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    Peony Spring

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    Okay, I fixed up the mentioned areas.

     

     

     

    Second would be the spell that Peony uses to keep flowers alive longer. It's stated that she already used the spell before she researched it when Peony discovered her special talent. It doesn't make sense. Why did she need to research the spell later on if she already knew it?

     

    This was changed to explain that she practiced to get better with the spell. Or would the special talent being that make it perfect to begin with?

     

    I added the discovery of the magical flower into her backstory second paragraph.

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