space700

Exactly. How can someone still say 'you're a cartoon character' after being with her for 12 years? The main character should come to the realization that Equestria is real. Otherwise, when Celestia and the others come for R.Dash, he might think he's having a dream or something. No, he realizes they're real, R.Dash is real and therefore, Equestria is real - not fictional characters even if MLP is a cartoon on Earth.

I think what you're hinting it is that the main character found R.Dash, supposedly from a cartoon but even the guy realizes she's real - she's no cartoon, she's in front of him. For someone to then tell others that they are merely cartoon characters denies his previous realization mentioned. I think it might have worked out better with him thinking about how the real world and how (possibly) Equestria might even be connected somehow. After all, Rainbow Dash is from that world, and is now on Earth.

Thank you! That's what I was feeling from it - it felt forced. That aside, making a fanfiction about R.Dash growing up in a very human world was nice, and thought-out.

There have been a few variations written on this, assuming you're referring to the one by ROBCakeran53. I rather liked it, although I thought the main character's reaction to meeting Celestia and wanting to punch her was... odd.