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  1. Totally An Admirer

    Ponified version of your life events

    So this is the an idea just came to me now. You've to make a ponified version of any special event in your life. For example ponified version of my early childhood. "My names is Phonix Feather. I live in a small town named Ponyville. My mother is an Earth Pony, and my father is a Unicorn only not with very strong magic. I have two more brothers, my younger brother is a unicorn just like my father. But most different of all is my baby brother. He was born as a pegasus. And to be true, I was always a little jealous to him. He didn't like to spend time with his brothers, instead he liked to spend time with pegasus like himself. My younger brother remains always by my side whenever I need him." You got the idea. Let's see if that works.
  2. Totally An Admirer

    General Favorite genre of stories

    What's your favorite story genre? I like stories with Romantic fantasies, action, and adventure etc. I would like to know your favorite kind of stories.
  3. I almost didn't post this thread but I feel I've written enough of my epic fantasy series to post a promo about it. "Swords and Roses" is a medieval-napoleonic fantasy series about what would happen if napoleonic soldiers invaded a fantasy world. It's got love, torture, revenge, etc. I posted it on Tapas and Wattpad if you wanna check it out: https://tapas.io/series/Swords-and-Roses https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/149058583-swords-and-roses Updates will be sporadic due to my job situation but there will eventually be 16 books in total. Happy reading! :-)
  4. Okay so the rules and ways to play this game are SUPER simple... I post the beginning of a story, and you add on. You can add anything as long as it follows the terms and conditions of mlp forums! There is no real plot, just be random, you can add pretty much anything you want. Anyway here I go! Make it as silly as possible! One time in sugarcube corner, Pinkie was super busy handling the store while Mr and Mrs Cake was away. She worked hard all day and began to get tired. She headed to her bedroom after turning all the ovens off, all orders made ready to go for the next day. She lays on her bed and closes her eyes, slowly sinking into a dream state. Luna only knows what she'd dream about tonight. *Your turn!*
  5. Totally An Admirer

    HiE and Lyra fanclub

    Note: If you don't like human related stories, please turn back now or only share your opinion without ranting about this. I hope you understand. I saw that there wasn't a single fan-club for this group which doesn't feel right to me, because it has been a well-known genre and despite all the hate this genre get, there are some excellent stories out there. Anyways this fanclub is for people who enjoy reading/writing well-made HiE (either ponified humans or not) stories or fan of this genre at all. I add Lyra to the topic because she's usually shown having an obsession with humans (obviously). As for me I love a well-written HiE story. I'd like to know your opinion. I will share some of my most favorite (SFW) stories here. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/4656/anthropology https://www.fimfiction.net/story/5170/project-sunflower https://www.fimfiction.net/story/212359/a-new-beginning-in-a-new-land https://www.fimfiction.net/story/57231/my-new-life-in-equestria Here is a beautiful fanart. These are only a few of those I has read. You can also share your own favorite (SFW) stories and fanart. Believe me: Only because a story has a human or humans in it, it doesn't mean that it has to be the worst. Rule regarding NSFW material applies here as well. Most important of all: Respect every other fanclub and members. Feel free to share your opinion on the topic.
  6. enjoy my pony script! MLP FIM THE ELEMENTS OF DARKNESS PONY SCRIPT PART 1 TO 4.doc
  7. Moonlit_Night

    One Word Story

    The rules are simple: You post a single word and eventually i will type all the words together into a story. ive seen some pretty funny ones on a different forums. You may add punctuation. You may use a multi-word name (names only) lets start: Once
  8. The-Warpony

    Derp Souls ((Interactive comic))

    Prepare to Derp Welcome to Derp Souls. An Interactive comic where the audiance must guide our grey mare through the dangerous halls of old Canterlot. Actions from comments will be taken due to majority, or randomly chosen when even. Actions will then be rolled to see if she succeeds or utterly fail. Be aware, that the challenges ahead of her are dire and in this interactive forum, Derpy may fall. If that happens, this Forum will cease to ever continue. ((The intro along with further details will be posted soon.))
  9. I have done it quite a few times... mostly from being distracted. It doesn't feel to good either. So how about everybody else here? Storys? Did it happen to you alot or does it still happen? Yeah xD ^-^
  10. Diamond Dynamite???

