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  1. So what were you doing 10 minutes ago? ____________________________________ I was just eating vegemite on toast because I got hungry.
  2. My little pony the rise of Equestria directed by Michael Bay. This movie is about how Equestria was made in the movie there would be many casualty and death and the pony over lords will spare those who worship them and then turn them into ponies once they have taken over earth.
  3. Thorgir the Mighty

    Manehattan Episode 1

    Manehattan Noir Episode 1:Sin City Manehattan,New Yorkie,1924 Manehattan is a City,a City full of crime,too numerous to count.The police can handle the petty crimes.But for certain cases,the police won’t do.Thats where Rarity comes into play... *Smooth 1920s jazz plays* Rarity’s thoughts: It was a slow night tonight,there hasn’t been any major crimes with weeks.So all I’ve been doing recently is nothing sadly,and my partner Spike,helps with the petty crimes and oth- *Slams open door* Twilight: DETECTIVE RARITY!!! Rarity: Yes Mrs.T? Twilight: That’s Commissioner Twilight to ya! We have a lead on a Sugarcube Smuggling ring! I need ya to investigate now! *Throws File onto desk* [Sugarcubes is the ponified “coke”] Rarity:*lifts hat from eyes* A sugarcube ring? Twilight: Yes,are ya deaf or somethin’? Rarity: Hmm...*Examines files* Twilight: We only got one lead,apparently the leader goes by the name of “Nightshade”. Rarity: Huh...*drops files* seems like her last location was at the hotel owned by Mr and Mrs Carver. Twilight: Rarity I suggest that you go figure out why they were buying that crap and quickly! Rarity: *putting trench coat on* Yes ma’am you got it. *Loads M1911A1,and Thompson* Twilight: Ya finished yet sweetheart? *Rarity ignores twilight then exits the door* Twilight: I’ll take that as a yes. Rarity’s thoughts: I wonder why the Carver family would allow drugs into the hotel. It can’t be them,I’ve known them my whole life here in Manehattan.No it can’t be them! I have to prove it! *Rarity gets into a Taxi* Driver: Where too miss? Rarity:207 Sleet Lane,make it quick. Driver:’Aight *Later* Driver: ‘Aight Miss,207 Sleet Lane. *Rarity pays the driver and walks inside* Mrs.Carver: Oh hello Detective! How may we serve you tonight? Rarity: I’ve come in search of something. Mrs.Carver: Oh? What is it that you’re looking for?*Leans onto the bar* Rarity:*pulls picture from coat pocket* At around 10:43pm,yesterday some mysterious ponies walked in carrying sugercubes,I have come here to investigate. Mrs.Carver:Oh dear! Rarity: First I’d like to see your,”guests” who are staying in this hotel. Mrs.Carver: Right away! *Mrs.Carver gets the 5 guests together including herself and her husband* Rarity: Carvers,I’d like for you to tell me what were you doing at 10:43pm Yesterday? Mr.Carver: I was out in the shed welding together my car because the fender got torn off by some drunken punk! Rarity:Hmm...Mrs.Carver how about you? Mrs.Carver: I was upstairs cleaning one of our guests rooms! Rarity:And these ponies are your guests? Both Carvers:Yes. Rarity:Mr...? Oddingale: Oddingale,Mr Oddingale! *in a smooth talk* Rarity:Ok Oddingale,what were you doing yesterday at 10:43pm? Oddingale:Well to be honest,was getting some paper to write my wife back at Arkansaw. Rarity:How touching...and you miss? Coronelle:Coronelle,And this is my son,Nash. Nash:H-h-i.... Rarity: what were you two doing at 10:43pm? Coronelle: I was out getting some groceries for dinner. Rarity:How about you Nash? Nash:I uhm was...outside... Rarity:Go on... Nash:And I saw the truck...I saw the ponies...and they were carrying crates... *Rarity paying closer attention* Nash:I looked in one...one of the ponies pointed a gun...at me...it was a nickel plated revolver...with a redwood grip...she said to me,”You speak of this,I’ll hunt your family,and I’ll blow each of your heads off”. Coronelle: *sob* oh dear. Nash:So I never spoke of it till now. Rarity:What did the pony look like? Nash:She was tall,dark,had turquoise eyes,and had an old english accent. Rarity:What did the truck look like? Nash:it was your common truck.the words where a bit faded,but it said “Moon” on it. Rarity:But where did the drugs go? *4 thugs entered the hotel and and fired their guns* Rarity: GET BEHIND THE COUNTER!!! *everyone is behind the counter* Rarity: Everypony,leave out the back now!!! *pulls out and cocks Tommy Gun.Rarity shoots one of the thugs* Thug 1:Get behind somethin’!!! Thug 2:The dolls armed! Rarity: Get out! You’re under arrest! *Thug 3 jumps out,missing Rarity,But Rarity retaliates by shooting him.* Thug 2:Dang it! Jimmies been rubbed off! Thug 1: Up the stairs! Thug 2:Wait Frank ya idiot! *The thug attempts to run up the stairs but ends up getting shot* Thug 2: Screw it,I’m outta here!!! *the thug exits,but as soon as he opens the door,Police Sgt.Applejack points a Thompson at him* Applejack: You are under arrest. *moments later* Applejack: We found the stash of sugarcubes in the basement.What do you think they were putting it here for? Rarity: For storage it appears. Applejack: Storage? Now why would they do that? Rarity: That’s what I’m going to find out,I’m off to Mrs.Moons Bar and Theatre.If anything she’s probably the suspect. Applejack: Y’know,it’s not good to jump to conclusions... Rarity: The description fits,I know what I’m doing. *Rarity calls for a cab and drives off* *Moments later at The Moon Bar and Theatre,Rarity exits the cab* Bouncer: Sorry Miss ya have ta wa- *Rarity shows badge and walks in* *As she walks in,she admires how beautiful the place looks* Rarity’s Thought: Oh my! This place is beautiful,I expected a run down bar full of drunks! And that ladies voice,she soun-wait a minute... *Rarity pulls out a note describing the characters features* Rarity’s thoughts: Dark,alicorn,turquoise eyes,and an old English accent! That’s her! But how am I going to make her talk? *Rarity sits at the bar,thinking about her next move* Bartender: What’ll it be ma’am? Rarity: Before I order,how do you sell drinks during the Prohibition? (18th Amendment of the 20s) Bartender: I don’t know exactly,but if you wanna know you could ask the owner. Rarity: Is she the one singing? Bartender: Yeah,she’s the boss. I’ll tell her that you wanna talk to here in a minute. But in the meantime,*rubbing glass* what’ll it be? Rarity: A strong hard cider. Bartender:Ya got it *smirk* *pours cider* Bartender: Why is a fed like you in a place like this? *puts glass down and rubs another* Rarity: I’m looking for answers. Bartender: Right... *The song ends and the owner,Mrs.Moon or Luna Moon,takes a bow along with the choir,and a huge round of applause starts* Moon: *Bowing* Why thank you! You were a lovely crowd! Audience: *loud claps and whistles,followed by a few howls* Bartender: *leans* Hey Jeff! Jeff the bodyguard: Yeah? Bartender: Go get the boss,this lady want ta have a “talk” see! Jeff the bodyguard: *winks at bartender* yeah, I’ll get ‘er. Bartender: ‘Aight,she’ll be here soon. Rarity: *puts down empty glass* Thank you sir. Moon: Hello Miss..? Rarity: It’s Rarity,Detective Rarity. Moon: Let’s go to my office so we can talk more privately. *Mrs.Moon And Rarity walk into the office* Bartender: Jeff,get some of ya boys and guard that door Incase the fed decides to take it too serious. Jeff the bodyguard: ya got it. *jeff walks toward a couple of men who are playing poker,and walks them towards the office and cocks their Thompsons* Moon: Please,let me take your coat. Rarity:No thank you,this will be quick. *sits down* Moon: If you say so...*sits down* Rarity: Well first off,I would like to know how this place is running even though selling alcohol is illegal now. Moon: You could say that we have our ways with the police.*wink* Rarity: Right. anyways I want to ask you what were you and your guards were doing yesterday at 10:43pm? Moon: Why do you want to know? *slowly grabs revolver from under the desk* Rarity: *slowly grabbing handgun from under coat* Rarity: Because it’s my duty to protect everypony from harmful drugs like these. Moon: Well Miss...*aims gun at Rarity’s head* you’ve caught me. *Rarity grabs the revolver and flips Moon overhead and lands with a thud* Moon:UGH!!! Rarity: I’ve had that one done to me more times than you can imagi- *bodygaurds kick down the door and unleashes lead rain while rarity dives behind a steel locker* Rarity: Dammit! I can’t let her get away! *Rarity jumps out from behind the locker whilst holding her Thompson,she unloads the clip into the guards and runs out the door. The citizens are leaving and Rarity notices Moon with her bodyguards leaving out the back door.Rarity rushes out to the back while the truck just left the driveway.Rarity steals a Rolls Royace* Rich Man: Hey that’s my car! Rarity: *hops in* I’m a detective and I need this vehicle! *Rarity speeds off,onto Moons tail* Guard: ‘Ey boss! The fed is back! Moon: *taking a sharp turn* Light her up for Celestias sake!!! *Shortly the thugs along with Rarity leave the city and are now on the countryside.The guards open little slots in the trucks cargo area,and start shooting rarity.Rarity doesn’t get hit but the car is (obviously) taking damage.Rarity shoots a guard in one of the peep holes and shoots the tires.* Moon:Dam-*the truck crashes into a tree* *3 bodyguards exit the truck as well as Moon and start unloading lead at Rarity manages to kill one.Then a thug shoots the gas tank,causing it to explode.Rarity jumps behind a different tree before the explosion.With a greater angle,she kills the other guard,as well as the other one.Moon jumps in the back,and grabs a MK.2 military grenade.Moon throws it,but as she throws it Rarity tackles Moon and starts a fist fight.Moon kicks rarity in the gut,forcing her to get off her,while Moon lunges toward her,Rarity side steps and puts Moon in a chokehold* Rarity:Moon! Stop struggling! Surrender and come quietly! Moon: NO!!! I’m not giving up my fortune!!! *moon grabs a dagger that was attached to her leg,and attempts to stab Rarity,but she misses.Rarity throws her to the ground and puts her in cuffs.* Rarity:Your drug smuggling days are done. Moon:DAMN!!! Kid: Wow Miss,you’re amazing at fighting people! *the police then arrive* Twilight: Satisfactory job Detective. Rarity: Oh please commissioner...*lights cigar* Twilight: You’re right,you did pretty good.You stopped a drug smuggling crew! *Rarity stares at the city* Rarity: Before I leave Commissioner I must ask... Twilight:Yes? Rarity: How come her bar was selling alcohol? Whereas the 18th Amendment says “no distribution of alcoholic substances”? Twilight: uhm...I don’t know...? Rarity: Right...*smokes cigar again,and hops into a patrol car* Rarity’s thoughts: Today I stopped a drug lord...one of my biggest cases since,two years ago.I wonder what’s next in line for me.But until then,when this city needs me I’ll be there! Up next Episode 2: A Ripper in town... Ps I had to put it here because no one goes on the fanfic site
  4. Warning: This fanfiction contains letters, spaces and words. Read at your own risk. Dead Hooves: Survivors(take 1) Chapter1: The End Greetings. My name is Thunder Strike. And, today I am here to tell you a story. My story. Are you ready? What? You don't want it? Well, that ain't stopping me. Eleven years ago, there still were the good times. Well, not perfect. Still had some problems. But at least no bloody monsters running across the street. I was eleven. I remember it like it was yesterday... it was the first day of school A.K.A. The anti-student day. *ring* And the sound everybody hated. The sound of an alarm clock. A bright yellow hoof reached for it and pressed a button to make it stop. That was me. I let out a groan, and tried as hard as I could to get on my hooves. In the end I did it, leaving some of my feathers in my bed. "*sigh* Another school day... another torture day..." I went out of my room and went to my bathroom, the fluffy clouds on which I was stepping reminding me of my bed. I brushed my teeth while looking at my mane. I have low to no standards, but this was below them. When I finished, I spat the toothpaste foam out and cleaned my toothbrush. I tried to order my black mane a bit. Still messy, but it looked better. I took a look at my brown eyes. Then I tought why I did that. I took a quick look at my cutie mark. A thunder cloud. I got it at a flying race. *Flashback* It was race day. Sure, just a race for the P.E., but I was so excited! And nervous. It was a big day. I really wanted that trophy. I needed it. Why? I don't know either. But I needed it. I was ten at the moment, it was normal to want shiny stuff, right? Right? Anyways, I took my mind from the trophy and put it on the race. I had to focus. And the pony that was doing the countdown 'til the begining of the race was already counting. 5... I was thinking of a good route to get first... 4... "Good luck!" I said to the other ponies... 3... I took a take-off stance... 2... Opened my wings... 1... Motivational self talking. Start! I took off. The race was made from four parts. Each was testing diferent skills we had. Part one was the climb. It was made from a straight climb where the route was blocked by a wall made of climbs which lead to a higher section. After that were the hoops. Just some hoops. Then was a steep descend and the last was a simple race on who's faster. I was going higher at the climb. Flying in circles seemed like the best tactic. So, we all were doing it. When one pony gets in front of me. A grey colt with a black mane. Hmm... How do I get past him? Making a tighter turn sounded like a good ideea. So I did it. It actualy worked. We were at the same distance apart of each other. Now, I only needed to catch a portion where I can descend, and I'll gain enough speed to get ahead. The climb was over. Hoops! I goed up higher. Once I had the height I wanted, I began aiming for a hoop that was lower down. The descent should give me enough speed to get ahead. And so I did. Now it was the higher descent. I had this in my hoof. Or so I tought so. The same pony that got ahead of me a few minutes ago. I knew what to do. I took a steeper descent. More speed. I was first again. Now, this is the part where there are no descents. There were clouds to stop that. So, it was simply who gets first. Once again we where next to each other. He began talking to me. "You've got no chance to win." He said. I was thinking of a thing to say. An ideea came in my head. "Look! Your tail fell off!" I said as I pointed a hoof to a cloud. "Huh?" He said as he stopped and looked at the cloud. I was laughing so hard. I couldn't believe it! He bit it! Anyways, I did it. I won. I just passed the finish line when I was blinded by a flash. "Wha-" I said before spotting the new thing on my flanks. "I got my cutie mark!" *End of Flashback* I finished first. And I got the trophy. And something so better than a trophy. A cutie mark. Anyway, let's get back to the story. Skipping some unimportant details, I took a school hot air baloon to get me to school. The school looked exactly the same. The playground, a hallway to the classes, the class, everything. (This is the end of the piece, I will keep editing the things I got wrong and you pointed out and expanding itwhen I got time. Let me know if you like it , if you don't like it and where I could have done better. Thank you for reading my giberish)
  5. NIGHTSHADE :: CHAPTER ONE Summary: A long time ago, the tesseract was known as the Cube of Eden, an device that templars wanted to have to strip the world of anyone that could threaten their order, this included the Assassins. But after a war in between the two orders, the assassin's emerge victorious and hid the cube away so the templars would never have their hands on it, along with anyone else that could threaten humanity. Well the crypt they hid the cube in was uncovered in WW2 when the HYDRA found it. HYDRA and the Templars deiced to work together for both organizations had the same mission, to rid the word and people of freedom and free will. During WW2, a lot of power was harnessed for the tesseract allowing both HYDRA and the Templars Order to doing experiments. After the cube was lost, along with America's hero, and HYDRA thought defeated; the Templars Order continued on their mission. They used the power they harnessed and the descendants of assassin's to create their own way to rid the world of free will. They continued to conduct human experiments, most of them failures while others where successes. This project was called NightShade, but each experiment turned out right until a young girl the descendant of the famous Reed Assassin's was chosen for the templars purpose. She became the Templar's successful NightShade project. She was trained by her ancestors through the Animus. Now Years later, after the war in New York, Mckenzie Alex Reed an assassin wanted to help fight to save humanity. ================================ The sound of an overhead light filled the small room with a buzzing noise. The room had plain white walls with scratch marks ripped along several of the walls. There was a twin sized bed, a nightstand, and an ancient looking lamp. In the corner of the room was a young girl around the age of 15 that looked like she hadn’t eaten in a long time. She wore a lose white tank top with a few blood stains that never came out and a pair of grey sweatpants that were so big they clung to her visible hip bones. In her hand was a book, a very classic one itself, White Fang by: Jack London; that seemed to be the only thing that brought her joy. As the girl read her book, small trembles and twitch would serge through here body, that she had no control over. Her fragile frame was covered in bruises along her wrist and upper arms from mistreatment and being handled roughly. The sound of a loud mechanical click made the girl jump and grip onto her book tighter. The door to her room swung open as two scientist and a couple of guards walked into her room. The guards surround the girl, ready to use non-lethal on the girl. “On your feet, head against the wall, and hands behind your back.” One of the guards said to the female experiment. The girl got to her feet, turned around, and placed her hands behind her back. One of the guards stepped forward and placed the handcuffs on the girl, tightening to the point they dug into the teenager’s wrists. “Subject 10041221, we are to take you to the Animus.” One of the scientist said to the girl. The guards shoved the girl forward, after the two scientists were out of the room and already on their way to the Animus room. The guards had a tight grip on the teenager’s arms as they walked down the hallway with the two scientists. They all walked in complete silence to the point where the girl’s labor breathing was heard. They all stopped in front of double swing doors you would see in a hospital’s surgery room. “The rest of you can leave, we can handle it for here.” The other scientist said to the guards. One of the guards nodded, unhandcuffed the girl, then lead the rest away from the room, but not too far just in case of an emergency. “Follow us, Subject 10041221, please don’t cause any problems. It won’t do any of us any good.” One of the two scientist said to the testing subject. The girl said nothing and followed both scientist into a large room where the Animus was. The girl immediately went to a large mechanical arm and waited to be hooked up to the machine. A few other scientists came over to the girl and began the process of hooking her up to the Animus arm. The girl whimpered in pain as the stuck the needle into her spinal cord. The two scientists that brought Subject 10041221 into the Animus room, started the sync process with the girl’s ancestors brain waves. The other scientist back away to observe the Animus session that was about to begin. The girl’s body straightened as her and her ancestor’s memories sync up. The projectors turned on and the silence fell on the room. The scientists gathered around the control center to watch the feed or what the teenage girl was seeing. On the screen was an angry mob, which stood in front of a gallows; where a young girl stood in her nightgown with a sack over her head. They watched as young women in her early twenties; dressed in black assassin robes. The women stood among the mob as they yelled to have the little girl hung. The era was 1692, the year that the Salem Witch Trials took place. This one was one of the many in Massachusetts. The women quietly watch as the man on the gallows who shouted to the people about what crimes the girl had supposedly committed. The young female assassin knew the young girl, whom wasn’t a witch, but just a farmer’s daughter. People continued to scream and shout to have the damned witch burned or hung. The henchmen of man who was encouraging the people to have girl killed, shoved the girl onto the trap door and put the noose around her neck. The assassin slowly made her way around the mob and the gallows and waited quietly for the right moment to strike. The man who was running the whole trail looked out at the crowd and before he pulled the lever, his body froze then his body drop onto the wooden platform, while blood gushed out the stab wound in his neck. Behind where the man once stood, the assassin stood. People froze, some of them screaming not knowing what was happening. One of the henchmen charged at the assassin, who was ready from him and stabbed him straight through the neck with her hidden blade. Other henchmen followed suit, and landed a punch into the female assassin’s stomach. She left out a growl, causing the man to back away from her. She grabbed him by his shirt and began to smash his head into her knee. She let him go then grabbed the noose, put it around the man’s neck, shoving the young girl aside and pulled the lever hanging the man who came after her. The assassin got the young girl to her feet and took the sack off her head. The little girl gave a grateful look at the assassin. “Run and don’t look back.” The female assassin told the girl. The assassin watched the girl run off to safety, before heading in opposite direction. Soon beeping ended the feed, as the teenage girl’s vitals started to drop dramatically. “Get the doctors in here.” One of the scientists yelled. One picked up a phone, dialed a number, and told them what was happening. They turned off the Animus and hurried to unhook the girl. The girl’s body began twitch uncontrollable as foam formed at the corners of her mouth. Soon several doctors busted through the doors and went to take care of the test subject. They got an IV into the girl’s arm and onto a gurney. The raced the teenage girl out of the Animus room and to the medical wing. =============== Written 4/10/18 Word Count: 1082 ============== PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!
  6. GoltMercer

