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don't write many fanfictions that often, but here is my latest and first fanfic. I hope you guys enjoy! (P.S: if link doesn't work, try typing in Almond Blackberry into wattpad, and you may find me) http://w.tt/1L2u3jq.

Here's the story of my OC Mystic Dusk (picture of him is my profile picture): When he was a little filly, he didn't know what was happening around him. His big sister Luna was just casting spells and Mystic Corona (Dusk) was a troublemaker. One night Luna was casting spells, untill she noticed a little part of the book. It was full of "moon magic" as Corona called it, when Luna invited Corona to see the spells. Corona didn't care that much, since he didn't even know any spells. She casted some of the spells like the one that made the moon disappear, and the one that made it wider. Then Corona went to sleep to his room because he was tired. Luna was kind of disappointed of what the moon spells did. They did not impress her a little. Then she saw a spell, a spell that promised a "full year of darkness". I didn't know she was evil in any way at that time. The "full year of darkness" spell required an innocent soul sent to the moon. Luna casted the spell, not knowing that it accutally affected one of the relatives of the caster. After she casted the spell, she read that the spell affects on the next dusk. Then Luna went to bed and slept till morning. Luna and Corona (Dusk) woke up, and it was going to be a bright day... Well the last day of this year at least. Corona and Luna went outside to fly a kite. Luna wanted to race with Corona, but he wasn't an alicorn. "Why can't I be an alicorn aswell Luna?" Corona asked. "You were born as an unicorn, there's nothing to do about it... Well there is one or two ways to make you an alicorn, but let's not discuss it now" Luna answered. It was getting dark, so it was a good time to play hide and seek. "Rock, paper, scissors, rock, paper, scissors... Luna, you lost, so you seek first". Corona hid behind a rock, and Luna went seeking. Luna was searching for Corona everywhere, and she couldn't find him. She tried to scream "Game over, come out wherever you are", but no answer. She searched behind a tree, she searched behind a rock, she couldn't find him. She totally lost her brother, so she had to go tell to her parents. She ran inside their home and told her parents what happened. They all went searching for Corona, but nothing was found. Then Luna remembered the spell she casted. "Oh no.. Could it be.....COULD IT SERIOUSLY BE?!?!) Luna told about the spell to her parents, and her parents went nuts. "ARE YOU SERIOUS NOW YOUNG LADY? YOU ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR OUR BOY TO BE STUCK ON THE MOON??? YOU ARE GROUNDED IN YOUR ROOM FOR 3 YEARS, HOMESCHOOLED AND WE PUT A HOLE ON YOUR DOOR TO GIVE YOU FOOD AND DRINK, ALL THAT TIME TRYING TO GET YOUR BROTHER BACK!". She went crying to her room. She was trying to figure out how can her brother get food or drink or breathe on the moon. She had lots of time to figure it out though, so she started now. Corona was very confused for suddenly warping on the moon, he thought it was a dream at first. He had no hard feelings at that age, so he just explored the moon like he would normally do. He walked, walked and walked, and he didn't find anything. Then he walked more and something didn't let him walk more. So he turned around and walked again, untill he hit a weird invisible wall again. He switched directions, but every corner would just block him from continuing walking. Then he realised that it might be a big ball (sphere) around him. He started crying, because he wanted to get out of the ball. He tried to do something with his horn, but he didn't know any spells. He was trying to think of an explanation of what happened for hours, then he was getting hungry. To his suprise, he got what he needed. He got a plate full of food. Then after eating, he was getting thirsty. Then suddenly a glass of water appeared in front of him. When he was done eating and drinking, the plate and the glass disappeared. Then he was tired... Well you already get the idea... After couple of days, Corona was getting bored of the same habits. He wanted someone to play with, someone to chat with, and someone who would love, like parents would. Believe it or not, he wanted to get education. He accutally wanted to learn new spells and all that boring school stuff, because he thought those things might help him get out, and get back to Equestria, where his family is. So his wishes came true, suddenly a classroom appeared in front of him. There was no pupils, just him and the teacher. After months and months of studying he became more educated, and even grew up a little. He was reading through schoolbooks, but couldn't find anything regarding of a way out of the "ball", or the moon in general. Then he had an idea! He wished for a rocket! But for some reason, the wish didn't become granted. He tried to wish for anything that could fly, but nothing worked. He wished for a library to read more advanced magic books, then suddenly a library appeared in front of him. He scrolled through flying magic books, untill he saw an "Alicorn" spell. The spell wasn't easy to cast though. He tried the spell for days and days, it didn't work. But then he looked a little closer to the text and he saw that he had ignored a step. So he tried to do it perfectly this time, and it worked! He was SUPER happy for finally getting the spell to work! He immidietly tried to fly, but he fell because he didn't accutally know how to fly yet. He wished for a flying school, and he got it. He trained for days just to get his hooves off the ground. After he did, he trained flying through obstacles, and raced the teacher. The funny thing was that these ponies I wished to appear, they don't talk at all. They have pale faces and they just do what they should do. But when I finally learned how to fly, the flying school disappeared and I flied like a storm to the top to get back to the earth. Suddenly I hear a whisper in my ear: "You passed the test which the caster of this spell never believed you would pass". Corona: "Wait, the CASTER? Do you mean someone got me here IN PURPOSE??"...no answer. Corona flied back to the earth super fast. In Equestria, he flied back to his home. His face was fire red, when he saw his sister. "I KNOW MOM AND DAD WOULD NEVER WARP AND TRAP ME ON THE MOON!!!" He screamed. "I...i...I'm sorry" she answered. Corona flied away.... Far away. He's out there somewhere, no one just knows where. He might be hidden somewhere deep in the woods, or just out of sight of other ponies. After days were gone, Luna wanted to make a memorial event. Luna: "In memory of Mystic Corona: ~The mystical dusk that took my brother away, may from this day be his official name~" <THE END> @Mystic_Dusk all rights reserved

