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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I like that idea! It will appear in the third story but I may vary it a bit...I like how it's not a conventional means of defeating the villain - that sounds quite intelligent as opposed to all-out action!- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I was considering there being a twist where it turns out he was pretending just to escape being enslaved by Spatium and he hasn't really been affected by the magic of friendship at all, but that sounds a bit cliche and makes his entire arc pointless. Plus, I wouldn't be able to do the whole swapping Princess roles thing at the end.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Just re-watched part one of Twilight's Kingdom and I honestly think a reformed Tirek could work - his brother was reformed, so now it's his turn, right, that could shape his decision and Discord is back to his old reformed self again now and him and Tirek are clearly very close in the episode. I dunno...- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Haha, that episode's gonna be referenced a lot in this one, due to Tirek's involvement. And gore is blood and guts, and that kind of thing.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I feel like this middle chapter does kinda defeat the purpose of the show being so happy...it's certainly Empire Strikes Back level of dark- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
E is for everyone, T is Teen and there's an 18+ one too. The two categories for stories rated T or up are "gore" and "s*x" but I dunno if there's really any gore as such in the story and there's certainly no s*x.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
What rating should I give Tirek's Reform? I've rated it T due to the new chapter referencing the Princess' "corpses" and "Twilight feeling as if her heart is about to explode out of her chest.", and for overall having a much darker tone than the show. Is all that too strong for an E, or am I being overly-paranoid; I just don't want to get in trouble for giving it the wrong rating.- 97 replies
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spoiler Does Discord's Dimension Have A Name?
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in MLP:FiM Canon Discussion
Thanks! This is what I shall use in my Fanfic.- 12 replies
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Do you think Rainbow Dash is the best character?
Harratot33 replied to AlicornSpell's topic in Sugarcube Corner
I have to disagree...I don't think viewers would identify with Rainbow Dash. With Fluttershy, many people could relate to being afraid to stand up for themselves; people with ADHD could connect with Pinkie Pie, and so on. With Rainbow Dash, well...I don't think there's too many people in the world that are as awesome as she's made out to be I think she's one of the most iconic and recognizable characters...but don't forget, she's super unlikeable in several episodes, too, such as 28 Pranks later. -
books Is Anyone Else Really Into Superheroes/Comic-Books?
Harratot33 posted a topic in Media Discussion
Aside from cartoons like Gravity Falls and of course FIM, I'm really and I mean truly into Marvel - I'm not even just talking about the movies, I've read over 250 issues of Marvel Comics (mostly 70s and 80s). I have high-functioning autism and I think it classes as a SI (Special Interest). Anyone else share this interest - I don't often see comics being talked about on here, there isn't even a category for it in this forum, and since loads of bronies tend to be geeks too I just wondered...- 13 replies
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Just finished Pinkie Pie and the Rockin' Pony Party and I plan on reading all those sorts of FIM tie-in books., That aside, I really only read comic-books, rather than actual novels. I'm currently reading the Dark Phoenix Uncanny X-Men storyline from the 1970s.
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Erhm...I've never really thought about it, but great idea!- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12612767/1/Tirek-s-Reform- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I've started on Tirek's Reform already; unfortunately it is only avaliable on Fanfiction.net because the first chapter is not quite 1,000 words long.- 97 replies
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I am referring to the strange world he lives in, as seen in:
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I should probably draw one.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Awesome news - Coming of Stellas Spatium is now FINISHED!! The final chapter is up on Fimficiton.net and Fanfiction.net. It's a little longer than the rest, and a bit darker, I hope I didn't go too overboard with that element, but ah well, if you're still interested, what do you think? Thanks! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381912/7/the-coming-of-stellas-spatium/chapter-7---equestrias-new-ruler- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I think the first chapter of Tirek's Reform will be a prologue detailing his poor relationship with his sisters and subsequent banishment.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Thank you. And yes, I have big plans for Sunset and also Starburst believe it or not!- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Speaking of which: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381912/6/the-coming-of-stellas-spatium/chapter-6---spatium-arrives Whoops, there's a mistake in it! I never did come up with a Southern Simile for what Spike joining the fight is more dangerous than...- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
Don't worry - the whole reason I made this forum was for critics such as yourself to give me advice on my work- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
It's not like Celestia and Luna have much of a choice - Spatium is coming for all of Equestria AND the entire multi-verse, isn't he; a bit of protection is better than no protection whatsoever.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
That's the whole point, though! Spatium enslaving or injuring them even though they're not even in the same place is a great demonstration of his immense power, in my opinion.- 97 replies
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critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)
Harratot33 replied to Harratot33's topic in AK Yearling's Writing Resources
I've posted Chapter 5: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381912/5/the-coming-of-stellas-spatium/chapter-5---preparations-for-invasion Any feedback would be much appreciated, and the first part of the trilogy is nearly done, btw.- 97 replies
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Because as a writer, when I have a good idea I can't let it go. You need to grasp hold of good stories when they come to you, I firmly believe no writer will ever be successful if they cannot do this. Plus, I really wanted to feel more like a "true" brony and become more involved with the fandom rather than just watching the show, and it's all great for developing writing skills!
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