    Drama Dusk Rider's Story

    Hey everyone. Since I'm new to the forums, I figured I should share the two currently completed stories I have up on FiMFiction. Both are related, and both revolve around one of my characters, Dusk Rider/Lazuli Cutter. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/393376/the-dulling-of-a-blade The Dulling of a Blade A street-mare turned assassin finds herself trapped in a cycle of crime and loneliness that she desperately wants to escape from, as much as she hates to admit it. Is it even possible for her to come back from a life of crime, or is she doomed to become a forgotten criminal whose only legacy is death and destruction? And a direct sequel to that story, Coagulation. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/394092/coagulation I won't provide a summary for that one, because it slightly spoils the ending of Dulling of a Blade. I'm well aware that my writing is...sub-par at best, but I'd be remiss if I didn't at lesat share what I've got.
  7. Welcome to the Equestria.tv events thread! Here we post details of all the events happening on EQTV, including our iconic Friday movie night, where we watch movies voted by you guys, our episode stream, where we embed a livestream of the newest MLP episode as it premiers. And of course any user-run events that happen in their own channels! And remember, even when there’s no movies or livestreams, there’s always something to watch! We keep pony videos and episodes playing non-stop, 24/7! Want to know more about Equestria.tv? Check out the FAQ at the bottom or take a look around our sub-forum, have a question? Ask in 'the lobby', where any of our staff or regular users can answer. Friday Movienight Movie Night starts at 5:00 PM CST / 6:00 PM EST The Rescuers Down Under 6:00 PM EST 11:00 PM CET The Goonies 7:45 PM EST (or whenever the 1st movie ends) 12:45 AM CET SEASON 8 Hiatus: STILL GETTING HYPED EQTV's CMC Clubhouse! User Events Mr Dash's Anime Nights Every Saturday at 6pm EST More info here <--- FAQ
  8. @OracleOfTwilight @Maple Bat @WiiGuy2014 Link to OOC: The four princesses looked at the three ponies and then gave the group a confusing look. Luna was the first to break the awkward silence, "Welcome ponies to the Equestrian Catastrophe Defense Force..." She shifted her eyes to Celestia who then decided to speak next, "This a secret and special task force meant to keep other evils at bay while The Elements of Harmony are busy, I'm sure the incident three months ago has yet to leave your mind and hearts which is why we-" she gestured to the other three princesses and the three other ponies, "-decided to create this task force," Cadence steps forward, "I hope you understand this is a dangerous job and if you want to leave we expect that you will not say anything about this, but we hope you decide to stay to defend Equestria," Twilight sighs before speaking, "I didn't want it to come to this, I especially didn't want a friend and a friend's son to get involved, but the incident left us no choice. These three ponies chose you for your skills and intelligence and your lives will have to be secret from now on, no mentioning this to anypony. Only you and us know about this." The bat pony steps forward, "We will train you in three classes, close quarters," "Interrogation and strategy," the ex-guard states "And weaponry," the officer says "Those are the main classes but other classes are involved," she finishes. Celestia steps forward, "We wish you luck these ponies will take you to your new home and explain the rest from there," the four princesses teleport away leaving the other three to take you to your home. --------------- Location: The Farm (main lobby) Silvermoon: I stood beside the other ponies all of them different the three mentors stood in front. The room was large and metallic, but the outside looked like a barn. The room had almost nothing in it except a rug and some hay. "We will let you get aqquainted with each other before moving you into your quarters," the mare says before stomping. The rug slides open and a stair case heads down into darkness, the three enter there and wait. I stay in silence and look at the other ponies, "So don't we look like the start of a bad joke," I say trying to lower the tension in the room.
  9. Aurora Lights

    horror Proto

    The time is 7:00 A.M., weather is overcast, a dreary, yet non stormy day. As Murdok slowly walks through the streets of him destroyed village, he looks at the destruction blankly, feeling nothing as he looks at the corpses and skeletons that are now the only inhabitants, he feels the desire of craving a new meal, he hadn't eaten in weeks, almost a month now and he was starting to feel a little weak. He growls as he morphs his body, making his leg bones break backwards, also making his arms contort and break, making them shape into large, bone like claws, his jaw breaks open like a snake's would. He twists his upper torso as he falls on the ground on all four, he resembled a hell-hound like creature but much more disturbing and disgusting. He roars and he bounds off, tracking the closest scent of live flesh he could find. He soon sees smoke and he reforms into his normal human-like self. He sneaks around the surrounding brush, making his feet silent as he weaves through the sticks and branches, he soon comes upon a small camp, with 2 humans and a pony around a small fire. the humans had seemed to capture the pony, holding her against her will, tied up and defenseless. Murdok gives an evil, sharpended-tooh grin, feeling his hunger take over his mind. He slowly walks out of the brush and raises his hands, " Hey there, guys. Saw you guys had a camp, wanted to see if you had any spare food or water for a guy like me." The two men swing their guns towards him and one shouts, "Hey, back it up bro. Not too close, as you can see we are dealing with some stuff at the moment, so why don't you screw off." The other man nods and cocks his shotgun intimidatingly. Murdok smiles slightly as he looks down, closing his eyes, hands stiff in the air, " You guys just made the biggest mistake of your life. I know what your doing with this mare, you sick bastards. I can smell the fear, the sex... You both sicken me." The man that cocked his shotgun growls and yells, " Screw you, asshole! You don't know shit! She owes us a LOT of supplies, so we gave her a choice. Pay with her life, or pay with her body. She chose the ladder, so why don't you fuck off." Murdok chuckles loudly, his menacing grin widening to stretch across his whole face, razor sharp teeth being formed from peices of his skull, deforeming his face. The two men curse and open fire, blowing chunks out of his body with each blast og their shotguns. Still, nothing seemed to phase him, he just walked forward, his holes slowly being healed before their very eyes. As son as they ran out of ammo, clicking furiously as they panic, falling over themselves in a desperate attempt to escape. He formed a large sowrd-like appendage with his right arm and he dashed forward with inuman speed. He slices through the first man's chest, causing him to fall to the ground, bleeding profusely, holding his chest tight in an attempt to stay alive. Murdok growls as he launches himself towards the last assailant and cuts him clean in half. Al the while, the mare screaming in fear as she sees the scene unfold before her. Murdok turns towards the mare and stares at her with a blank expression, making his body turn back to normal before he walks over and crouches down in front of her, saying in a quiet calming voice, " No need to fear, I am not going to hurt you." he then untied her and watches her run in fear. Murdok stares blankly as she runs, he then turns to the surviving man, and he walks over to him, "You deserve this. You know you do." the man coughs and closes his eyes before Murdok opens his jaw wide and he bite's the man's head off, begining to feast on his body, bones and all.
  10. PROTO ((Little back ground info, This RP will accept Ponies+ Humans + non-ponies (Human OC's Only from Equestria Girls), there will be a some gore and graphical language, though I'd ask to keep it to a minimum (Due to the PG-13 aspect of RPing nowadays on these forums.)) The year is 2037, October 1st. Five years ago today, a terrible plague mutilated the lands we once looked upon for safety, killing off most of the worlds population. The worst part, our own government reated the plague, known as Necrohemorphage, or in short, Necro,virus started in The Crystal Empire, quickly spreading to surrounding areas and cities, silently infecting hundreds of thousands before symptoms showed. By that time, almost every major city and capital had already been in contact with the virus. As soon as the minor sypmtoms showed, a qurantine was called forth by the Princesses, for they knew the damage that was about to ensue would reach epic proportions. Since the Princesses had previously opened the portal to accept Humans into the world of Equestria, their planet had also contracted the virus, but the effects were aparent much faster on human subjects, warping them within just hours, thus the Princesses closed the portal before all else. One week after initial contraction, all infected started to have internal hemorrhaging, as well as lack of hunger and fear, soon after, maybe a day or two, the infected would start having their bones snap and reshape into weapon-like appendages It takes only minutes for an infected to turn from a normal looking human or pony to a disgusting, monstrous being that barely resembles its former self. At this point, the only desire the infected have is to kill/infect the non-infected, they hunt with extreme prejudice and never stop hunting. The only real way to kill an infected is to destroy the brain (which can be hard to locate at times), every other attempt to kill or harm the infected will be in vain. The infection is only contracted through one method, Direct contact with infected saliva, not blood, but saliva. The Princeses are said to have been hiding in a bunker this entire time, said to be safe from harm, whether or not this is true has yet to have real evidence behind it. As for the current state of the world, few creatures are still alive, even fewer are well off, Though some have banded together and created camps "Safe Zones" their called; Some Safe Zones have even been able to get power and water operational again, though not many at all have succeded in doing this. Some Safe Zones have created Factions, The most prominent of these factions are "Wendigo Alpha", "Black Blood Equine", "Gryphenoir", "Crystal Bone Clan", and "Grenaidia". Some of these factions are rivals, BBE and WA are allies fighting against Gryphnoir and Grenadia, CBC is neutral and wishes not to involve themselves in useless fighting. Firearms and other tools of death dealing have been in play for 20 years, as well as some iterations of AI and robotic ponies, Advanced mechanized armor has also been developed for Humans and Ponies alike, though it's only obtained via The Crystal Empire, which is the Hive of the Infected now. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A few Rules now! : No OP characters (duh). Life is precious so don't waste it (Basically, once dead, you'll have to drop that character permanently and add a new character). You wil have to eat and drink, and ammunition is not unlimited. You can have supernatural abilities (as my character will have) But no one is immune to the virus (One exception is my character, I'll explain later) But, like I said, no OP abilities including, but not limited to, God Mode, Immortality, Reality warping, and time manipulation. And yes, Characters can kill each other, so keep that in mind. Character Information Sheet (I'll use mine as an example) Name: Murdok Parrish Race: Human Age: 33 Sex: Male Orrientation: Strait Ability: Has been infected with the Necrohemrophage virus, yet his body was modified by the creators of this virus to accept the virus to change his physical being. Thus he can morph his bones to some types of weapons and some structures such as shields. He is resistant to damage, can be killed by a shot to the brain like any other Morph, though any other means of killing him are useless. Though he is infected, the Necros don't recognize him as an ally, so they will still attack him. Appearance: 6,1" in height and weighs 210 pounds, mostly muscle mass. Pale skin, scars on neck and 2 on face, one long scar across his left cheek and another scar above his right eye. Multiple scars on his body. White hair, glowing golden eyes with cat slits for pupils. Bio: He was the first subject to be succesfully mutated by the virus, keeping his human traits and having the ability to use the Necro's powers of bodily warping. He was meant to be the subject of multiple tests and the origin of many useful medicines and vaccines, but he was released from his prison before any type of cure could be established for the plague. He is isolated in his mind, alone on many levels. He has no real emotions, though he fakes emotions to seem more normal. He is also fearless and he never hungers for anything except raw flesh. He is dangerous, emotionless, and always hungering for flesh, though not a real threat to anyone that hasn't been bad. Background: He was just a normal human that made the transfer from Earth to Equestria when he was 20, he was inlisted into the EDF "Equestria Defense Force" that was a joint effort between humans and Ponies to combat other worldly beings that erupted from the Grand Portal that was created for the transferring of humans to Equestria. He was a dedicated soldier that put everyone else's lives before his own. When he showed how profficient he was at battling these beasts, he was enlisted into the program called " RKX" meant to help him battle these beings by enhancing his physical prowess, though it was just a ruse for him to take the Necro virus. After the major containment breach, he himself took the opportunity to escape, feasting on a few of the living and using his abilities to murder his way through the guards and the other infected. Once he was free of the chaotic city, he traveled to a small village that would take him in as one of their own, not knowing of the virus that he was infected with. At the time, he had almost no control of his desire for flesh, so he would feast on the village for a year or so. Finally he could control his insatiable hunger, at that point everyone in the village was dead or mutated. Now he wanders the land, trying to help where he can, yet trying to resolve his appetite at the same time. RP: OCsheet link: (( Also this is what the infected look like )) Pony: Human:
  11. I'm looking for artists and writers to work with on a few comic book ideas. One of them may be very violent and may contain a lot of gore (we'll communicate privately for that one to keep the gore off the forums). Another involves characters with silly powers or themes, but it will pretend to be serious. I need to work on my own drawing skills, and perhaps my writing, but I have a lot of fresh ideas if anyone is interested in helping. The first idea involves a hero who can transfer all of his injuries to someone by touching them. I have a few cliffhangers planned for this one as well as a basic plot. There's also an idea for another character that can create phantom pains in her enemies, but the drawback is that she also feels that pain. The second idea I mentioned starts off with a character called "The Not-Invisible Man." After a freak accident with bioluminescent waste, he gained the power of superior visibility, and can even glow in the dark. He wears a neon jacket and carries a reinforced Stop sign. He has many hats to help him blend in with multiple jobs that use the neon vests/jackets. Among the villains he'll face are the Pun-Liner, a bad Joker/Riddler wannabe; The Coin Crusher, which is really just those penny squishing machines (nothing special about them, it's just one of his delusions, he thinks they're his enemy. Did I mention he hates things that are technically illegal? These machines are an example of that because it's technically defacing legal tender); his as of yet unnamed neighbor and his multiple pet squirrels ("I wonder what devious plots he's planning on using those squirrels for. He's giving them enhancements. Those squirrels can do incredible things. I swear, one of them can fly, another can climb walls, and one of them... I saw it... it's invisible!" -The Not-Invisible Man); and The Saniac, a man that by our standards would be completely insane if not for his powers. The Saniac's power is that he's completely sane, not because he perceives the world as it is, but because the world is as he perceives. His power manipulates reality making his delusions into truths. His powers are limited by his perceived limitations only. Some days he may believe nothing can stop him, others he'll believe that cookies make him shrink to the size of a mouse.
  12. So, here's a question: with the Guardians of harmony toys being a big part of the christmas toyline for this year, and apparently selling pretty well, do you think Hasbro will ask the writers to put more adventure/action episodes into the show to tie into/promote the more action focuses toys they'll presumably be selling from now on?
  13. Bronies of Las Vegas

    Crossover The Neon Vale - [SAMPLE]

    Hello! Two members of the team have gotten together to write a fan-fiction presenting the advanced society (future) of Las Pegasus. A city of crime lying under the blanket of stereotypes among races that seemingly cause irrevocable trouble. Empires rise as fast as the crime rate within Ridgee's hometown as he provides information as a member of the Las Pegasus Task Force, and bringing appropriate justice. Note: The actual story contains profanity. Although we are somewhat allowed to use slang within the mlpforum, we find it uncivil to do so. Here is a clean copy, brief and cut out from the dark action, and gives you an idea of what this story is about. (UNDERGOING EDITING & ADDITIONS). LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7Ac3sx_1Cd2Y0U1V2pzMWZHLTA/view?usp=sharing What do we need to work on? What would you expect from us? Status: Nervous
  14. genessee

