chaosprincess

I'm glad you like it and I'm glad that it was fixed looking at it the red was overbearing, but I did get some tips from princessofcompassion she looks these things up all the time so she gave me some tips that she found that helped her so I ended up using those tips to make a better magic effect so it made it look more magical instead of a big red blob lol so now it looks like magic not like the show magic, but still looks a lot more like magic instead of a big red blob eating his horn and books lol I am still learning different techniques for magic and other effects sai has a lot to it so I'm still learning myself.

I fixed the magic it is a lighter form and I added some sparkles to it to make it look like magic is being used I hope you like the result.

I am so sorry it took so long, but finally got it done now I tried a new style of line art and coloring which I think turned out rather nice, but I do know the magic looks a little off it was not working with me, but I do hope you like it and I did change the books one with an A for adobe and I decided to place 3 musical notes on the other book well here it is I do hope you like it.

*claps* amazing artwork your pretty good with digital drawing/coloring your shading is getting better as well just with everything it takes practice I'm still learning myself, but your art is really good I like Okapi the most also love my oc as a little filly ok forget it I love them all.

Hey I can't help that I have Herculian strength.

Thank you very much *takes a bow*

I agree I like the older generation figures, but sometimes the scented ponies would smell funky lol, but my favorite is the twinkle eye ponies and the sparkle ponies are pretty as well and your right the eyes are more detailed and the cutie marks had more detail to them with the older gens.

