Hello! I'm new here and already in need of advice. I have a couple of OCs that need critiquing. I'll post the pictures first and the bios afterward.
The first is Dusty Embers. This is not the best picture of him, but it's the only clear, full-body one I have! I'm not really worried about his looks but his bio and relations concern me. I figured he should be a wanderer, with little knowledge of his family. His talent obviously has something to do with fire, but I can't settle on the exact aspect(s) of his talent.
Next we have Wild Winds. I'm not sure if she should be Dusty's cousin or just a close friend. Her talent is sky navigation, hence her cutie mark. I think she should be a Wonderbolt.
Silver Blade is the colt in the last picture. He is a castle guard. He has a twin brother named Shadow Shield, who I failed to depict here. I don't really have a bio for him besides his having a brother and royal bloodline, his father being a king.
My greatest concern comes with this final character, Wolfheart. She was formerly a werepony (I hope I'm spelling that right!), but she was able to overcome the darkness within her, hence her unique pattern. She was orphaned as a filly, left carelessly in the woods, and later adopted by Dusty, her brother of sorts, who helped her find her "talent," which is the curse of the werepony. She has a crush on Silver Blade. Everything about her concerns me. It's as if I didn't put enough thought into to her, or perhaps too much?
Suggestions? Any help would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks in advance!