    Adventure The Gladiators

    Prologue Once in the land of Noncannon, in the days of old, there was a pit. This pit was used by gladiators world round to show their skill against horrifying beasts from the deepest caves to the highest clouds. Originally, this pit was used to fight Gladiator versus Gladiator, but the spectators were too kindhearted to watch a pony perish for their entertainment. A new gladiator, named Copper Heart, was joining his family business of fighting great beasts for fame and fortune, as his father did, because his father was the great Golden Hooves, a warrior known country-round for his devastating golden boots. In a stunt gone wrong, Golden Hooves was severely injured, and was unable to fight anymore. The public had waited for his son to rise up, and this, Copper Heart had a hufe weight on his shoulders. Thus, we begin our tale. Chapter 1 Copper Heart hacked away at the dummy with his bronze sword as if it was fruits he had prepared for supper. "Dad, how much longer?" He whined. His father, the great Golden Hooves, glanced up from his textbook and snorted, "Not until you get it right, Copper," Before Copper could complain, He added, "You are a gladiator, not a bloody changeling. You don't fight head on against these beasts, they'd take you out on the spot. You use a stance, like this." Golden struck a heroic pose, textbook as a shield, and he snatched up a nearby stick to use as a weapon. "Dad, you don't look nearly as heroic when you're sitting," Copper remarked smugly. Golden dropped the stick and shot a steely gaze at his son. "Training's over. Go to your room." "But--" Copper started. "NOW." His dad pointed his hoof at the nearby cottage. Copper clunked over to the door in his heavy armor, glared at his father, and trudged inside. Chapter 2 After supper, Copper hadn't spoken with his father. He felt bad that he had made fun of his disability. After all, he was the only one taking care of him. His mother had passed when he was only a foal, and he only had stories now. He hardly remembered his mother. All he truly remembered about her, that he could be 100% sure about, was that she had a beautiful laugh. He had a vague memory of a laugh that he was sure was his mother. He couldn't place where they were, or anything of the sort. Just the laugh, like a scratched music disc. He replayed it constantly, trying to find more information within his maze of a mind, but he always found himself at the same dead end. Copper climbed the old wooden stairs, and back into his room, with his armor and sword in a corner, his notebook on his undersized bed, with many drawings in it. He flipped through his recent ones. All were pictures of his mother. Or at least, his fantasies of her, as he had no idea what she looked like. A few older ones were cartoons of him having made-up conversations with her, and some were just questions. Why do I remember her laugh? Is it even her laugh? Why can't I remember?! He was too stressed. He flopped on his bed, and blew out his candle. He lied for a minute before giving up. It's still too bright outside. Chapter 3 "Morning, dad!" called Copper Heart as he pranced down the steps. He had had a nice dream, so that put him in a good mood that morning. His father looked up from his precious textbook, grumbled a greeting, and went back to his scripture. Copper walked into the kitchen and made himself some wheat flakes. "You need anything?" He called. He heard some more grumbling that sounded vaguely like 'Yes.' Wheat flakes! They make you... uh... something... Copper stumbled over the song's words in his head. At the town market, there had been two marketeers selling the wheat flakes Copper usually bought, and they were singing a tune. It had been stuck in Copper's head since then. Copper poured some milk into his cereal. he had found the carton in the back of the pantry. "Breakfast is served." Copper smiled at his handywork. He liked cooking more than fighting, but his father was counting on him to continue the family tradition. Plus, Copper was too afraid to tell his father he liked cooking. "This smells spoiled," his father critiqued. Copper stuck his snout over the bowl of what flakes and milk. Ewww. "I think you have a point, dad," Copper remarked as he grabbed his coat off the coat rack near the front door. "I'll be back soon, I'll get some more. Don't starve to death." Chapter 4 As Copper approached the town square, he heard the tune that had been stuck in his head for the past few days. Wheat flakes! They're really tasty! Eat 'em up while they're nice and craspy! "What even is a craspy? A new pastry-type thing?" Copper wondered aloud. Copper walked towards the milk stand. "Hey, Jackson! What's up?" Copper met his old friend, Jackson. He was a farmer and sometimes worked the milk stand while the milk salesman ran errands. Jackson and Copper had met at a party, and became friends. "The sky," grunted Jackson. Jackson didn't like working the milk stand. Copper placed a coin on the wooden box they used as a counter. "One gallon," Copper asked. As Jackson rustled under the counter, looking for milk, he made small talk. "Hey, have you heard that they're starting the gladiator trials early this year?" Jackson inquired. What?! The gladiator trials were a competition where many young gladiators fought for access to the higher matches, which eventually one would get a grand prize of coins. "What? Really?" Copper was dumbfounded, this was the year he was supposed to compete in the competition, and he wasn't anywhere near ready. "Yep. You should get trainin'. I can see by the look on your face you haven't been." Jackson smiled, passed the milk, took the coin, and bid Copper farewell. Copper staggered back to his cottage, unable to comprehend what truckload of news had just hit him. More Coming Soon! How soon? How should I know? Ask Siri, maybe she'll know. Update Notes: Added 2 chapters and fixed some spelling errors.
  15. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8781476/1/Legend-Of-Delta (Please don't judge the early chapters too harshly, they are YEARS old, don't believe me? Check out the date it was first uploaded. But I can assure you that as you read on the quality of the chapters will improve. Please leave a review as to how you think of the story so far. As for the story itself, it is still in progress so stay tuned for more chapters fellow Equestrians ^^)
  16. A few weeks after I had first started to watch the show, I found myself to be less and less enthralled by mindless action scenes in movies. After a few months (now) I cringe slightly every time someone is killed. Now don't get me wrong, I still admire a well choreographed fight sequence, but I can no longer find any enjoyment in movies like 'The Expendables', in which the violence is the bulk of the movie. So I would like to know if any of you have had similar experiences, or if I just turned into (even more of) a pansy.
  17. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony Chapter 1 Getting out pt 1 Once upon a time there was a big city, there was a lot of ponies and they all had a cup of coffee every 12:00 pm in that hour. So nothing changes and they keep doing it every day until 2315 years later. Discord became bored, went to evil and made chaos again. Then Twilight Sparkle stop him and use the elements of harmony. One week later in 2315 on August 4th in the land of nowhere. There is a factory with lots of darkness and black with lots of shadows. There is a house to the north of the factory about 30 miles. The house is made 30 years ago. The house stairs are all rusted and gloomy. The house is also old and the wall keeps making noises. The pool was 12 x 12 and 7 feet deep with water in it. The pool had green water in it and a lot of flowers of the poison joke known as the curse flower. Deep down in the basement some-pony down there to live to tell the tale. In a weird most scary looking container that is 4 ft wide and 7 ft tall (science test subjects container) it also has water in it with a pony with an oxygen mask in the container. Then the pony began to breathe, it began to move, it began to scream in fear. Then the container broke and things get interesting. Five changelings came in the house at the 1st floor and they are about to attack the place. I pick up a weapon, it had a laser that I can shoot with. It also had a clock. It also had a temperature thermometer on it. It was leather and had some components of carbon steel. I equipped it on my right hoof. Then an A.I spoke said. "Ok here are the controls. Square button is to reload. Circle is to melee. Triangle is to change weapons. X button is to jump. The right trigger is to shoot. The left trigger is your grenades." Snow Crystal goes into battle with 200 HP and 200 MP. The changelings made lots of noise and rattle above the floor. The changelings came down the stairs and attack. In slow mode I rolled on the ground and attack the first changeling. Then I sweep kick the 2nd and shot it. Then I kick the 3rd in the face and shot it. Then the 4th changeling ran away like a chicken while doing the chicken dance back to Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra. Who, who am I…? screams. "Is this a dream but i am not sure if this is true is it? Who, who is this person." Said the pony. Some mysterious soul said. "Hello your name is Snow Crystal. You must find him before it is too late and hurry." in a scary voice. "So my name is Snow Crystal. So who was that guy or girl? Was it all a dream? I'm not sure but it feels like I know him or her." Snow Crystal goes to the upper floor 56 BF. Snow Crystal saw something that is so small and too hard to see and hard to aim. "Ok this is it I am taking you down with the laser." As Snow Crystal looks around for more. I change to a three burst shot and took down 60 small monsters. Then I went closer to see what the monster looks like. "Parasprites." As Snow Crystal screamed. Goes up to floor 55 BF. "More of them jeez." As Snow Crystal gets bored. Snow Crystal looks at a shiny small thing. "What is this something that looks like a golden color. I see that some of them are dropping stuff I can't remember what it is called." A.I spoke. "Gold and shiny but they are now called bits you use them to buy stuff. Bits can buy you clothes, armor, dresses, households, and train tickets. It is most likely you need them in the future where you are going." "Will they drop weapons?" As Snow Crystal gets hyped. A.I as a boring tone. "Yes most monster drop items maybe you should try go back to floor 57 BF." Snow Crystal went back to 56 BF. Full of dead parasprites that is in the room. Snow Crystal went to 57 BF. Wait is that changeling but how is that possible. As the A.I Identify. "It is using Magic it." "Magic oh no." As Snow Crystal is thinking out a plan. The changeling change into your self as a pony. "What is that?" A.I spoke as if he know. "A changeling has ability to use any sorts of magic. But beware some magic users are very dangerous." Snow Crystal get all scares. "How dangerous can they be exactly." The changeling use punched and sends Snow Crystal back into a wall. "Oh so that's how it is." As Snow Crystal goes into action. Snow Crystal has 150/200 HP left. Snow Crystal use bite. Critical hit. Changeling has left 450/700 HP left. The changeling uses punch. Snow Crystal has left 100/200 HP left. Snow Crystal use bite. Changeling 350/700 HP left. Changeling use kicked. Snow Crystal 40/200 HP. Snow Crystal as she keeps getting injured "This is too hard we have to run." The A.I spoke in a annoying way. "Hold on you got something in your pouch 5 potions I think." Snow Crystal looks at the A.I shackle. "Wait what. You would've told me before and there is 1 potion left in the backpack." The A.I Laughs. "Oops sorry I guess someone forgot to send more potions for this dungeon." Snow Crystal slap herself with the left hoof into her face 20/200 HP left. Then she drinks the potion 170/200 HP left. Snow Crystal use sweep kick at the changeling. The changeling has 150/700 HP left. Changeling is now paralyzed. Changeling can't move. Snow Crystal use the laser. Changeling 0/700 HP left and fainted. Snow Crystal pick up an item that might be useful in future. She picked up a net catcher weapon and now she is equipping it to the left hoof because the laser is on it's right hoof. Snow Crystal went up stairs to 56 BF there was dead parasprites in the room. Went up to 55 BF there was dead parasprites in the room. Went up to 54 BF there were a lot of books in that one small bookshelf. Snow Crystal read 10 books before she went to 53 BF. The First Book was about the created of Ponyville. Second book was about how they built Camelot back in the day. Third Book tells you how Luna gets banish to the moon. Fourth book tells you how Discord went evil. Fifth book tells you how the changelings went evil. Sixth book gives you a description on the elements of harmony. Seventh book tells you the elemental tree of harmony. Eighth book tells how the elements was use for and created. Ninth book tells you the story of Crystal ponies. Tenth book tells you about the mystery of magics. Snow Crystal takes all 10 books in inventory. Snow Crystal found a door. The door's locked. She was thinking of finding the key. Snow Crystal went to 53 BF and it was dark. "It's too dark to see." Said Snow Crystal. She goes straight blindly and trips over something then hit her head on an object 100/200 HP left. She put her hoof on the object and tries to find it with feel. She notice it was an object on top of another object that she bumped into. She clicks on the button. The lamp turned on. Snow Crystal thinks. "Hmm so this is a desk and I should look in the drawers." First drawer has a combine and it has a number on it. The number is 8 also she found a key. She looks in the second drawer and found a flashlight. She tries to turn on the flashlight but it didn't work she also check for the battery but there was none. Snow Crystal went back down a floor to 54 BF and she went to the left to open the door but the door's locked. Then she open her inventory and grabs the key and it fit's. The door is unlock. The room has a radius of 25 ft and 7.5 ft high. In the room there was more bookshelves in a circumference format and the bookshelf was 7 ft high. In the middle there was a cabinet. As Snow Crystal walks to the cabinet there were four drawers. She checked the top left and opened it. Empty. She checked the top right. She found a number 5. She checked the bottom right. She found a battery. She checked bottom left. Snow Crystal gets A letter. Snow Crystal reads the letter. The combination is how many numbers did you received. Snow Crystal forgot what the numbers were. "Ok A.I we have numbers we have 8 and 5 and 2. Hmm that's not a lot of numbers. What do you think they meant for?" A.I spoke as if he knew it all. "Its meant for a combine of a lock or a security clearance." Snow Crystal is confused. "Ok tell me what does security clearance mean." A.I spoke in general. "To unlock something." Snow Crystal spoke as if she was trying to survive. "Hope it leads to food and water. A.I do you know what floor we are?" A.I spoke to next level of the floor. "54 BF." Snow Crystal get depressed. "Really that's a long way up are you sure there isn't an elevator somewhere?" Snow Crystal sleeps 1 hour and dreams. "A.I can you hear me?" As Snow Crystal open her eyes. Waited 1 minute, no answered. "Why is it getting so hot out here it's like a desert. With lots of hot sand and vultures that are flying above me." As she was thinking the A.I was broken Snow Crystal. "Have I died or something? Is this what happens when you don't believe in god? Is this the afterlife?" As Snow Crystal get's hot out in the sun. Snow Crystal goes under the tree for shade. She is thinking in mind. "Well maybe I shouldn't kill parasprites and changelings they are living beings after all. I don't know why but I feel like a story writer is typing on what do or like a legend, that has to-be my destiny to fight them. Who knows? The alarm goes off. She wake up. She gains 10 HP. "A.I what time is it." As if Snow Crystal really want to know what time it is. "It's about 7:00 AM. You had a bad dream so I woke you up." Spoke as a true A.I normally would say. "Can you remind where are we?" Snow Crystal as snow gets confused. A.I spoke as if he knows where we going. "We are in the unlocked door in 54 BF." "Ok time to move out." As Snow Crystal lead the way. Snow Crystal goes back to the unlock door and went to the other room then she walk up stairs to 53 BF. Then she walks up stairs to 52 BF. Just outside the door of 52 BF there is a security access. Snow Crystal ask the A.I for the code. A.I remembers the numbers. "8,5,2." Snow crystal type in the exact numbers. "The code didn't work." As Snow Crystal panic. Snow Crystal finally calms down as she knew something. "Ok so it's a 3 number password." Snow Crystal typed in 2,5,8. Access denied. Snow Crystal typed in 5,8,2. Access denied. Snow Crystal typed in 2,8,5. Access granted. Snow Crystal gets happy from depression. "Finally." A.I said. "Ok where in but there something I must make you do." Snow Crystal said. "Make it quick I'm a hungry pony." A.I spoke as he plans out. "Ok step on this square you need a light test." Snow Crystal get's bored. "Do I have to do that. That's so stupid as 3.14. To look at the flashing lights that are on. You gotta be kidding me right?" A.I laughs. "Just do it." "Fine I'll do it." As Snow Crystal leads back to depression. Snow Crystal walks to the right to the square and she saw no lights on. A.I comes out of the shackle. "Give me a moment to fix some of the test." The middle door opens and you can smell hay and hear water drops. "I'm getting tortured by an A.I when the food and water is in the next room." As Snow Crystal thinking in his mind. A.I spoke as he want the pony to go through with it. "Look at the top light." Snow Crystal looks at the top light. A.I spoke as thinks the pony would do it. "Look at the bottom light." Snow Crystal looks at the bottom light. Snow Crystal complains. "Are we done yet?" A.I laughs. "No. But do you prefer inverted." Snow Crystal looks at the A.I. "Really... I prefer the default. Are we done?" A.I laughs. "No. Now look at the left." Snow Crystal gets tired but looks to the left anyway. A.I as the it can't stop giggling. "Now look to the right." Snow Crystal look at the right. A.I spoke as if he was being a jerk about it. "Do you want the horizontal be inverted." Snow Crystal gets tired. "NO. Are we almost done yet." A.I spoke as if, it wanted to make her head speed the peace. "Nope. Now follow the lights start from top to bottom and left to right." Snow Crystal looked at the top once more than the bottom then left to right." A.I laughs. "Wait you forgot to say amen. Try again." Snow Crystal put her left hoof and smacked her face. 30/200 HP. Snow Crystal look at the top than bottom then left then right. "Amen." A.I knows that the door is finally unlocked. "The door where you smell food and water is now permanently open." Snow Crystal runs over to the food and eat hay and drink water. As Snow Crystal sings a rock style music. Oh how I love this food this yummy and tasty food. It is so good and the time I thought I was going to starve too. Oh how I love this food yummy and tasty food makes me feel so good. The flavor is so dry and sweet but it is never too sour or spicy just the way I like it. I wish that I can buy it. I can't wait to even try it. Oh how I love this food it gives you a lot of energy I don't even have to worry. Oh I wish I could get some apples that goes with my pineapples. Oh I wish I have some baits to get some really good-looking crates that are berries where can I get some crystal berries it shouldn't affect me so please don't worry. Oh how I love this food yummy and taste food. Where I can see it and smell it and even taste it. Oh how I love food yummy and tasty food. I just hope I don't get the food sickness flu. I hope I don't get the food sickness too. Snow Crystal stretches her legs then she looked around the place for any useful bottles to carry for water. Snow Crystal went back to the test room. She went to the door on the left of her. She in the room about 23 x 23 what's in the room just a chest and a wardrobe. Snow Crystal opens the wardrobe first she found cloths and she puts them on. Snow Crystal Goes to the chest and tries to open it. Needs a key to open chest. Snow Crystal walks out of the room and head straight and open the door. Snow Crystal goes into the 3rd room and there were 3 bottles on the ground. Snow Crystal picked them up. There was a desk on the far left corner she open the first drawer and found a battery. Then she open the second drawer she found the key. She goes out of the room and went to her left she goes in that room to wash the bottles and pour water on each 3 of the empty water bottles. Then she grab some hay to go with her. She left the room and went to her left to another room. She look in her inventory and use the key on the chest. She found a coin purse that had 500 bits in there. Now she has 5005 bits. Although she founds a lever in there. She pulled it. On the right side of the floor went up to a staircase. Snow Crystal went to inventory and took two batteries and put them in the flash light. She turn it on to see if it works. The flashlight works and Snow Crystal smiled. Snow Crystal went up the stairs to 51 BF. She goes in the room but there was an open chest in the middle of the room. Snow Crystal look to see what's in side. Snow Crystal found some rope... Snow Crystal looks up and saw there was a big hole... Snow Crystal went up stairs to 50 BF. Snow Crystal looks down and see the big hole. She also see a plank across the room. She use the rope to grab the plank to make a cross the room. Puts the rope back in inventory. Snow Crystal looks at the rope as she put it in the inventory. "This might come in handy." Snow Crystal balance on the plank and made it across without losing focus. Snow Crystal walks up stairs to 49 BF. She sees a hallway and 1 door on both sides. Snow Crystal goes to the left door and opens nothing here but dust. Snow Crystal saw something shine she goes to it. She found a Key. Snow Crystal goes back to the hallway and opens the other door she notice that the door's locked. Snow Crystal use that key to open the door. The door is unlock. She then went in that room and found more stairs. Snow Crystal went up a floor to 48 BF. She went in the room but this time she see 5 floors at once. A.I plans out a route. "How good are you at running?" Snow Crystal is scared. "Not that great." A.I tells whats going to happen. "That these platforms and staircase is unstable once you get on that staircase it will collapse all the way to the 5th floor. Once you're there you have to open the door and get inside as fast as you can." Snow Crystal staircase. "This is too crazy who ever made this place has been insane design staircase." Snow Crystal rest before she went to the first staircase. Snow Crystal gets scared. "Here goes nothing." Snow Crystal looks at the route to get to 43 BF. Snow Crystal runs to the first staircase then she went right then straight then slide and went to the right again she ran to the 2nd stair case. Then once at the top she slides to turn around and then she went straight then turn left and jumped on the platform and it broke by force the platform went forward and then she jump on another platform then she turn left and went to the 3rd staircase but she had to turn around and jump to the other diagonal platform as running she turns right to the 4th platform then she got to the top of the 4th staircase the bridge broke. She still ran then she went to the right and then she run on the wall to the other platform and lands to that platform to get to the 5th staircase. Once she went straight to the 5th staircase she hears a lot of noise breaking. Once she reaches at the top of the 5th staircase she slides and turns around then she runs straight to the door as the floor collapsing behind her she runs to the door and open it quickly and made it inside. "A.I remember not to come here again." As Snow Crystal is out of breath. Snow Crystal takes a breather and then she falls asleep and then dreams. Snow Crystal walks straight into the dark and spooky shadows of the Everfree Forest. "Where am I? Is this where I'm post to be? Snow Crystal saw Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra together. They were happy once and it looks like they have a daughter but it's all a blur. Snow Crystal wakes up. "A.I how long was I sleeping." As Snow Crystal open her eyes and things were blurry. A.I tells how many hours. "About 6 hours or most." Snow Crystal had a question. "What time is it?" A.I tells the time. "6:00 PM." "We better get moving A.I the nightmares are getting weird by the second." As Snow Crystal feared. A.I gets ready. "Ok ready when you're." Snow Crystal hears noise on next floor. Snow Crystal drinks half of a water bottle and she ate some hay. Snow Crystal goes to the next floor 42 BF. Snow Crystal open the door. She sees a dark hall way with 2 doors on the left and 2 doors on the right. Snow Crystal opens the door. As she sees a dark hall way with 2 doors on the left and 2 doors on the right. She tries to open the first left door and it is locked. She tries to open the door behind her and it opens you see a rat stuck on a mouse trap. She went right and help the rat out on the counter top. The mouse went straight and then left and then the mouse slides on the broom stick to the left of the room into a hole. Snow Crystal was searching the cabinets for food and supplies. Snow Crystal receives 10 cheese sticks. The mouse returned and gave Snow Crystal a key. The mouse looks happy and wants to join Snow Crystal on her quest out of the dungeon. Snow Crystal receives a pet. Snow Crystal goes out of the room. She goes to the other side of the hallway to try to open the left door but it's locked. Snow Crystal goes into inventory and use the key. The key doesn't work. She turns right as she walks forward to go to the 2nd left door. The door opens. She sees a hole that a mouse can get to on the left side of the room. She use a cheese stick for the mouse to grab something from the hole. The mouse goes into the hole and searches. While Snow Crystal looks at a bed and investigate it. She thinks that the bed is so old. She goes on the bed but the bed breaks and there is no mattress. The mouse has returned and gave Snow Crystal a key. Snow goes out of the room and across the hall to the other door. It opens you see a picnic basket. Snow Crystal opens the picnic basket and receives a key. She goes out of the room and turns left then walks forward then takes a right to the other door that was locked. She uses the 2nd key it didn't work. She uses the 3rd key from the basket it works. The door opens. In the room she sees a picture on the left side of the room. It's Princess Celestia picture. She took it down and saw a lever. Snow Crystal pulls the lever. The back wall moved and has a code combination. 