PonyOfWar

@@Tacoma, War stood guard outside the door for a few minutes; he could hear mummers of sound from inside, enough that he knew Luna had indeed awoken and a Stallions voice that could only belong to that blue Pegasus. Nothing so far had sounded out of the ordinary so he hadn’t reentered the room. It seemed that neither Luna nor blue had noticed when he had entered. He couldn’t help but feel relieved at that, after all, he was a strange pony dressed clad in blackened armor busting into a Princesses room. It might have looked like he was the assassin, curse his desire to help, it could have gotten him killed. But that hadn’t been the case and he was grateful. Thus far no guards had come by but he was starting to stop worrying about them if there was a problem Luna would probably have indicated that. He decided to lean in closer see if he could make out any words. As he got closer nothing became clear so he tried even more until his ear was pressed against the door. He could hear Luna addressing blue. Based on what she had said he learned that blue was actually called Night Tracer and by the sounds of it they had some sort of prior relationship. Then Night Tracer spoke and sounded upset, his words were sad and pleading. War felt his muzzle get hot with embarrassment. This was a very private moment he was listening in on, the situation finally starting to click in his head as he blushed and his ears twisted in embarrassment. The Princesses was obviously not in trouble, it just sounded like they might have had a thing once that and taken an unexpected turn. War found it strange to imagine a pair like them, they didn’t look like a good match and maybe he just had trouble seeing the Alicorn’s with any pony as if regular ponies were not really worthy of them. Of course, he had heard one of the Alicorn’s had married a normal Unicorn but the thought seemed dangerous. She was always going to outlive him and it would be better, in Wars mind, not to let a pony you love to experience that sort of pain. He face hoofed, listing to his own thoughts he couldn’t believe he was becoming so wrapped up in some romance he knew nothing about like some love struck mare reading a novel. Well, he believed that’s what he was listening to; he would hate to misinterpret this into something it wasn’t. That would be dangerous with royalty involved. A servant walked down the hallway then and War quickly turned from the door trying to look serious and took on a guard like position. The unicorn servant stopped and looked him up and down then peered behind him at the room. “What are you doing in front of the princesses chambers, she is asleep and not to be disturbed.” War wasn’t a liar so he wouldn’t make up some crap about being some special guard or any of that. No, he would tell her the truth but only part of it, only what would be beneficial for her to hear. “I assure you miss she will not be disturbed, that is why I’m here to guard her in order to make sure no pony harms her.” While he wasn’t a guard it was true he had placed himself here to aid her and guard her if something actually did happen. The unicorn paused for another moment like she wasn’t too convinced then looked at his armor before saying “Okay” in a not so sure voice and trotted along. War breathed a sigh of relief and turned back to the door. He probably should have gone on and left these two to their business but now he was curious and just had to know the story. He needed to be watchful for more guards and promised himself that after he got what he wanted he would leave them alone, but right now his soaps were on.

Yeah thanks I did this while at home

Name: War References: 1.) http://www.fimfiction.net/story/323432/elements-of-chaos-liberation 2.) 3.) And my Avatar Personality: War is a leader he has been trained since his creation years ago in the art of discipline and it’s something he tries to develop in others, seeing potential in everyone even if they don’t see it in themselves. War is very caring to his brothers always having what they might need on his person and is ever ready to put himself between them and danger. When people show proper respect for him and his family he can be a very kind, tolerate and patient pony but can snap like a twig if lines are crossed. He is very passionate about learning and bettering himself, loving to train in new skills whenever possible and continuing to better himself in skills he already possesses. War tends to be very bossy and tough on his brothers. He is very calm and not quiet to anger and has a bit of a hero complex that causes him to jump in on trouble and try to give aid. He enjoys learning from others of higher skill in something he wants to learn but equally loves to teach others. He can be extremely hard-headed believing his way is the right way and will be stubborn until proven otherwise. Due to his sheltered life he is very naive about the world and because of this can be easily manipulated. He has a tendency to hold more responsibilities then he can handle leaving him under sever stress which can have an effect on his healing abilities. Other: His mane and tail are a gradient of those three colors like in my avatar and link. I couldn't manage to make if work in the second pic :/ . His legs are also gradient from red to black where his armor starts like in the link...I have a hard time with gradients.