All I can remember Is my name. And its not a very good one. I mean for me. It's Treble Trouble. That last part has me worried. I don't know why the trouble in the last part of that but oh well. I open my eyes to a scary looking forest. There is only dark things in sight. No vegetation ether. Just branches. I slowly get on to my hooves. I look behind me and see a frighting sight. I have wings! And the scary part is I know that I have a horn. But that's impossible. Only Luna can make pones alicorns. Or maybe its was Celestia. One of the two. The names are getting mixed up. But at least I can get names at all with my memories like this. I kept looking down at myself until I noticed my body figure. Its was a body of a pegasus not an alicorn. Then the bad thoughts came. I bet every one will hate you once they know. That your an alicorn. But I'm not. That's right you not even supposed to be in this world or any other for that matter. The ponies will laugh at you. And point hooves and stare. I know I'm not a confident person. This was making rethink things. What if that did happened? I haven't moved since I woke up. But the tummy growls got to me so I stated to walk in search for food. A half an hour later with no luck. I was still thinking of how other pones would treat me if they saw me. I knew I'd had to hide my wings. But there is nothing to cover them with. At that thought I searched wildly for some thing. I saw a flash of green while turning my head quickly. I wiped back around to see a large green leaf on the ground. "That's too weird. To find a giant leaf in the middle of a no pony land." I said out loud to my self. But I still went for it. I quickly and quietly rushed toward to leaf and raped it around my mid section. " Well no booby traps at lest." Again to my self. " Now for some much needed rest." I said with a yawn. And l rested right were I found the leaf. Well this is my first post on this web cite and I really liked talking about my own pony. You can also can find me on Deviant Art as 1234bronie Please comment if you liked this I'm new to this site and need to know if you guys like what I write. Please also tell me if you want more of Trebles story.

Hi everybody! This is one of my first pony fanfictions, so I really want some criticism to improve my skill and to help my writing in general. Feel free to critique the story, the writing, grammar, etc. It will improve my skills as a writer. Because I may use this as an entry, I will only give out my introduction only. That way, if you're interested you can read it when I publish (if I publish...) The genre is Slice of Life/Drama, and is placed in a modern day Canterlot school- the Royal Institute of Canterlot- shortly after the events of Rainbow Rocks. It is a story about a colt meeting a mare who is much different than what she looks like, and eventually begins a friendship, and quite possibly a romance. I keep reminding myself to never judge a book by its cover, but with some, I just can't help myself. Everybody knows that a book's cover is what pulls people in. But, covers can be extremely misleading. Not all covers, for example, the Magical Faraway Tree, is all about a magic tree. Alice in Marveland is about a blonde pony going to a marvellous land. But, there are occasionally those book covers that very misleading, and have nothing to do with the book. To Kill a Hummingbird wasn't about killing Hummingbirds, Moby Dick wasn't about mobies or- erm, continuing on. But more importantly, Falling Skies is not an insane psychopath most of the time. She is much more that what people say, and what she believes. Not that I blame people for thinking that she is a psychopath. But even so, it what makes us ponies. We doubt weird, old colt. We tend to keep a cute, young filly safe. It's just instinct. Doubt makes us pony; without doubt, there's no belief. There's a fine line between belief and doubt. You can believe something, and doubt it's existence at the same time. Ghosts, spirits, whatever, it's something that people can believe but at the same time doubt. You want to doubt it's existence, but at the same time, with something supernatural comes up, you start to believe it. This can apply to anything. If a lie is a believable lie, it can become a truth. Ah, I'm getting off topic. What I'm trying to say is that when you meet somebody for the first time, don't immediately assume that they're personality is close to their cutie mark, or their appearance or colour, or even their name. This is the story of a group of mare that are close and dear to my heart. All stories must start somewhere, so let's start at the very beginning.

