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Beat the written story, sentence, or song lyrics the user above you just wrote (it has to be in made up originally and by yourself)


I'll start


A man's favorite donkey falls into a deep precipice; 
He can't pull it out no matter how hard he tries; 
He therefore decides to bury it alive. 

Soil is poured onto the donkey from above. 
The donkey feels the load, shakes it off, and steps on it; 
More soil is poured. 

It shakes it off and steps up; 
The more the load was poured, the higher it rose; 
By noon, the donkey was grazing in green pastures. 

After much shaking off (of problems) 
And stepping up (learning from them), 
One will graze in Green Pastures.

almost forgot. it can also be a poem or any other thing. even a picture!

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What is beauty?


Plucked eyebrows and rosy cheeks,
Thin waist, from fasting for weeks,
Breasts and buttocks, gutted and grown
By dishonest silicone?


Is this beauty?


Fifty-dollar low-cut shirts,
Thirty-dollar thigh-length skirts,
Stick a needle in your ears,
Gold and jewels to impress your peers?


Is this beauty?


A sexy smile and fluttering eyes,
A demure demeanour to pick up guys?
Flirty, playful in the streets,
To get some stud under your sheets?


Is this beauty?!




Friendly, honest, just and fair,
Loyal, generous, always there,
A voice that is a welcome sound,
Spreading laughter all around.


When someone comes with crippling fears,
You reassure them, dry their tears.
The care, the kindness that you give,
For some it is a reason to live.


Is this beauty?

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