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  1. Hi all!, I have posted this a while back, I don't have much time on my hands at the moment due to study and work, but I have made a bit of progress. The eye patch is just temporary as I only had time to finish one eye , but it does look cool. I hate painting hair and am currently looking at different techniques, the above hair technique also isn't finished. On that note, does anyone have any advice on painting hair? I also plan on redrawing and repainting the ears into a different style.
  2. Katze

    Luna WIP

    A while back I created a Luna emblem for Battlefield 1. I decided to paint it, work in progress.
  3. Getting close, only the hair and fine tuning left. This is the first time I have tried this style, and I'm really loving it! I'm posting this at 3:00 AM just after I stopped painting... so I'm going to sleep, so I wont respond for a few hours
  4. This is a WIP of a commission. My commission thread is For @Brony_B
  5. I'd like to share a piece I'm working on right now, it should be done tomorrow along with a commission I had gotten.
  6. Here is a work in progress drawing of the Mane 6 Equestria Girls in the Saints Row IV promo image style. Yes - I know the scale is completely off and the facial expressions are not what I wanted, but this is the first time I've ever even drawn an Equestrian Girl; I just over complicated the art piece by adding five more xD. I hope to get better and improve my drawing skills before adding any colour and a context. I'm also thinking of adding Spike and Vinyl Scratch and maybe some other characters.
  7. What would it be like to live your life knowing that a family you loved was rejected by the ones that loved you first. But when one boy discovers two new wonderful friends, he has to decide either to stay with them or go back to the family of his recently passed parents. Welcome one and all to my first chapter of my romance story. If you like it, please leave a comment and or review. If you don't like it, please then, tell me why, so I can make it better. (If this is the incorrect section, or is not allowed due to the contexts of the story, then please direct me to the proper section or brony website.) Thank you, and enjoy. Furry Tale Prologue “It has been a long time, I can still remember her face when I saw her last. She was wearing that silly bright green turtle neck my aunt gave her on Christmas.” I look down, my eyes become misty as I keep my composure together. “And when I finally thought that it wasn't true, I wanted you to be the first to know,” I look up slightly, slowly losing my composure. “Both of you need to know that I will love you forever, and nothing is going to change that, but-” I cut myself off, the pinch in my chest begins to feel heavy, so heavy that if I were to hold it in any more, I would drop to the floor in pain. “She was the only hope I had as kid, it's funny you know? I wanted to say that she looked ridiculous in it, but when I think back, she looked beautiful, even if she was my over bearing mom, she was the most beautiful thing I ever saw.” My misty eyes began to sparkle from the golden brown light of the old lamp from across the velvet red leather chair. “I just wish I could have told her that.” My chest and head shudder to my lap as I speak in a trembling voice, the pain wasn't the cause, it was my body; it couldn't handle that kind of emotional pain… no normal human could. I had to focus, focus on my sister, she was always there, always kind, loving, loyal... She made me laugh when I was crying in the dark of it all. She and I had so much in common, and when she couldn't make me laugh, she would just hold me tight and we would be like that until mom got home. My mom, step mom would then call Bella over, Bella knew how to hold me if Rio was sick, or at summer school, she never could remember all those damned dates in history class. “So then, Tommy,” Rio said with a concerned, but lovingly happy look on her deep brown emerald eyed face. “Tell us.” I took a deep breath, though all I could do is breath in of what felt like metal dust filled with the burning taste of salted pain dripping down my burning face. But somehow, I spoke, opening up what had to have been the worst health hazard of my life. “As I said that day to myself, she looked stupid, why didn't I tell her.” My face didn't want to change expression, the pain only made everything numb and hard to move. Then I felt the warm soft hand of Bella touch my trembling hand, and Rio quickly followed suite. I suddenly looked into their warm loving gaze as the both pushed the soft fluffy bodies of both sides to me and rested their gaze to mine listening closely. “She told me my sister's concert was her last one and if her band won, they would go the championship. But they knew how much I hated that stupid band music, I feel so fucking guilty” I continued softly. “Why did I have to hate it so much, why couldn’t I just bear it and just be there for my sister?” They quickly held me tight with one of each of their soft warm arms and held me tight. Bella in her warm feminine soft, but stern motherly voice, the one I grew so attached to, piped up in slight revolt to my guilt. “Thomas you know if you went with them you would have died too!” she looked straight into my eyes almost in disbelief of my guilt. “You were there for me,” she looked to Rio staring back to her then quickly to me. “To us, you are and always will be the most kind, loving, most genuine guy I know, I would hav-” She stopped to look down, she had only known me for all those years, all the memories that were rushing back as she spoke making her remember the good times as well as the bad. Sadly it also came with its pain with each melted warmth of each happy memory. “You saved my life; I was in a deep depression ever since I was five, I thought… I thought I was some monster that everyone hated, everyone was afraid of me.” She looked to her hand like paws, they were soft, warm… and if at all gentle, yet