Well, it's really good. Dashie, Applejack and Rarity are the main chars, and they each get a unique "story" for them, sort of...it makes me think that I can definitely write something like that. What's your fic about?
The Mane Six are going on some kind of adventure across the country with Luna, and there's some really interesting mythology/history stuff so far. I still have a ways to go in it. I think I saw some fanart from that fic, did they ever fight some kind of giant snake?