Virulence

Actually it's currently a work in progress and I brought it up since I thought you might be interested if I asked you if you could provide some feedback.

Oh sure no problem!

Okay here's an idea. Before you read it, write down a few things you might like to see happen, or have said, based upon what little I've told you. Those ideas could serve as inspiration for future components of the story. Also, write down ideas and thoughts you might have while reading the story. Like if a character mentions something and you go "Ooh! This thing would be cool to have happen if what I just read is going to happen."

Then provide your concluding thoughts...