she remembered far more differently about them. “I was always afraid to hold someone’s hands, afraid I might hurt someone. But you, when you were brought to our school, you were the one that came up to me! You ignored all of the others that wanted to hang out with you, and you came up to me, and you weren’t even afraid of me! “You were so nice, and if you didn't show up, Rio never would have worked up the courage to leave the girls who treated me like crap. I would have never had known how nice and true Rio was!” I was shocked, I had no idea that this was true, but sadly it wasn't shocking enough, the guilt of my own making of how my family died in that crash was still lingering in the dust of this new revelation. I didn't want to believe her, I thought this was her just trying to shake me out of my depression, a white lie, as white as her angelic white fur and crystal blue eyes. That is when she turned her torso to me and wrapped both her arms around me, and tucked her muzzle into my shoulder, though it was a bit pushed as she was slightly taller than me, she still held me anyway. “Please don't ever think that you were the cause of something, you are way too sweet, too honest, and too innocent to deserve this burden. I know you were meant to save us, I know how hard it is to lose someone close, so don't ever think that I don't feel your pain too.” Rio piped up. “Thomas I...” she may have only been sixteen at the time but, she had never felt stranger in her life. But she saw her baby brother being held by someone so dear to him, but how could she tell him her feelings, that first day when she moved in next to him, when she dared him to kiss her on the cheek. It felt like magic, like he was the first boy to love her for her, and not because she just happened to be a beta. “Thomas, you are the only boy to love me besides daddy.” She then giggled at the warm memory. “You said you thought my eyes were pretty and loved my smile. You saved my life too, if you didn't tell me after our first big argument about my terrible ex friends. I would have been pressured into dating this really big jerk of a wolf, he hated that I was friends with you. He laughed at me when I said that you were really sweet and nice. He kept saying you were just another human, you weren't strong enough to take care of me!” She looked at Bella, smiled at looked back at me, holding her breath, then leaped onto me, holding what was left not being held by Bella, and stared deeply into my eyes. With both fear of what I would think, excited that she can finally tell me how she felt, and guilty that it had to be of all times now. But she had to, how could she not? She loved me so badly, and she knew I needed her love, all of it. “I thought it was just a simple crush, but it grew more and more each day we were together. When you would cry all those nights as I held you, waking up to see you that you were better, even happy to see me that next morning.” She stopped to collect her thoughts. “Thomas, I am in love with you, my heart was yours the moment you trusted me…” Bella and I looked at her, I was crying my eyes out, and with each moment after that, the guilt slowly melted away, all those years of her snuggling me, telling me that she loved me. And all this time she meant it in such a way that I never saw. I held them both back, as I started to cry, I felt like a great pain was being melted away like a cold steel was dragging my heart to an endless sea of darkness was finally having the sun shine through the dark waters. But still, through all of this love, my regret, though lighter, was still there. Chapter One The Beginning This all started when I was seven, I always felt alone… some would say it is because you were desperate for friends, or you were just unlucky. The funny thing was is that I just didn't fit in. Whenever I would play sports with the other kids, or just tried to hang out, I just felt this strong negative emotion in my chest, and the more time I spent with them, I just was so afraid to feel this I would avoid even trying to hang out with them. With this new first fear, even though I was too young to understand what it was at the time. I found out that I preferred hanging out by myself, yes it was lonely but it was more relief than trying to talk to other kinds my own age. I grew to like it as I got older, it was my own world where I couldn't get hurt. I was for once happy, if that was even considered being happy, I never knew even to this day if I was or just in a childlike state of denial. Of course when I turned nine my family was fighting, and as usual my dad had to be the loudest, and the most colorful when it came to language. I hated when he talked that way. One day during the summer we were passing by our neighborhood after my grandma called my mom saying she had a group of kittens that she found that lost their mom. So she invited her with me and my sister to pick one out. I was tired that day, more than usual, I just wanted to play by myself in my room, but my mom wouldn't have it. So after she dragged me along, we were coming back home, when she stopped the car. There were rumors about Alphas moving in but I only heard stories about them, most as my religious aunt put it, “abominations… freaks against God's plan.” But that only made me more curious as I peaked over the front passenger seat in our rust bucket golden green minivan. And there I saw her, she was taller than me by the looks, but she looked like a fox mixed with a dog of some kind. She had red brown hair, and by the distance green sparkling eyes. Her fur was a light shade of golden brown, and a black button nose. Small puffy paws grown out like hands, and she had the happiest look on her face. Though by the look of it she was missing her fang on the left side of her face. Making her look almost my age. My mom looked back to us, making sure we were ok from her sudden stop. After she made sure we weren't broken she slowly parked the car, I starred at her face… I never saw that kind of face