Your Art is beautiful!!! I need a moment to fill out and App but I definitely will

Maybe rather than having her live in ponyville, which is very common, make her from a tough underused city like Fillydelpia(sp?) or Manehattan originally. She could be from a bad part of town but was born with compassion for those around her and wanted to change her home city for the better. When she started school she was her messy fun loving self and could have been an optimist and idealist but that all changed as she learned the hard way, not every pony felt the same. Most of the ponies in her area were pessimistic and didn’t like her due to her attitude and as they teased her, her personality started to change. She started to care less and think more like the other ponies and it lead her to give up on her ideas. Perhaps go into how she made her only friend, I myself might do something like: One day she sees someone bullying one of the ponies she knows from school but she was too scared to go defend them and wasn't sure she wanted to since that pony had bullied her before. But due to her sympathetic nature, she felt the needed to say something and used her magic to help the pony, thus earning her cutie mark and a friend. Maybe having a friend helped turn her life around? It goes well with the theme of the show. Due to her having her first friend she started to once again regain some confidence and with the support from each other she began to pursue magic and ended up learning the few spells she knows but then she ends up moving to Ponyville and far from her only friend it which caused her to fall into her lonely state. This could make her goal to now make new friends in Ponyville but her insecurities get in the way. Really all I think I’m going is fleshing it out more not really changing it. I could come up with something entirely different if you want but you will have to give me a while. Maybe just fluffing it up would help out if you think this helped at all?

Your OC looks great and something people can't copy is the work you put into it. So you believe you are uncreative, ask for a hand, I get my best idea's from talking with my friends and usually build off what we talk about and thus far with all the similarities I have found to my OC, I have never seen anything close to my Backstory. If you want to make her more original then let her grow apart from you, you state you take a lot from your experiences but she might benefit from just being her own pony. Rather than giving her your experiences just give her, her own and maybe you would feel she is more original? I have found a ton of OCs with my same talent, several with very similar cutie marks and my OC is Red and Black of which there are hundreds and the color scheme comes with a stigma. But even so this OC is mine and that's what makes him important. So don't worry too much about It I'm sure tons of other people run into the same issues we do. I have only been a member here for a few weeks and I have caught myself thinking about just how many people's OCs are blue, black or gray. Mostly Blue but literally if all our OCs made up the real population of Equestria then 85% would be blue, I guarantee they would be the majority. At least we are not blue If you want I'll try to help out, it's the least I could do after the cute art you made for me. Does she have a profile I could look at? I could at least tell you what I might do with her.

Mine was Spyro The Dragon for ps1, ended up with all three in the original trilogy and loved them. Still own all three of them.

You can do mine here is a Ref Feel free to use him on your DA just give credit to Element-Of-War on DA for the OC itself and you can do a head shot like you have in your sample images. You shouldn't need his tail for that but just in case here is a link to a pic with it. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/323432/elements-of-chaos-liberation

