Motion Spark

your OC's colors are very opaque. Try a bright yellow and a bright green, she would look fluorescent :pukes: She doesn't look that bad, but I admit that I'm not a big fan of green manes

ugh! I mega hate these poor OC's that are the result of the poor imaginations of their creators, unfortunatelly pony creator offer TOO many options and windows for wildness, breaking the balance of the world of Equestria, I believe that the OC's must remain truthful to the show without being too borderline. Colors They must know how to use colors, they can't be too bright! or too dark and please don't mix yellow and green, chocolate and blue? NO! D: My eyes! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kc9W2LrFPZM Bodies and Accessories Also the ponies that are too disproportional in terms of bodytipe, too tall with a regular mare's face (like Twilight), that's just wrong, also the Zebra stripes and the different colored spots on their fur is just no, they look more like real horses and less than MLP ponies. And the ridiculous amount of accessories that are repetitive in the end because Pony Creator is very limited. Please, I can't stand horse hooves on mares, why do you do that to them? they don't look good with those, take them off! Mary Sues Yeah, the most outrageous OC's there are usually mary sues, and they don't have the fault to have said owner. I'm not an expert in RP's but I guess it would be annoying to play with these kind of people. I don't have a problem with alicorns, but the owner must offer an objective and understandable storyline for their character if they want me to believe it. Most fails at that. They only focus in the ungodly abilities of their ponies, even if they are earth ponies, go figure. canon manes and tails I just hate it, it's so unconfortable to see a pony with a Fluttershy's mane and a Celestia's tail to throw an example -_- *sigh* In the end I can't blame them all, a lot of people wants OC's so badly but they can't draw so they work with what pony creator can offer..... it's sad in the end. --- here are my 2 OC's as of now, I think both Motion and Beat are very.... common in color palettes, since most horses in RL are brown I guess. I played safe with both of them. Motion Spark Beat Spark

you can enter for the lulz of it, I encourage you to do it, and I agree with Lady, put on a cute make up, a nice shirt, a good hair, cleavage and a good angle and you are ready for it! alrighty I'm going to update the list!!

*phew* I'm so tired, In a good way ... well, first of all I must say thanks! wow, I never expected the thread to grow that much, we definitelly have cute pegasisters on MLPforums, you are all absolutely fabulous ---- Anyways moving on, I feel like the brohoofing system can be biased, however this being the first round, it will be like that, with brohoofs. However, in future rounds I'll have the use of a poll for a limited period of time for the voting system ...I'll advise later how many girls will pass to the next round, from now on, you can only submit pictures until this sunday, April 7. After that, submissions are closed, so if you are having second thoughts, you are still on time, so hurry up! Remember that if you get to the next round, you MUST submit a different picture. NO EXCEPTIONS. After the submissions are closed, I will give a bit more of time for users to still brohoofing the girls that they like --- @@Lady Leopardess, I didn't include you into the contest because you only posted the picture to prove that you were female. I can add you if you want Kudos to Crispy haha XD ...but unless he can prove me that he is really a girl, he can't compete, besides, the contest would be broken, he would win @@AnonyPoni, you are a stalker, needed to point that out before you joined I guess, I was known for being Motion Spark, I'm still Motion if you prefer, just changed my username to Sparkity very recently. You can call me either way, I don't mind --- having said that, I want to thank y'all again, I can't wait to know who would win this contest, and sorry for the wait lol BTW, I edited the firt post with all of the contestants, if I'm missing anypony please let me know.