34,67,32,43,65,38. Then she goes out of their room and went left then straight till she comes upon a door with 6 key slots and combination of 30-70. She use the first key in the first key slot it fits. She turn the key till it matches 34. She use the first key on the second key hole didn't work. She use the first key in the third hole it doesn't work. She use the first key to the fourth key hole it doesn't work. She use the first key in the fifth hole it works she matches it up to 65. She use the second key to the second key hole it didn't work. She use the second key to the third key hole and it worked. She matches the combination to 32. She use the second key to the fourth key hole didn't work. She now realized that the last key hole for the second key fits and she matches it with 38. Then she knew that the second key hole and the fourth key hole was with the third key. She puts the third key in the second key hole to matched with 67 and the fourth key hole match to 43. The door is now unlocked. Snow Crystal went to 41 BF. She opens the door and she sees a lot of floors. Snow Crystal shivers like she wont be able to make it. "That is a long way up." A.I calculated. "It seems that it's about 16 floors high." As Snow Crystal sings in a rock music. Oh I wish I could fly it seems like it's easy as pie oh I hope I don't have to die. All this time I fell asleep in a container I didn't have any retainers. When I see myself in a mirror I feel like a boring new creator. Oh, Oh why. Oh I wish I could fly it seems like it's easy as pie oh I hope I don't have to die. I wish I had wings it would be simple with those things. It could it could. I wish I could fly and it's better than to die. Oh I have to hope maybe it's time to get some rope then you lost it and you go oh nope. Oh I wish I could fly it seems like it's easy as pie I hope I don't have to die. When you are further apart. It feels like you're in a deep depth chart and that is the worst part. When you Go out side it is time to get a new ride when you go down that slide. Oh I wish I could fly it seems like it's easy as pie oh I hope I don't have to die. It is time to worry that I know it is time to be so crazy. It is time to say this song isn't a crime it only because this is the longest rhyme. Oh I wish i could fly it seems like it's easy as pie oh I hope I don't have to die. When you get to have those wings I really want to have those things. Oh I wish I could fly it seems like it's easy as pie oh I hope I don't have to die. Oh I wish I could fly. Snow Crystal sees a metal claw on the ground. She picked it up. A.I tells an important description. "You can re-change your left weapon to a grapple hook." Snow Crystal went to the left side of the room and use the sturdy bench table. It took a few hours to change it. Snow Crystal is asking a question. "What time is it now?" A.I tells the time. "It's about 12:00 AM." Snow Crystal gets intense. "Lets make it to 25 BF." The ground shakes. Snow Crystal use the grapple to 35 BF cut the string found another grapple hook. Then she use the grapple to aim at 29 BF cut the string and then found another grapple hook. Then she uses the grapple at 26 BF platform cut the string and found another grapple hook. Then she opens the door and went upstairs to 25 BF. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony Chapter 2 Getting Out pt 2 As Snow Crystal opens the door she sees a hallway with 6 changelings. The changelings looked at Snow Crystal down the hallway. Then they charged at her. Snow Crystal stood there for four seconds and then the first that was closest to her she shot the changeling with the laser in 14 feet of range. Then the second came in 12 feet range and the laser hits the second changeling. Then two came down running together. Snow Crystal got close to them and jump on their two heads and roll half way to get two clean shots of the back of the two changelings. The other two changelings got scared so they stopped and ran the other direction. Snow Crystal checks all the bodies. She found a key from the body that was farthest from the door. Snow Crystal continues the hallway she sees 1 door on the right. She opens the door and sees a bed room. She search the end table and she found a note. It said. "This key will open the locker #137." She goes out of the room. Turns right and continue the hallway. Then Snow Crystal sees the stairs and went up the floor to 24 BF. She went down another hall way with no doors but she sees pictures of ponies, pegasus, unicorns, griffins, and alicorns. As Snow Crystal walks down further she see more stairs. Snow Crystal walks up stairs 23 BF. After she gets up stairs she then sees pictures of weird monsters. As she continue the hallway she sees a door at the end of the hall way. Snow Crystal opens the door to the next room. Then she sees 4 glass mirrors. On the left she sees a lizard with a head of a goat and body of a snake. On the far right she sees a female that is black with hole in her legs. But in the middle she sees a Dark unicorn. When she walks in front of the picture it shows that this person got defeated by the crystal heart. On the right it shows a bull picture that got defeated by an unknown of spirit energy elements. The door shut behind her. She ran over there and try to unlock it but no use not even the keys she had would open the door. Then she sees an end table coming from the ground in the center of the room it has a green button. She went to the end table in the middle and then when she was close to the end table she then close her eyes and press the green button. Then she back up in a quick ready place as she ready for a trap to happen. Then the Ground shakes as 4 Greek pedestal came up from the ground by the 4 mirrors. Each pedestal had a book. Snow Crystal grab the far left as it once said. "Once upon a time when discord is-created he had a mother and a father. But the rest of the pages were missing." She grabbed the next book to the right it said. "Once upon a time when King Sombra was a little filly. But although there were some missing pages." She grab the next book to the right it said. "Triek the leader of the darkness commander. But the rest of the pages were missing." She grab the last book on the right. The four pedestal went back down and the ground shakes massively in the room. On the other side of the room the wall has pop out a stair case. She runs to the stair case with the 4 books in her inventory as the ground shakes hard. As she slowly walks to the 8th step of the staircase behind her the stair steps disappears as more stairs pop out in front of her. She knows that she has to run as the front steps are getting there faster and behind her the steps disappears faster. When she made it to 13 floor she then sees a door that was 65 steps away it said 10 BF. Her mind said. "Please don't be locked." As she was running she was thinking of bashing the door in one go. She bash the door as the stairs behind her disappeared. Snow Crystal drinks half of the water bottle and eat some hay. Snow Crystal was so tired from running up stairs. She also gave some cheese for her pet. Snow Crystal looks at the A.I. "What time is it? A.I tells the time. " About 1:00 PM." Snow Crystal sleeps and then she had a dream. She was in a place with a sunset next to an unknown pony that she didn't know. She saw 3 filly's and 2 colts. When she looked at the stallion that was sitting next to her. He was smiling and happy. Then she look beside him as saw food as if she had a picnic together. While the fillies and colts play together and laughed together. The sunset was so beautiful the colors were yellow, orange, red, pink,purple and then dark blue. After we had the pick nick the stallion next to me wanted to show me something at night later that day it was dark outside and the 3 filly's and 2 colts were a sleep. The stallion showed me the stars at night. The stallion laugh and smile then Snow Crystal slanted as if she's tired. The stallion said something but it was too hard to hear as the voice was blurry. A.I screams. Snow Crystal wakes up immediately. "Changelings are coming." As A.I heard foot steps. "Alright let's go." As Snow Crystal gets ready for action. You hear a sound. She grab a stick and prepare for what's at the corner. She found a piece of a broken mirror glass she picked it up then she use it around the corner to see if there are changelings. She sees a colt and the colt is crying. She walks up to it. "What ya doing here alone." The Colt cries. "I had a fight and went here but now I am lost and I want to go home." Snow Crystal walks to her slowly and gives her a hug. "Stay strong colt. Life is hard at some points. Let's get you back home ok." Colt cried. "Ok." The colt stomach growled. Snow Crystal give the last hay and gave the colt water. Snow Crystal goes up stairs 9 BF. They both pull the levers at the same time to open the door to go into the room. They enter the room they both see that there is not stairs but a lot of boxes that looks like a staircase the colt goes first and climbs the boxes to get to the upper door as Snow Crystal goes behind the colt to make sure that the pony doesn't fall. They go up to 8 BF Then they both see a skinny bridge about 2.5 x 90. Snow Crystal let the colt go first and she went behind the pony for when if the colt falls. They both across the bridge with a little hesitation. They both go up stairs 7 BF. Snow Crystal opens the door. See an empty room. They both enter the room. The colt looks down. "I remember this place. But the stairs went down as well as flat as the floor. There is a key hole in the center that said #137." Snow Crystal looks in that inventory. "I happened to have that key." Snow Crystal use the key. The floor made 2 staircases and a platform that leads to the 1 BF Snow Crystal now sees that there is a hidden door wall in the middle of the 2 staircases. Snow Crystal looks at a key hold. "Colt I'll meet you upstairs there something I must do down here first." The colt looks at Snow. "Can I come with you?" Snow Crystal looks at the colt. "It's something I have to do alone. After I'm done I'll be right behind you don't worry." The Colt goes up the stairs. "Ok just don't take too long." Snow Crystal looks at him. "You have my word." The colt starts going up stairs. As Snow Crystal saw a hidden door she sees another keyhole. She looks at the colt and she is long gone out of reach. Snow Crystal use the #137 Key it fits as well and she turned it. She opens the door she sees a chest saying Snow Crystal on it. She use the #137 key on it the chest opens. She took 137,000 bits. Now she has 142,005 bits. She goes out of the room and the room shakes. Snow enter the room and once she got to the middle the floor went up as like an elevator. The floor went up a bit then stopped and Snow Crystal sees a green button and a red button. Snow Crystal speaks in her mind. "I guess I have to override the manual." Snow Crystal hits the green button. The platform moves up. When she sees the colt. "Hey colt over here. This is better than doing the stairs." Snow Crystal hits the red button. The colt jumps on to the platform. Then Snow Crystal hits the green button as the platform reaches further up. Then the platform stops and then the short bridge to the other side to both platforms evenly. They arrived at first floor. Then the filly opens the door it leads to a cavern. As they see two ways to go. They head left but as they go further it was a dead-end. They turn around and went back and then they did a u-turn to the left. Then they go in open space and took a break. "Well colt can you sing?" As Snow Crystal looked at the colt. "Well I never sing before." The colt looks down in shame. "Give it a shot." As Snow Crystal looks like he can do it. Colt sings in a Hip-Hop music. Oh I'm so hungry. There is something wrong with my tummy. I wish I had more food and fuel. It's this place that is so dang cruel. But when I found you, you look so awesome and cool. I hope we see each other in the future. Be best friends just like that architecture. We see something in different mates. We might lose our self's in our current states. We need to get out of this cave. We need to find puzzles and be brave. Oh I am so hungry I could eat a fish. Oh please put it in my dish. Oh we need more food as were so tired in the dark. Maybe somepony might hear us bark. "Well that's all I have." The colt looks depressed. Snow Crystal gets happy and shocked. "Wow that's something. That was really good." The colt looks at Snow. "Do you sing?" Snow Crystal looks back at the colt. "Kinda." The colt convince Snow Crystal to sing. "I want to hear you sing." Snow Crystal sings in a rap music. Oh I wish to see daylight when the sun is very shine bright but it's almost like a flashlight which is very bright. Where the river is all clear and the sky doesn't have dark and fear but it's so weird. I tie my shoe but it doesn't stick like glue but the crowd goes aw boo. I chew taffy it just wants to make you so laugh. Oh I wish I was outside to the beautiful view I hope I don't get the flu which almost like glue and the crowed goes boo. Oh I wish to see daylight when the sun is very shine bright but it's almost like a flashlight which is very bright. Oh I grab my shoes and coat but I never had a drink on a boat it just wouldn't float because of the goat. I go inside and sleep in bed which it was really red. Oh I wish to see daylight when the sun is very shine bright but it's almost like a flashlight which is very bright. When I go on that picnic it was cool with the guy named Rick. Oh yea that was cool. Oh I wish to see daylight when the sun is very shine bright but it's almost like a flashlight which is very bright. When I adventure and explore it seems that's not bored but when i go off the to the meadow I snore. Oh I wish to see daylight when the sun is very shine bright but it's almost like a flashlight which is very bright. So the colt looks at Snow Crystal in a happy way. "Wow that was awesome." Snow Crystal looks at the colt. "Really." The colt gets shy. "Well it looks she should get moving it's not that far." Snow Crystal looks at the colt. "Well hmm how far do we have to go through now." The colt gets depress on saying this. "Just have to pass through I think 20 miles and then were out. Unless you want to go to the Crystal Empire. That takes us longer." Snow Crystal ask if the colt has a plan. "Even if we don't have the supplies it's easier if we go to the shortest route as the fastest way out." The colt know where he's going. "Yea it is much simpler." Snow Crystal talks in general. "We should get going." The colt gets all sad a little bit as he feeling better. "Ok." Snow Crystal and the colt keep walking the path till the find a two path way. They choose the left and they keep going. Although the colt knows where she is going. The colt is unsure how further it will take them. "Were getting closer just a few more miles I think." Snow Crystal gets happy for fresh air. "Ok." As we both walk further we see stairs. We went up the stairs. Snow Crystal looks at the place. "This place is a wreck. It's very old." The colt looks at Snow. "Yea." Snow Crystal looks at the colt as if he is getting tired. "We should rest for tonight." The colt looks at Snow Crystal. "Yea. Walking all the way down here has made me tired." Snow Crystal and the colt walks up stairs to the main floor. The colt looks at Snow. "Lets get some water and something to eat before we go to bed." Snow Crystal went to the kitchen and see grains of wheat. Snow Crystal gives the colt wheat to eat and water bottle. Then we both went upstairs to the bedrooms. The colt looks at Snow Crystal with his eyes sparkles. "Before we go to bed. Can you tell a story?" Snow Crystal tucks in the colt. Snow Crystal is thinking of a story. "Yea why not." Snow Crystal tells the story. Once upon a time there was a rainbow outside of clouds dale it was cool. Then a pony happens to get very close to the rainbow but the pony saw a pot of gold. He took the gold and got a lot of magic from the gold but then he knew that something was following him. He ran but there was a small breezy telling him to wait. The pony stopped. "Why are you following me." The breezy looks at the pony. "That gold is a special gold that runs in my family for generations i need it back." The pony looks at the breezy. "Oh I didn't know it was yours." He gave all the gold bits back. But then the breezy gave 1 gold bit. The breezy rolled her eyes. "You can have this bit but remember it is a magical bit that gives you luck." The colt gets excited. "What happens next?" Snow Crystal continue the story. When the pony gets a lucky bit. "What is your name?" The breezy tells her name. "Rain Moi. What's yours?" The pony tells his name. "Chen Merna." Then they left went there ways and Chen Merna was lucky he got a mare name Lone Hill. Then they live happy ever after the end. Snow Crystal looked at the colt. "I think they had a few kids along the way but what happen to Rain Moi he went back to his culture. The colt went to sleep. Snow Crystal walks out of the room. Snow Crystal spoke to the A.I. "A.I are you there?" The A.I speaks. "Yes." Snow Crystal walks down stairs as and ask the A.I "Ok were finally out of that place." Snow Crystal goes outside to breath in air. Snow Crystal ask a question. “what time is it.” A.I tells the time. "It's 8:00 PM." Snow Crystal looks at the stars and constellations. Snow Crystal goes back inside the house. She ask the A.I I wonder what do I look like. The A.I told her. "You need to find a mirror." She walks down to the basement floor and uncover everything till she found a mirror. Snow Crystal finally found a mirror. She looks at herself. The A.I spoke. "You have red skin, your eyes are yellow, you have a yellow mane, and your tail is yellow." Snow Crystal ask the A.I "How old am I." The A.I spoke. "About 330 years old." Snow Crystal looks like she was shocked. "Really." The A.I laughs. "Yes but you were in that science container in a stasis so basically you froze your self in time." Snow Crystal gives the A.I a question. "Ok so how old am I if I was in a stasis and frozen in time to this timeline?" A.I said. "About the age of 10." Snow Crystal was shocked. "Wow that's a long from my original timeline." Snow Crystal goes up stairs. Then she was on the main floor then she went up stairs. She checks on the colt. Snow Crystal see the pony was still there. Snow Crystal goes into another bedroom and then takes off all the equipment off and goes to bed. The A.I spoke. "Are you going to read me a story too?" Snow Crystal looks at the A.I shackle on her right hoof. "But aren't you an A.I should you be telling me a story." The A.I laughs. "Mare goes first." Snow Crystal tells an A.I a short story but when she started a few words. The A.I was fast asleep. Snow Crystal was like really. Snow Crystal goes to sleep then dreams. Snow Crystal goes into a dream mode she was in a war with the changelings in the crystal mountains and then she fall off the cliff into the water then she found a cave then after that she went in the cave for shelter. Then the cave collapsed she turn and try to find a way out. Then she went deep in the cave and then she slip and slide down she saw this container and a weapon of some sorts then she got spooked and trip by a rock the container it opens up and she fell right in. Then she went into stasis with an oxygen mask. Then the water fills up then she thought she died. But then she wakes up and she had a nightmare. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony Chapter 3 The Crystal Golden Horseshoe The sun is rising up. Snow Crystal was trying to sleep but the window had put a shine to Snow Crystal eyes while she was sleeping. She woke up and then she was worrying that the colt maybe left. She went out of the bedroom down the hall and check if the colt is there. The colt is still sleeping. Snow Crystal whisper to the A.I. "What time is it." A.I whisper. "It's about 8:00 AM." Snow Crystal sits on the ground and close her eyes. The colt stretches and yawns then wakes up. Snow Crystal open her eyes. "Good morning." The colt was look at Snow Crystal strangely. "Did you sleep like that?" Snow Crystal giggles. "No there was another bed room." The colt looks at Snow Crystal with a smile. "Oh." Snow Crystal gets shy. "Well then Shall we go to the Crystal Empire together." The colt gets nervous. "Ok." Snow Crystal see that he wasn't excited but she notices that every time I get closer his face turns red. After they just got out of the house colt looks at Snow Crystal. "Well it's getting close to the end. What is your name?" Snow Crystal looks at the colt. "Snow Crystal. What's yours?" The colt gets embarrass. "My name is Stain Lash." Snow Crystal looks at Stain Lash as he blushes. "So do you know the way out of this part of this place." Stain Lash gets happy and smiles. "Yes I think. " Snow Crystal looks at Stain Lash. "Well let's go then your the lead leader." Stain Lash gets proud and the courage to lead to the Crystal Empire. "Ok." Stain Lash leads them out of the house. Snow Crystal gets confused. "Where are we?" Stain Lash gets surprised on how long she been in there. "Crystal Mountains." Snow Crystal looks at Stain Lash. "Where do you live?" Stain Lash smiles. "Crystal Empire but I left only because they were fighting over a golden crystal horse shoe model I still don't know the details on what it does." Snow Crystal get confused. "Really." Stain Lash looks confused. "I don't know any other details though on why they were obsess about it." Snow Crystal laughs. "Well I guess they should get over it by now." Stain Lash gets carious. "If you say so." Snow Crystal gets silly. "Well they got to share it right." Stain Lash gets serious. "It's something else more like high-class." Snow Crystal is confused. "I guess we'll find out." Snow and Stain went south-west for about 20 miles then they took a break and found a couple of berries to eat. The sky was sunny and it was 70 degrees outside. Snow Crystal and Stain Lash sing as pop music. Snow: Oh I love it out here then the cavern back there. Then I found a pony friend. Stain: All I found was trap there and didn't know what to do in there. But then I found a pony friend. Snow: Oh it's so wonderful when it's so good I feel like we finish with our food. Stain: It is so cool and the sheep are shedding their wool. Snow: Laughing and crying oh I wonder when there is adventure. Stain: Maybe there is more architecture or even literature. Snow: Oh I love it out here then the cavern back there. Then I found a pony friend. Stain: All I found was trap there and didn't know what to do in their. But then I found a pony friend. Snow/Stain: But we found each other now we know we are friends together. Were nothing but a big wire so it is time to go to the Crystal Empire. Stain Lash drink the last of the water bottle. We walk 20 miles south-west and saw a big bush with berries. We stop to take a break and we eat some berries and we grab some for the road trip. "Ten more miles till the factory." As Stain Lash see the factory a few more miles. As they walk 10 miles further they finally got to the factory and took a break. Snow Crystal gets confused. "It looks like it's been abandon." Stain Lash giggles and laughs. "It not abandon it's just old." Snow Crystal was very shocked. "Oh I see. Do they still use it?" Stain Lash is thinking. "Yea I think so." Snow Crystal and Stain Lash made it to the factory. But the factory's locked. Stain look down the road and can see the Crystal Empire. "We have 12 more miles to get to the city by then it will be at least 8 PM when we get there." Snow Crystal gets in tense. "Then we better get moving." They finally made it to the Crystal Empire. Snow Crystal looks sad. "Well it's better to go are separate ways now. You need to go to your parents I'm pretty sure they're worried. Stain looks sad. "Come with me please." Snow Crystal looks at stain and boops him. "I am going to see if I can stay at the Inn." Stain Lash gets emotional and looks at Snow Crystal. "But." Snow Crystal smiles and pets on his head. "Ok meet me at 9:00 Am in the Inn tomorrow." Stain Lash looks at Snow Crystal in an excited way. "Do you promise." Snow Crystal looks at Stain Lash with proud way like it was fierce. "You have my word." Stain Lash smiles. "Ok. I'll tell my mom what happened although she might freak out a bit." Snow Crystal laughs. "Well that is something well see you tomorrow then." Snow Crystal & Stain Lash said there goodbyes for now. Snow Crystal goes and find an Inn. Stain Lash goes back home and sees guards there. Stain goes to his house. Guards are asking his father. "What does he look like.? What age is he? What kind of mane does he have and what color?" The other Guard is asking his mother. "What is his name? What is his eye color? What color is his tail?" Stain Lash walks in. Mom & Dad I am right here. Stain's father looks upset. "Son where have you been your mom almost got a heart attack." Stain's mother looks at Stain with a serous look on her eye. "You're grounded Mr." Dad looks at me. "Where have you been?" In the most tempered voice. Stain looks like as if he's shamed. "I heard rumors about this place it was 42 miles northeast of the Crystal Empire." Stain's mother fainted. Stain look at the ground. "I made it to the crystal mountains. Then I trip and I slide down and went into the caverns and explored a few floors. After that I got lost and went down. Then after when thought I was going to die in the place like that a pony showed up. Snow Crystal is actually in the city now looking for a place to stay. Guard said. "Come on men we need to find this pony." Snow Crystal walks in at the Crystal Bane Inn. Bartender looks at this stranger earth pony. "Hello how can I help you stranger." Snow Crystal looks at the bartender. "Do you have any good meals dang I am starving." Bartender talks elegantly. "You should look at our menu." Snow Crystal looks at the menu. First Page. Appetizers. Hay fries 4 bits. Celery 3 bits. Carrot Deluxe 6 bits. Flowers. A Vase of Sun Flowers 5 bits. A Vase of Rose Flowers 7 Bits. A Vase of Tulips 6 Bits. Flower Salad 20 bits. Adds Tomatoes, Onions, Celery, Radishes, Carrots, Turnips 3 bits each topping. Add Sun petals, Rose petals, Tulip petals 4 Bits each topping. Next page. Sea Food. Lobster legs 70 bits. Salmon 80 bits Cod and Fried Shrimp 60 bits. Squid 55 bits. Trout and Tuna Deluxe 100 Bits. Sandwiches. Daffodil Sandwich 100 Bits. Radish Sandwich 110 Bits. Royal Crystal Deluxe Sandwich 150 Bits. Back of the menu Deserts Ice Cream 15 Bits. Adds Chocolate, Caramel, 10 bits Adds Crystal Berries Syrup 14 bits Pies Apple Pie 30 bits Cherry Pie 35 Bits Key Lime Pie 20 Bits Snow Crystal looks at the bartender. "I'll have squid and some hay fries on the side." Bartender spoke in an elegant way. "Ok 1 squid and hay fires on the side will be right out." Bartender give the order to the cook. Snow Crystal speaks to the bartender. "Is there any rumors going around lately." Bartender gets curious. "Yea there is one but it's only rumors." Bartender tells Snow Crystal a rumor. "If you can get the Golden Crystal Horse Shoe you'll might be a queen or a king someday. But that's only rumors." Snow Crystal puzzled in her mind. "Interesting." Snow Crystal is thinking. "Is there any old news that I should know about?" Bartender is grieving. "Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have died." Snow Crystal is shocked. "What?" Bartender is sad. "They die of old age like 200 years ago well Princess Celestia anyway and princess Luna died like 100 Years ago." Snow Crystal is curious. "If that is so who runs Canterlot?" Bartender gets suspicious. "Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. She now runs two empires." Snow Crystal gets envious. "Wow she's a busy pegasus." Bartender laughs. "Actually she's an alicorn." Snow Crystal looks at the bartender. "Interesting." The bell ring. The cook shouts. "Food's done." The bartender serves the food to Snow Crystal. Bartender looks at Snow Crystal. "That will be 59 bits please." Snow Crystal gives 59 bits and then the tip of 20 bits. She then eats the squid and the hay fries. Snow Crystal ask the bartender. "So this means Princess Mi Amore Cadenza is the only alicorn." Bartender laughs. "Nope there is Princess Twilight Sparkle." Snow Crystal i'm shocked. "What? You mean that filly, she became Celestia student the last time I was there at Canterlot." Bartender was shocked. "Wait the last time you were there? Then that means you should have died a long time ago." Snow Crystal sense danger in her mind. "I have a bad feeling about this." Guards come in. One of the guard gives the most serious look on the bartender. "Snow Crystal we are here for you." Snow Crystal gets up off the chair. "I didn't do anything wrong please don't take me to prison." 