my own choices of what the symbols mean ( ) = thoughts * = Picking up things or moving " = someone else ' = meaning the main charecter is speaking. nothing = someone talking as in example . she wakes up one morning , = when the first sentence is changed but still connected as in example. she walked to the bar, sat on the chair and drank her problems away. a day like any other Silly is outside soaking up the sun 'i hope staying out here is good enough since mum keeps on Nagging me to go outside!' *she sits on the floor playing with the grass* "SILLY~ HONEY~ its time to come back inside!" her mother calls for her 'alright mum!' *silly gets up from the warm soft grass and trot's off back home* *she pushes her hoof to the door. she trotted inside and turned her head to her mother* and there standing a yellow pegasus her mother began speaking. "silly i have something to tell you..it'll be hard to say but..." *the yellow pegasus steps forward* "this is your twin sister..her name is fluttershy" 'w-WHAT! i had a twin and you NEVER TOLD ME!' the yellow Pegasus flitches and ran behind her mother "i'm sorry sweetie! but we could't look after two children! we had to send her off to live with her aunt!" shocked silly ran outside and off to her favourite place, where the cherry blossoms fall. 'i can't believe she never told me...all this time and..and...' the yellow pegasus fluttershy from before has been following silly, wanting to speak to her "silly! sillyshy!" fluttershy called, 'what!' *fluttershy trotted up the hill to the cherry tree slowly and was in front of silly* "i know your upset but i want to get to know you better...please lets talk.." 'fine...what do u want to know..SISTER..' *fluttershy stared at her..eyeing her sister* "well..how old are you?" *she smiled* '14 and i'll be 15 this year so what?' *fluttershy stares at Sillys blank flank* "hang on.. should't you have gotten y-" she was cut off by silly's outburst 'MY WHAT my cutiemark!? i know i know! i should have it but i don't!' silly began to cry tears forming from her eyes *her hooves cover her face in an attempt to hide her saddness* *fluttershy comes over to silly comforting her in a warm hug* "shh its okay, not everyone gets their cutimark. why don't you stay with me for a few days get to know eachother and i'll also help you discover your special talent" fluttershy smiles 'y-you mean it? *sniff sniff*' "yeah" few MOMENTS LATER fluttershy turns to her twin "now before you come inside there is a creature we call Discord, now he is off..some odd sorts but please be kind to him and don't be afraid" *silly tilts her head in confusion* *fluttershy pushes her hoof to the door* revealing a bunch of animals and a big snake like creature with a pony head "this is discord" fluttershy announced 'GASP' *hoofs covering her mouth and wide eyed* "oh, please don't be afraid he's actually a real gentlecolt" Discord looked at fluttershy and then silly "well" he said "theres now two fluttershy's you MULTIPLIED! except one is younger and cuter" "discord" fluttershy bagan "this is my twin sister, her name is silly shy aka SillyShy" fluttershy was interrupted by silly saying 'or well known as SilS, as a nickname' *a big grin formed on her face* Discord walked over to her and said "awwh so cute!" he began pinching her pony cheeks ( she's so cute! cuter than fluttershy! well maybe its the mane but flutter's has an adorable sister! i hope we get along! cute things are just to DIE for) 'd-discord ouch ouch ouch! it hurts!' *Discord let go of her cheek* "oh sorry i just was entranced in those adorable sea blue eyes" fluttershy was getting annoyed, she knew discord flirted with mares because he was lonely but this is her twin and fluttershy is not letting him manipulate her "discord" she said calmly "can we talk in private" Discord gave a look at her than silly and then he shrugged "alright" *walking into another room* Fluttershy said "discord this is my TWIN sister i know she's the cute and all but honestly please don't flirt with her she's only here to get to know me and to find her special talent" Discord was shocked and said "flirting? why would i ever?! *looking hurt* i was just making socialising! and i'm like a thousand or hundred years old...i lost count but anyways i know she's too young for me, a mare about 20 or 30yrs would be okay in my "date discord" selection" Continues later