    game Continue the Story with 1 sentence

    Simple. I start a completely nonsensical story with a sentence and everyone else adds on to this story which never ends! After finishing my work, I got off my chair, only to create a hole in the floor, and I HAD to fall in.
  11. I am in the middle of writing a children's book called Mouse in the Coffee Cup. I might collab with someone to help illustrate it. Depends if i find anyone interested. Story Mouse is a very tired and lonely character. He doesn't act anything like his siblings who are active and social. One day, Mouse discovers a substance to change his behavior; coffee. Mouse starts to use coffee more and more often eventually changing him... and not in a good way. Mouse learns the dark journey of addiction.
  12. Well... Taking a stab at romance writing. Figured it was high time I threw myself to the wolves. Feel free to take a bite. Seriously though. I am posting this due to the sudden nature of this story becoming one of my favorite that I have worked on. I have another story, but it is slated to cap out at 800k, this one is a one chapter a day write based on OC's who are brought together, seemingly by fate, to help comfort one another throughout their lives. It is my first real crack at a love story and has so far been getting pretty good feedback in my dm's. But you know what they say, the more crit you get, the better you get over time! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/395523/feathers-of-fate ^^^Link to da sauce!^^^
  13. If you got the chance to be a villain in the pony world, how would you take over Equestria? This is how I would: I clone myself millions of times....... ATTACK!!!!!!! Millions and millions of SkyStorms throw pies in the faces of ponies all over equestria. With every pony shocked and blinded for a couple of seconds, the sky storm lifts them up and puts them in a giant hole in the ground with a net over the stop to stop Pegasus. sky storms guard at the top with guns to stop unicorns from using magic (hole was previously made using explosive) A small army takes over the alicorns and locks them in the room where the elements of harmony are kept (since only an alicorns magic from the outside can open it, they are trapped) the elements are taken and used against the ponies. The whole world has successfully been taken over. Every single Skystorm sits down and eats pizza laughing at the helpless ponies trapped in holes.
  14. If you don't know, Yakut ponies are a rare breed of horse that live in arctic environments. So that got me thinking, what if I made Yakut ponies in the MLP world? So here's their story: In the beginning, the Yakut didn't have wings or horns. They were just Earth ponies that acted like real horses in that they ate plants from the ground and slept outside. But eventually they evolved to have their own language but still lived wild. A large amount of ponies from Equestria decided to get on a boat and explore the world, which is how they discovered the wintry country of Yakutia. Intrigued by this species like them but not, the ponies went out of their way to teach the Yakut their language and some ponies and Yakuts grew close to each other, which is how Yakut unicorns and pegasai came to be. Breeding with ponies also provided a larger variety of coat colors, since pure Yakuts had only very light blue, silver, and white coats to match their environment. Now they have pink, purple, green etc. But they are only very icy and light colors. Some Yakuts have evolved into a less bulky and heavy body so it'd be possible for them to fly as pegasai. One particular silver Yakut earth pony discovered a sparkling icicle deep down in a cave and once she made contact with it, transformed her into an Alicorn. The Equestrian ponies explained that Alicorns in their land become the rulers so that is how this Yakut Alicorn became princess of her land. The ponies left soon after, since the cold was not for them, promising to tell their people about this incredible country. They crashed into a glacier and never made it, which is why no one in Equestria knows of the Yakut or their Alicorn. Things I forgot to mention: Those with wings have extra thick feathers to keep them warm. And the Yakut are basically short, thick coated Equestrian ponies. The ponies taught them how to build their own homes and cook food (though they have refused to do so since they prefer their plants right from the ground. They have tried cooked and it always too hot in their stomachs. Though they do prepare it to make different meals, like a salad. They also have a secure greenhouse to plant seeds that the Equestrians gave them so they can have something besides grass, leaves, and flowers to eat.) If you don't feel like looking a Yakut pony up, here is an image:
  15. My Little Pony: Adventure Of Friendship* Introduction Good day, MLP community! We are happy to show our fan game called My Little Pony: Adventure Of Friendship. This is a puzzle-platform game and it is just demo-concept at this state. Game Twilight and Pinkie just comming to Ponyville when they found that town is empty! What could it be related? Solve the mystery and find how to get back all ponies to the Ponyville! Warning! In that version the game is just a demo and the plot is not fully revealed! Screenshots: About development [outdated]{This is a game, which is developing on Unity. As I said, this is a demo-concept game and it isnt a completed version. Just for now we are working as the small group of 2 persons. In future,we will add other three ponies, a lot of new interesting levels, uprade our sound collection and graphics. But we are searching for help! If you're interested in that project, you can help in development by any way! This game especially needs artists,animators, sound engineers, image editors.} Thanks a lot for all who tested this game! But I must admit, as HereComesTom said, there already exist some other games with the same idea, so we find reasonable to stop our development, and try something else. But don’t be sad, I suppose you could see my other creations in the future. Download a game To download a game you just need to click the link below(For Windows) https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_llsUXiM3lvbl9wbEFEMzczbnc Thank you for your attention.
  16. AlienCrafter