2nd Guard looks at Snow Crystal from the door when Snow Crystal is at the table. "No ha ha ha. That's not what we're here for." Snow Crystal is in a bit of a panic. "If that so why do want me?" 1st Guard as a serious look. "It is very urgent you come with us." Snow Crystal is panicking. "I can't deny a guard then I guess I'm off to jail?" 2nd Guard looks at Snow Crystal. "No." The guard whacks Snow Crystal and she pass out. The guards carried her to Stain Lash house. The second guard look at the bartender. "Everything is under control bartender." Snow Crystal gets damage by the hit by 50 damage 150/200 HP left. While Snow Crystal passed out she had the most realism dream. Snow Crystal sees a lot of white all around her. Snow Crystal looks in at a strange place. "Is this another dream or is it about the afterlife?" Then a door suddenly appears. The door seems locked. A key came out of nowhere as it is levitating in front of her she grab it and use it on the door. She sees stairs that is a big spiral. At the end of the platform she looked down and see and endless staircase that leads to a pitch black of darkness. Snow Crystal goes down stairs. Meanwhile the guards finally got Snow Crystal to Stain Lash House. The first guard look at Stains's father. "Here we have Snow Crystal for you." Then Mr. Lash looked at the guards. "Thanks and she's a mare?" Mr. Lash yell at upstairs. " Stain get down here this instant." Stain came down stairs. Stain looked at Snow. "That is Snow Crystal." First guard spoke in a serious look. "It is about only 8 minutes after she got knocked out." Stain look at his father. "Let's wait till tomorrow I mean she could be tired after our travels getting back here." Mrs. Lash look at Stain. "Ok lets put her in the couch until she wakes up." Meanwhile Snow Crystal still goes down the stairs. Snow Crystal was thinking. "I wish my A.I was here to help me how long this staircase were." Meanwhile 8:00 AM in the morning. Stain Lash goes down stairs in a rush to get to Snow Crystal. Snow Crystal was still asleep. Stain Lash looks at her and waits. Few hours have past. Snow Crystal still going down the stairs and she looked up and it gets very hard to see where she started then she continues to walk down. Meanwhile Stain Lash open her eyes and got freaked out by a bright light glowing eyes. Stain screamed mom goes to the living room. Stain Lash looks at mom. "Is this what a pony eye's should look like. Mrs. Lash fainted. Mr. Lash goes to the living room. "What's going on?" Stain Lash open Snow Crystal eyes again to show his father. Mr. Lash looks at Stain. "Ok it looks like were taking her to the hospital." Stain Lash looks at mom. "What about mom?" Mr. Lash look at his son. "She's fine she only fainted." Mr. Lash put her wife on the couch. Mr. Lash and his son rushed over to the Crystal Hospital. The nurse looks at Mr. Lash. "I don't know what's wrong with the earth pony and I don't see any injuries. Maybe I should go with you to get you into the castle to get Shiny Armour he'll know what to do in the time like this." Guards looks at the nurse. "Halt who goes there." "It is the nurse let me in it's an emergency." The nurse looks shocked. The guards rolled there eyes. "You may go ahead." As they go into the castle they ran in there to the outside of the throne room of Shiny Armour. "It seems we might have guests Open the doors. As the ponies arrived. Nurse looked at Prince Shiny Armour with shock. "I think you can help us with this pony illness or somewhat." Shiny Armour takes a look. "I don't know any healing that can outmatched that. The best Healing I know is my wife and she's in Canterlot. I'll give you a free train pass to get you all there and i hope it isn't too late." Meanwhile Snow Crystal keeps going down the stairs. Snow Crystal gets tired. "I might take a few minutes to take a break and sits down." Snow Crystal sings in as lonely sad music. Oh I wish I knew where I was going. It is almost the same in the trap container with the winds aren't blowing. The fresh of air to breathe that fresh of air. Oh why do I get stuck I can't even see a clock. When I do the time has will be pass by. I can't go even to that rhyme it looks like i can't even dance to the side. Oh why did I have to get stuck in the Inn. I don't know if this is real air but might seem so thin. But why do I have to-be in here I wish I was out there. Oh I wish I was out there. Meanwhile the train to Canterlot was here they all got on including Shiny Armour. Shiny Armour was excited to see his wife. "It has been a while since I saw my wife about at least 10 years." Stain looks at the Prince Shiny Armour. "That's really sad not to see some one that is close to you for that long." Shiny Armour gets sad. "Yea I wish we could live back together again although it may not happened." They arrived at Canterlot. They run to the castle. 1st Canterlot Guards looks at the ponies. "Halt who goes there. Wait Shiny Armour. You may go ahead." 2nd Canterlot Guard looks at Prince Shiny Armour. "Sorry Only Shiny Armour may Proceed." Shiny Armour looks at the 2nd Canterlot Guard. "There with me." 2nd Canterlot Guards look at the ponies. "You all may go ahead." Princess Mi Amore Cadenza looks at a strange pony that she never seen for 10 years. "Who are you. Wait your Shiny Armour." Shiny Armour looks at Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. "Yes and you look pale." Princess Mi Amore Cadenza giggles. "Is that how you treat me with respect." Shiny Armour gets nervous. "No but sorry." Stain tells Shiny Armour. "I think you should kiss her." Mr. Lash looks at his son and glare at him. "That is not the right time young one. When we get home you're grounded for life." Shiny Armour looked at Mr. Lash in a anxious way. "I think your son is right." Shiny Armour kisses Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. Princess Mi Amore Cadenza returns to her natural color. Princess Mi Amore Cadenza looks at the ponies. "I feel a lot better now for some reason. You help me with love now I must return you a favor let me see what ya got. Hmm not any of my healing magics and do it. There is only one thing. We must go to the Princess nerd known as Princess Twilight Sparkle." Meanwhile Snow Crystal keeps going down stairs then after 400 steps she then stops and looked up and couldn't find where she started but then she walked and walked and finally she made it to the end of the stairs. She looks around and there was nothing she checked behind the stairs she found a door and she opens it. There it was the crystal golden horseshoe. Snow Crystal touches it and then something splendid happens a powerful magic goes around her. She gain wings then she gains a horn. The transformation is complete. Snow Crystal feels strange. "Now all I got to do is go back to the surface and get back into my body." As she said it in her mind. Meanwhile it was about dark outside and all the ponies went to Ponyville and stayed at the castle they were looking for twilight but haven't found her. They said it is best to wait and look for in the morning. 9:00 AM in the morning Snow Crystal try to fly but too weak then she gets tired and then sleeps. Meanwhile Stain Lash and Mr. Lash wakes up they went to look around. So they both looked around the castle and suddenly they see 2 weird looking ponies that had a purple hat and a blue mask in a weird-looking outfit. They both looked at the strange 2 ponies with a costume. "We are the Maredowells that protects Princess Twilight sparkle." First Maredowell look at the 2 ponies. "You are trespassing the castle." Second maredowell stared at the 2 ponies. "You'll be press with charges about 8000 bits." Stain check his pockets. "We don't have money." The first Maredowell laughs. "Then I must arrest you both for a tress pass crime." Princess Mi Amore Cadenza comes into action. "Halt in the name of the Crystal Empire and Canterlot I demand you to tell me where Princess Twilight Sparkle." Shiny Armour gets here late but made it and spoke. "You hide behind a mask it seems you look like criminals." The first maredowell looked in shock of both of the Crystal Empires. "Twilight Sparkle has left the castle darling." The second maredowell looks at the first maredowell. "They are looking for the princess this must be argent." The first maredowell takes off the mask. "I think I know where twilight is." Princess Mi Amore cadenza said. "Rarity." The second maredowell takes off the mask. "It's been 4 years since we seen her." Shiny Armour was shocked when the second mask was revealed. "Sweetie bell." Princess Mi Amore Cadenza was shocked. "Wow Sweetie Bell you grown a lot since the past 250 years or so." Shiny Armour look at the mares. "You mares should take a look at this please." Rarity is shocked by the elements of harmony could do something so cruel. "I never seen that before how long did it happen?" Stain looked at Rarity. "About 2 days and 5 hours." Mr. Lash look at the 2 mares. "We believe Princess Twilight Sparkle can figure it out." Rarity is looking at the weird earth pony. "Follow me I think I know where she is." Rarity calls. "Spike." Spike walked into the room as he rub his eyes. "Yes my darling?" "Settle up we are all going to the Everfree Forest." As Rarity gets excited. Sweetie Bell looked at Rarity. "Let me get this straight sister you think Princess Twilight is in the Everfree Forest." Rarity looked at Sweetie Bell. "In fact I do. She is always there reading the ancients books there hopefully she is still there. " Once they all got to the castle. A mysterious voice appeared. "Who enters my domain. I am one you most greatest fears the shadow pony." Shiny Armour looked at the castle. "We are looking for Princess Twilight Sparkle." Shadow pony is hidden in the shadows. "Your names are?" "I'm the Crystal Empire and Canterlot I am Princess Cadance." "I'm her wife known as Shiny Armour." "I'm the most beautiful of all ponies my name is Rarity." "I'm her daughter Sweetie Bell." "I'm Stain Lash." "I'm his father Mr. Lash." Shadow Pony comes out of the shadows. "Did you say Princess Cadance and Shiny Armour. I thought you two were busy to see me." Princess Twilight Sparkle comes out of the shadows. Princess Cadance looks at Twilight. "Here you should take a look at this." "Let me take a look. I never read anything about this happening but I think I know who can help me though the other ponies that I trust in years I found a spell to bring their souls plus what's so hard about the spell when it is use for emergency reasons. We must awaken Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Apple Jack, Fluttershy. We must go back to where we began in ponyville. We have to get to ponyville." They get to the graveyard of Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie pie, and Apple Jack tombstones. Twilight Sparkle gets intense. "Ok here goes nothing. This is so exciting." Spike looks at Twilight Sparkle. "Are you always excited?" Twilight looks at Spike. "Yes Spike." "You haven't changed a bit." As Spike smiles. Twilight looks at Spike. "Did you bring my check list." Spike check his pockets. "Nope I think you can wing it." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at the graves. "Spike! Well it's too late we have no choice but to do the unthinkable." Twilight use magic over the tombstones. Rainbow Dash yawns. "Who dares corrupt in my peace sleep." Pinkie Pie gets angry. "Who dare to throw a party without me." Fluttershy screams. "I am a ghost." Fluttershy screams again. Apple Jack gets frustrated. "What all that racket? Granny Smith are you listen to me? Apple Bloom don't eat those pies they're not good for your health." Twilight screams. "Enough. Friends I need your help once more." Rainbow Dash looks at Princess Twilight Sparkle. "Come on egg head your always have it covered." Pinkie Pie gets very angry. "What is going on twilight I am having fun I get unlimited chocolate rain in the afterlife. This better be worth my while." Fluttershy shivers. Apple Jack looks at the ponies. "What do you need sugar cube?" Rarity smiles. "It's been a while my friends it's me Rarity." Rainbow Dash laughs "You haven't died yet?" Pinkie Pie talking to her dead alligator. "You never invited me to your birthday party you owe me." Fluttershy gets very shy. "What's going on why did you bring us back from the dead Princess Twilight Sparkle?" Apple Jack looks serious. "It must be very important." Princess Twilight Sparkle open Snow Crystal eyes. Apple Jack looks at the unknown earth pony. "Were dead for a while now Princess Twilight Sparkle but we have no clue on what's wrong with the elements of harmony done to her." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Snow Crystal. "Elements of Harmony shouldn't be doing that." Princess Twilight Sparkle uses the Elements of harmony along with her friends. It doesn't work. Pinkie Pie was unsure. "That was at least unexpected." Apple Jack is confused. "Maybe there is away but it might have to do with balance." Rainbow Dash speaks in an epic way. "Elements of harmony has wonderful things and many things although it is fate that brought us together. So to bring her back it has to do with loyal and fate." Pinkie Pie giggles. "Elements of harmony is where the unexpected. So it also have to do with the unexpected." Fluttershy gets nervous. "Elements of harmony has a bit of kind things. So it's with great kindness. Apple Jack speaks as a strong heart and courage. "Elements of harmony must have honesty twilight." Rarity speak in an elegant way. "Elements of harmony is quite generosity. So it has generous." Princess Twilight Sparkle is thinking. "Elements of harmony is also magic. So it must have magic." Rarity giggles. "Laughs." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Rarity. "Why are you laughing Rarity." Rarity is thinking. "Is it obvious. Stain has to kiss her because it's her true love." Princess Twilight Sparkle is very confused. "What?" Rarity knows knowledge as she is thinking. "Come to think about it its romance. It has fate, unexpected, kindness, honesty, generosity, then you can say the magic happens." Rainbow Dash looks at Twilight. "Twilight have you tried that?" Pinkie Pie is thinking. "That is really expected in a romance." Fluttershy speaks in a calm voice. "The kiss is true kindness with a sweet soft touch." Apple Jack speaks in a calm voice. "It is how honesty truly feels." Meanwhile Snow Crystal walks out of the room back to the stairs case but the stairs were gone she looks at the ground but she sees 6 alicorns and a weird-looking goat head with a snake body type thing that was in the middle. She went to touch it and the floor went all the way up to the top back to the door she first used to get there. Meanwhile Princess Twilight Sparkle . "I guess it is worth a shot but which pony would help her?" Stain Lash speaks in heroic. "I guess I don't have a choice I'm the only pony who knows her besides she was with me and save me I guess I have to return a favor." Mr. Lash speaks in crazy talk nonsense. "That's outrageous even if it work how can we tell?" Princess Mi Amore Cadenza looks at Mr. Lash. "We don't but it might work." Meanwhile Snow Crystal open the door and went back outside but then the door behind her disappears. But she didn't know how to open the other door to get back to her body. After stain goes up to Snow Crystal body he said. "Snow Crystal I know we didn't know each other but you save me from the that weird place and now I am here to save you." Snow Crystal hears a voice. Stain looks at Snow Crystal. "I think you're nice and you are beautiful." Pinkie Pie gets too excited. "Just kiss her already." Rarity looks at Pinkie Pie. "Hush Pinkie Pie you can't rush romance." Stain gets closer to Snow Crystal. "I hope you love me and you love me back." Stain close his eyes and kiss Snow Crystal. Snow Crystal wraps her hoofs around Stain then she open her eyes. Snow Crystal giggles. "I, I guess it is destiny that binds us together after all." Snow Crystal then went to the glowing eyes thing and spread a rainbow across equestria. The ghost ponies went back to their bodies and came out from the grave. As Spike scream Zombie ponies. Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Apple Jack were old but then another rainbow appear and then everyone turn a lot younger in there 20 years of age. Snow Crystal looks at Twilight. "Twilight you need to bring back someone." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Snow Crystal. "Who? I hope your not saying discord the master of chaos." Snow Crystal looks at Princess Twilight eyes. "He is the key to winning the future wars against the changelings, King Sombra and Tirek." Princess Twilight Sparkle is unsure. "But." Princess Celestia comes down. Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Princess Celestia. "Is that Princess Celestia when she was younger." Princess Luna comes down as well. Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Princess Luna. "Luna too." Princess Celestia looks at Princess Twilight. "It is time Princess Twilight Sparkle that I step down from my kingdom." Princess Luna laughs. "I was thinking the same thing." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Princess Luna. "What why? Princess Luna speaks to the ponies. "There is a new alicorn in equestria." Princess Twilight Sparkle was shocked. "Wait what?" Princess Celestia looks at Snow Crystal. "She is the one that brought us to life. Go look at her now she has wings and a horn it seems she is another princess that's meant to rule." Shiny Armour looks at Princess Celestia. "If that is so then who is going to rule Canterlot." Princess Luna looks at Shiny Armour. "It shall be this pony known as Snow Crystal." Princess Mi Amore Cadenza looks at Princess Luna and Princess Celestia. "So what will you do?" Princess Celestia closed her eyes and spoke. "We will open our kingdom from the Everfree Forest." Princess Luna looks at Princess Twilight and smiles. "After you release Discord." Princess Twilight Sparkle goes to the Everfree Forest castle and release Discord outside the castle. Discord looks at Princess Twilight. "Laughs. Hello Princess Twilight I see you awaken me for the 2nd time now." Princess Celestia walks in saying. "Hello discord." Discord is extreme shocked that Princess Celestia is alive. "I thought you died." Princess Celestia looks at Discord in a cute way. "Yes but I was reborn back to life." Discord looks at Princess Celestia. "I know I give a lot of ponies a hard time but. Will you marry me." Princess Celestia smiles. "Yes." Princess Twilight Sparkle is shocked. "I guess love is very unexpected." Discord looks at Princess Twilight. "Don't you have your Prince waiting for you at your castle?" Princess Twilight Sparkle runs to the Magic castle she sees her stallion Flash Sentry. Princess Twilight sparkle runs to the Magic castle she see her stallion Flash Sentry. Princess Mi Amore Cadenza with excitement. "Me and my stallion are going to head back to the Crystal Empire." Princess Luna looks at the ponies. "I am going to make sure discord doesn't become evil so I guess I am going to company my sister for the new future." Snow Crystal looks at Princess Twilight. "It seems we're meant to go to Canterlot Princess Twilight Sparkle." Mr. Lash looks at the ponies. "I guess I'll have to tell my wife although she would faint when she hears her son is a prince now. It seems I am going back to the Crystal Empire." Princess Snow looks at Stain. "No problem. We'll Stain are you ready." Stain looks at Princess Snow. "Yes." Princess Snow close her eyes. "I am sure there happy. Pinkie Pie get to see Cheese Sandwich. Apple Jack gets Silver Shill. Rarity gets Spike. Rainbow Dash gets Soarin. Fluttershy gets Silverwing, and most of all Princess Twilight Sparkle gets her Flash Sentry." Prince Stain laughs. "Don't forget that Princess Celestia has Discord and Princess Cadance has Shiny Armour, Sweetie Bell has Button Mash, Apple Bloom has Pipsqueak, and Scootaloo has Rumble." Princess Snow giggles. "Well it is time." Prince Stain smiles. "How about another kiss." Princess Snow laughs. "Ok." Princess Snow and Prince Stain took the train to Canterlot. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony Chapter 4 Secrets When Princess Snow Crystal and Prince Stain Lash gets on the train. They see a few passengers on the train. They go to the left to the next cart of the train and it was empty. The prince and the princess sit together while the train takes them to Canterlot. Stain cuddles Princess Snow. "So you're a Princess now." Princess Snow is getting cuddle by Stain the future Prince. "Yes and you're the future prince who isn't an alicorn." Stain had a question. "What was back there?" Princess Snow gets confused. "Back where?" Stain spoke with wonders. "Do you remember the time where we first met." Princess Snow looks at Stain. "Yes. Why are you asking such things?" Stain still wondering. "Well there was a room to the left that i haven't explored yet. I was wondering if there was any treasure?" Princess Snow laughs. "A few that I can think of." Princess Snow gives the rat some cheese. Stain had a question. "Well How many floors did that place have?" Princess Snow was getting gloomy. "About 57 BF." Stain gets excited. "Cool I can't wait to go back there to find out what you were doing there." Princess Snow laughs. "Trust me you don't want to go back there." Stain gives her this look. "Well." Princess Snow looks very serious. "Its way too dangerous with lots of traps. I barely made it out." Stain is unsure. "Traps?" Princess Snow smiles. "It's better to forget that place. We both have a long journey ahead of us." Stain is thinking way to hard. "If you say so." Princess Snow kiss Stain. Stain kissed Princess Snow. The train enters the tunnel. Stain gets a little scared and hugs Princess Snow. Princess Snow smiles. "It's ok Stain many ponies are always scared of something." Stain leans on Snow Crystal. He now notice that the Princess feels so warm like his mom. Then Stain closed his eyes and sleeps. Princess Snow giggles and said in her mind. "No matter how we ended up together you seem so cute when you're asleep." Princess Snow noticed that Stain feels warm. Then a 3 hours later the train stops at Canterlot and it was . They both go out of the train there was like no ponies or pegasus or unicorns around. Stain looks at Princess Snow. "We need to go this way Princess Luna wants you to go to the this well shaft." Princess Snow is confused. "Why?" Stain tries to explain. "Because Princess Celestia and Princess Luna doesn't want the enemy to know there is another alicorn." Princess Snow is confused. "Where are all the ponies and pegasus and unicorns?" Stain knows something and tells her to Princess Snow. "Princess Twilight Sparkle is distracting them." Princess Snow looks at Stain."What about the royal guards?" Stain laughs. "No one goes in the castle it's been abandoned after the Princess Celestia and Princess Luna died." Princess Snow looks at the castle. "But they back to life does anyone know that besides the us and Ponyville." Stain looks worried. "Everypony knows and can see them." Princess Snow figures it out. "Oh ok." Stain grab her hoof. "I'll tell you the rest latter now we got to get there." Stain and Princess Snow goes to the well. Princess Snow looks at the well. "Well so what now?" Stain looks worried. "Go down there." Princess Snow gets a little nervous. "Down there?" Princess Snow gives Stain four thousand bits. "Here goes nothing." As Princess Snow Crystal dives in the well shaft. There was a big stream of water down there and it was hard to tell how deep it was. As Princess Snow still drop out of the well shaft she is still dropping at a fast rate of gravity. She close her eyes and spread her wings then she glides to the platform. Stain goes to the markets to get food supplies and bottles of water. He also spends the rest of the money for a pony cloak and a hat to make Princess Snow to hide her horn and wings. Stain goes back to the well shaft and made sure no pony was looking or following him. He goes down the well in a faster rate. He drops out of the well shaft. Stain looks down at the well shaft. "Hey Snow Crystal catch the supplies." Stain throw the supplies at Princess Snow. Stain use the rope then climbs down. Stain keeps going down, the rope is getting moisture from the water. Stain made it out of the well shaft but then he slipped and fell in the water. The water current was going 70 MPH. Stain tries to paddle but the current is too strong. So he grab and edge but he couldn't hold for very long. Stain panics. "Princess Snow help." Princess Snow looks at Stain. "I'll be right there." Princess Snow equipped the other package of supplies. Then runs to the destination. As Princess Snow runs forward then Stain gets stuck on a rock but not for long after he slipped from moss. Stain flows down the stream and get stuck on a branch. While Princess Snow runs as fast as she could to get there. While she just got there the branch broke. Stain screams. "Hurry Snow." Princess Snow is getting tried of running. "It's these wings that are slowing me down and the weight carry." As Princess Snow slow down she took a breather. While Stain Lash goes down the stream. Then out of nowhere a unicorn showed up and used magic to get him out of there. As the unicorn put stain to safety she ask. " Who are you and what are you doing down here. I don't think we met before." Stain tries to get a glimpse of the unicorn face. " Nope I never saw you before." Princess Snow catches finally catches up. The unicorn looks at the two ponies. " Ah I see you must the be the new alicorn that twilight mentioned in the book. Although your face looks familiar. " Princess Snow is unsure. "Who are you?" The unicorn takes off the hood. "I'm Sunset Shimmer." Stain was shocked. "Wait so the stories are true?" Sunset Shimmer looks at Stain. "Yes the stories are true. I betrayed Princess Celestia and took a dark path. I stole Twilight crown once." Snow looks at Sunset Shimmer. "But how did you know there was a crown in the first place?" Sunset Shimmer tells a story. "I went back to equestria on the full moon after I return I sense 3 alicorn powers Luna, Celestia and