Tom Snyder 4,113 March 19, 2015 Share March 19, 2015 I've been thinking maybe this coloration isn't god, but what i wish to know is if anyone can think of a better coloration that best fits her name. Also i made a change that i like, but you can help out if you wish to. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anchorseye 32 March 19, 2015 Share March 19, 2015 Hey! Maybe I can help you out a little ' v ' First off, I like both your designs, they are appealing and im glad there are no eyekilling neon colours.. I personally like the first one more, since I like brown tones, but you´d have to pick on that, but I recommend you using the same background on the designs! A different background can make look the colours in one design better in comparison to the other, it´s tricking your eyes, so I recommend looking at both of them with the same background, you can also use several backgrounds for this, just to see what environment makes your pony look good ' v ' I allowed myself to grab an old handmade base of mine and coloured it in for you, in some colours that still resemble the design you made, but alter a little (also note that colours on your screen might look different than on mine and that my taste in colours is different, but i still hope I can help!) These are just ideas of what your char could look like as well, I recommend to experiment a little untill you really like it! (the top two are the designs you made for comparison) And about the name: I think it suits quite well, it´s not completely dark, since its evening and not night, and it has not just purely blue tones, its has some differences to it! You would just have to decide on what kind of feeling youd like to give to your character: evil or myserious? go for darker colours. gloomy or sad? pale / greyish colours. happy and fundriven? Pinkie Pie is a good example, highly saturated colours.I think you should think abt that again and maybe you´ll find the design you´re looking for soon / v \Sorry if this is way too long but didn´t help, Good luck anyways! Andrew Christopher 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 19, 2015 Author Share March 19, 2015 Hey! Maybe I can help you out a little ' v ' First off, I like both your designs, they are appealing and im glad there are no eyekilling neon colours.. I personally like the first one more, since I like brown tones, but you´d have to pick on that, but I recommend you using the same background on the designs! A different background can make look the colours in one design better in comparison to the other, it´s tricking your eyes, so I recommend looking at both of them with the same background, you can also use several backgrounds for this, just to see what environment makes your pony look good ' v ' I allowed myself to grab an old handmade base of mine and coloured it in for you, in some colours that still resemble the design you made, but alter a little (also note that colours on your screen might look different than on mine and that my taste in colours is different, but i still hope I can help!) These are just ideas of what your char could look like as well, I recommend to experiment a little untill you really like it! (the top two are the designs you made for comparison) And about the name: I think it suits quite well, it´s not completely dark, since its evening and not night, and it has not just purely blue tones, its has some differences to it! You would just have to decide on what kind of feeling youd like to give to your character: evil or myserious? go for darker colours. gloomy or sad? pale / greyish colours. happy and fundriven? Pinkie Pie is a good example, highly saturated colours. I think you should think abt that again and maybe you´ll find the design you´re looking for soon / v \ Sorry if this is way too long but didn´t help, Good luck anyways! Andrew Christopher Thanks for the help, i mean it. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melted Dog 161 March 20, 2015 Share March 20, 2015 Hmm, green isn't her color XD I'd recommend sunset colors, like warm purple, red, orange, yellow etc. if she is a flame oriented pony. Sleepy Hollow | Bramble Twist - My art request shop (BYO Dog) | My art stream! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmberDust 1,118 March 21, 2015 Share March 21, 2015 I like be second one better. I think the white is the main problem. It doesn't seem to suit the rest of the design. Need help with your OC? I'd love to assist you! Just visit my help thread. It's always open, so don't be shy! ♦ My main OC ♦ Vector Commissions ♦ Ask me anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AspenSwift 153 March 21, 2015 Share March 21, 2015 Since you always want to have attention drawn to a pony's eyes, I'd either suggest changing the eye color to something much lighter, such as pink. Either that, or, with the mane, put the white on bottom, and green on top. Other than that, she looks great! I especially like the mane style. If I had to pick one of the two options, I'd have to go with @anchorseye that the top is nice looking; brown is a nice color paired with green, and the colors fit quite nicely. My OC Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 22, 2015 Author Share March 22, 2015 I like be second one better. I think the white is the main problem. It doesn't seem to suit the rest of the design. So what would you replace it with? //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petrus 696 March 22, 2015 Share March 22, 2015 I've never thought of those colors together, I like em'! §I Was Born Awesome, Not Perfect§ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 22, 2015 Author Share March 22, 2015 I've never thought of those colors together, I like em'! Which one? Both? This is going to be the mother of Dark Mist, hence the same last name. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmberDust 1,118 March 22, 2015 Share March 22, 2015 Which one? Both? This is going to be the mother of Dark Mist, hence the same last name. That changes everything lol. I'll see if I can tweak the scheme a bit and come up with something. Maybe use design #2 and make her eyes a deeper, darker blue? (Less towards cyan more towards indigo) http://www.colourlovers.com/palette/3688543/Evening_Mist This is what her palette looks like now. As you can see, the boldest colours are the dark green from the mane's outline, then the white from the mane. You want to draw attention to the eyes, so you'll need to make them bolder or change the hue to make them pop. Another option is simply rotating the colours. 