    Ongoing Story

    Hey guys. bit new here, but I haven't seen a story been made yet, so, the rules are simple, you can only type one word to try and complete the story, or you can keep it going forever, ill start it up! And you can put filler text( Darn minimal 20 character limit!!) Once
  17. BrilliantVenture

    MLP Amnesia : The Small Horse

    I gotta advertise this for those that haven't played it... y'all NEED to play the small horse custom stories for Amnesia... If you like ponies, if you're on the internet way too much, if you enjoy hilarious horror... PLAY THIS GAME!!! For those who don't know, I got into MLP from this game...it was so crazy and wacko, that I had to discover the origins of the characters...so I watched the show, and ended up loving it! but back on track, if you haven't played it, please download it here! http://amnesiarainbow.wix.com/amnesia#!the-small-horse-epic-journey/c13ag it's well worth your time! Many lets players such as Ratchetness, Cinnamontoastken, Jacktherbert, Pewdiepie and many others have had fun with it, and so should you!
  18. I've been mentioning this for quite sometime. But I think that the shows creative staff seem to have forgotten about something from an episode that is the perfect starting base for a new story arc. Of course I'm talking about Big Mac's speech at the end of "Brotherhooves Social" in which he tells Apple Bloom about his envy of Applejack's heroic status. Ever since that episode, I've been hoping for the writers to capitalize on that moment and begin making a complete story arc out of it. It's a fresh story arc that has full potential to provide great development for Big Mac's character. After all, each of the Mane 6 have more than likely come full circle. The Cutie Mark Crusaders have already reached their goal. So how about having Big Macintosh work more towards the goal of being a hero in his own right? Keep in mind this thread is only focusing on ONE aspect of the character development: The "dreams of heroism" aspect. The problem is that the writers haven't done anything to work Big Mac towards that goal. (Unless Dungeons and Discords counts, but that was more of a fantasy roleplaying than anything else) They seem to be stuck in a routine with episodes STILL focusing on the likes of the Mane 6, Spike, Starlight Glimmer, and the CMC. Maybe it IS planned but they're just saving it for the 7th season. Maybe they just need some help with ideas on how to make it happen. Do you think it's time for the writers to capitalize on Big Mac's wishes to be a hero and start working towards that big hero moment? What sort of heroic deeds can you think of in which Big Mac can do to achieve that goal?
  19. Mesme Rize