then a strange unknown alicorn. I finally knew her name when twilight went to the human world. Then I almost succeed my evil plans to conquer equestria. Then Twilight Sparkle had stopped me and then we became friends. Then I wrote stuff in the book to let her know what I learn about friendship in the human world. Then the sirens appeared known as the dazzlings they were trying to rule over the human world with music spells then the 7th elements of harmony appeared. Then for long the black hole was rising because I saw my human form. So I took the dazzlings and myself to equestria although it wasn't easy I had to make sure it was night time so Princess Twilight didn't know. I had to make sure they stay silence. So we got out of the castle the sirens escaped but no word from them not sure what they're doing but maybe another evil plan or so. Did I tell Twilight and her friends nope." Stain gets intense. "Wow that is wicked." Princess Snow looks at Sunset Shimmer. "Are you going to search for them?" Sunset Shimmer worries. "No I'm not sure where they went. If I did tell twilight well I would be doomed. That is why I need you to keep it a secret." Stain gets excited. "Ok so where are we going next." Sunset Shimmer tells where we heading. "We are going to the Canterlot caves." Princess Snow is thinking. "Are you talking to the banish place where Celestia banish ponies." Sunset Shimmer gets a little nervous. "Yea kinda but it's been awhile since she has band ponies to that place so it's now a short cut to the castle to from the well." So the three ponies walk to the cavern and they have walk for a half an hour. Sunset Shimmer gets a plan ready. "Ok this is it. This is where we get to the garden. But once we get up there we need to disguise our self's in secret." Princess Snow is unsure. "Why disguise our self's in secret?" Sunset Shimmer explains. " It is because this is a secret mission to get you to the castle unnoticed." Stain is asking a question. "But why?" Sunset Shimmer looks at both of them. "You're on the hit list." Stain is shocked. "Hit list?" Sunset Shimmer looks looks worried for both ponies. "It's either live or death. Not only that Snow Crystal has upset the balance on equestria." Stain is confused. "Upset the balance how?" Sunset Shimmer boops Snow Crystal. "Well you brought bounty hunters to life." Snow Crystal feels terrible. "That is a bad thing oh no does Princess Twilight know about this." Sunset Shimmer cheers Princess Snow. "Yes I wrote it in the book she carries that with her now days." Snow Crystal is unsure. "Does Princess Celestia know or Princess Luna know?" Sunset Shimmer looks at the ponies. "Princess Luna already told Princess Celestia by now. Ok where here. I need you to put these new cloaks on. I have a special cloths for you Snow. Wear this Snow it will hide your wings and horn while we go into the castle. But before we are going to wait a few hours till it dies down a bit we will go at midnight where the midnight guards will be expecting us." Stain laughs. "It seems were fugitives." Meanwhile at the villain hideout. Unicorn 1 laughs. "Well now so I heard rumors that there is 5th alicorn in equestria." Earth Pony 1 gets obvious. "Well so it would seem." Earth Pony General 1 is very aggressive. "Well I am sick of waiting we should attack now when the time is right on our side." Pegasus General 2 looks at the ponies. "Let's not be too hasty now that we are never going to get to the elements of surprise when pinkie pie knows our every move." Pegasus General 1 figuring out plans. "We would've look at ahead anyway no matter if we attack now it will always be 50% chance if we succeed." Earth Pony General 2 is thinking of a plan. "Well we could hit the Crystal Empire where it's good far away from the magic kingdom." The main admiral said. "Look I think we should attack the Magic Kingdom so we can destroy the magics. All in good favors do say I." Unicorn 1, Earth Pony General 1, Pegasus General 1, Pegasus General 2, and Earth Pony General 2 said. "I." The main admiral laughs. "Well then it's settled I think I let you handle this Pegasus General 2. While we make plans for Canterlot." Meanwhile in the Everfree castle. Princess Celestia giggles. "That was fun discord we shall do it again if we live long enough." Discord laughs. "Of course my dear." Princess Luna knocks on the door. Luna speaks in the royal canterlot voice. "Are you done with that I can hear you everywhere in the castle." Princess Celestia gets embarrassed. "Oh." Then she giggles. Meanwhile in the Magic Kingdom Castle. Flash Sentry, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Cheese Sandwich, Rarity, Spike, Apple Jack, Silver Shills, Fluttershy, Silverwing, Rainbow Dash, Sorain. Flash Sentry is the first to speak during the meeting. "So Snow Crystal is now a new alicorn." Princess Twilight looks at the ponies. "True but I am not sure if she is a pony all we know that she could have come from the mirror." Rainbow Dash is unsure. "Well it's clearly that she is one of us right?" Apple Jack is thinking. "I honestly think we should trust her because she's an alicorn." Rarity looks at Apple Jack. "Apple Jack. You have to think does she want power to rule over us? Alicorns are the most powerful creatures that use magic more likely powerful magic. For all we know she could end up like Nightmare Moon the princess of darkness." Silver Shills is thinking. "Well it is that time where we all have to decide to where we are going through this plan or not." Silverwing looks at the ponies. "I hope we have a plan because we need a plan to get things over with the enemy." Sorain looks fierce. "Ok so we have to figure out who's the leader of the evil villains. Princess Twilight looks at the ponies. "Enough we have to think this over and by all means we have to use strategy and figure out who's behind this attack." Rainbow Dash gets serious. "Well were all ears Twilight so make it quick and make it 100% cooler." Princess Twilight gets gloomy. "Look friends, we have been through a lot we should take a break." Apple Jack spoke like a true southern speech. "It is the honest truth that we are in danger evil never rest." Pinkie Pie laughs. "Will we have a party after this when it is finished because my brain hurts just thinking about it that we may not make it." Rainbow Dash looks at the ponies. "We never lose a battle. We save equestria a lot of times in the past. I'm sure we will make it." Pinkie Pie laughs. "It hasn't been seen yet so it's to be unexpected that we encounter in the future." Spike looks at Princess Twilight. "Are you sure were ready?" Princess Twilight spoke as normal Twilight. "Just give me the check list and we should be fine. Right?" Everypony looks at one another. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony Chapter 5 Pick a Bed in the Castle 12:30 AM on August 8th Princess Twilight gets very tired. "It is time to sleep we can't think in this condition." Apple Jack looks at the ponies. "Yes I believe so were all very tired." Rarity looks at Spike. "Well Spike it's time to get our beauty sleep." Fluttershy looks at Princess Twilight. "It's too far to go back home I guess I'll sleep here then." "That is the same for me I'll stay here since it's a long way home." As Apple Jack looks at Princess Twilight. "I need the exercise too much chatting." As Rainbow Dash Fly's home with Sorain. Twilight Sparkle spoke very unclear and she coughs. "We will finish this meeting later. Everyone you are now dismissed." Meanwhile in Canterlot. "Ok that's our cue." As Sunset Shimmer whispers. Stain looks at Sunset Shimmer. "Is it safe?" Princess Snow looks very confused. "Why do we have to keep this a secret again?" Sunset Shimmer is thinking. "I'll tell you when we get in the castle." Princess Snow looks at Sunset Shimmer. "Ok. I just hope you're telling the truth." All 3 ponies goes to the first guard. Sunset Shimmer whisper. "It's me the past pony password 345682." Guard whisper. "If you say so. But who are they." Sunset Shimmer whisper. "It's not of your concern guard. My students want to know about magic in person." Guard whisper. "All right I'll let them through." Princess Snow spoke as if she really wants to know. "Ok we made it. Now I really wants some answers." Sunset Shimmer looks at Princess Snow. "Keep it down you don't want them to hear us. What do want to know?" Princess Snow whispers. "Well I was wondering how you know where we were?" Sunset Shimmer looks frustrated. "One you were moving fast, second you have a lot of magic like Twilight, and third is that when I saw you were an alicorn it means you were heading to the castle without a trace just as Twilight Sparkle had planned. She knew I was at equestria when I returned because of her alicorn magic. It can pick up any ponies magic." Stain laughs quietly . "Sounds cool." Princess Snow looks at a wall. "Ok." Sunset Shimmer looks at a picture. "We should start your magic training tomorrow as well. Every alicorn must learn the basic magics and stuff. Just for when if they need it." Snow Crystal is sure of her self. "If you say so then it's decided. We start tomorrow." Sunset Shimmer asked. "Yes but now I've a question for you." Stain is unsure. "Is it about the ponies coming back to life?" Princess Snow is unsure. "Is it about how manage to transform to an alicorn?" Sunset Shimmer laughs. "No I was just asking what bedroom you want to sleep in for the rest of your life that's all really." Princess Snow giggles. "Oh." Stain is shocked. "Really is that all? Dang that is also a hard question. What room should we take?" Sunset Shimmer laughs. "Look I sleep in the basement in the crystal caves." Stain looks at Sunset Shimmer. "What are you serious?" Sunset Shimmer looks tired. "Yea why not." Princess Snow is giving orders. "I'm an alicorn and I order you to sleep in Princess Celestia's room." Sunset Shimmer laughs. "Wait what." Princess Snow is giving orders. "I order you to sleep in Princess Celestia's room." Sunset Shimmer is unsure. "Your kidding right. I'm not sure if I have the honor to go to sleep in a high royal sleeping spot." Princess Snow looks at Sunset Shimmer. "What ever you did in the past is gone your new life is arriving soon and very soon I can tell just looking at you." Sunset Shimmer looks kinda down. "I betrayed Celestia, I took twilight's crown, I took Flash sentry feelings from the human world to like me and use him." Princess Snow smiles. "But you honor us by saving my boyfriend which counts as one point, You saved both worlds equestria and the human world from the sirens ponies which count as two points because you saved both worlds, and then you saved the human world from ending up in a black hole which is one point. So pretty much your honor is crystal clear." Sunset Shimmer is unsure. "You think so." Stain is confident on the decision. "Yes I'm sure." Princess Snow smiles. "I'm positive that you have gain your honor back in full. Plus you're going to help me with magic anyway so should I go on?" Sunset Shimmer finally agrees. "Alright you made your point. Just let me grab my stuff from the crystal caves and put it in the library." Princess Snow is going to explore. "Good. Stain help her when I go explore the castle." Stain goes with Sunset Shimmer. "Alright let's do this." Snow Crystal explore the castle. Meanwhile "Stain I was thinking." As Sunset Shimmer walking down the stairs. Stain is excited to see the crystal caves. "Yea what is it?" Sunset Shimmer ask a question. "How did you two meet?" "Well. We meet at the abandoned mine shaft north-east of the crystal empire. Then we went to a few castles, then we went on the train and then well you know the rest." As Stain walks down the stairs with Sunset Shimmer. "Wow what a dangerous adventure you have there." As Sunset Shimmer and Stain finish the staircase. Sunset Shimmer tells him. "Ok were here." Sunset Shimmer open the bag. "This is a neat trick for magic." Sunset Shimmer use magic to turn every object smaller and she use levitation spell to put it in the bag. "It seems were finished then." As Sunset Shimmer pick up the package. Stain open his eyes. "Wow are you going to teach Snow Crystal that trick." Sunset Shimmer looked at Stain and smiles. "Eventually. Let's head back up to the castle." Meanwhile Snow Crystal finally explore all the upstairs and then she went down stairs. Few minutes later Sunset Shimmer and stain were ready to go to sleep. Stain Lash went with Snow Crystal to their room while Sunset shimmer went to her room. Meanwhile Luna's room at 3 AM in the morning on August 9th. Stain looks nervous. "There is only one big bed in the room." Princess Snow is excited. "Yea which means we get to sleep together this time." Stain is blushing, shy and nervous because it's his first time sleeping with a mare. They both got up on the bed. Snow had a few issues with the wings but then stain message her back to make it relax instead of tense. Then they both fall asleep. Meanwhile Celestia's room at 3:25 AM in the morning. Sunset Shimmer prays. "Please forgive me for using your royal bed. Please don't blame me blame the new alicorn." Sunset Shimmer gets into the royal bed and sleeps. Meanwhile in Stain's dream. Stain look at is left but it was white. Stain look at his right but it was white. Stain looked up and he saw stars. Stain looked down and saw a waterfall. As Stain looks down. "Uh oh." Stain dropped 35 feet in the air and then hit the water as a speed of 1.101 Miles per hour. Stain hits the water on his back and went 3 meters underwater. He saw Snow Crystal. As Snow Crystal open her eyes it was glowing bright white. Stain quickly wakes up from the nightmare and looks to his right. He thought. "I really wonder what Snow Crystal is dreaming." Princess Snow turns her head and she was still sleeping. "Stain what are you doing? No wait don't make me drink that you're not old enough to make me drink that. No don't do it. I am not ready to have kids yet." Stain open his mouth as Snow Crystal dreams. Stain thinks. "I wonder what Sunset Shimmer is dreaming hopefully it isn't this." Meanwhile in Sunset Shimmer's dream. "Sunset Shimmer why did you betray us." As Princess Celestia cries. "Why are you in the royal bed when you're not even a Princess." As Princess Twilight looks at Sunset Shimmer. "To be honest why didn't you help us during the changelings attack?" As Apple Jack gives Sunset Shimmer the mean looks. "Where is your loyalty when discord tried to destroy us again." As Rainbow Dash looks sadly for his lost with his pet turtle. "I'm your friend how come I didn't get a present from you?" As Rarity cries. "What are you hiding from me? Are you a spy?" As Pinkie Pie looks at Sunset Shimmer with a evil look. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown Pony CH 6 Food in our Bellies Year 2315, August 9th 10:00 AM. Stain wakes up then he stretches and then yawns. Stain Went down stairs to the kitchen and he saw Sunset Shimmer. "Ah. Stain did you get any sleep?" As Sunset Shimmer yawn and stretches. Stain feels very worried. "Please don't ask." Sunset Shimmer looks at Stain and wonder what was bothering him. Stain was given pancakes, sausage, bacon, and waffles. Stain looks at the strange food. "What is this?" It's all American food from the human world it really taste good once you taste it. You might scream for more." As Sunset Shimmer laughs. Stain gets excited. "American food from the human world. Wow it smells good. How do they cook this?" "They steal eggs from chickens, they use flour and water to make the dough and make pancake batter, the bacon and sausage is another story I'll have to tell you later when you're older." As Sunset Shimmer cooks more food. "Oh I see it seems something good or bad right?" As Stain looks at Sunset Shimmer in a weird way. "Well you could say that Fluttershy wouldn't approve." As Sunset Shimmer thinking about it. "Oh I should have been a vegetarian from now on." As Stain looks at the clean plate. Sunset Shimmer laughs. "You need meat to get stronger so you can protect Snow Crystal." "Oh it's so hard to choose." As Stain tries to decide. Snow Crystal wakes up and smells the food from the bedroom. She close her eyes and levitates on auto pilot to the food as she smells it to the kitchen. "Good Morning Princess Snow." As Sunset Shimmer looks at Princess Snow. Princess Snow is still sleeping levitating. Then the sun shines on Snow Crystal's eyes and then she open her eyes. "Hello." Stain laughs. "You know you're levitating right." Snow Crystal is shocked. "What?" Princess Snow fells down on her nuzzle first then a belly flop on the floor. Stain gets worried. "So Snow Crystal did you have a nightmare last night?" Snow Crystal looks at Stain. "Yes how did you know?" "Is it about..." Stain whisper in Snow Crystal ears. Snow Crystal is shocked. "How did you know I was dreaming about that." Stain looks at Princess Snow. "You talk in your sleep." Snow Crystal gets embarrass. "Wow do you think I was being weird last night?" Stain looks worried. "Yea a little." Sunset Shimmer laughs. "Wow Princess Snow had a dream on Stain." Princess Snow whisper to Sunset Shimmer. Sunset Shimmer open her mouth. "Oh wow I didn't know it would go that far." Sunset Shimmer looks at Princess Snow in a weird way. "Is there anything you want to eat Princess Snow?" Princess Snow is nervous. "Whats on the menu?" "Pancakes, eggs and waffles are left." As Sunset Shimmer explain the leftovers. "I'll take Pancakes and waffles. I don't think my stomach can handle eggs only because on what happened last night." As Princess Snow almost started to cry. "Ok. Pancakes and waffles for the Princess Snow." As Sunset Shimmer is still was wonder what is going wrong with her head today. Princess Snow receives food on the plate then she chows down on the food like it was no day tomorrow. Meanwhile at the Magic Kingdom. Princess Twilight Sparkle confronts the meeting again. Pinkie Pie looks at Princess Twilight. "Can we get something to eat?" Rainbow Dash laughs. "You're always hungry." Princess Twilight Sparkle looks at Pinkie Pie. "Make it quick Pinkie Pie." Meanwhile at Canterlot. "Well I'm stuffed with food. So what was the crystal caverns were use for anyway." As Stain wonders. "Well it was for evil villains that were so evil." As Sunset Shimmer remembers on the tragedy that was inflicted on her during in the human world. "Really." As Stain gets interested. Sunset Shimmer eats some eggs. "Yea it was for this one pony but we don't even know if he lives or not." Stain gets intense. "So he might be still out there." Sunset Shimmer gets worried. "Actually it could be a she. Well we don't even know what the pony looks like or even gender wise either." Princess Snow looks at the ponies. "It is us to find this pony before it's to late." "What would you know anything about the pony?" As Sunset Shimmer glance at Princess Snow. Princess Snow laughs. "Have you ever heard of the pony of shadows?" Sunset Shimmer is unsure. "Only rumors that it was Princess luna shadow." "Wrong that didn't happened at all." As Snow Crystal knew she was there. "Hades, Zeus brother created the pony of shadows and Hades order it to attack the planet. The pony of shadows started out by taking control of Princess Luna to make a solar eclipse and change Princess Luna to a dark alicorn known as Nightmare Moon. As Princess Celestia took the elements of harmony and send her to the moon to fight him in a 1000 year duel it ended up as a draw as Twilight Sparkle use the elements of harmony after 1,000 years when Princess Luna returns and the pony of shadows escaped when Twilight uses the elements of harmony." As Princess Snow tells a story. Sunset Shimmer looks at Princess Snow. "Wait let me get this straight how would you know." "This little diary tells all. I found this in Princess Celestia restricted library in the star swirl the bearded wing." Sunset Shimmer is shocked. "I don't know what is worse bringing the dazzles here to equestria or that." "We must tell Princess Celestia that Princess Luna was frame. "As Princess Snow is confident." Meanwhile in the magic kingdom. "Ok Pinkie it's time to start the meeting." Looks at Princess Twilight. "Ok." Pinkie Pie brings out 18 tea cups Rainbow Dash is confused. "There is only 10 of us why 8 more tea cups?" Pinkie Pie gets excited. "Were having guests." Meanwhile in the Everfree Forest Castle. Discord opens the door to the magic kingdom while Princess Luna and Princess Celestia follows. All three went through the door. Princess Twilight is shocked. "Discord what are you doing here?" Discord speaks very loud. "I call a Summit." Everyone looked at discord. Discord laughs. "Why is everyone looking at me. Oh right then." Discord made 2 more doors and grabbed Princess Cadance and Shining Armour. The other door leads to Canterlot castle. Meanwhile in Canterlot castle. Sunset Shimmer sees a door in the kitchen. Stain screams of terror. Princess Snow runs to the kitchen. Discord laughs. "Why hello I believe this is our first time we met Princess Snow and future Prince Stain if he decides to marry her."Stain gets amazed. "Wow a door that leads to a shortcut to the magic kingdom." "Come on in were having a summit and you're invited." laughs Discord. All three ponies went through the door. "First thing first. I like to show evidence that Princess Luna was frame by using the solar eclipse and turning herself into Nightmare Moon." As Princess Snow looks at the ponies. Book 1 Reborn of the Unknown pony CH 7 The Summit 11 AM Princess Luna is shocked. "Wait I'm sorry you said the shadow pony?" Snow Crystal looks at Princess Luna very serious. "Yes." Princess Luna gets worried. "But he is my boyfriend he wouldn't betray me." Everyone looked at Princess Luna. Princess Twilight is unsure. "Is the pony of shadows really that scary and real?" Apple Jack screamed and so did Rainbow Dash. Apple Jack is worried. "I thought it was just rumor." Rainbow Dash shivers in fear. "I thought it was only Princess Luna's magic that set it off." Princess Snow looks at Rainbow Dash. "No it was the pony of shadows that set it off." Fluttershy hides under the table and thinks. "Pony of shadows I heard rumors but now it's true pony of shadows is real." Pinkie Pie laughs. "Pony of shadows? I thought everyone was frighten of me when I played the piano back at the spooky castle. Is the pony of shadows rumors are true?" Princess Celestia gets very serious. "Yes pony of shadows is real but I never saw him." Discord gets worried. "I may have seen him once with Princess Luna." Silverwing looks at Discord. "Do you know something Discord." Flash Sentry looks at Silverwing. "I think he knows something that he an't telling us." Discord waves the index finger. "Now now now don't blame me I was evil back then. I changed." Princess Twilight looks at Discord. "Where is the pony of shadows Discord." Discord looks at Princess Luna. "Right here in this room." Everyone glared at Discord. Pinkie Pie looking everywhere. "Where is he I don't see him." Rainbow Dash hugs Apple Jack and they both shivered. Princess Snow looks at Discord. "He's trapped in Princess Luna shadow isn't he Discord." Discord laughs. "Wow how did you guess it so easy Princess Snow." Princess Snow is strategies. "I was thinking the obvious." Princess Twilight is unsure. "Well how come he isn't here now?" Discord laughs. "The last thing you did Princess Celestia is that you send him with Princess Luna to battle 1000 with Nightmare Moon you also set Princess Luna free in control." Princess Cadance is shocked. "So Twilight faces the dark terror of Nightmare Moon as first boss fight interesting. Shining Armor looks at Princess Twilight. "My dear Twilight you have tell how you beat Nightmare Moon." Princess Luna looks at Shining Armour. "You know I'm standing right here." Shining Armor coughs. "Sorry forgot you were here." Princess Twilight looks at ponies. "Should we remove him now and get it over." Princess Celestia is coming up with a plan. "Why not we have 5 alicorns, 2 unicorns, 3 pegasus, 5 earth ponies and the king of chaos." Princess Twilight is unsure. "King of chaos?" Princess Celestia looks at Princess Twilight. "Were having a child." Princess Twilight faints. Stain looks at Princess Celestia. "Congratulations I hope it goes well with you." Princess Snow looks at the main 7. "Ok Twilight it is time that the main 7 do the elements of harmony." Discord shouts. "Wait." Princess Twilight looks at Discord. "What is it now Discord." Discord sense danger. "I can't put Princess Celestia in danger." Discord opens a door to the realm of Chaos and walks Princess Celestia and then Discord said. "Oh I forgot to mention I accidentally forgot to tell you guys something." Princess Twilight looks at Discord. "Is it good news." Discord use another door to the Crystal Empire and pulled Shiny Armour and Princess Cadance to that door and closed it. Princess Twilight rolled her eyes. "What is this all about?" Discord tells about the contracts. "Well when I was evil me and Tirek made well a few contracts with a some bounty hunters." Princess Twilight is shocked. "What." "Well they should get here right about now." As Discord walks further to his chaos throne. Glass Breaks down the hallways. Princess Twilight shouts. "Who's the target Discord." "You, Princess Cadance and Princess Snow Crystal." As Discord is really shocked. Princess Snow looks at Discord with a mean look. "How much is my head worth Discord?" Discord laughs. "More than Princess Cadance." Stain is unsure. "Like how so?" Bounty hunter 1 glares at the ponies. "More than a life time of retirement." Bounty hunter 2 laughs. "Surrender or pay the price with your lives." Princess Twilight use the paralyzed magic on all the bounty hunters. Princess Twilight looks at Pinkie Pie. "Pinkie gather these paralyzed bodies and put them in the dungeon." Pinkie Pie smiles. "Can I bring my other self known as Pinkamena Diane Pie Cupcakes." Princess Twilight gets serious. "Tell her she gets the fair share if she finds the information on who hired them. Also make sure you tell her to clean up and take a shower after she's done. You know some of the children is wondering what the stench was last time we did this when she did the changelings. Also tell her to burn the bodies because I don't know if I can build another cemetery." Pinkie Pie laughs. "Ok I'll tell her." Pinkie Pie gets the wheelbarrow and put 10 Bounty hunters and took them to the magic kingdom dungeon then strapped all 10 bounty hunters. Then she went back to grab the last 10 bounty hunters and use the wheel barrow to take them to the dungeon and strapped the other 10. Princess Twilight look at the ponies. "We better get moving things could get ugly here more like screaming." Stain looks at the magic kingdom windows. "Ok where to." Princess Twilight looks back at the castle. "Ok everyone to the castle of Canterlot." All of the ponies went out side. Princess Twilight calls out Discord. Discord appears. Princess Twilight looks at Discord. "Discord take all of us that is in front of you to Canterlot." Discord laughs. "Canterlot it shall be." Everyone went to the door and open it to Canterlot. All ponies went through the door. "Well now that is over let's talk discord." As Princess Twilight looks at him in a serious way. Discord laughs. "It's about the bounty hunters isn't it." Princess Twilight asked a question. "No it's about the pony of shadows."
  18. SolyWack

