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I'd like your opinion on this. it's been a while since I made a light novel.... and I haven't finished the other novel aswell....
you can post it here or pm me?
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I wanted to make it feel that Madeline is telling the story.
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" they had frowns on their faces" dosnt seem natural for someone like Madeline to say...is what I think.....
I will still edit and check. thanks again @Sparkly sparks . I will soon put part 2!