before, she looked sad, but it had a funny feeling as if she was angry. The next day, I heard a knock at the door, it was eight in the morning and I was downstairs in the living room with is egg shell white walls and golden upward arched fixed with pinkish red shaded lights on top of them, it smelled like cinnamon, and I felt like home, even with our green white spotted carpet and old silver boxed tube TV, with my favorite show on at the time, Dragon Ball Z. My sister was sleeping over at her friend’s house, my dad was asleep upstairs, and my mom was at work. So I jumped at the sudden knock at my door. And when I opened it, it was that girl I saw that day before. She was much taller than I thought, and by the looks of it she had a very cheerful but nervous look on her face. She stood there holding a thick comic book of Naruto in her right paw hand, while fiddling her hair with her left. “Um, hi, I am sorta new to the neighborhood and was wondering, um-” She looked to me as she was about to ask me what she should say next. My dad was sleeping upstairs, and my mom at work so I didn't know who to ask for permission to let her come in. So I just looked at her and with an awkward, and somewhat happy tone. I looked down to see the book… “Is that a comic book?” I interjected. That is when I saw her cute ears, they perked up in reaction to her happy but somewhat surprised face to my question. "Oh yea, this is one of my favorites, Naruto issue one." She trailed off for a moment, as her tone almost shifted into something that of reminiscing. "I love this one where Naruto is feared by his village for what's inside of him, it..." She closed her eyes as if to push away any bad thoughts she was having. "He reminds me of me, it helps to know I wasn't the only one you know?" Her ears drooped for a moment the perked back up after she heard the dragon ball mid commercial theme in the background, suddenly her tail began to wag as she looked to me, her full smile finally back on her face. “Wanna hang out and watch Dragon Ball with me?” I said, innocently, noticing her excitement. She jumped up and squeaked with delight as I said the words, almost making me jump back. “O my god I love Dragon Ball, is the new episode out already?!” She quickly ran in and plopped herself on the carpet in front of the TV, and then with some hesitation. “Um sorry, I didn-” “It's ok, who is your favorite?” I awkwardly blurted out as I tried closing the door, so distracted by this strange girl, who to my nine year old self looked even stranger, but she was so nice, and I was used to hearing the rumors about them I just was somewhat used to finally seeing one. I finally managed to shut the door after missing it twice. She then looked to me, and stood back up, she was about four inches taller than me. “I am so sorry, my name is Rio, Rio Cheski,” Her medium long tail that was hiding behind her suddenly started to wag quickly back and forth. Being the shy and awkward kid that I was I just stared at her for a moment, then before I said anything she piped up with slight tone of worry in her voice. “I-it's ok, my mom told me that I might look weird to the other kids in the neighborhood...” Her ears drooped down slightly. That is when I felt it, she knew how I felt, but she hid it with her positive attitude, and I just ran away from it. “No! you are not weird, you seem awesome, you have really pretty eyes, and a pretty voice!” I retorted trying to cheer her up as best I could. My young mind could only think of so much to do that, but I just felt that I wanted to show her that I liked her. Her tail slowly began to wag again as her ears perked up. “You- you mean it? I mean its ok not to, you just met me and stuff.” She looked longingly into my eyes. “I mean everything I said, and my name is Thomas by the way. And I also like your tail, it's really fluffy, like my cats.” My cat, what was I thinking, I was just lucky my mom had him in her room using it as his little home until he was big enough to climb up and down the stairs. “Oh! I love kitties!” She blurted out. “But I never saw one before...I think it's because my mom is allergic to them or something. Oh that reminds me, who is your favorite character on the show, because mine is Krillen because of his funny bald head, it makes me giggle every tim-” She blushed, or what I think was her blushing on account of her fur. “Sorry, you were about to tell me who your favorite was.” She giggled lightly as she sat there leaning back and forth until I spoke. She amazed me, she was the first girl to ever just treat me like a normal kid, she didn't ignore me like all the other girls did, or make fun of me like most of the boys at my school did, or didn't even noticed that I was shorter than her. She just liked me. With all these new thoughts going through my head I didn't even noticed I was smiling brightly at her. So there we were in my living room for what felt like hours of just us talking about everything that we liked about our favorite TV shows, and by the time I felt I was coming down from cloud nine, my dad’s alarm clock from his room started blaring, and made me and Rio jump. She jumped with a yelp, and as her ears flopped down tight to her head. “Owie...” She looked to me almost sadly then quickly changed it back to being happy as she quickly stood up. “Yay mom should be home now, oh, wanna come have lunch at my house?!” She said loving the idea as she stood up freeing her tail to wag cutely back and forth. “Um, o-ok let me tell my dad first” I said nervously. I had never been to a girl's house for lunch before let alone another person's house. As these thoughts ran through my head, I just then noticed my palms were warm and sweaty, and my heart rate was going so fast I thought my heart was about to jump out of my chest. That and when I was finally up on the last step to the upstairs my face felt like it was on fire. What was wrong with me, though I didn't know yet, but I would know soon enough, though it would not be something that I'd expect.