I do know this story is not perfect and it may have its small flaws, but I do NOT give permission for anybody to alter this story in anyway or post it anywhere else be respectful I don't mind criticism, but be respectful with that said I hope you enjoy the story. I know this story is not the greatest, but I do hope you like it. Story written by me chaosprincess Queen Servia belongs to Nightmare Star King Viakor belongs to Nightmare Star Lord Senvious belong to Nightmare Star Celestia and Luna belong to Hasbro The Tale of Queen Servia Why hello there little ones my name is Queen Servia I am as what some may call an ice queen I produce the beautiful wonders of winter shrouding the land in a white beauty, o what a sight to behold. But I suppose your not here to talk about winter, so I will tell you a tale. Now please do your best to behave yourselves during the tale otherwise your time will be spent in an icy prison. Now where to begin? Ah that's it now I'm sure all of you out there know the royal sisters of the sun and moon for their tale has been told all around, as for my tale its been hidden as an attempt to keep the memory of the past a secret. Now I was once married, but that stallion now lies in his own prison to rot, as for my son I prefer our tie remain cut. I suppose you don't care much for my love life or family I am after all a stranger to all of you. Now my tale begins in a small kingdom within Equestria, I ruled alone having no need to have a king beside me he would just get in the way. Now as a ruler I was loved by my faithful subjects who adored my winters that is until Celestia came along with her flashy sun tricks. She took everything from me my home, my subjects EVERYTHING, please do excuse me the memory still upsets me. She exiled me for my anger my beautiful winter taken away by her sun, my subjects taken by my anger I went into a blind rage which in the end caused my exile. Now I can see all of you are quick to point your hoof, claw whatever you have at me, placing the blame on my anger, but my beautiful winter was perfect and loved by my subjects until she came along showing her petty little sun off. Something just snapped inside of me as I stood there watching as the sun melted my winter I was a ruler as well it was not her place to touch MY KINGDOM. I do apologize once again I'm sure all of you care less about my anger and more about where my exile lead me so I'll tell you. I was exiled to a deserted wasteland, but little did I know I was being watched by my nuisance of a husband to be, but as annoying as he was he became quite useful to me. I did not like the idea of traveling with Viakor, but I had little choice and knew nothing of the land. I sort of wished he went back to the dirt hole he crawled out from, but he surprisingly made a good tool. He was a big stallion with little brain and a goofy look, but he was easy to use I just had to work a little charm, it seemed he liked me a little to much. I held no interest in him my heart would not be owned by that fool, but unfortunately that changed once I returned to my kingdom seems he had his own charm. It was a mistake to allow him to claim my heart for our son suffered, but I hold no love for either of them. Now to continue throughout my exile we traveled underground seems he had a fear of the sun pretty pathetic if you ask me. I suppose I can't speak since I did marry him and birth his child, luckily our son did not get his brains. Now traveling underground was not so bad since there was multiple tunnels leading to different areas of Equestria it was quite impressive for a pony who lacked any brain cells. Now the underground paths allowed me to reach Celestia's castle, I would never be able to reach the surface, but from underground I was able to freeze the ground causing all those who stepped on the ice to remain frozen in place. It was quite amusing seeing Celestia send her guards out to find me, Viakor of course would cause a little havoc for the sun princess as well he would barely escape at times, but he still managed somehow. At some point Viakor did propose to me the ring was Celestia's crown how he managed to get it is beyond me, but I accepted it. I suppose he was not that bad back then once our son was born that's when he turned his back on us. I spent many years in exile with him it was not all bad, but I just wanted to die at times knowing my kingdom was to never be the same my subjects were terrified of me, and I would never receive their acceptance for they have turned on me to worship Celestia. I was determined to break free from exile and remove any trace of her from the world Equestria only needed one ruler and that ruler was me. My exile did not last to long for Viakor risked his life in order to break the spell keeping me out of Equestria what a fool he was. He wanted nothing more then to make me happy even if it meant killing all those that oppose me. So he broke the barrier allowing me back into Equestria, I ran as fast as I could to my kingdom only to see it as a wasteland all my faithful followers were gone abandoning their homes for a new life under the ruling of Celestia and Luna. The sight of it caused my rage to spiral out of control creating a winter that would never end just as the princess of the moon had done in her past. Celestia of course made her appearance in an attempt to stop me, but Viakor had made a nice little hole for our princess to rot in I enjoyed seeing the icy earth closing in around her, she was now in her own frozen prison for years to come. Once her fate was sealed I took my kingdom back and my loyal subjects soon followed, but my life was soon to change with the marriage to Viakor and the birth of our son Senvious. Viakor was a good ruler, but became quite abusive lashing out at our son, now as his mother I protected him, but that was soon to change as he placed a spell on me which allowed him to control me. The spell was a success and he used me as a tool against our son forcing me to cause great harm to him, but instead of breaking down into tears I would stand there and laugh as if his pain brought me great enjoyment. Senvious was my world a handsome colt who would rule beside us, but he was weak and his father hated that more then anything he figured beating him would make him stronger. I was no better then Viakor since I took part in the routine beatings I just held no sympathy or care even when he would cry out for me to stop I enjoyed the sight of his blood and the screams each beating would bring. Now your all probably wondering how I could do such a monstrous thing to my own flesh and blood and that question I will never answer for I am unable to those memories are far to painful so I tuck them away. I always thought with Celestia out of the way my life would be grand again, but Viakor was just like Celestia taking everything away from me including my own free will. This nightmare went on for years, but my son was not to suffer alone for Viakor has turned on me at times using his powers to keep me in place while he beat me until I was bloody and barely able to stand. I wanted nothing more then to kill him where he stood, but a part of me enjoyed the abuse he brought onto my son and I, I hated him hated that he controlled my emotions, controlled my body and controlled my kingdom while my son and I sat there as his toys. That was not to last forever for many moons later I was able to break free from the spell and make him suffer. But even with his imprisonment or death the damage was done my son and I no longer had a good relationship I wanted no part of him as he wanted no part of me. It remains that way even now, but as for my husband I could not bring myself to kill him he was after all the man I gave my heart to so I sentenced him to exile to rot in his own prison as I did with Celestia. The moment of my freedom was the moment my rage was placed on him I mauled him as if I was a carnivore tearing into its prey I had no reason to hold back after all this was the man who took my freedom and son away from me. He begged for me to spare him in which I did, but he was sentenced to 1,000 years in Tartarus and he still remains there to this day. Now as for my son Senvious I banished him from my kingdom and if he was to return he will be killed, I do understand how hard that must be for some of you to read banishing my own child, but I am merely showing him some tough love. I am merely doing what a mother should to care for their young although he is no longer a colt he is still my son so therefore I must teach him the tough lessons of life. I must admit I do enjoy seeing his tornadoes from a distance he has grown so much and causing havoc of his own, now as for me my beautiful winters remain untouched throughout the season. The rising of the sun is no longer an issue with Celestia out of the way my beautiful winters remain it brings me such joy seeing the little ponies enjoy my winter with their little games and pony angels. This is where my story ends I rule my kingdom alone once again, my faithful subjects adoring everything that I do and no pony will get in my way.

Some figures are really pretty I find the generation 2 babies to be sooo adorable and I agree with you with generation 4 figures always being the same maybe they'll have a figure with a hoof up, but the rest are all standing and back then the poses were named after the ponies so you saw one and your like o that;s so so pose and not only that they had animal friend figures some had baby ponies that went with them others were just alone so I feel the creativity was big in the older generations, but in the end mlp is just going to be about singing colorful ponies not much more to say about it lol.

