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  1. Hello fellow My Little Pony fans, it has been a long time since I last visited the mlpforums and now I'm back. 

    In the past few months I have been planning and now working on the fanfiction called 'Equestria Battleship yamato' and I want to promote my fanfic here on this forum for readers who are interested in the story and its naval/military & adventure genres. For those who are not into those genres its fine, feel free to read it in your own time. So yeah, the synopsis of my fanfic is below this sentence, and further down is the websites that the fanfic is available on and my notes. With that being said, enjoy and I hope you like my fanfic👍
     

    Equestria Battleship Yamato 

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    Synopsis:
    A young alicorn named Imperial Crest, who is a crowned prince that lives in Canterlot and was informed by his friend and teacher Princess Celestia that his home country is being invaded by the New Lunar Republic even though their forces were mostly around the Northern parts of Equestria. And he found out that the New Lunar Republic's huge attack was nothing but a distraction so they can use their remaining handful of naval forces to sneak around the main front line and invaded some islands in the process. His country is the last line of defense and if it is occupied by the enemy, Equestria will be lost. So Imperial Crest found a way to prevent the invasion by visiting another world to seek help. After Celestia's requests, Crest and his friend Luna who is tagging along went on a mission to visit the other world to find help. During their visit they met a new friend and Crest found a way to save his home.......by reviving an old battleship?
     

    Fanfic available:

     

    Writer's notes: 
    - The fanfic is Inspired by the anime called 'Space Battleship Yamato' both the Classic and Remake Series and other naval themed anime shows. 
    - Do not comment negative or controversial things, I know it references WW2 and that, but please no need to comment that. I am just a brony who is a Naval/WW2 Enthusaists and likes writing this fanfic.
    - Feel free to comment any questions, advices or feedback

     

    (I hope you guys do not mind me posting this.)
     

  2. Thanks for the reply and also I'll try to use the Grammarly Online text editor to correct the 13 errors and changing and adding things in the prologue and the next chapter. I think its okay that you can to a little bit here and there option and also that means I can change most things in the next chapters (not uploaded) during the wait. In case if I'm offline on the MLP Forum u can contact me through either Gmail, Facebook or Instagram Thanks for the reply and yes I'll try to fix it and I just posted this thread a day ago so I'm waiting for more replies.
  3. Hey everypony
     
    I'm looking for an editor/co writer for my fanfic because my writing is poor according to someone in the comment section of my fanfic and he said "....Will need a fair amount of work, Luna (at the very least) seems out of character, and the characters themselves seem to parrot the other when given a suggestion. The plot seems good, but it's written poorly, and could use an editor...". What he said is true because I actually need help on working on the characters and probably the execution and the story even though the plot seems good. I even went to the forums under the name of 'Looking for Editors' at the Fimfiction website a week ago to post my request for editor but no response lately so Facebook MLP groups and MLP Forums is the only option I can do to find an editor/co-writer. So if youre interested in helping me on my fanfic then reply by commenting on this post or pm me. Thank you
     
     
    Before you guys reply here's the link of my fanfic if youre interested in helping me on this fanfic project. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436259/equestria-battleship-yamato
     
