in the middle slowing down, and the pegasi on the edges, myself included, sped up. Then that was reversed, but as we were halfway through that, I miscalculated how much I had to slow down. And I bumped into Soarin, who was in front of me, who bumped into Fleetfoot, who bumped into whoever was in front of him, and so on. Until every Wonderbolt was careening out of control. I had really messed up...

     

    Now I won't go into all the details, but that was quite the crash. Nopony was seriously hurt, but they weren't too thrilled with me.

     

    "Lightning!" I heard Spitfire yell as she got up and trotted towards me. "What is the meaning of this?!"

     

    Sweet Celestia was she angry, I was so scared just by the look she was giving me that I stuttered on my response.

     

    "I-uh-I didn't s-slow down enough and bumped into Soarin, who bumped into Fleetfoot, who-"

     

    "I get it, you don't need to explain it all." She cut me off before I could finish my stupidly long response. But at least she seemed to have calmed down a bit, but she still wasn't very pleased. "Just, don't let it happen again." And with that, she just walked away. ---

     

     

    After apologizing to everypony and cleaning the entire compound, I was exhausted. I staggered into my room in the barracks and collapsed onto the bed. Not even caring that I was still in uniform.

     

    When the sun came up the next morning, I was still pretty tired, but at least I was rested. I got out of bed and exited the barracks, making my way towards the dining hall. But on the way, I got some interesting good mornings.

     

    "Morning Domino!"

     

    "Good Morning Domino!"

     

    "Hey Domino!"

     

    Why were they all calling me Domino?

     

    "Hey Soarin, why is everypony calling me Domino?" I asked the pale blue pegasus as he walked by.

     

    "Oh, they didn't tell you? That's your new nickname! At least it's got a better ring to it than mine. Haha." He replied, sounding like it was perfectly normal thing.

     

    My heart sank and my ears followed suit, "Oh, okay." I said as I began to walk towards the dining hall again.

     

    "Hey, wait." He said as I turned away. "Don't let it get you down, count yourself lucky that yours isn't 'Clipper'. And don't even ask why."

     

    I stifled a chuckle, "Clipper? Pft, all of a sudden Domino doesn't sound so bad." I felt a little better, maybe this was the next step to fitting in.

     

    "Yeah, you wouldn't believe the day I had when I got that one. But I'm not going to tell you just yet, I'll save it for another time."

     

    "Okay, thanks Soarin. I'll catch you at breakfast I guess."

     

    "Got it, see ya then!"

     

    I was finally feeling pretty good about myself, and I could feel that today was going to be better than yesterday!

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  10. @, I'd be happy to trade. I'll make you a pixel and in return, I'd like a story about my OC Lightning's first day as a Wonderbolt. Base it on this: http://kaori-warbird.deviantart.com/art/Lightning-as-a-Wonderbolt-635040165

     

    And here's his profile: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lightning-r2520

    I'd be more than happy to write this, and sorry I haven't replied in a few days, life has been crazy!

    • Brohoof 1
  11. So, the way I see it is ChildofDarkness had it planned to where we would reach the raiders' camp and then White would reveal her/himself (just a bit fuzzy on that...) and then combat would/wouldn't ensue depending on the choices that our OCs make. But it'll unfold in much more depth than that, sound good? (I know it doesn't sound so impressive now, but when I'm through, it will have all been awesome!)

  12. Well guys, it's been a while, I know. But the time has finally come for me to start development on the game! (Yay!) :yay: I don't know when it will be done, it could take quite a while, but when it's done, I guarantee it will be awesome! See you next time!

  13. Kronos sighed and replied to Lupus' question, "I used to have some previous companions, but the thing is is that we either went our separate ways for various reasons or they are dead. I mean, if you were listening to the conversation I had with Foray back at the bunker, I used to have a 'wife' and a kid with her, but they both got killed and eaten by cannibals as well as other members of that same party." Kronos gave a deep breath trying to hold back tears.

    Lupus' ears flattened onto his head at what Kronos said, "Oh, I'm really sorry, my family is probably dead too, and everyone else I knew. It's been over two hundred years since I've seen any of them. Though my parents probably didn't survive the Mega-Spell anyway. So I know how you feel."

     

    He thought about saying more but the memory of his parents saddened him and he couldn't find any more words.

  14. "Well," Kronos replied, "Nothing, really. I just plan on doing what I do whenever I have nothing to do, and that's just wandering around the wasteland until something happens or distracts me to do something else. That or I just go around looking for more work to do. At least, that's how my life's been since the megaspells went off." He then thought about what Lupus told him and said to him, "You know, if we're gonna go our separate ways after this, then I'm really gonna miss you, dude. You're like my best friend out in this unforgiving wasteland. I just wish you luck in your adventures, dude, and I also hope that our paths cross at least once or twice again after this." He smiled at Lupus and marched on next to him.

    Lupus smiled, "And I'll miss you too, I just hope we'll actually survive this to miss each other. 'Cause there's a high chance this'll go south, you know." He continued on in silence, praying that he'd make it out of this alive.

     

    "Say, Kronos." I began, "Did you ever have any other friends? And if so, what happened to them?"

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