I agree with you I like the different poses for the figures of the older generations as well I prefer to collect the figures then watch the shows, but your right children are not going to care if it has a life lesson in it or what they look like all they know is that their colorful ponies that sing. Well the art style for generation 3 is not ugly, but different each generation brings a different drawing style.

Its nice having an era of my little pony where there is not always a monster attacking generation 1 is my favorite, but I enjoy generation 3 as well and I agree they do have their own personalities and some of the things that are said in generation 3 is funny like when Pinkie Pie said you broke Santa. Every cartoon has stereotypes including generation 4 mlp Twilight is the know it all book worm, Fluttershy is the shy one, Applejack is the workaholic, Rarity is the whiny diva, Rainbow Dash is the sporty one and Pinkie Pie is the really crazy friend those are the common stereotypes you see in shows they are typically in pretty much a lot of shows so there's always going to be stereotyping no matter the show, game etc.

I know it seems I was hating on generation 4 I don't want to make anybody angry ya know as you can see I'm not that bad nor is my cousin princessofcompassion we just defend the older generation like you and others with gen 4, but I have no issues with gen 4 I like how each generation brings a different style now gen 3 as a show was a tad boring, but it had some funny moments like when Pinkie Pie asked Minty if she broke santa, but I respect everybody's opinion I know it seems I'm being mean with some of my post, but I am kindly informing others that generation 4 is just like the other generations its just different story line and design, but in the end no matter what generation people like we are all crazy my little pony fans. Animaniacs and Tiny Toons were such great cartoons back in the day I feel cartoons today don't have the same charm like they did back in the day of Dexter's Laboratory, original powerpuff girls and the list goes on now there is some great cartoons currently on like Steven Universe, Gravity Falls and some other greats ones.

Then you go and make your oc a princess I know I did lol actually the first alicorn appeared in my little pony pony tales which was a part of generation 1 it was a show n glow pony here is a picture of her shes the one in the middle.

I grew up with generation 1 so its why I defend the older generations now I love the fact that Hasbro placed the older generations into the show, but the princess thing was a joke I just feel like the movie is going to end with everybody as a princess lol, but I don't hate generation 4 I collect the figures, watch the show I just defend the older generations as fans of gen 4 defend gen 4 I don't want to start a fight over colorful ponies lol.

You do know its a joke right? even the people who make the show joke about it I mean princess big mac was a joke Spike wanting to be a princess was a joke it just feels like everybody is going to be a princess.

The thing with generation 4 is everybody is going to be a princess pre time it ends and its very predictable now, now I like to collect the figures of the older generations more then I like the show, but it has its own charm yes there is no violence in it , but generation 4 is still made for little girls as all mlp generations were. Each generation has their own art style which is a relief to see would not want to see the same art style for each generation.

I respect peoples likes and dislikes, but people seem to blow up generation 3 with hatred which I find odd its not that bad, but I agree if you don't like it don't watch it, but like I said I respect peoples choice and opinions I just kindly point out the similarities between the gens. I agree Hasbro creates shows for the toys flurryheart being the newest toy maker her purpose is to make Hasbro the big bucks.

Well generation 4 is not to far off everybody has to be friends which is not realistic at all, pre time the movie comes out all ponies and creatures will be a princess, a good chunk of villains were reformed which is not realistic you can't take a killer and suddenly make them good. Generation 4 is kind of the same thing its just a repeat bad guy comes, gets reformed, all friends, sparkles everywhere, everybody is now a princess.

I know generation 3 is not the most amazing generation, but it seems so many people hate it I like the art I think its really pretty and I don't see why a show has to have violence or combat to be considered good I must admit I do find the songs to be catchy now I'm not forcing anybody to like generation 3, but a lot of people consider it ugly and horrible which I feel they are over exaggerating now I'm not starting an argument or anything everybody has a right to their own opinion or things that they like I just thought I would start this topic and see what everybody thinks me personally I like generation 3 and a lot of ponies in generation 4 are from that generation so without generation 3 and older there would not be a generation 4 so do you like generation 3 or hate it and why?

That's good to know and don't worry about if others hate your ideas for your ocs my oc Chaos is an alicorn and not everybody likes the design, but I am happy with her design and that's all that matters so as long as your happy with the way you designed them that's all that matters.