1 Need help with your OC? I'd love to assist you! Just visit my help thread. It's always open, so don't be shy! ♦ My main OC ♦ Vector Commissions ♦ Ask me anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 22, 2015 Author Share March 22, 2015 That changes everything lol. I'll see if I can tweak the scheme a bit and come up with something. Maybe use design #2 and make her eyes a deeper, darker blue? (Less towards cyan more towards indigo) http://www.colourlovers.com/palette/3688543/Evening_Mist This is what her palette looks like now. As you can see, the boldest colours are the dark green from the mane's outline, then the white from the mane. You want to draw attention to the eyes, so you'll need to make them bolder or change the hue to make them pop. Another option is simply rotating the colours. This kind of indigo? i'm not sure if i got it correctly. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmberDust 1,118 March 22, 2015 Share March 22, 2015 This kind of indigo? i'm not sure if i got it correctly. hmm...That doesn't look quite right either... 1 Need help with your OC? I'd love to assist you! Just visit my help thread. It's always open, so don't be shy! ♦ My main OC ♦ Vector Commissions ♦ Ask me anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 22, 2015 Author Share March 22, 2015 hmm...That doesn't look quite right either... So the indigo didn't work? //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmberDust 1,118 March 23, 2015 Share March 23, 2015 So the indigo didn't work?Now it's too indigo. XD not cyan enough. Need help with your OC? I'd love to assist you! Just visit my help thread. It's always open, so don't be shy! ♦ My main OC ♦ Vector Commissions ♦ Ask me anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 23, 2015 Author Share March 23, 2015 Now it's too indigo. XD not cyan enough. You said try indigo for the eyes color. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmberDust 1,118 March 23, 2015 Share March 23, 2015 You said try indigo for the eyes color.No, I said make it more towards indigo and less towards cyan. Like, move the hue dial a little bit to the right. 1 Need help with your OC? I'd love to assist you! Just visit my help thread. It's always open, so don't be shy! ♦ My main OC ♦ Vector Commissions ♦ Ask me anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 23, 2015 Author Share March 23, 2015 (edited) No, I said make it more towards indigo and less towards cyan. Like, move the hue dial a little bit to the right. Like this? I'm trying to do as you say. So does that look better? Edited March 23, 2015 by Candy Star 1 //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marshmallowminish 183 March 23, 2015 Share March 23, 2015 I'd suggest you'd take the white out of her hair completely, and if her name is going to be Dark Mist; give her a much darker and more mystical color scheme- work with a navy blue or dark purple for the hair, and if you absolutely want a secondary color, use a slightly lighter shade of blue for the second color. For the coat, I'd suggest something from brown, dark brown, gray, or dark gray- make the coat colors neutral if you want her hair to pop and cause attention. For the eyes, do something piercing that will catch attention- but make sure it's a cool color, meaning blue, green, or purple. For the eyes, I'd suggest a nice, medium shade of purple. I hope I helped! I left my hearts in Hyrule Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 23, 2015 Author Share March 23, 2015 (edited) I'd suggest you'd take the white out of her hair completely, and if her name is going to be Dark Mist; give her a much darker and more mystical color scheme- work with a navy blue or dark purple for the hair, and if you absolutely want a secondary color, use a slightly lighter shade of blue for the second color. For the coat, I'd suggest something from brown, dark brown, gray, or dark gray- make the coat colors neutral if you want her hair to pop and cause attention. For the eyes, do something piercing that will catch attention- but make sure it's a cool color, meaning blue, green, or purple. For the eyes, I'd suggest a nice, medium shade of purple. I hope I helped! This isn't dark mist, this is Evening Mist; her mother. Edited March 23, 2015 by Candy Star //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marshmallowminish 183 March 23, 2015 Share March 23, 2015 This isn't dark mist, this is Evening Mist; her mother. Uh, okay, it can still be relevant for the color scheme despite who it is, hence the names alluding to darkness. You might also want to change their names a bit, so people as such as I won't get confused. I left my hearts in Hyrule Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 23, 2015 Author Share March 23, 2015 Uh, okay, it can still be relevant for the color scheme despite who it is, hence the names alluding to darkness. You might also want to change their names a bit, so people as such as I won't get confused. Her mother is not evil nor is Dark Mist, The difference between them is that Dark Mist has two personalities; one caring and loving, and the other sadistic. Evening Mist is the parent, and loves her. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marshmallowminish 183 March 23, 2015 Share March 23, 2015 (edited) Could you not be so condescending? Honestly, I am trying to help you, and it hurts me that you are treating me poorly when I am fulfilling a request you made to have your character made better. I have not once said your characters were evil. I said alluding to darkness, literal darkness, not evil darkness. Edited March 23, 2015 by marshmallowbunnyy I left my hearts in Hyrule Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Snyder 4,113 March 23, 2015 Author Share March 23, 2015 Could you not be so condescending? Honestly, I am trying to help you, and it hurts me that you are treating me poorly. I have not once said your characters were evil. I said alluding to darkness, literal darkness, not evil darkness. Sorry, didn't think i was. But anyway, Dark mist is like this: She does become her evil personality, but after a certain event triggers it permanently. and the one shown in the first post is Evening Mist, who is of good alignment. //// My persona and OC: Candy Star //// Ask me anything: Ask Candy Star //// My Music //// //// My DA: (OC requests available) //// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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