Bernard

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Amazing. Lot a good points. I chose alicorn cause I like alicorns I guess. I will expand on the backstory when I feel I have her design down good. Thanks for the feedback.

Good idea but I think I have an idea of what I can do with her cutie mark. It will have something to do with adventure or something. I'll probably have her get it while she was a child with Candy on a rode trip or something.

I HAVE A LOT TO CHANGE ;-; THANKS FOR FEEDBACK. I'M PRETTY MUCH GOING TO START OVER SO NO NEED TO RESPOND. YOU CAN IF YOU WANT I GUESS. To those who would like to see them here are V.1 (which I made a post about) and V.2 (which I skipped making a post about). V.1 http://i.imgur.com/yOqG78B.jpg V.2 http://i.imgur.com/uG1PTKO.jpg So I'm back with an update for anyone who cares, *cough* @ambergerr *cough* . (Wanted to see colored version) Anyways I've made some updates. Any and all constructive feedback is wanted. Feel free to compare it to previous versions and just let me know what you think. (NOTE: Eyes not done and cutiemark may change. Jacket yet to be added as well.) V.3 http://i.imgur.com/MXYklRm.png Note: No that totally isn't a watermark that I added. :-P I've updated some info about her as well. I'd like feedback about her info aswell Name: Sugar Rush /OR/ Something New? :3 Race: Alicorn Backstory (Rough Draft ;3) (Will build upon & improve): Sugar Rush (name for now) spends her time in the small town of Ponyville. She grew up not knowing who her real parents were. The only family she knows is Candy (Step mother. name for now). Candy has always been there for her and raised her for as long as she could remember. For an unexplained reason SR is an alicorn. Candy, knowing just what being an alicorn means, advises against SR going out often. It could cause unwanted attention. SR, being the adventure loving pony she is, doesn't listen. She often went out to explore but always remembers to wear a jacket to hide her wings. (End for now. May change who knows ) Color Scheme: Her mane is blue and pink representing candy. Her coat is a lighter blue similar to rainbow dash's coat. Cutie Mark: For now it is a piece of candy. I realized that cutie marks are usually representations of a pony's personality and destiny in life. This makes me want to change her cutie mark to something new. I don't think a piece of candy really represents the type of personality I'm aiming for her to have. She is going to be smart but fun. She's going to love being active and loves to play. She will be mischievous like RD and Pinky. Overall fun personality. That's where the name Sugar Rush comes in. The name kind of represents being active or hyper. Plans: Alot

Today I randomly felt like starting to draw a pony OC. It was my first time drawing a pony and isn't a final version. I wanted feedback on the drawing and anything else in general. Here is some info about my OC. Also, I drew this on a sticky note ;3 Name: Serena (For now. What do you guys think of a name like this for a pony?) Race: Alicorn (Well... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I like the idea of her being an alicorn. :3) Backstory: None at the moment. Since I'm being that guy who makes his OC an alicorn I don't plan to give her a backstory of lolipops and kisses. I have to compensate some how. Can't have a perfect pony after all, they just don't exist. If I ever get into writing maybe I could make a fic of her backstory ;3 Color Scheme: I planned on making her black but then it hit me... luna. So I think I'll make her either gray or a dark cyan sort of color. Her mane is going to the other of the two options, most likely. Things might change. Cutie Mark: No clue. This will most likely come after I've written a backstory. I need something to base it off of. Plans: I for one know I made her too long. This was my first time after all. I plan to make her not as long aswell and (maybe) adding a jacket. I like the idea of a jacket but I'm a noob drawer and am not sure whether I can pull it off. I'll see later ;3 ---- So yah feedback appreciated. Also, I would like to draw on my pc (photoshop) but I don't know a good technique. Drawing with the mouse always ends in horrible lines. Anyone here who draws on pc have any tips? Thanks!