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    I personally felt like it was way to rushed in some parts. Which made it feel lacking in the story. Like build the relationship of the ponies more. Like with Sunnys dad they killed his off to fast. And at the end where Sunnyside alacorn form was transparent what was up with that. Elaborate on it and pj other things.
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    Thank you
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    Hi yall completely new to this site.
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