Beneath the Moon and under star
he wandered far from northern strands,
bewildered on enchanted ways
beyond the days of mortal lands.
From gnashing of the Narrow Ice
where shadow lies on frozen hills,
from nether heats and burning waste
he turned in haste, and roving still
on starless waters far astray
at last he came to Night of Naught,
and passed, and never sight he saw
of shining shore nor light he sought
Hello Lady Amalthea. I really like your name. How it sounds. Aswel as the symbolism it has in mythology
Welcome to the forums.
P.S. You'll find that this comunity consists of people of every age so don't frett
I've read your chapter and i was aware
That when writing it you took great care
I think that its a great one. But beware
For with the ancient tongue some you may scare
As for your Sig Ser feather Spiral at the moment
I can not check it since i'm from my phone
But i'll make sure tomorrow to see and coment
When i'm on my computer and have time i own
And since our work to share seems the theme
Maybe I can allow myself to show off
But not my novel yet.instead i deem
That i should share a drawing i am proud of
To go with it i also wrote some verses
A prophecy Daring Do finds while there she immerses
We are immortal, or so we think
but our race faces certain doom
a wizard with great promise we'll make king
and crown him in this very room
but for his arrogance we will all sink
to endless time's depths in a loop
and he'll imprison us and horrors bring
for his intentions differ from what they look
this fate shivers up my mane
for its much worse than timely death
we'll suffer in this cycle anew again
and never draw our final breath
so hear me now and listen well
for we must put trust in two foals
sent them away far from this hell
and hope they don't forget their goals
one will be born under sun's sign
and will inherit all its power
the other is her sister and don't sigh
for the moon she will raise and lower
their quest will be to find the six spoked star
and raise it delicately with care
for she's the one to heal time's own scar
doing so freeing every colt and mare
to know her look for the birth of a dragon
under a rainbow blazing in the sky
a unicorn she'll be and i can not fathom
how she'll achieve it so i won't even try
the star that gleams is her adversary
but she will teach her in time's ways
in finding friends she needs some comentary
and a student thus she gains
but on her own she'll never find us
so she must find the sacred tree
to gain the map to where he binds us
and come to finaly set us free
It's my first poem. So please don't mind
The rhyming a bit awkward if you find
instead of cringing. Try to be kind
And let now your own stories to unwind
Once Rarity got with a grand spell
Butterfly wings the skies to soar
But the sun was close.she couldn't tell
She fainted and became all over sore
Rarity: 29
Wow... It has only happened to me once and not to that extent. I got 19 brohoofs on old status updates (which placed me #3 in statuses on that day, though I didn't even post any new ones then).