    Most Actiony episode?

    (Yes actiony is a word because its my topic and i make the rules here(except for the moderators, love you guys)) Warning: Possible spoilers for S5 ep13, look for the ~ to skip spoilers and move onto the actual question that this 1394 and counting character post is asking. So I just watched Do Princesses dream of magic sheep (or however you spell princesses, whatever moving on) and it was FAWESOME. That is f*cking awesome by the by, another real word. The episodes second half was just one big superhero fight scene. The moral delivery at the end was great, with the mane 6's hair flowing in a the wind, with all the leaves and junk flying in the background. It was just so cool! (i mean did you see those gusts, brrrrr) So that got me thinking (I know right? Enough about my thoughts, who cares about those?) that this episode has action to rival A Cantelot Wedding (pt2) and even Twilights Kingdom. Maybe it was in a dream, but thats not what im asking here. They were all very much aware and focused on their surroundings, unlike a regular dream which is kinds fuzzy. So I dont want to talk about the story, or how luna tortures herself, or how those singing flowers can give you nightmares (meta joke). I want to talk about what manly men care about, ACTION (I dont always watch manly shows for action, but when i do, its mlp). ~So which episode do you think had the most action of the ENTIRE series, including movies. Ill even open it up to comics if you can find pictures more actiony than alicorn Big Mac. Not best actiony episode, just most actiony period. (Or full stop for my cultured readers) It can have as much story as Transformers 4, doesn't matter, whichever episode you thought had the most action, id like to see other peoples opinions. (As in, id like to see whose opinions are wrong and whose are right)
  19. Good day, I was inspired to write this after seeing a post questing whether it was the action in an action scene that mattered more or the motives and characters behind the action. I think it’s an interesting topic that has changed over the past few hundred years. There are two secrets to writing at work here. First, people like it when their brains are active, it's an evolutionary trait, and different people generate more brain stimulation from different things. Some people like action more and some people like the metaphorical fights. A good visual example is the Luke/Vader fight in The Empire Strikes Back vs. any light saber fight in the prequel movies. In Empire there is a lot of emotion, motivations, circumstances, there is a personal relationship between the characters and the very basic fighting, with the occasional cool special effect, enhances all that. On the other hand in the prequels everything is excessively choreographed which is visually pleasing but the conflict is usually summed up with me good you bad stahhhhp being bad, I kill you, goodnight Tatooine may the force be with you. The choreography is also counter to potential character growth such as when Qui Gon died and Obi Wan becomes angry and attacks Darth Maul only to suddenly have his rage induced charge turned into a perfectly choreographed dance and he doesn't really face falling to the dark side, there are zero consequences because of how the action was choreographed. How does this translate into writing? Well before I get to that there is one more little secret that works its way into this dilemma. What would the audience like to see? This is actually a deeper question because in the history of writing this has changed. It use to be that people looked to books for things they couldn't get anywhere else; fantastical alien worlds, armies the size of cities, impressive and imaginative fight scenes. These were all things that books gave affordably that nothing else really did. But now we have movies, TV, the internet, video games, and people can get masterful paintings reprinted for an hour or two of work. Not only that but movies, TV, and video game all do action better to the point where what would have been enjoyable before isn't as good anymore simply because, by comparison, the action scenes are less action packed. So when it comes down to it, writing on its own can go either way when comparing action to characterization and plot. But with the modern media available to us that action becomes extremely hard to make worthwhile on its own because people won't respond as strongly to it as it's rather dull by comparison sometimes. On the other hand decent characterization and plot are still as strong as ever and can activate a lot of the brain. Add to that the things that other media does for characterization and plot often pale in comparison to a book equivalent, thus elevating the medium of writing by association which makes it stronger. Now good media can do this as well, it's just rarer. Of course, the one consistent exception to this is for action scenes that aren't portrayed well in the media. The Dresden Files has an amazing magic system. But, it doesn't carry over to visual mediums as well because it's more about outsmarting and putting two and two together than flashy visual displays. It also has a lot of character to it and is first person which also doesn't translate over to visual mediums as well. So if you are trying to decide to focus on action or the motives/characterization in an action scene I say go characterization except when the action is more unique and thought provoking than you would normally see in other mediums. Do be careful about reader fatigue when writing action, however, because it can get to the point where the reader doesn’t care and can’t keep track of it in their heads. Have a good day. If you found this informative, and think others might as well, please share it. -Piquo P.S. If you found this helpful, follow me on FIMFiction.
  20. If you find this useful, check out my Fimfiction Profile. A bold title, yes, but not an untrue one. You see, I’ve been working on a number of writing projects and one of them is an actual book to be published. Because of this I’ve been doing a number of things that are new to me and I came to a realization; I can research how to write all I want, and I can practice trying to be the best I can, but you learn stuff differently when, on purpose, you do something wrong. Let’s start with the story of how I came to this realization. One of the things authors need to do for their book, that was new to me, is to prepare a pitch for the story. A pitch is used to sell the book to a publisher or agent and is a lot like the paragraph on a back of the book designed to sell it but it is slightly different. Usually an author needs to prepare a short pitch, a medium length pitch, and a long pitch. The short pitch is the most important because that’s what will get you in the door and it can sell the book completely if done perfectly. I needed this so that if I run across someone who wants to hear about my book I can explain it in an interesting, concise, fashion like a knowledgeable professional. Now, I’ve never been good at selling myself or things I’m involved with. I’m even terrible at convincing people to try a movie when in a group and have had people recite, word for word, what I have said to successfully convince people of things. Thus, pitching my story really worried me because even on the rare occasion where I’ve done “everything right” it still hasn’t always worked for me. So, a few weeks ago, I started really learning about pitching a story. I’d listened to several podcasts and read a dozen or so articles on pitching. Thus, when it came to write it, I was feeling confident that I knew what needed to be done. However I could not get it right. The short pitch was too long, it had way too much info, and/or the pitches generally had everything wrong with it that you could have at one point or another. I just couldn’t condense all that I had learned into a single concise pitch that worked. I decided to do the opposite. I wrote out a really long, overly complex, and confusing pitch just to get it out there. I had this idea because I did something similar when trying to find my voice for the novel. I was originally trying to go for a medium length pitch but decided to screw it and see if doing it wrong would get it out of my system, possibly even produce a rough gem that I could improve upon. The crazy thing was, when I was done I was able to go back and actually do a much improved pitch. It was a few words long, maybe a tad to much info, but it was close to being focused and concise and, most importantly, interesting. In fact I just went back and tried again and was able to, I think, nail it. I was able to do this only because I had purposely done it wrong the first time. By doing so I was able to get all the information I wanted out there, analyze it, make some of the cuts and refocus some of the wording and really grasp what not to do. The real key, however, was that I saw the bad. It reinforced to me what not to do so that when I sat down I instinctively shied away from many of the issues I had had. Note how I even changed the focus of the pitch from the characters to the world. I did this realizing that everything in the story really revolves around a deep interesting world. While I love my characters and the plot, it’s the world that really ties everything together and makes it interesting. Continuing on I went on to do a pitch that I liked a lot better. It leaves the person who reads it wanting more and asking questions, it speaks to the intertwining effect the setting has on the characters and the problem, and it lists the selling points in my book (character and world) by framing them in the context of this particular story and the challenge faced. After realizing how doing it wrong helped me do it correctly, I thought back on some other times I’ve done this. When having trouble explaining a section of a story I sat down and wrote a thousand words in a uninteresting extra telly 3rd person fashion. But afterwards I was able to rewrite it in an interesting first person fashion that was only about 450 words. In fact, my very first fic (never published) started with 3 pages of boring tell. But when I sat down to re-write the beginning it flowed easily, ended up being smooth, and had a lot of character and charm, all condensed into a page and a half that was almost all dialogue so it effectively cut my word count by two thirds while still feeling like a lot. Now, this is different than the tool of simply sitting down to write and warm up/wait for something good to start flowing. I purposely did something that I know was bad and analyzed it to find the good/identify what I really wanted to say and I have a theory for why this works. Doing and seeing things wrong also hit home the lessons I had been learning. It was one thing to see bad examples, but it was another to make them. But, by doing it on purpose it didn’t get me down, I wasn’t frustrated, and it didn’t discourage me in the least. If anything it encouraged me because I was already way above the bad pitch even though I wasn’t satisfied. Now, there is a reason I think learning this way helped. You see, words are all conceptual, there is nothing physical about them, so practicing something with words is a bit different from practicing something physical like trying a special knot. If the knot is wrong you can simply follow the rope back to see that a lope is simply missing because you forgot a step. With words it’s different because you aren’t writing a single word. You are writing a word that coalesces from one general concept, like a chair, and relating that word with many others to form a weave of interconnecting concepts to make something more substantial, a creaky chair that a woman is pulling out to sit on and rest her weary bones. Beyond that sentences are formed into paragraphs, and paragraphs are only a section of an even larger whole. Now, in relation to a whole 30,000 word long short-story missing a simple comma isn’t all that big of a deal. Missing every comma, however, would be noticeable. This is because a simple mistake will often get edited automatically in our head before the concept as a whole is messed up. Don’t believe me? I would remind you that when we speak we have a lot of hmms, huhs, and ums. We don’t like to see it written that way because it’s wrong, but it’s also undesirable in speech. In speech we just overlook a single um or huh in regards to carrying on listening to many other words and nonverbal cues. But if you say um a lot it stands out and bothers us. Writing is much the same way only for it’s own special set of circumstances. In both cases, speaking or writing, the more there is the harder it is to pull out a single mistake. So when you sit down to identify the problems with a character, it might be one little thing, or a collection of smaller things, and the problem might not even consistently be there. Thus when we try to find a problem that’s there we can often overlook it even as we know something is wrong. We are looking at the whole concept, sometimes the plot for an entire story, and one little part is off but we can’t see it. But if everything is wrong, if we are seeing issues all over the place, we can’t just fit it in and auto fix it nice and neatly. Thus, it helps identify the issue by changing the filter in our minds. The good can also really stand out which can help us change the focus. By comparison, if we go to the original knot comparison it’s easy to find the problem if you simply follow the rope to see that you zigged when you should have zagged. I have found this tool of doing things wrong on purpose incredibly helpful without even realizing I was doing it. As a result I figured it was something others might like to try so I have come up with a list of situations/reasons writing something wrong can help. I say situations because when I think about it each things that I tried to fix took a slightly different approach. 1) Voice: Sometimes the story you are trying to tell isn’t coming out right and just sounds wrong. Rather than constantly fighting it specifically try to write in a boring fashion. Then, instead of trying to figure out what’s wrong try to find what’s working. There is a good chance that if you can find something about your purposely boring words then you should focus on that because it’s coming naturally. A lot of people don’t realize what’s actually good about their work until people tell them. This is a way to do that yourself without relying on the input of others. The downside is that you might still have to try a few different things. Maybe once in 1st person and once in 3rd, or perhaps you should switch between past and present tense on tries. These are normal things to try if your voice doesn’t sound right so this practice can feel repetitive. But if trying those things didn’t work the first time you might find it helpful to try again and to do it wrong on purpose. 2) Something is wrong with a character: Your character not interesting, find their dialogue dull. Great, do in on purpose. Write a scene unrelated to your story but with the character. Now, there are two ways to do this that I feel work the best. The first is to add in some other character that you are familiar with from a different IP and have them talk. The second is to have the character you need help with make an impassioned speech about something to a version of himself that is completely boring and frustrating. The other option is to write out a bio specifically highlighting what is bad. You should be able to identify the interesting bits in any of those example which you add in on accident. The second suggestion there is a bit more specific but the contrast could help a lot of people, it’s another tool but one that could work well when combined. The third I haven’t tried but I would think it would help much like the next situation I’ll list. 3) Problems with your plot: Sometimes I’ve had problems with my plot. I wish I had thought of this a long time ago but simply listing the plot in a giant paragraph and go back and try to edit it can really help. This is the wrong way to plot a story but it can highlight a lot of issues. Maybe you’re characters have to much drama, maybe there are a few too many side plots, maybe something needs to be moved around, maybe you have too little going on, perhaps you need to add a try/fail cycle, or maybe some of your plots just aren’t that interesting. Putting you plot down in the order it happens can really help you see how chaotic a story is, and while many good stories are actually pretty crazy when you put it down like that it can help some issues jump out at you and help you identify the plots that you are most motivated to write. 4) Action/Fight scenes: Action and fight scenes can be really hard to do well for a lot of people. If this is the case for you write out the scene purposefully being bad. It’s all action, no thoughts or pauses, just straight action. My gosh it will get boring fast, hopefully boring enough that you will learn a thing or two about what really needs to go into a fight scene and what needs to stay out. Then, compare it to what you had been writing, any similarities? If so take them out or change them until it looks totally different. Make some actions quick, others take a while, add in a pause, maybe even some slight tangents. Add emotions like frustration or disgust. The trick is to always change it in a different fashion. While you generally want somethings to be the same going from all identical to all unique will help you identify where you want to be and get some good creativity flowing for how to write something properly. 5) Summaries: Whether you are writing a synopsis for a fanfic, quickly describing a story to someone, or writing a short pitch for an actual book, authors generally have to summarize their story a few times and doing so can be a challenge. If you are struggling do it poorly, line it out without being a draw on purpose. But then go back and identify any little thing that is interesting and use that as a starting off point. Well, that’s it for my list and this topic. I am sure there are other ways to use this tool but it is still new to me. I am sure there are more ways to use it, so if you're stuck try with something not listed above try to create a failed version and learn from it in some way. It might require a bit of extra work to really get the most out of it but in the end if it works, and you learn something about your strengths and weaknesses, then it’s a winner in my book.
  21. Alan Crytex