    Why i will never be a Doctor IRL

    So, as probably many of you have noticed by now, is that my hypnotizing Lamia OC, is also a Doctor. He is a Doctor, because i also wanted him to be like a productive pony instead of just being a normal hypnotizing lamiapone like other lamiapones are and he is a doctor because i myself have an interest in Medicine and even owning a stethoscope, which is like the symbol for a modern Doctor. But there have also been some people who asked me "Mesme, why don't become a Doctor? You obviously have a knowledge in this kinda field and you would probably do good." Well, it's true that i have a certain knowledge in that field and i have learned how to make steth checkups, there are just alot of things that you have to take into consideration. First of all, becoming a Doctor takes years of hard studying and you have to sacrifice alot of your private time to achieve this goal. The thing is, i don't really like the thought of sacrificing this time and i feel like this would at somepoint lead to a breakdown by me, because the studying becomes way too much and i don't want to lose my friends because of it. The other thing is, even if i do become a Doctor, it's not going to be an easy Job/Life. I thought to maybe be a cardiologist or maybe a pediatrician. Cardiologist, because the heart interests me the most and pediatrician because i can imagine working with kids could be fulfilling. But what if i have a very ill patient, whose life is on the line? As a cardiologist, you face that alot, because the heart is the most important organ and deadly sick children would be even harder, because it would probably break my heart way too much and i would just feel incredibly helpless that i can't prevent it. Basically, while it could be fun in theory, i think it would eat me up after awhile because i just care too much for these people. Hope i didn't put you guys down too much, but i felt like i had to say this.
  20. Ginger Ale

