Mars Orbit 729 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 Maybe who knows he might win. I just rewrote greens story so he is less generic Or more I dont know I need a second opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 Eh, just waiting to battle so I can share a little bit of Inaxy-poo. Remember, Naxy, too, is OK with going against anyone. Ahem, anyone, yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vae Victis 742 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 (edited) Maybe who knows he might win.I just rewrote greens story so he is less generic *laughs because naga acts like a genuine moron and is prone to getting owned before the fight even truly begins* Like literally, he is the TOTAL opposite of Lorec. Edited April 27, 2015 by Hokuto's Heir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 There's comically overpowered like Eclipse which makes people want to fight him just to lose Speak for yourself, I want to serve him a plate of humility and make him know he deserves it! :okiedokielokie: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 @, Actually, Naga sounds like an interesting guy to fight. Mind condensing your extensively written biopic (which I certainly appreciated) into a brief description? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,323 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 I am speaking for everyone, still. I never said everyone would lose. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 I am speaking for everyone, still. I never said everyone would lose. I didn't mean that to be an attack or anything, against you or anyone else. Just emphasizing my intention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,323 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 Oh dude I get that. He's on my crossout list too eventually. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 I just realized steel rapped in that last post in the rp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vae Victis 742 April 27, 2015 Share April 27, 2015 @, Actually, Naga sounds like an interesting guy to fight. Mind condensing your extensively written biopic (which I certainly appreciated) into a brief description? Even that would take awhile, and I'm afraid that with myself being as busy as I am with my job to go to soon, I might not have the time. Needless to say, I could probably condense a personality, skills, traits, and appearence for you. Would that be okay? ( I do beg your forgivness. College and my job make life difficult. It literally took me three days to write Naga's page, and on a mobile device to boot. Thats why there are minor disparities in grammer and name ( his orginal name being Navu). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 April 27, 2015 Author Share April 27, 2015 what'd i miss? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 After mars fights himself ( yeah im proud of that statement) he fights naga. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 One does not simply self-inflict oneself, dear Mars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 Its more of a joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 I know. Silly one at that one, but hey, could be a real fight if you think about it _3_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 Even that would take awhile, and I'm afraid that with myself being as busy as I am with my job to go to soon, I might not have the time. Needless to say, I could probably condense a personality, skills, traits, and appearence for you. Would that be okay? ( I do beg your forgivness. College and my job make life difficult. It literally took me three days to write Naga's page, and on a mobile device to boot. Thats why there are minor disparities in grammer and name ( his orginal name being Navu). No forgiveness necessary. I know what that's like and I have college concerns to. I'll take the time to read his page, no summarizing necessary. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vae Victis 742 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 (edited) No forgiveness necessary. I know what that's like and I have college concerns to. I'll take the time to read his page, no summarizing necessary. Greatly appreciated. Plus, if you give me feedback, it helps my ability as a writer ^__^ Edited April 28, 2015 by Hokuto's Heir 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 @, Just making sure, I'm not the one who's being unfair now am I? I mean, I'm trying to win but not make it effortless either. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 April 28, 2015 Author Share April 28, 2015 @, Just making sure, I'm not the one who's being unfair now am I? I mean, I'm trying to win but not make it effortless either. dont worry about it, broseph. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremiah 1,586 April 28, 2015 Share April 28, 2015 ok i tweaked my OC's origin and powers, now does anyone want to 'battle', i am looking at you bronislav84.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,323 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 @ The history needs to be more unified. You have parts of it in Other, and neither flows like an actual story. I would suggest go to an open OC rating shop and ask for help. I have one but mine isn't open right now. Powers are still over the top for a non-alicorn, though you explain where they came from which is a good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 Never felt so motivated to type stuff. I also updated mine, but on the other Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 (edited) @, Just so you know I'm not in violation of my own "everything proof shield" rule. All of the tricks Ezekiel is pulling are canon within Fallout Equestria's expanded universe. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fsNLwKTWEt0pawFWLRzBtEPfvDQGitGPh8NN3Zk0xo4/edit# All of the "spirit favors" I'm pulling are laid out in the section for them. Edited April 29, 2015 by Steel Accord Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fractured 2,682 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 (edited) ok i tweaked my OC's origin and powers, now does anyone want to 'battle', I would gladly battle you, but you're still so clearly overpowered I would only consider it with a team. Even explanations and weaknesses can't help that fact; with the powers you have, you're simply too strong to make this a fair or even fun fight 1v1. Again, not saying you have to change, but be prepared to possibly wait quite a while before someone accepts your challenge. Edited April 29, 2015 by Corona de Adamas 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 April 29, 2015 Author Share April 29, 2015 @, Just so you know I'm not in violation of my own "everything proof shield" rule. All of the tricks Ezekiel is pulling are canon within Fallout Equestria's expanded universe. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fsNLwKTWEt0pawFWLRzBtEPfvDQGitGPh8NN3Zk0xo4/edit# All of the "spirit favors" I'm pulling are laid out in the section for them. oh, i knew that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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