The Shadow Stallion 127 November 9, 2014 Author Share November 9, 2014 Leon, don't apologize. I like long posts. Means you put thought into it : ) Renegade, you are good to go but you forgot the history. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel the Wolfgirl 5,585 November 9, 2014 Share November 9, 2014 OK. I usually don't include history, because as a writer, I feel as though you need to make it up as you go along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 9, 2014 Author Share November 9, 2014 Well you make up history from the point you start RPing, but backstory is always important. It also is a good preventive measure against Mary/gary-sueing and Gmodding/metagaming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMercury 40 November 9, 2014 Share November 9, 2014 That's good to know because I can usually write more than two paragraphs, but of course that would depend on what I'm given to work with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 11, 2014 Author Share November 11, 2014 @Gloomfury @Dusk Shade @Royal Blue Jay You guys are up for the postings! ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CheeseChangeling 31 November 16, 2014 Share November 16, 2014 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/steam-gear-r7482 Sorry I didn't post earlier for confirmination! I'm still a bit new to the MLP: Forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 16, 2014 Share November 16, 2014 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/shadow-dancer-r7483 I want to enter my character Shadow Dancer stuff is above. (Warning I created the character on a cell phone so it is not the best written page but the content is there.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 17, 2014 Author Share November 17, 2014 @ CheeseChangeling, Fine I'll let it slide since you are new. I like the character, but I would like a little more on personality. Not a how-to-get-her-to-like-your-OC guide lol. (No offense meant. What I mean is like "Is she Brave, loyal, honest, trustworthy. and why ) Otherwise I really do like this character, lots of thought and detail in history especially. @ Shadow Dancer, I'm not really sure about your character give me another day to think about it and I'll have your response. In the meantime I suggest adding a lot more to personality and history of your character. Details, Details, Details! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 17, 2014 Share November 17, 2014 I'll see what I can add when I have a real computer in front of me phones are ducky for writing stories or characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenaTheRagDoll 47 November 17, 2014 Share November 17, 2014 Can i join? it looks cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitalSpark 1,830 November 17, 2014 Share November 17, 2014 I assure you this is invested in the plot and the owner of the Hotel. (I will give you a Brohoof if you can guess who it is BY THE END of the RP.) The end?! I'm pretty sure I know it just from the title of the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 22, 2014 Author Share November 22, 2014 Feel free to post up your characters but I cannot guarantee acceptance. But I will give fair review : ) Also I understand Shadow Dancer, take your time : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 22, 2014 Share November 22, 2014 Okay cool also I did slightly improve the personality. As for the history I'll do my best well I got a small idea but it might just be better then nothing thanks for the consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 22, 2014 Author Share November 22, 2014 So you are still working on your character. Well just tell me when you want another look over : ) Also this goes for everyone. If any of you want a character critic, just send me a PM and I can try to give you some helpful suggestions on how to make your character more appealing to RP hosts like myself : ) (Even though Im not a major RP host lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 22, 2014 Share November 22, 2014 You can check my OC out again if you like the addition kinda was an idea but just did its own thing still not the best though but better explains his personality and adds to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 24, 2014 Author Share November 24, 2014 I would look at your character but the link just takes me to the Roleplay characters archive not your actual character. I think it has something to do with the ) at the end of the link .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 24, 2014 Share November 24, 2014 Try now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 24, 2014 Author Share November 24, 2014 Aside from the occassional Grammar and spelling error its all good I should say : ) APPROVED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 24, 2014 Share November 24, 2014 Yay!! I will post soon as I read it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 24, 2014 Author Share November 24, 2014 Im hoping from now on people will follow the RP Order and not just respond back and forth between one another x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dancer 111 November 24, 2014 Share November 24, 2014 I'll try but like I'm used to using first person instead of third person I'm used to the back and forth between characters and not so much with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Stallion 127 November 24, 2014 Author Share November 24, 2014 Well I don't mind Back and forth personally, but the general RPer population seems to like the Order system and its a good system .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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