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  1. "It was called 'Earth' ... that was the name of the blue marble that was suspended in the sea of darkness. It possessed a brilliant tint of blue never before seen. Its blue was a blue unlike any other. And it was as luminous as a star. It looked so familiar and yet so alone. How could something so pure and captivating be so alone in the dark?"

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    2. Dsanders

      Dsanders

      Lol well in your perspective, how can I improve it? Alright is terrible for me. I want to write beautifully while also writing in a way that is understandable for the readers.

    3. JonasDarkmane

      JonasDarkmane

      "It looked so familiar and yet so alone". I just don't really understand that part.

    4. Dsanders

      Dsanders

      Ah okay, so you don't understand the context. That's fine, you are not supposed to fully comprehend what it means.. Once I'm finished with my story you'll understand what I'm talking about ;)

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