  8. Hello there everypony! I'm Ami. Writer, illustrator and Rarity fan. Now, while I'm more writer than artist, sometimes, I draw things. And I like doing it, though mostly it's been a good handful of Kim Possible art since I started up my long arc fanfiction again. So I figured I'd start with that, because this piece, which I consider one of my best, is what got the gears turning and made me want to draw more. It was my first real picture in forever and the first time in four years I've drawn her. AND it's EQG inspired, because, yes, I actually liked that film. I'm just going to post the pics in order, including the WIP ones that amaze me. I'm like, "It started out like that?" More to come later...If y'all are interested. Also, be warned, I whomp at backgrounds, so I usually do the lazy and just choose pretty colours.
  9. I figured I'd create an art thread here, since so many other people are doing it, also. In this thread, I post works in progress and finished pieces every day or every other day, to share my complete work, as well as my process. Will contain pony and non-pony material alike. The following images are all works in progress, as I don't have anything finished as of right now.
  10. Hey guys, I started writing a fan fiction a little while ago but stopped because I wanted some input on it and your opinion as to weather or not I should continue writing it. I would like to clarifiy this is a work in progress but without further ado, Harbinger of Darkness (The first chapter) Chapter 1: Strange New World It was night in the Everfree Forest. The moon was full, the air still, and the eerie silence was the only sound apart from the faint hum of the portal. The portal was in the center of a large clearing of the forest surrounded by large trees and foliage in the clearing was dead and wilted. The portal itself consisted of a ring of pitch black obsidian with indecipherable symbols that glowed with a faint red hue etched into the stone and a sheet of red light filled the inside of the ring. Suddenly the humming from the portal grew louder and a man clad in black robes fell out of the portal then the portal vanished into the ground without a trace. The man fell face down into the dirt just barely catching himself before hitting the ground. His hood fell back revealing his face. He was young and pale-faced, his eyes were blue and he had shoulder-length black hair and the starting of a beard on his chin. He looked around and scanned the tree line for movement. “Where am I?” he said to himself. He lifted himself to his feet and took another look around. The brush rustled to the left of him then he turned and drew his short sword from its scabbard and shouted “Who’s there!?” A rabbit hopped out of the tree line into view, it stared at the man for a few moments then turned around and hopped back into the forest. The man chuckled slightly and relaxed “It’s just a rabbit” he said to himself. He noticed a parting the trees and saw it was a trail leading deeper into the forest. “Guess I don’t have a choice” he thought. He opened up a pouch on his belt in withdrew his flashlight and turned it on then started down the trail. The man started down the trail into the forest. It didn’t feel right, he always felt as if he was being watched by something just out of sight. It could have been just because it was night or the fact he was in a strange new place but the feeling was still there. The trees where tall looming over the man and the leaves were thick blocking out the sky the only light he had was his flashlight that he kept fixed on the trail. On either side of the trail was thick brush consisting of various plants high enough where if something were hiding in them, they couldn’t be spotted. “Hope this trail leads out of this place” he thought. After walking for a few more minutes he thought he saw the green glow of two eyes just out the corner of his eye. He quickly shown his flashlight on the spot but nothing was there. “This place is getting to you, calm down” he reassured himself and continued down the trail. After walking for another few minutes, the man saw the glow of the eyes again but this time there were three sets of eyes instead of one. The man froze and slowly drew his sword and stared in the direction of the eyes. There was no light except for the eyes and they seemed to be getting closer. The man shown his flashlight in the direction of the eyes but the eyes disappeared. His grip tightened around the sword. “There’s definitely something there” he thought “Should I stay and fight or should I run?” “If I run whatever they are would more than likely follow me. Its probably best to deal with them now.” The man kept the flashlight fixed on the spot listening closely for any sound. Suddenly he heard a growl from behind him. He spun around sword in hand. One set of eyes where mere feet in front of him then their owner leapt out of the brush at the man. The man raised his sword to defend himself and the creature’s mouth closed around the blade. The man was now able to get a better look at the creature. It appeared to be a wolf but its entire body was composed of sticks, branches and leaves. The same glow of its eyes shown threw parting in the wood that made up its body and its teeth were sharpened sticks. The man threw the creature back which landed in