Sweetheart’s backstory She is a half unicorn, half earth pony. Her mother lived in a village with other earth ponies harvesting crops. Her father was a unicorn whom was a well-established figure and knowledgeable librarian in a town of unicorns. One day the two ponies met in the market place as items were exchanged. Their eyes meet across a crowd they couldn’t help but to take interest in each other, it was a sense that they knew each other already. They walked through the crowd and hid in the unicorns empty libabry.it was love they had seen in each other’s eyes that day; they wanted to live together forever. However their love was forbidden as they were an earth pony and a unicorn. The earth pony realised after a few months of being secretly together, that she was pregnant with a foal. They didn’t know whether the foal was going to be a earth pony or unicorn so they moved to the outskirts of the earth pony village; so their unborn foal could be raised comfortable; when sweetheart was born it was discovered that she was a unicorn. Sweetheart was named so as when she was a tiny foal she was always gentle and caring. She was given a plush pony as her new-born toy and she would cuddle it gently and would never drop it always making sure it was with her. Being a unicorn she wasn’t allowed to go to the village, instead she would be out in her parent’s apple orchard playing and being with her father. He tried to teach her magic spell but Sweetheart had always found it more difficult. (Not typical of a unicorn of her age) She would spend many days playing hide and seek with her father. She loved counting stars at night and running around. As Sweetheart got older she became a great apple-bucker however she magic was still delayed and was weak. She wanted to meet other ponies so badly but she knew how the earth ponies would react. She was half earth pony, half unicorn and others would be sickened by her. One day however went she was a teenager; she left her home to see other ponies in the village. The earth ponies didn’t speak to her; a pony by the name of Rose Petals even said she was a freak of nature and a crowd corralled of angry earth ponies enclosed her. They were ashamed of her presence. “Go lived with your own kind”. “Why don’t you go and take your useless magic with you”. Sweetheart began crying unable to move until a flash of red light. It was her magic overpowering her; she began rampaging out of control. Her mother saw her and tried to comfort her. It didn’t work. It wasn’t until she ran out of energy did she stop. She was carried home by her mother and father as she fell unconscious. After the incident Sweetheart changed; she became angrier and impatient with others unless they proved them genuineness to her. She tried so hard to trust others again but she felt that ponies would always judge her if they found out her secret (her being half earth pony, half unicorn). One day she sees Moonstar Cocoa in her orchard and she panics; Moonstar convinces Sweetheart to come with her and Dusty to a life where she can be herself and learn about the world as they find Dusty’s destiny and to build a new life where as races can life together in harmony. Adventures begin soon…. also the story of how she got her cutie mark will be revealed soon ......

I know I've posted about this before but I'll give it another shot: Would anypony be interested in having their OC (meaning an original character they've designed to represent them in Equestria) or an OC in general (a "non-you OC") becoming a citizen of Dark Hollow? Dark Hollow is a town across the Everfree Forest from Ponyville somewhere between Rambling Rock Ridge and Hollow Shades and is the town where a fan-fiction called The Dark Side of Harmony ("The DSoH" for short) takes place. The purpose of The DSoH is to express the balance of life, meaning; without sadness, happiness would mean nothing. Without calamity, the slightest amount of trouble would completely destroy us. So on and so forth. If anypony is interested in having a/their OC gain citizenship to Dark Hollow: Email me at: doxus663@hotmail.com HMU on Facebook at: http://www.facebook.com/Greymark.EoD WE HAVE JUST ONE RULE: NO ALICORN OCs (UNLESS YOU'RE ROYALTY IN REAL LIFE!)!

I've posted pictures of these characters before, but I am just now posting the story. The Children of Harmony Book 1. Co-written by Chikorita Brony [http://mlpforums.com/user/4053-chikoritabrony/]who is in fact my brother....plot twist. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10544483/1/The-Children-of-Harmony-Book-1 OR http://www.fimfiction.net/story/204321/the-children-of-harmony-book-1 Or I suppose Deviantart works too but there you go. Summary When Twilight adopts a troubled unicorn, Moonless Night, after seeing herself in him, she believes that she may be filling the role that Celestia played in her life. What she finds though is that no matter how far you go in life, there will always be new lessons to learn- and new friends to make. Moonless Night just wants to prove to everypony that he isn't evil in spite of the uncanny tendency of almost everyone to be afraid of him. When he comes to Ponyville though, he finds answers to his dilemma that he didn't expect through his new friends. Patchwork, daugter of Rainbowdash and the fastest (and most uncertain) flyer in the little flyers circuit, Persnickety Pants II, son of Rarity and aspiring adventurer, Rhubarb "Ruby" Pie, daughter of Pinkie Pie, delightful eccentric and connoisseur of edibles, Newton, son of Applejack and definitely not boring thank you very much, and Honeycrip, daughter of Fluttershy who just wants to fly... now if only she had wings . With this hodgepodge of loyal ponies beside him, perhaps he might have a destiny of goodness in store for him afterall.

