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PonyOfWar

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  1. Maybe rather than having her live in ponyville, which is very common, make her from a tough underused city like Fillydelpia(sp?) or Manehattan originally. She could be from a bad part of town but was born with compassion for those around her and wanted to change her home city for the better.

     

    When she started school she was her messy fun loving self and could have been an optimist and idealist but that all changed as she learned the hard way, not every pony felt the same. Most of the ponies in her area were pessimistic and didn’t like her due to her attitude and as they teased her, her personality started to change.  She started to care less and think more like the other ponies and it lead her to give up on her ideas.

     

    Perhaps go into how she made her only friend, I myself might do something like:

     

    One day she sees someone bullying one of the ponies she knows from school but she was too scared to go defend them and wasn't sure she wanted to since that pony had bullied her before. But due to her sympathetic nature, she felt the needed to say something and used her magic to help the pony, thus earning her cutie mark and a friend.

     

    Maybe having a friend helped turn her life around? It goes well with the theme of the show.

     

    Due to her having her first friend she started to once again regain some confidence and with the support from each other she began to pursue magic and ended up learning the few spells she knows but then she ends up moving to

    Ponyville and far from her only friend it which caused her to fall into her lonely state.

     

    This could make her goal to now make new friends in Ponyville but her insecurities get in the way.

     

    Really all I think I’m going is fleshing it out more not really changing it. I could come up with something entirely different if you want but you will have to give me a while. Maybe just fluffing it up would help out if you think this helped at all?

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  2. Your OC looks great and something people can't copy is the work you put into it. So you believe you are uncreative, ask for a hand, I get my best idea's from talking with my friends and usually build off what we talk about and thus far with all the similarities I have found to my OC, I have never seen anything close to my Backstory. If you want to make her more original then let her grow apart from you, you state you take a lot from your experiences but she might benefit from just being her own pony. Rather than giving her your experiences just give her, her own and maybe you would feel she is more original?

     

    I have found a ton of OCs with my same talent, several with very similar cutie marks and my OC is Red and Black of which there are hundreds and the color scheme comes with a stigma. But even so this OC is mine and that's what makes him important.

     

    So don't worry too much about It I'm sure tons of other people run into the same issues we do. I have only been a member here for a few weeks and I have caught myself thinking about just how many people's OCs are blue, black or gray. Mostly Blue but literally if all our OCs made up the real population of Equestria then 85% would be blue, I guarantee they would be the majority.  At least we are not blue :D

     

    If you want I'll try to help out, it's the least I could do after the cute art you made for me. Does she have a profile I could look at? I could at least tell you what I might do with her.

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