    Melted Back

    MELTED BACK Frozen. When a pony gets frozen, in an ice cube, it is like they are dead. They are breathing however, they don't see, they don't hear and most importantly they don't ever feel or remember anything during the time they were in the ice cube. An orange heated light, that is what I indeed saw when we were melted. After my head was free, immediately I inhaled really strong and felt the ache that my lungs were making. How long had it been? The last thing I remember was preventing the dark cast that Nightmare Moon was about to cast to Princess Celestia. I used a magical mirror, appeared in front of me. I wished a miracle from a unique yellow star, falling from the sky. I recall using it to deflect the cast but it was too powerful. I remember falling down, hitting on one of the concrete roads. I remember my cutie mark appearing on my flank afterward. Before beginning anything, let me tell you how bat ponies are treated. We bat ponies are resistible and stronger at nights than normal ponies. You can never see us in roads of Ponyville, talking and socializing with others. I barely have time doing that with my friends. I and other bat ponies really get tired if we don't sleep, and the sun is not a good friend of us. After Nightmare Moon was banished to the moon by Princess Celestia, I and the other Lunar Guards were frozen in the ice cubes. It is because bat ponies are very rare to find and they did not want to lose us during that thousand years of a period without Nightmare Moon. That is why they froze us. Just in case Nightmare Moon can come back, and just in case she can be stronger than ever before. My name is Ginger Ale. I was born in one of the darkest rooms of The Castle of Two Sisters while my parents were working as servants to Nightmare Moon. I was named Ginger Ale because my hair color reminded my father his favorite drink. My only dream was and is still to become a commander of the Lunar Guards and become Princess Luna's favorite. I am nineteen years old and I worked as an apprentice of one of the guards. I was set free. I moved my wings. I looked at my surrounding. Other bat ponies were also trying to get used to the unmelted life. Suddenly my eyes went on to North Star. My dearest friend. I rushed myself and found herself in my arms. We hugged. We missed each other a lot. Where were we? This place was not the Castle of Two Sisters. "Finally, it is all over. We are back to duty." North Star said to me while smiling. Our commander came. He heard us. "I am afraid it is not all over. Ladies and gentle colts, welcome to Canterlot, you are all here after thousand years. We need your help" he interrupted our happy rejoining. "Nightmare Moon got back. She was seen in the Summer Sun Celebration in Ponyville. We don't know what she is up to but we need to find and protect Princess Celestia." he continued. As bat ponies, it might sound confusing, why do bat ponies include themselves in this fight and why do they protect Princess Celestia instead of Nightmare Moon. First of all, Nightmare Moon is surrounded by evil forces and we know that and we can not support that. Secondly, Nightmare Moon always strikes at night time which means the time where bat ponies are stronger and needed. Celestia's guards protect the day while bat ponies protect the night. So until Nightmare Moon is becoming Princess Luna, we have to protect Princess Celestia for harmony. "Where is Princess Celestia?" I asked. The guards told us that she was missing. Me and North Star looked at each other. I knew she wanted everyone to be safe more than anyone. She was panicking inside and there was nothing to do. As we were trying to understand what was going on two lunar guards came in to tell the recent news. "Nightmare Moon has vanished, she was last seen in the Everfree Forest. All of us are still searching but we need others too." one of them said. Commander turned back and after learning the news he turned to us. "You know what to do? What are you looking at? No apple pies for none of you until you find Nightmare Moon!" he said and with his order North Star and I left the castle and went on the road to Everfree Forest. When we were flying I was trying hard to tolerate my friend but I was the real one who was panicking. "So commander where are we heading?" North Star asked. She knew my dream job and she really wanted me to achieve my goal. Surprisingly, she was more optimistic than me and she was the one tolerating me. While I was leading the way we were softly getting closer to the Everfree Forest. I was about to land when North Star dashed in front of me and stopped me from landing. She pointed six ponies that were walking to the Castle of Two Sisters. "We are not alone," she said. We wanted them to get a little far from us when we heard a gigantic explosion from the castle. We looked at each other, trying to decide what to do. "What is going on in the castle?" North Star asked. "I don't know, but I am sure it is not good," I replied. "We need to go there, those ponies are not safe," I replied. "We can't." North Star said. "You know the rules, until Luna shows the Lunar Guards the ponies, for them bat ponies are legends. They should not see us and they should not know that the legend is true and we exist." she continued. I nodded and had nothing to say. Soon we heard another explosion and we flew up through the castle to see what it was. This explosion was different and it was in rainbow colors. "I recall this explosion," I said. "The elements of harmony! It is back, all the time it was held in the Castle of Two Sisters." I continued and became a little relieved. "If they used it again doesn't that mean..." North Star said and I interrupted her. "Yes, I guess she got banished to the moon again. Our time is now over again. Maybe they will freeze us once more." as I was becoming less optimistic again we heard some cheers and claps from one of the rooms of the Castle of Two Sisters. We achieved to have a peek and come closer to the castle secretly. Nightmare Moon was turned back to Princess Luna instead of being sent to the moon again. She was hugging Princess Celestia while the same six ponies we saw walking to the castle were cheering for