Heeellloo!!! I'm new to The MLP forums and decided to post my fanfiction, RUN. Description: And what are the odds that I would fall again, to a world that's not my own? And what are the odds that through it all, again, I could find myself alone? Jackal is a normal unicorn in Ponyville. Well, until she realizes that she has the power to go into other dimensions. But she has no control over it. She basically falls into them. So now she's running. And you can't hold me down! I'll watch the stars come out! Above this breaking ground, I'm holding on, for now! I'm holding on, for now... Song that inspired me to write this I recommend listening to it while reading: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAvonbFAKvQ RUN Chapter One September 20 My name is Jackal. I'm a normal unicorn in Ponyville. I guess you want a description of what I look like? Ok, fine. I'm dark blue. I have minty green eyes. My mane and tail are black and white. My cutie mark is a black cross thing with a circle around it. Not sure what it means. There. Is that what you want? What? More description? No. Anyways, my life is pretty normal. I just started going to Ponyville High. But there's one thing that isn't normal about me. My cutie mark. Nopony, including me, knows what it means. I tried Googling it and everything, but I didn't find the information I needed. Sometimes ponies make funof me for it, but not often. I guess I'll figure it out someday. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- My alarm clock went off at 6:30 this morning, as usual. I rummaged through my dresser for something to wear. I settled for a small blue bracelet. I swung open my door and trotted downstairs. When I walked into the kitchen, Mom was making breakfast. She was making apple fritters! No wonder, It was my first day of school at Ponyville High. I sat down at the table and waited for Mom to finish. Finally, Mom finished cooking. She placed the fritters on the plate, gave us each a plate, and sat down. I gratefully grabbed a fritter off the plate and put it on mine. I wolfed it down in less than 5 minutes. "Wow! You really were hungry!" Mom said. I smiled. "Yep." Mom looked at the clock. "Better get your saddle bag ready. The bus will come soon." I nodded. "OK." I trotted into the guest room and picked up my saddle bag. I placed it on my back and walked back into the kitchen. "Ready." The bus came a few minutes later. I nodded a "Bye." to my Mom and galloped out the door. I made it on the bus just in time. I was the second to last stop. Next up was Diamond Tiara's. I groaned. I hated dealing with her. I plopped into a seat in the front, since the back was "reserved for Cool and Popular Kids Only." When we made it to Diamond Tiara's stop, I tried hiding my face in my book so she didn't see me watching. When Diamond Tiara strode in, I stuffed my face so deep in my book I think that I broke my muzzle. Silver Spoon left Diamond Tiara long ago in Elementary School to be her own Pony, so Diamond Tiara was the most popular, mean and annoying pony in School. Unfortunately, Diamond Tiara saw me and snickered. Instead of what I had expected, she just muttered "Dork" under her breath. I didn't stop holding my breath until Diamond Tiara got to the back. I took my face out of my book and read normally. I trotted into the halls of PonyVille High. It was HUGE! Ponies roamed the halls in large streams. A few classrooms where in between large walls of lockers. Not to mention the size of the lockers. I took the piece of paper with my locker number and combination out of my saddle bag. I levitated it with my magic and slowly walked to my locker as I counted the numbers. 123,127, 234, AHA! 134. I put the slip of paper back into my saddle bag and started to do my combination. The locker swung open fast and the edge hit my head. "OOOWWW!!" I yelped as I fell backwards. "Woah there!" I heard a voice say behind me. I froze. I had landed on somepony. After I got back on my hooves and shook my head to clear my massive headache, I saw a stallion in front of me. His fur was a brilliant golden color, his mane sleek and black. HIs tail made a cute curve at the edge and shone like his mane. His violet gaze met mine. "I-I am so sorry!" I sputtered. "No problem." He said shrugging it off. I just stood there looking at him and blushing profusely for a while. Then he finally gave one last smile and a shrug and trotted off. I quickly turned back to my locker. My heart was racing. I was pretty sure that I had a crush. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Later that day at lunch, I met up with my friends Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Silver Spoon. If you're wondering, SIlver Spoon is our friend now because she broke up with Diamond Tiara and became a lot nicer. Anyways, Scootaloo told me that she saw me and that stallion in the hallway. I blushed. "You totally have a crush on him, Jacky!" "No I don't, Scootaloo! It was just, sudden, that's all. And I was stunned from I don't know, getting hit in the head from a locker!" "Yeah sure." I rolled my eyes. Sometimes, my friends could be annoying. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- After school, I waited at the front of the school for my bus. Once it came, I climbed on and plopped into my usual spot in the front next to Sweetie Belle. When Diamond Tiara passed, it was the same as this morning. Weird, I thought. ----------------------------------------------- When I got home, Mom was still at work and had left a note on the fridge. Dear Jacky, It read. I I have an emergency meeting at work and won't be home until late. You can take some apples or a sandwich from the fridge for dinner. I'll be home. Love, Mom I sighed and grabbed an apple from the fridge for a snack. I trotted up to my room and sat down on my bed. I read until I had to do my homework. Then I went to bed. ------------------------------------------------------ I didn't think I was tired, but eventually, my eyelids grew heavy and I fell into a deep sleep. I woke up in a dark room. I was standing on some sort of conference table, tied up.. Dark shapes of ponies surrounded me. I looked down. Lying down and in front of me was my mom. A cut had been made in her forehead. Blood trickled down her face and onto her muzzle. I tried to scream, but a gag stopped me from talking. "We've been waiting for you." One of the dark shapes said in a gravelly voice. It was a stallion. In fact, all of the shapes were stallions. The glistening shape of a knife was in one of their mouths. The all inched toward me. My eyes widened in terror. Suddenly, the floor fell below me. I screamed. I was now free of the gag and was no longer tied up. I fell on a black rocky substance. I opened my eyes, but all I could see was darkness. Suddenly, a bright flash of light hit my mint green eyes. The last I saw was a black cross with sharpened edges and dotted circles in and around it. My cutie mark. RUN Chapter Two I woke with a start. I screamed uncontrollably. I put my hooves over my mouth. It wasn't real. It was just a dream. I thought. "Jacky?" I heard my mom's voice say from downstairs. "Are you okay?" "Mom!" I cried. I trotted downstairs. I ran to her. She was wearing her apron and was already cooking breakfast. Her black muzzle was caked in flour. Her bright yellow mane was messy. The bags underneath her sky blue eyes were heavy with sleep. A gave her a hard hug. "Well, you seem happy to see me!" She mused. I released my grip. "Sorry, Mom. I just had a crazy dream about you." "Huh." Mom said. "I just had a crazy dream about YOU." "Weird." I stated. I looked up at Mom's face. To my surprise, she had parted her mane that the left side of her messy yellow mane covered the left side of the face. I shakily raised my hoof and lifted the left side of her mane. I gasped. There was a small slit of a scar underneath the mangy, dirt covered hair. "M-Mom, where did you get this?!" I sputtered. I could barely breathe. This was exactly where the cut was in my dream. My mom stepped back and brushed her mane back over her face. "Oh, that? It's nothing. I just... hit my head, that's all." She forced a smile. "Mom, that's really deep. And that's not a bruise. That's a scar." I stuttered. "I hit it on a table, and the edge was sharp. Please just be quiet ok?!" She snapped. But then she saw the hurt expression on my face and the softness returned to her eyes. "I'm sorry, honey. I just didn't want you to be worried. Now, please just wait at the table for breakfast." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I need some professional help! I need somepony(or group) who would like to do an animation for my book, The Song of Our Tomb. If you don't know what it's about, here's it in a nutshell: ((This fanfiction starts with The Children of the Night)) Many decades ago, a Chaotic Beast assaulted Equestria. The Celestial Sisters had found an ancient device to defeat the Chaotic tyrant known as Discord-but it left the Kingdom in a weak state. The Younger Sister, feeling the weight of each ponies as their Kingdom struggle each day, proposed a new idea-she would create a Glorious Kingdom where she and those that loved the night could rule it. But the Older Sister objected, for she would fear that it would tear the Kingdom apart. She and her guard kept a secret,but watchful, eye on the Younger Sister. But the Younger Sister, mad with grief, launched her plan in Secrecy. One Fateful Night, the Younger Sister sent a message across the land(by Moonlight) to ask of those who favored the night to walk into the Moonlight. Across the land, many fillies and colts (mainly orphans) woke up because of the Moonlight, and were lifted to the Sky. They were taken to the Younger Sister, who then claimed the “Lost Ones” as her new “Children of my Night.” She told them about her plan, and separated the colts and fillies into two groups; the First Group would travel to the far North-out of the Older Sister’s grasp-and the Second Group would stay in the Everfree Forest-out of the Older Sister’s sight-until she returned for them. But she never did. The Older Sister soon discovered what her Younger Sister had done, and pressed her for where the Second group was hiding-but the Younger Sister refused. The Older Sister then wanted to find the Second Group, and had a secret search for them-but did not find any of them. (( For more information on this Kingdom, visit this Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WRamNuuO0gxQB8LNC_k31s-8k73uxkdXV62ipHaj3ng/edit )) **Remember, this is a fanfiction** I really do hope this fanfiction will be made into an animation. If you wish to contact me, you can contact me here on MLP Forums, or at PhillMiles@gmail.com. Thank you all.

