So here's my evil OC, Blade, with two of her guards in her castle.
I was writing a backstory too but it sounds bleh to me. I'd really like feedback and advice on improving:
Shade kingdom is notorious. It is feared and nary spoken of by residents of Equestria, but the border between these two kingdoms lies
just beyond Everfree forest. There noone is happy. They are ruled by the sadistic unicorn blade, she has always opposed all that is good.
Her horn was destroyed long ago when she battled another unicorn when heading to conquer a neighbouring fishing village. Blade is
a horrible and evil unicorn. Noone who has ever seen her has come out unscathed.
Along the border her Shadelings patrol, they are soldiers who wear naught but black and purple ceremonial armor. They are loyal
servants of Blade and they make sure no one gets in or out without Blade's permission. They are verocious and skilled fighters.
They obey every order of Blade and they do it without question. The capital of the Shade kingdom is Obsidian Castle, a jet-black and
dark/light purple colored castle that sits in the middle of Shade controlled territory. Every pony who is unlucky enough to be
in Shade kingdom's worst nightmare is going into Obsidian castle. No one except Blade or her guards has ever come out of Obsidian
castle alive.
Blade was born in Equestria, unde the name of Moon Flower, however, she was led astray by an unknown evil creature. She was
taught dark magic. Once princess Celestia learned that Moon Flower was using dark magic, she was exiled. Moon Flower had used
a spell to summon swords predominantly, so she dubbed herself "Blade". She had slowly gained territory and followers until she could
consider the Shade domain a kingdom.
Noone is brave enough to dare go into Shade territory, not even Celestia, and she wouldn't dare send her guards. The Shade Kingdom
is for the most part ignored, and avoided.
Comments, feedback, questions?