    [PMV] On Our Way To Heaven

    Hey! I just released a new PMV called "On Our Way To Heaven" It was a submission for BronyCon PMV Contest and I got 4th place for it! ^^ Enjoy! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hq1W8GdAito
  22. DrawingSign

    Mlp modded adventure map

    This adventure map is going to be huge, massive world filled with characters, bosses and more. The first thing I built was the Elemental room, with all six elements of harmony and a mysterious white element at the end of the room. The 7th is revealed when 6 come together with 1 other...
  23. I think this topic is an interesting topic to post, Its fascinating how our bodys subconscious, inadvertent reaction to verbal stimuli, can portray our feelings or emotions. What if any are your thought on this subject, do you catch, or notice the body language others give off, and what has it told you of others in, and throughout your life.
  24. It bothers me how so many of the female characters in action movies and stuff are like the same. The character is a attractive young adult, usually white woman, but the appearance isn't what really bugs me. It's the personality. They are often insensitive, confident, bold, "bad", flirty, athletic, "cool", etc, and act uninterested but fall in love with lead male. It's tiring. Where are the awkward, nerdy girls? Where's the emotional, artsy, unconfident girl who works to gain confidence? Where's the strategic girl who hates battle and tries to find better, more clever ways? Anyone else feel similarly about it?
  25. The Crimson Cross

    Let me tell you a story:

    One day there was a guy named Gregory, but most people called him Greg. He also went by G-meister, G-dawg, and justin. On this fateful day, he was attempting the 100-warheads challenge when suddenly a genie appeared. "I will grant you 3 wishes!" He announced. Greg could not believe his eyes. Was this the effect of him losing his mind? The world may never know. He appeared in a land of ponies. Greg ate the grass and pretended to moo. It was as graceful as a hippopotamus on heat. Greg took off his pants and ran into the wilderness. He was never seen again! :grin2: ~Fin.