them. We looked at each other and hugged. Immediately, we rushed back to the Canterlot Castle to tell the good news to the other ponies. Now it was our time to continue protecting the night, bat ponies were back because Princess Luna was back. This called for a celebration and we all drank our Apple Ciders in one of the rooms of Canterlot. It was decorated with white crescent moon banners with dark blue background. While North Star was eating crescent moon shaped crackers we were tossing our drinks. Commander came in and cleared his throat. We all looked at him. "Attention everypony!" he said. "Let me present you, the princess of the night, Princess Luna." he continued. With her short light blue hair, Princess Luna walked in and we all hailed when we saw her. She levitated a spoon and a cup and hit the spoon to the cup to start a speech. She cleared her throat and stood up on the rostrum of the room. "When I look at all of your faces, I see the passion. My helpers, my friends, my companions. I owe you this victory and harmony. Without you, nothing could end up well. As long as Equestria exists, there will be always a need for ponies to be guarded. That is why we all need bat ponies. I want to toast for all of you! Because this is not only mine but also your success. Let us continue our quests and guarding. It is now time for ponies to know the bat ponies are existing too!" she said. Everyone was surprised and so happy. The room was including nothing but loud cheer and clapping sounds. "Now if you excuse me, I must attend to the celebration party at Ponyville." she continued. North Star and I hugged once more. Now it was time for me to become a commander of the Lunar Guards. Now it was my time to become Princess Luna's favorite bat pony. While she was walking out, Princess Luna and I came eye to eye. She smiled and blinked at me. North Star saw it too. We were so happy. Now it was time for us to continue our adventure in both Ponyville and Canterlot while guarding night. -END OF CHAPTER ONE- Story by @Ginger Ale (PS: The picture for this story is currently being drawn by @SFyr for this story and North Star is the OC of @SFyr and Ginger Ale is the OC of mine drawn by @SFyr) Additional Info: North Star (@SFyr's OC) Ginger Ale (My OC) Both pictures were drawn by @SFyr. Thank you so much @SFyr for letting me include your pretty OC in my story and thank you so much for letting them become best friends. My first written fan work on these forums everyone and also first with my Ginger Ale OC. Hope you all like it and hope it made you have a good time. Thank you so much for sharing from your precious time to read this story. Love you all. <3
  21. Whether is was paranormal or not, I want to read some creepy things that have happened to some of my fellow bronys. I'll tell you a creepy thing that happened to me on the bus a few years ago. I wrote it down so I wouldn't forget. The Crow: The heaviness in my eyelids was the first thing I felt that morning. The night before was a long one because I fell asleep around 1:00 AM. I do that a lot. I could feel the softness of my mattress on my back as I lay there motionless. As my brain started to wake up, the eerie feeling of being watched creeped up my spine. I tried collecting my thoughts while trying to shake the unsettling feeling. I tried to move my body… but it remained as still as a rock. The feeling of being watched kept growing inside me. All of a sudden, I mustered up the strength to move my head. My bed is placed next to a large window that lets sun in every morning. My instincts told me to look towards it… and that when I saw it. Right at the edge of the roof above my room were two beady, black eyes starring right into mine. My head froze. I could not look away. It must have been a few minutes of us starring at each other unblinking. As I starred at it, I realized exactly what that thing was. It was bird. My instincts started to trigger again. This time it told me that this was no ordinary bird. It was pitch black with a sharp beak and almost looked as if it had some sort of high intelligence. I had never seen bird like that ever. As the bird and I kept starring at each other, the bird slowly shifted away behind the roof top. A few seconds later, it shifted back into place… back to staring at me. It repeated this 3 times before finally disappearing. I sat there just starring at the sky for what felt like an hour. Suddenly, the strength in my body returned. I could move! I stood up, walked out of my room and into the living room. My thoughts were spinning in my head. All I could think of was the word “Nevermore”. I know this all sounds fake but this DID actually happen to me. Now its your turn to tell me something.
  22. Good morning/afternoon/evening everyone, I first want to apologize about my blog duplicating my last entry and second I have some news. My newest story is now ok FIMfiction.net All you have to do is go to my profile and click the link to my account and go to the story Stressful Nights to read it. I want to point out two things about it, it is a Sweetiemash story and please if you leave feed back or say my story is good, hit the thumbs up like you would a YouTube video. I would also like to mention I am only 17 so my work may not be the best but I try to make it work. My commas may be in the wrong place or could be used wrong but ya know, it's my story and I, can, use, commas, when, I, necessary, to, do, so, but I will actually try to do better with them, I like comments unless they are by someone who says my story is straight up bad fan fiction when I only I have the short prologue released. I understand it's criticism, but to instantly say its bad fan fiction is like throwing a perfectly okay soda in the trash. Anyways that is all for this entry just a story update, oh and one more thing check out my other stories when you can thanks...this is Silvermoon signing off...PEACE OUT!