  4. Hey everypony I'm looking for an editor/co writer for my fanfic because my writing is poor according to someone in the comment section of my fanfic and he said "....Will need a fair amount of work, Luna (at the very least) seems out of character, and the characters themselves seem to parrot the other when given a suggestion. The plot seems good, but it's written poorly, and could use an editor...". What he said is true because I actually need help on working on the characters and probably the execution and the story even though the plot seems good. I even went to the forums under the name of 'Looking for Editors' at the Fimfiction website a week ago to post my request for editor but no response lately so Facebook MLP groups and MLP Forums is the only option I can do to find an editor/co-writer. So if youre interested in helping me on my fanfic then reply by commenting on this post or pm me. Thank you Before you guys reply here's the link of my fanfic if youre interested in helping me on this fanfic project. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436259/equestria-battleship-yamato
  5. The Yamato Project Hey guys I’m looking for a proof-reader/editor who is committed to proof-read/edit my fanfic work. I've only done the Chapter 1 to 3 and still working on chapter 4. The prologue is done by a previous proof-reader but he didn’t want to continue due to him being busy. So DM me or comment below if you are interested in proof-reading/edit my fanfic or if you know anyone that proof-read/edit you can still DM me or comment. Also here’s the overview story of my fanfic ‘Blue Steel Yamato’ below this paragraph if you’re interested in it. Thank you Note: I don't mind if it's more than one proof-reader/editor. My overview of Blue Steel Yamato The fanfic 'Blue Steel Yamato' is basically a story about the old battleship Yamato coming back to life from the seafloor by one of the main characters like Imperial Crest (My OC name) with the help of his friends to save his country Zipang (outside of Equestria basically similar to Japan) from being captured by the New Lunar Republic forces using the battleship Yamato. The story takes place around the main show to the present. The series will focus on the ship (possibly) and the characters (there will be more characters later in the fanfic series) and their development and challenges they have to face as the story progresses. It’s basically inspired story from the popular military/sci-fi/ space opera anime genre called Space Battleship Yamato (both classic and remake) with the mlp setting but not in space but in the expanded world of Equestria and the Yamato is in its WW2 look, not the space battleship version. There will be other references from other animes, cartoons, and movies in the series that's going to be mentioned or appear. So that's basically my own summary of my fanfic. Other social media to DM or email me: Instagram: imperial__blue__crest (my account is priv so my profile pic looks like a blue alicorn oc) Fimfiction: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/286622/Imperial_Blue_Crest Gmail: admiral.imperial.crest@gmail.com
  6. Hey, guys, I've been posting like this a couple of times before to find a proofreader but it didn't work so I'm posting this again in hopes of finding a proofreader. So I've been working on a huge fanfiction called 'Blue Steel Yamato' and I was wondering if you guys know anyone that can proofread my work. I've only done the Chapter 1 to 3 and still working chapter 4. The prologue is done by a previous proofreader but unfortunately, he quitted due to life stuff. So I’ve posted similar like this in this mlpforum like 7 weeks ago and unfortunately no DMs or emails from anyone. Maybe because I haven’t show the overview story of it (below this paragraph). So I tried to find some proofreaders at fimfiction but no response (they were online at that time). I would like to ask in a nice way as possible if you guys are proofreaders or know anyone that are proofreaders that have the time and commitment to proofread my fanfic….Thank you Update: I don’t mind if I have more than one proofreader Author's Overview of Blue Steel Yamato The fanfic 'Blue Steel Yamato' is basically a story about the old battleship Yamato coming back to life from the seafloor by one of the main characters like Imperial Crest (My OC name) with the help of his friends to save his country Zipang (outside of Equestria basically similar to Japan) from being captured by the New Lunar Republic forces using the battleship Yamato. The story takes place around the main show to the present. The series will focus on the ship (possibly) and the characters (there will be more characters later in the fanfic series) and their development and challenges they have to face as the story progresses. It’s basically inspired story from the popular military/sci-fi/ space opera anime genre called Space Battleship Yamato (both classic and remake) with the mlp setting but not in space but in the expanded world of Equestria and the Yamato is in its WW2 look, not the space battleship version. There will be other references from animes, cartoons, and movies in the series that's going to be mentioned or appear. So that's basically the overview of my fanfic. You can DM me through any of these social networks listed below Facebook: You can comment or use messenger Instagram: imperial__blue__crest (my account is priv so my profile pic looks like a blue alicorn oc) Fimfiction: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/286622/Imperial_Blue_Crest Gmail: admiral.imperial.crest@gmail.com
  7. Hello everypony I'm new here and I've been liking MLP FIM since 2013. Lately, I've been working a fanfic called Blue Steel Yamato and I was wondering if you guys know anyone that can proofread my work. I've only done the Chapter 1 to 3 and still working chapter 4. The prologue is done by a previous proofreader but unfortunately, he quitted due to life stuff and he suggested me to go to this forum to ask if there are proofreaders that can check my work. So if anyone has found someone that can proofread my fanfic. Dm me thanks You can message on any of these social network listed below. Gmail: admiral.imperial.crest@gmail.com IG: imperial__blue__crest Messenger: m.me/ImperialBlueCrest Discord: Imperial_Crest#1983