Brony: violence, sex (occasionally), logic, romance, emphasis-on-witty/campy-humour (?) Pegasister: romance, Mary Sues, gentleness, beauty (???)

Heh heh check this out! https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10094407/1/Harmonys-Chronicles-MLP-FIM-head-canon-and-Fimfiction-project Choctastic!!!

I am writing my first MLP FanFiction. I had an idea I'm the past, but I got increasingly bored with it and lost all motivation. Now, I am way excited to get this new one started. 1. It will be written in short chapters. 50 or less. 2. It will be a suspenseful adventure story with a story arch. 3. I would love to have 5 OC's participate in this story. 4. I only need 1 female character aside from myself. Heroes: - #1 (Power and element of Ice) OC should be a younger and a more dependent character. (TAKEN) - #2 (Power and element of Light) OC should be stubborn, distant, and wanting to work alone. (TAKEN) - #3 (Power and element of Wind) OC should be a motivated character with an attitude. (TAKEN) - #4 (Power and element of Electricity)OC should should be the kind of character to be curious and humorous. (TAKEN) - #5 (Power and element of Darkness)OC should be okay with the fact being introduced LATER in the story with an unexpected twist. (TAKEN) Villains: - #1 (Element of darkness AND light) Is the ultimate main bad guy. He or she isn't introduced until late in the story because he or she constantly gains power and waits to attack. He or she is in the final battle at the end. (TAKEN) Let me know which character you want to be, and we will talk from there. I want this story to be great and I have big plans for it

Hello there forum goers! I'm looking for some advice on the design of an OC I've created for my fanfic. Now since this OC is for a written story, her appearance isn't strictly that important. But I'm going to be doing the cover art and peripheral things like that, so I wanted to make sure her design wasn't off-putting in some way I didn't anticipate. While writing my story, I was having trouble deciding on the color scheme for the protagonist. So I made some sketches of her just to see how the colors would look. What do think of her? Does she seem like a pony that could somewhat plausibly be in the MLP universe? Would the design give you a positive impression of the character if you saw it on a site like fimfiction? The hardest part for me was trying to make the hair not look ridiculous or even worse, boring. I like to say I succeeded, but from a different perspective does her mane look like something out of a bad anime? I still sort of find it dangerously spiky, but I tried to tone it down with curls and rounder shapes and such. And just for fun here's a partial sketch of what she would look like on the cover art of the story, most of it is still just barely outlined. I'd ask for advice on naming, or what her cutie mark should be... but I think those are better left to me, since both of those are highly relevant to character and the events in the story. So for those I'll just have to go back to my thinking tree/dank thinking basement and wrack my brain some more to decide on those kinds of details. Please leave any thoughts, ideas, or critiques of the character design. And in the unlikely event that you have a question about her character, or the story feel free to ask. Though I might not be able to answer completely due to spoilers or the information still being subject to change.

I would like to request assistance for a story I'm writing. I'm looking for every form of help that I can find: Proofreading, reviewing, idea-making, general commenting, anything. The story in question is about my primary OC and is loosely based on my own experiences and feelings. Since I've had extremely harsh troubles with trying to get these things off the ground and especially without any assistance, I ask that anyone willing to help be able to stick with me for long periods of time, because that is how long that I may be working on it. I'll be working on and off for probably months on end on this. The story in question can be found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H3URQkwGLD1XlV-MdcTfKrNz7gBPlW8r7t_WkMqCq5A/edit As it stands, the story is not complete, so do not treat anything as being final. I may or may not add new parts, subtract old parts, divide parts, whatever. Parts of the story will end up being in Dutch, but only about 1% of it. It has to be. And if the medium of text fails me once more, then I can always resort to a medium of illustration, which is something that I have never been done in a very long time.