@@Tacoma, War was in bed and was having a hard time getting to sleep considering how new to this kingdom he and his brothers were. He wasn’t yet comfortable enough to allow himself to slip into unconscious inside a building full of strangers. Yeah, it was the middle of the day but the excitement of the move had left him worn and that didn’t happen often. He had told his comrades to try and rest up as well and watched as they had disappeared into their temporary residence, of course, that didn’t mean any of them actually went to sleep. He had twisted and turned for hours and at last gave up; he wondered if any of his brothers were having as much trouble but thought it was best not to disturb them. If they had managed to get to sleep he didn’t wish to be the one to wake them, he would only have more trouble on his hooves. Rather War wondered if it would be alright for him to venture out into the training area, he had nothing better to do and wasn’t going to get his much-needed rest anytime soon. He rose up and stretched his appendages which had grown stiff from lying for so long, he climbed out of the bed and trotted over to a chest at the end of the bed he opened it to find his battle armor. Quickly dressing he trotted out of the building that he and his brothers had been residing in to head for the castle. He wished to see how the guards trained and what their regiment was like in order to compare it to his own. While trotting up to it there didn't seem to be many ponies around, he wondered where the guards had gotten off to? If he was lucky maybe the were training and would allow him to attend. Since there was so little guards about this day no pony protested as he trotted inside. He could understand their absence, the princesses were alicorns after all and could defend themselves against anypony that was foolish enough to assault them. War often wondered what the guards purpose was, based on what he had learned they didn't do much of anything but hang around the castle and were not very useful in a crisis. Then after the assault on his compound he had a personal vendetta against the royal guard. The castle was like a maze and he had only been in town a couple of days and had only visited the castle once which left him wondering where the heck he should go. Of course being a Pegasus he could just find a window, hop out and fly around for an aerial view to easily find the training ground but what was there to learn from that experience? No, he planned to stick to his hooves and learn his way about the castle even if they wouldn’t be there long. If he wished to cheaply fly to the barracks he would have from outdoors but then he wouldn't have an excuse for exploring the castle. Besides you never know when something like being familiar with the layout of the castle would come in handy. The large red pony trotted around the castle becoming lost; sure he could ask a servant but again didn’t wish to do that. He needed to look out for himself and because of the glances they were giving him; he didn’t wish to scare any pony by approaching them. As he traveled the castle he ended up in a grand hallway alone, using the word grand because this one was far more decorative than others in the castle though none lacked a nice drape or sculpture of the sun or moon. But it was there he heard a crash, it sounded like glass shattering on the other side of the door he had been passing. He paused and looked at the door, could it be a thief? The princesses were currently in the castle so it could be anything. He looked up and down the hall to see if any guards were nearby and there didn't seem to be a servant of any kind for that matter. Of course, they wouldn’t be around if anything was to actually happen seemed the rumors he had heard about them were true. War gritted his teeth; he was dressed for combat therefore if it proved to be some assassin or something he was ready, deciding to check for himself, he put on a serious expression and flung open the door, then froze. This was Princess Luna’s room and there she was asleep in her bed. His eyes left her to look at the hole in the window and then at the nervous looking blue Pegasus. He blinked a few times studying the Stallion; he wasn’t very big and mostly blue and black. War looked over his cutie mark and was sure that was no cutie mark of a killer or thief for that matter. Based on how nervous he looked and his lack of equipment he didn’t believe he was up to no good…or at least not the villainous type, perhaps the perverted type. The hole in the window did seem much too small to be his entrance so it did pose the question of how exactly he got in there? Whoever he was War really didn’t need to worry about it, Luna was stirring in her bed and would undoubtedly wake with this Pegasus in her chambers. She was an Alicorn Princess, she could handle herself. “Excuse me,” he murmured and backed out of the room closing the door behind him. Rather than leaving it to that and heading on out to practice, he stayed outside the door not wanting to leave the princess if she did end up needing something. He became determined to stay until a guard or two passed so that he could relay what was happening. He strained his ears to listen in for anything going on in that room in case something sounded off he would be ready to leap in and give aid.

I love Sly Cooper I played all three of the PS2 mascots games, but Sly was my favorite.

Dragon Age 2, sure it has it's issues and it wasn't as good as origins (neither was inquisition IMO ) but it wasn't a bad game. I enjoyed the characters and story even if the area repeats were bad and I wished we did more then hang in Kirkwall. Another is the Legend of Spyro trilogy. While it was very different from the originals again it wasn't a bad games series, rather epic honestly. I always liked both :/ and the new series was doing far better then the crap people where trying to in order to make it similar to the originals like 'Enter the Dragon fly' and 'Hero's tail'

@Blitz Boom @Wolves "Interesting I have never met a pony from outside Equestria, but I haven't met many ponies yet. Your knowledge on magic is quite impression. Although I could tell myself it wasn't normal, that's the main reason I thought the Pegasi where up to something." He looked to Cyan, "but your friend here says their not, must be a powerful unicorn or maybe some rogue Pegasi. Wish I knew their purpose and don't worry about about offense I just moved here and have no attachment. In my few days here this is the first incident I have seen." He looked to Cyan and Golden. "This sort of things isn't normal is it?" While he had learned Happy wasn't from around here he had yet to hear that from the other two. The fact Cyan knew this had nothing to do with the Pegasi must mean she is from Cloudale that might be close enough to know what Ponyville was like. He really hoped not, not that he could do anything about it. The princesses had ordered he and his brothers here and leaving was probably a one way ticket to Tartarus without good reason. He looked back out the window at if worrying about them. He looked again to earth pony to address him. "No offense taken it's just not my line of work. Currently I don't have an occupation but am looking. No I have never been to the crystal empire and I don't think the new princess Twilight has any guards actually." He actually wondered why that was, obviously Twilight could take care of herself bit wasn't that also true of the other Alicorns? What was the point of the guard? He blinked away his own question. "I don't wear this around normally but when I was getting close the wind was getting strong so I put it on in order to weight myself down." "I could imagine work gets in the way, it's as I said though I'm still searching for work, if you ponies don't mind my asking, what is it you do for a living?" He asked again to the two ponies who hadn't yet said in the room.