  23. A while back I started writing this short story, didn't get very far. But I don't think I will even get the time to finish it as I am busy with work and writing my Novel. Feel free to use anything you want, except my OC, Evening Quill. New Beginnings The car shudders as the train comes to a stop and Eve is lurched ever so slightly forward. Opening her eyes, she is greeted with a view of a train platform, ponies of all kinds are going about their business, some getting off the train, others are waiting to get on. Looking around the platform she sees the station ticket office, above the window and door is a plaque with an inscription that reads Ponyville. Eve stretches, her Pegasus wings spread wide and she yarns. She grabs her bag and makes her way to the end of the car. Stepping out onto the platform she takes a deep breath of fresh air and sighs, I wonder what my luck will be like in this town she thinks to herself as she pulls her bag behind her. At that moment, as if cursed, a wheel on her bag breaks and the bag falls to one side stopping her abruptly. Looking back with a frown she turns and approaches the bag, Eve looks around, as if deciding against something, Better not, there are too many ponies here. She bends down and grabs a handle with her mouth, with a heave she lifts the bag. “Are you alright there miss?” a voice calls. Eve turns around and sees a stallion standing behind her. “I’m fine,” Eve murmurs with her mouth full, and an annoyed expression. “I’m sorry, I didn't quite get that.” Eve puts down her bag so she can speak clearly “I said I’m fine” she repeats still annoyed. “Well okay then miss” he replies with a smite and turns to leave. “Wait” Eve adds, “Do you know of anywhere I can stay? as it is, I have nowhere to go.” The stallion turns back to face her and thinks for a moment. “Ah why yes, if you go to the Town Hall bulletin board, I’m sure there will be something posted there.” “Thank you” Eve replies and he turns to leave. Picking up her back she begins walking down the path to the town ahead. (Missing content, use your imagination ) Looking at the bulletin board Eve spots a post, “Roommate wanted, anypony welcome”. Eve smiles and gets the address. Eve reaches the address on the bulletin board post, the cottage looks warm and inviting, a white picket fence surrounds the yard and is bracketed by white and pink flowers. She opens the gate and walks down the path toward the house, reaching the door she puts down her bag and raises a hoof to knock as the door opens, revealing a mare with a pale green coat and curly violet blue mane. The two ponies greet each other with looks of confusion and awkward silence, Eve smiles uncomfortably “Hello, I am in need of somewhere to stay and I saw your ad on the Town Hall bulletin board” The mare’s face lights up and she smiles, “Oh, I would be happy to accommodate you, my name is Nook,” she says holding out a hoof. Eve exhale’s as if in relief “Evening Quill,” taking her hoof “But everypony calls me Eve.” “Pleasure to meet you Eve” Nook continues “I was just on my way out to do some shopping, but I'll show you around first,” she says with a smile. Eve picks up her bag and follows Nook inside the house, the living room is warm and snug, there is a couch at one end of the room and a fireplace at the other. “This is the living room” Nook explains walking through the house, “Through there is the kitchen, and if you follow me upstairs I’ll show you to your room” she turns and looks at Eve’s bag, “Would you like help with that?” she asks with a smile. “It’s okay, I’ve got it” Eve replies as she heaves the bag up onto the first step. Nook looks concerned but nods and continues up the stairs. Reaching the top, Eve puts down her bag to take a break and looks down the hall where Nook is standing. “This is your room” she gestures to the door to her left. Eve picks up her bag and walks over to peer through door. The room is clean and tidy, on the far wall is a single window, looking out toward the town centre. The room is mostly empty, apart from a bed near the window, and a desk on the right wall accompanied by a single chair. She walks into the room, putting her bag down by the door, Nook is standing behind her with an eager look on her face. “It’s perfect” she says, turning to face Nook. A smile spreads across Nook’s face and she sighs in relief, “Glad you like it” she says, still grinning, “Now I must get going, I’ll be back in a couple of hours, make yourself at home,” and with that she turns and leaves. Eve closes the door and collapses on the bed, the soft mattress cool and comfortable. Eve closes her eyes, Well this turned out alright she thinks to herself, This might not be so bad afterall. *** A rooster crows as Eve opens her eyes, the bright light from the sun almost blinding. Yarning she rubs them and looks over at the window as what looks like a pink chicken flies past. Too tired to care she rolls to her side flopping to the floor, before letting out an annoyed groan. With great effort she picks herself up and staggers toward the door. Making it to the kitchen, she puts on a pot of coffee and stares out the window waiting for it to heat up. She rubs her eyes to try and focus on the goings on of the town but to no avail. With her coffee hot, she pours it into a mug and holds it up to her face. Breathing in, the sweet smell enters her nostrils and a smile spreads across her face, but before she can take a sip, she hears a gasp. Nook is standing in the kitchen, her mouth open and her eyes wide, staring at Eve. Still half asleep, Eve stares back with a blank expression, confused as to what is happening. Nook continues to stare, not saying a word. Eve follows her gaze and notices that Nook isn’t staring at her, but the coffee mug. “What? is it dirty or some...” she cuts off as she notices the mug levitating in front of her with magic. With a gasp of her own she steps back and the mug crashes to the floor. “You have magic?” Nook yells, her voice breaking in surprise. Eve flops to the floor and lowers her head, waiting for the inevitable rejection and fear that normally follows. “That’s amazing!” Nook continues. Eve’s eyes widen and she looks up at Nook, who is standing above her, her face ablaze with excitement and wonder. “What?” Eve replies in surprise. “How is this possible?, you're a Pegasus, how do you have magic? wait…” Nook cuts off and gasps, stepping back “Are you an alicorn?” “What? no” Eve replies “I’m a Pegasus, I just have magic”. END
  24. melodythepony