This fanfic has been canceled and given to a friend of mine to finish, I'm very sorry

So, I need help from the mlp forum community. I have two OCs that need to be put into an awesome picture, you can reply to this, but odds are this topic will get locked fairly quickly. In the case of topic being locked just PM me for more info. These are the OCs that I will be using.

What I'm looking at is nothing major and I'm not going to try and rush people on this if they decide to help me. But what I'm going to try and make is little short skits with my characters and other's characters with no set-in-stone plot-line *so none of this has a strict plot, anyone can contribute to it, one can be about my OC's family and the next can be about your OC, it can be creative!* or strict routine. There is however, one thing that I need- help, writers, animators, artists, musicians and others. The reward: you get your characters IN the story. You also get to make up things for the story like suggestions for plots and stuff, and each story will be like Buttons Adventures and only be 4 minutes or even 6 minutes long maximum. So you get my idea? Here are my OCs that I really would like to include: http://mlpforums.com/uploads/post_images/img-1087670-2-PadlockFamily_zps32a8e82c.jpg Padlock *Left, adult, Earth pony* Apple Tea *Right, adult Unicorn* Ivory Excellence *Right filly Earth Pony* Heroic Tea *Right, Colt, Unicorn.* I'll also include various characters that my friends have that you probably wont ever meet but that's between my friends and I, however, I would like to add those in for personal reasons. Just as quick cameos or even little one to two minute parts. Everyone will get a part in this, everyone will get their fair share, as long as they have a way to help out that is! Voicing? *GOOD MICROPHONE NEEDED* Drawing *REALLY GOOD DRAWING* Animation? *SHOW-QUALITY, JAN ANIMATIONS* Music? You get he idea. My Skype is TheBigAnimation My Email is juliawirth91@yahoo.com

I figured I'd link these here, because promotions. Complete with Authors Notes! Something Broken Synopsis: Fluttershy meets a Pony with a most unusual problem, seemingly caused by his Cutie Mark. What the others don't know is the problem is in fact far, far deeper than they realise. Can the group convince the Pony to come to terms with his Mark? Authors Notes: This one has quite the history behind it, but to try and summarise the trivia notes as best I can... Atlas's original name was "Colossus", but then I'm a sucker for Mythology referances, so Atlas it was and Atlas it stuck as, despite becoming something of a rather hackeyed name later on. If you can't tell, this was written during the middle of a depression period, while coming down with a rather virulant stomach bug. I actually ended up skipping meals getting this thing written. This story has since been declaired discontinuity - mostly I was just never very happy with where and how things turned out. Atlas's personality has been fleshed out more since then to avoid becoming "just another OC". Yes, I have been contacted by certain parties wanting to add the story to their little group. They were refused for reasons that should be kind of obvious. Perhaps ironically, despite being my least favourite, this remains the only complete fanfiction, and the one with the most views. It's not My Little Dashie or Haunting Nightmare, but I think it's safe to say this one is one of the more popular pieces I've written. The Pony who fell to Equestria Synopsis: A quiet night examining the stars results in Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Princess Luna investigating the impact site of an unusual green meteorite. What they find however is beyond even Luna's knowledge. Is this creature helpful, or harmful to Equestria? Authors Notes: My second least favourite, mostly because of how it turned out. Some things that required explination however lead into... The Iron Uprising Synopsis: This story begins 341 years before the present day. It is a time of industry and innovation. The technomagical revolution has begun, the event that would secure Equestria's place as one of the leading superpowers in the world. However, it is also a time of strife and suffering - conditions are harsh as Ponies are spurned under the heel of progress. One eccentric Pony sets out to change all of that. What happens instead however, is one of the darkest pieces of history to happen in Equestrian History. Here now is the story of what happened, collected together from the historical accounts of those involved. Authors Notes: This was designed as an experiment, mainly inspired by the narritive structure of Warmahordes, which occasionly uses a similar narritive structure to tell it's stories. It's also arguably the most controversial thing I ever wrote...if I ever got around to finishing it off. I simply ran out of steam on this one. Two Chapters - "Evolution of the Machines" and "Holocaust" were planned, and some work on the former was completed, but without a set objective to meet it kinda crumbled apart. Just to warn everyone, it's pretty damned dark. Later Chapters would only have gotten more gruesome.

These are my ocs if you want a background on any of them just ask they are still in the making so bare with me. They are all my original names and designs. Please post feedback and things that I could do better with.