The Mass Effect series, when it first came out I was not into sci-fi games so I didn't touch it, didn't for years. Infact I knew nothing about the franchisee, then in fall 2014, two years after the thirds release I saw all three games for $30 and thought, eh, people say their good. Therefore I got them and started playing, still didn't care for it at first as I believe the beginning of the first game was to slow. I ended up putting them on the shelf and not playing them again till summer 2015 where I saw them sitting there and became determined to finish them. Needless to say I loved them and it became my favorite game series despite the ending. Wished I had gotten into the franchisee back when it was big but at least I missed the ending drama.

I hate, Hate the New Dante from devil may cry, there is just nothing redeeming about him.

Thank you Thank you as well and I'm sure it can't be that bad Thank you I appreciate the compliment

This is my OC War, sadly I don't have the best art program so his hair isn't gradient like in my avatar (the way is suppose to be) but I think he turned out okay regardless also sorry about the quality, drew it on a friends computer with no way of getting it on mine so it's a picture of my picture. They said they'd send it to me sometime.

O-o greetings and welcome to the forums, that was quite the story. But anyways if you are looking for help on your OC you have come to the right place seems nearly everyone here has one

I have had an ask blog on tumblr for a few years and tend to answer questions and RP on the same blog. People don't seem care very much, when I started I just copied what others where doing.

Welcome the community is super friendly so I think you will enjoy your stay here I really like your OCs design. Am an artist and writer aswell

Welcome, I'm not new to the fandom but haven't been around this sure much. I am a heavy gamer if you are looking for some similar interests, hope you enjoy your time on this site.

@Blitz Boom @Wolves Cyan confirmed what he had been thinking, seemed the whether Pegasi had nothing to do with this. That wasn't good, he was disappointed to hear they didn't know what was going on. "A spell you say? I wonder what pony would want to do this?" To War ponyville had seemed like a very peaceful place and then this all of a sudden? He didn't think any of his brothers had wind powers so he was hopeful it had nothing to do with them. Oh Celestia please let it have nothing to do with them. He let himself mimic Cyan and watched out one of the small slits in the window at the storm, it was rather mesmerizing. He wished he could somehow see through it at what was happening. If it was a spell someone wouldn't have put it up for no reason. He squinted his eyes at it as if he could will himself to see any signs of life. When Happy Hour spoke again Wars ear twitched in his direction before he turned to face the other pony. "No" he answered simply then studied his own armor. "War is just what my....father called me, no military relation," he stated after a moments pause. While Atom was not his real father he was as close as someone created in a lab could have to one and figured that would be easier for ponies to understand. He didn't get trapped in here just to tell some random ponies his life story. "If it's the armor, it's actually a personal set," he stretched out a arm to look at the trampler on his hoof. "It's not really standard guard armor either." The guard huh? He wasn't much interested in the guard, it seemed to dull to him. Based on what he had learned about them they barely see action and during the few times something actually happens their notorious for proving useless. He didn't understand why the princesses needed them, they could kill any threat without them. War wanted a little more to life then standing around the castle. He chuckled at the thought thinking himself overly qualified for a guard position. Sadly though he was concerned he would end up there whether if wanted to or not, after all where else in the kingdom is a pony with a cutie mark in combat useful? "Anyways, you say it's a spell? You know your way around magic? Or at least magical knowledge. I hear that's rare in earth ponies, how does one in your line of work get the chance to brush up on magical knowledge?"

Awe he is adorable thank you, and he looks just find the way he is