    group story

    i will start with the begining and everypony else adds on. ''the trees swayed noisley," (that is the begining) add on to the pony above you. limit is four words a turn have fun!!!!
  25. Simply Cerberus

    Backstory/story/fic for an OC (She)

    Just for starters, I'd like you to know that, this is m First ever story of any kind in English. It's kinda a backstory to my OC, She. Or at least some history about Her. Warning: Slightly dark, includes death. But not in detail. Characters: Daisychain: White pegasus mare with beautiful blonde mane and tail. Magic Potion (Called Potion): Dark blue stallion with short brown mane and tail. Unicorn. Magic Potion junior (Called Junior): Male unicorn baby. The nameless mare: https://mlpforums.com/uploads/monthly_03_2017/post-35322-0-95755200-1489681586_thumb.png About 300 years ago from present day... Potion was heading home, he had been collecting some plants around close by forest for his potion research. He had focused to collecting so much that he had forgotten to check time, and now it was getting late. As he approached the house, he could tell that something wasn't right. From window next to the front door, light was shining through like usual, but the window seemed to be frosty from inside. Potion opened the front door carefully, ”Daisychain?” cold air hit his face and when he entered the hallway, he froze. The hallway, no, the whole house was filled with fog. From the living room Daisychain's scared voice was heard. ”Potion?” ”Daisychain!?” Potion rushed to the living room and was met with strange light blue mare looking at a picture of his family, and Daisychain in the corner of the room standing over Junior, staring at the mare. Potion lit his horn, ”Who are you? And what are you doing in our house?”. The mare turned towards Potion ”I'm not surprised you don't recognize me Potion” ”My appearance has changed quite bit since we last met.” Potion took step forward ”Answer to my question!”. The mare looked towards Daisychain with her empty eyes, ”You have beautiful family Potion, something I always wanted.” ”Potion...?” Potion shook his head slowly, ”I have no idea what you are talking about.” ”Two years ago....I was so happy Potion” The mare looked sad as she turned back at Potion ”We were made for each other.”. Daisychain looked at Potion confused ”Potion, what is she talking about?” Potion shot magic at the mare. ”Cut the nonsense! Daisychain, get Junior safe.” The mare moved to block the door with unnaturally quick dash, ”oh no, I don't think so Potion, she'll have to hear the truth.”, ”truth?” Potion stared at the mare, he was angry, ”There is no 'truth', mare she are talking about is long dead.” ”Dead? You haven't told....” ”Of course he haven't, he killed me!” Daisychain was shocked, ”What! I-is that true Potion” ”Of course n...!” ”Lies!” The mare dashed towards Daisychain sending her flying to another side of the room and was now standing over Junior who was so terrified that he didn't even cry. ”Tell me Potion, are your secrets more important than your family...” She raised her hoof, like she was preparing to attack Junior ”Stop!” Potion shouted ”If you are who you say you are, how?” ”The Mask” ”That mask...” Daisychain got herself back to her hoofs and in mix of panic and anger looked at Potion. ”Who is she Potion? Why is she here?” ”I...” ”I explain” The mare carried Junior to Daisychain before turning towards Potion, ”Two years ago Potion and I were like you two are now.” ”Then he poisoned me.” ”You can't imagine what it feels like, to wake up and feel nothing but cold, to find out you're dead.” ”I didn't know what happened to me first, but when I got to know, I could't believe it first” she was rather hostile towards Potion now ”I thought he loved me, I gave him everything!” Potion tried to explain ”I did...But that mask corrupted you, it was best for everyone.” The mare launched at him throwing him over, ”Who are you to choose what is best for me! You stole my life!” Potion slowly lifted himself back up, the attack had hurt. He spoke quietly, ”And every night and day I have been filled with regret bigger than you can imagine.” The mare then got closer and whispered to Potion's ear, ”It's too late for apologizes, goodbye my love.” She then kicked him, killing him. ”Potion!” Daisychain ran next to Potion, ”No!”. The mare looked at Potion's body, ”He paid the price from his actions.” She then turned towards Magic Potion Junior, ”From this point on, shall Potion's name be cursed with my presence.” Then she and the fog disappeared leaving only baby and his mother with Potion's lifeless body. THE END It's far from perfect, I know that, but it's what it it, and will be.