the brush beside the path. The man heard a stick snap to his left, he looked and another wolf was preparing to attack. As it jumped the man struck it out of the air with his sword and it shattered into a shower of sticks and branches, the source of the glow disappeared. The man turned around expecting to see another wolf but what he saw was worse. An army of eyes shown from the darkness of the forest and the man froze. “Crap” the man muttered. A single wolf stepped into the light of the flashlight about three feet in front of the man. The wolf howled starting a virtual symphony of howling from the army behind the wolf. The man sheathed his sword, spun on his heel and ran as fast as his legs could carry him down the path away from the wolves. The wolves gave chase and quickly caught up with the man. The man shouted in rage and drew his hand back as if he were about to throw something then a ball of fire appeared in his hand. He threw the fireball which struck a wolf on the back engulfing it in flames illuminating the surrounding area to reveal more wolves. The wolf howled in pain but was cut off presumably dead. The man looked back and saw the burning remains of the wolf. “Did I do that?” he thought. The man drew his hand back again but nothing happened and he continued running. The wolves started to get ahead of the man. The man tripped and tumbled into a clearing in the forest. The man flipped onto his back and looked towards the tree line and was semi-relived to see the wolves stayed in the brush. The man took a second to look around and realized the area was light up by the full moon. “The light must be keeping them at bay.” He thought, but to be careful he drew his sword and raised himself to his feet his sight locked on the tree line and the eyes. He was fully relived to see that, one by one, the eyes disappeared into the forest. The man relaxed, sheathed his sword and got a better look at his surroundings. The trail came to a fork in a road. One path lead to a mountain with what looked like a city built off the side of the mountain. The second path led to a town down the hill where the man stood. The final path lead off the other side of the hill but the man couldn’t see where the final destination might be. “A town, I’ll start there” He said. Then he started down the road that leads to the town. Before he started down the path he noticed that the road sign that pointed to the town read “Ponyville”. “Ponyville huh? Odd name” he remarked and continued on the road. The man was half way down the road when suddenly a large winged creature landed in front of him. The impact made the man fall backwards and his flashlight flew out of his hand. He drew his sword and pointed it at the creature. “Stay back!” he commanded as if it could understand him. The creature opened its eyes that glowed white and the man got a better look at the creature. It was dark but the full moon illuminated just enough of the creature to make out faint details. The creature appeared to be a horse with wings like a Pegasus and a horn like a unicorn. Its fur was dark blue and its mane and tail were translucent purple on the edge and dark purple with spots that shown like stars on the inside. It wore a black pendant with a white crescent moon in the center and a black crown. “Put thine weapon away mortal.” The creature demanded revealing herself to be female. Being in no position to oppose the man slowly put his weapon on the ground. “Rise” the creature told the man. Slowly the man rose keeping his hands in view. As the man stood the creatures eyes stopped glowing revealing them to be bluish-green. The creature’s head was at the same height as the man’s when he was standing. “What and who are you?” the man asked. “Thou hath no idea who we are? Amusing.” The creature said. “I’m new here.” The man replied. “Obviously. Thou shalt address us as Luna, and our sister as Celestia.” Luna said. “Why do you keep saying ‘we’ and talk like someone from a Shakespearean play?” The man asked. “Tis custom for a pony of power to use the royal ‘we’ and speak in the formal tongue when addressing subordinates such as thou.” Luna answered. “I see. Why did you come to me? I doubt it’s for a friendly chat.” The man said. “We sensed a magical disturbance from the Everfree forest and we decided to investigate. We saw thou coming out of the forest so we thought that thou were the cause of said disturbance. What was thine doing in the forest?” Luna asked. “All I remember was I came through a portal and ended up in a clearing a forest, the portal nowhere to be found. I saw a path that lead through the forest so, having no other choice, I followed the path but was attacked by these wolf creatures. I was able to take on three but there was an army of them hiding in the forest. So I ran as fast as I could and luckily came to a clearing. The wolves were apparently afraid of the light and didn’t pursue me beyond the forest. I found this road and saw it lead to a town so I started towards the town then I met you.” The man explained. “And thou hast no memory of anything before that?” Luna asked. “Nope.” The man replied. “What was thine name? or can thou remember?” Luna asked. “Serevok” the man replied. “Serevok, what art thou?” Luna asked. “I am a human.” Serevok replied. Luna examined Serevok for a moment then her eyes