DormantAccount 308 Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 North reminds me a little of Dex. I didn't go into the clan details with him. Where is the iron mountain? Message carrier was something I considered for Dex, but figured the train did a better job than an endurance Pegasus. Trains wouldn't serve mountain communities pretty well. Continue adding little details like favorite flower. Double check your spelling for typos. No major flaws. As for Rhode, I'm not a big fan of the odd markings, but the overall look is good otherwise. Her special talent deals with changing the season. What does she do the rest of the year? Does she play in towns for the money she needs? It seems that the leaves change on their own in fall weather friends. The run just knocks them off. Do towns really need her? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,318 Posted January 24, 2015 Share Posted January 24, 2015 Dex I was wondering if you could help me organize Lektra's history and personality better? Especially the personality. It feels a little like it's a stitched together patchwork. Or is that just me? What do you think of the flow of the personality and history? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 Dex I was wondering if you could help me organize Lektra's history and personality better? Especially the personality. It feels a little like it's a stitched together patchwork. Or is that just me? What do you think of the flow of the personality and history? I think it's fine. The backstory is a narrative. Personalities can be more piecemeal since they have a lot of different ground to cover. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,318 Posted January 24, 2015 Share Posted January 24, 2015 (edited) Alrighty, thank you for that. Still nothing from the mods on the Equestrian Empire version. Edited January 24, 2015 by bronislav84 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 Posted January 25, 2015 Author Share Posted January 25, 2015 Give them time. It takes a while to do. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 *Bump* I figure I'd pop this back up. It was always open, it just kind of drifted to the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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