widened slightly but then she returned to normal. “Serevok the human, thou shalt come to Canterlot Castle on the morrow then we will decide what to do with thou. In the meantime rest in Ponyville there is an inn to the left of the gate. The innkeeper will allow thine to stay free of charge. We hast ensured this fact.” Luna commanded. Luna spread her wings and Flapped downwards, disappearing into the sky and sending cloud of dirt into the air. Serevok shielded his eyes then the dirt cleared. He dusted himself off picked up his sword and put it in its scabbard then searched for his flashlight. It landed in the grass to the side of the road. The man picked it up and began walking down the road to Ponyville thinking about Luna and what would happen to him at the castle all the while. Again, work in progress. Thanks in advance for your input. please don't hate me if it sucks.
  11. Hey guys, just thought I'd post this here. Critiques and opinions are wanted and greatly appreciated. Thanks!
  12. So, as you probably(don't) know, I am very impatient when it comes to art. I often rush through, missing out on chances to add little details, easter eggs and whatnot. So, as a test of my patience, I sketched up a plan for a rather tedious artwork that would require my full attention and dedication. So, here is a work in progress! Critiques and opinions are wanted and greatly appreciated. I'm pretty proud of the hair and shading as of now, so let's hope that doesn't change!
  13. So, as you probably(don't) know, I am very impatient when it comes to art. I often rush through, missing out on chances to add little details, easter eggs and whatnot. So, as a test of my patience I sketched up a plan for a tedious artwork that would require my full attention and dedication. So, here is a work in progress! Critiques and opinions are wanted and greatly appreciated. I'm pretty proud of the hair and shading as of now, so let's hope that doesn't change!
  14. Doz2nd

    My OC WiP

    So I started with my OC, I'd love some "constructive" critique . Mostly I'm worried about the scale. I know the wheels are supposed to be round, but i don't care -_-
  15. Foxx

    Demure WIP

    Just something I've been working on for the past hour or so. I'll finish it later.
  16. (Story is a work in progress) Prologue My name is name is Shadow Scoundrel. I used to be a human. Funny now I’m here, in a place that I thought was only a fantasy. This place… “This” place I now call home. It’s strange… like it was made for me. A paradise, if you will. I remember how it all began. How I got here, The infestation of Zombies, the "Swarm", Dr Edward Richtofen, Samantha, Maxis. This is where I begin my story. It was 16th of January in the new year. Hmff, seems like ages ago, Never the less It was my senior year at my high school, Bret Harte High, I was typing on the computer for my Senior Project during 5th period. Suddenly the lights go out. I got pissed for a moment, then remembered that it saved right before it went out. I was fine I was happy when I heard “Because of the power outage please contact your parents so then you can go home.” I was able to call home and get a pickup. While I was heading home, I had a weird feeling, like, something bad was about to happen. Regretfully I was right. On the 18th. An Orange fog slowly rolled in The CDC where confused and decided to investigate, as soon as they touched the fog, It explodes, like a nuclear bomb. Yet there is no more fog… I look around I see parts of the earth following in the air, the place where the CDC were, gone. As if they never existed. There is light spewing out of the river, and the heat, it’s like going from a blizzard to a volcano within milliseconds. It hurt a lot, and the smell, it smeed like what I imagine a rotten body going through the crematorium. That is when I saw my first “Real” Zombie. More of a “Shock and Awe” for the first thing of reanimating of a corpse, wait a minute, why is its Eyes glowing? Why is its glowing orange? My mind is racing of things, then one thing of my ideas makes me almost fall flat on my face, my theory of how universes work, where anything you think, is happening in another universe. “Edward.” I whispered. “NO FUCKING WAY!! NO FUCKING WAY!!!!” “Listen, I need your help. I don’t have time to explain everything. DON’T LISTEN TO MAXIS. He is sending me back to when it all started and ending the world I’m sending Samantha down there so then he does not do so. That rat and I don’t get along but we agree on one thing, and that is to not destroy the world. You and Samantha are the only survivors left. You can make some soldiers with the M40A1 Sniper Rifle Packed a Punched. They are Idiots, but they will add some protected firepower, yet they don’t move that much.” Richthofen says. “All right…” I say, "Wait what? I thought you would need some convincing.” Richthofen said. “Richthofen. I know too much as it is.” Chapter 1 “”Do you have any weapons?” Richtofen asks. “A rifle, a handgun, a revolver, and a bat.” I reply. “Good you will need them. You will find her near the barn on your property.” “All right. But is there anyway to go back to my family here?” “What are you talking about?” “I was here but it wasn’t with a shit load of zombies Richtofen, it was nothing like this then I see an orange fog on my property then BOOM! I’m here.” “You must have entered a small rift in the universal plane. I can’t open it. it’s physically impossible. I’m surprised that you are here…” “No way back…” “Correct. Oh.. You can not cross back, it’s just not possible.” That hit me like a wrecking ball. All of me just wanted to do SOMETHING! SOMETHING! Instead of nothing but I couldn’t. Even I knew it, it wasn’t going to happen. I will never see my family ever again. I fell on the ground, partly for the resend of of disgust, for shock, and agony. “My family, forever lost…” “You need to focus! Samantha will arrive any minute, forget your feelings and focus that can save the last of humanity. FOCUS!” Richthofen yelled. “FUCK YOU!” I screamed! “IT WAS YOUR FUCKING FAULT IN THE FIRST PLACE YOU GOD FORSAKEN NAZI!” I yelled. “I know, and regret it. I never meant to do the amount of destruction that I’ve caused. But the thing was is that I wanted to end the war. The element 115 drove me insane. I had no control over myself, and I’m sorry, but there is nothing I can do to change that.” “Two minutes till the particles of her teleportation will hit the atmosphere. Two more till she reassembles at the barn. Hurry! You, must get going, i’m fading! Good luck.” Richthofen said with a gasp. “May god have mercy on your sole Edward.” Then, he was gone. I Hear Maxis, “What! There still is one, where is Samantha!?” I run to the barn to get to Samantha, if she dies, she heads to Maxis I can not let that happen. I had to hold out with the few guns that I have. The blood dripping from all the infected, I don’t know that moment but all went black. I see a night sky surrounded by a light blue waves. What made me regain consciousness was hearing Maxis scream. “STOP!!!!!” and I wake with two fuckers just holding my intestines, I grabbed the bat of mine and slammed them into the ground, the others just standing there. watching me, with soulless eyes. I fall, its like the belt broke on the conveyor belt. She was alive. Holding what looked like quick revive. As soon as it hit my mouth, it was as bad as what dempsie has said “Tastes like red herring dipped in cat piss blaaah...” All of a sudden I feel excruciating pain where my ribcage was.. and I see everything growing back into me. I reminded me so much of “Meet the medic.” Except there is no maniacal laughing, no light show, and no Archimedes. I Picked up Samantha and said. “We need to get back to the house.” she shook her head in agreement. She helped me as I limped back to the house as fast as we could go, still puzzled for the resend of “(Why did Maxis stop them attacking us… because if Samantha dies, wouldn’t that mean she would be back with maxis?)” We enter the farmhouse, “Home sweet home.” i said with a mix of sarcasm and sadness. I locked the doors, barricaded the windows checked my ammo supply. I decided to rest. Still thinking this was all a bad dream. Chapter 2 The darkness in the room is complemented by its coldness. Yet, it has one thing that I myself didn’t expect… Comfort. Yet uncertainty of the darkness as if the comfort that I have was distrusting… The mare of the night spikes through the darkness like a lighthouse in the blanket of fog. Something I don’t see clearly, till she stood at least ten yards, or was it twenty yards, the light blinded me so much I couldn't get a real measurement of the distance. This moment almost got me as much as going into as much as entering Richtofen infested hell hole. Yet hit me harder than losing my family. It is still to me a confusing feeling that I can’t describe in detail myself. yet never the less, I kneel “I notice that you know me, how?” Honestly, how do you tell royalty that you’re a cartoon character from a tv show? “I just had a feeling that you were royalty...thats all.” “All… right… then….” “There is a portal on your property, you must follow the steps that are in this scroll.” “What scroll?” “You’ll see it,, but its now time for you to wake.” I wake with that damn Quick Revive in my mouth. “Fuck this is nasty!” “I see you're up, come in here wait what?” I see the dong lying on the ground, with its embers dying out. With a bag on her back. “What is she doing here, and why is she not chewing us up at the moment?” “(Just like what happened to Richtofen, she went mad with the element. She is nearing her final breath)” She was speechless I brush the side of the dog with my hand, a bolt lurches out like a hidden dagger. “Fuckin Hell!!!” “You say fuck a lot don’t you?” “Yea Samantha.” “How did you know my name?” “(Shit THink of something)” “That german told me before he left.” “Richtofen”? “Yea, him.” I look in the bag. “What are you doing?” “Just looking.” I see the scroll. “What the fuck? That was only a dream.”” “What was only a dream?” “When I was out did you hear anything?” “I heard you mumbling a lot” “I saw a “(don’t want her to think I’m crazy)” a… person of high importance and She” “She?” “Yes a she, anyway she said that there is a way for us to escape by a scroll that is located near by. “Ok, that explains why the bag appeared right after you woke up.” “Wait this appeared. “(Oh so thats why you were speechless)” OK that makes sense, I think.. Well lets see what it says... (Like I said, Work in progress, please put your comments on what you guys think of it so far)
  17. Guest

    The Nightblades.

    lol nah not gonna happen
  18. So, after I drew the initial design for my OC, I wanted to get this scene of her walking through the forest and gazing out of the beautiful scenery out of my head. Here's my progress: I've never really worked with backgrounds before, and I'm not all that skilled with point perspective, so that's what I want criticism on. Am I doing something wrong? Should I stop adding to it because it'll all look like poo when it's finished?? HALP.
  19. I decided this time as I'm working on a doll, I'd go ahead and give updates in my progression! And I decided to start off with Princess Celestia... mostly because I already had most of the supplies on hand (the beauty of hoarding fabric). If you have any more suggestions for characters to make (not just the ponies but others on the show) let me know!
  20. This is my first story ever, aside from a few D&D background stories. I want it to be an organic process. The story will grow and mature as I do. I don't know where the story will be headed. It is an adventure for me, as much as it will be for you. Chapter One Prologue They came from the starry night skies. A village burning. Panic. A small girl sat on the streets amidst the fires. A tear flowed down her cheek. Her mother had perished, just like her spirit. A tall, dark figure was approaching and she clung to the doll in her left hand. It was a doll made by her mother when she was still a baby. She had cherished the lifeless object as if it was her little sister. "Everything is going to be alright, Sora," she whispered. The tall figure now stood right in front of her. She closed her eyes. It seemed time in the valley stood still for just a moment. It was in that very moment that the five year old girl accepted the fate that stood before her. She could hear the roaring noise of the blazes surrounding her. A swift sound reached her ears, before everything went silent. The doll fell on the cold stone ground. Far to the east, a Samurai wakes up from a nightmare.
  21. So, based on my learnings (it's a word) from my animation class, this is the best I could formulate on how to make/animate (at an early level) a My Little Pony character. (I used my OC for sake of being lazy). Each part of the character is interchangeable with identical pieces with different purposes. IE a stationary leg vs. a walking loop leg set. A closed wing vs. a flapping wing. An open eye vs. a blinking eye and so on and so forth. IF and ONLY if people look at this and ask for more will I continue with these. Regardless of what happens, I'm starting the animation. Wish me luck everypony! Here's the image of a brief breakdown.
  22. Here's an awesome WIP I'll debut soon. It's a battle theme for Rarity. I call it "Elegant" because of Rarity's personality. Critique is wanted
  23. This is a work in progress. I was in an airplane and when I imagined pegesi going on their first successful flight, I came up with this orchestral... I want to add more but that will come later. Things I am not comfortable with/ not good ATM Intro: too punchy and loud. Not good enough. Viola solo: just a copy and paste. Should add something else Flute part: maybe something else with the harp Constructive criticism appreciated! Many thanks! WAV: MP3:
  24. Hello. Before I begin, note that OOC chat will be between two brackets ((like this)). ((I've been working on a new pony puppet for Flash from scratch (well, using show traces). I'm gonna use this thread as a fun way to show off progress. Finally getting back into ask threads, plus I don't even need to use any Double Rainboom assets! ))
  25. Here's a nice relexing R&B/funk fusion that I'm working on. I call it "A Stroll Through Ponyville, for it has that carefree feel to it. Critique is wanted