Jeremiah 1,586 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 @ The history needs to be more unified. You have parts of it in Other, and neither flows like an actual story. I would suggest go to an open OC rating shop and ask for help. I have one but mine isn't open right now. Powers are still over the top for a non-alicorn, though you explain where they came from which is a good start. and where in sweet equestria will i find a OC rating shop, but thanks for the advice and for the record it is my first OC, i am new to this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lektra Bolt 2,323 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 (edited) and where in sweet equestria will i find a OC rating shop, but thanks for the advice and for the record it is my first OC, i am new to thisThere are many in Creative Resources. Let's not go off topic though, please. Edited April 29, 2015 by bronislav84 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fractured 2,682 April 29, 2015 Share April 29, 2015 and where in sweet equestria will i find a OC rating shop http://mlpforums.com/topic/114541-offering-oc-help/ I know this person, they're very helpful when it comes to OC's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 April 30, 2015 Author Share April 30, 2015 so, everyone agrees on the multiple matches rule? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fractured 2,682 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 (edited) so, everyone agrees on the multiple matches rule? I'm all for it. @Orion Caelum Edited April 30, 2015 by Corona de Adamas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 Sure, makes things to a lot more fast _._ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vae Victis 742 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 Yup! No problems here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremiah 1,586 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 http://mlpforums.com/topic/114541-offering-oc-help/ I know this person, they're very helpful when it comes to OC's. i visited an OC rating shop, waiting for a reply, anyway what's going on here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MozillaToast 233 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 Fine with that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fractured 2,682 April 30, 2015 Share April 30, 2015 i visited an OC rating shop, waiting for a reply, anyway what's going on here? agreeing on the rule accepting multiple matches per thread. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 @, I appreciate you not carpet bombing me with Gary Stu powers, but I just gotta say this . . . . really? Now we're adding Diamond Dog burrowing to the list of Eclipses' abilities? Is there anything he CAN'T do?! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 May 1, 2015 Author Share May 1, 2015 (edited) its not that deep...and he used magic to do it. i thought it might be a little op...but i thought id add a weakness, to even it out. but if you think its still too much, ill edit (man, its hard playing as an op character!!) Edited May 1, 2015 by PeytonJay 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 its not that deep...and he used magic to do it. i thought it might be a little op...but i thought id add a weakness, to even it out. but if you think its still too much, ill edit (man, its hard playing as an op character!!) I appreciate it, and I'm going to post, but you don't need to worry about evening it out, it's STILL slanted in your favor. Ezekiel got impaled and is bleeding! I appreciated that you picked up on what I was hinting at and didn't add an immunity to poison that Eclipse "just remembered he had." @, On the subject of weaknesses though, you pretty much picked the perfect approach. Ezekiel's perception S.P.E.C.I.A.L. is pretty low, so even by underground standards he's not going to know where the attack is coming from. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 May 1, 2015 Author Share May 1, 2015 (edited) hes not going to launch an attack, hes too scared. hes making a plan... Edited May 1, 2015 by PeytonJay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 hes not going to launch an attack, hes too scared. hes making a plan... Well that plan will likely succeed because I can't act on that knowledge now can I, and Ezekiel thinks Eclipse is going to attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 I like this fight :3 Do continue guys 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 I like this fight :3 Do continue guys Thank you, what do you like about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 May 1, 2015 Author Share May 1, 2015 im gonna go ahead, and start the other fight 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 I just realized im next. I also just realized I will be shreked....BUT ILL DO IT ANYWAY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inax 92 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 Hmm . 3. Can't be specific (kind of skim a bit, but read the last few) but the swordmen(or colt/stallion)-ship and patience. Yah I'll get to reading...eventually o ^o D: Don't hate me T^T 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Accord 6,657 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 Hmm . 3. Can't be specific (kind of skim a bit, but read the last few) but the swordmen(or colt/stallion)-ship and patience. Yah I'll get to reading...eventually o ^o D: Don't hate me T^T Why would I hate you? You expressed liking my pieces of the RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 May 1, 2015 Author Share May 1, 2015 green edge vs rebilac...this is gonna be the first time he's fought... so, what the arena? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 *ahem* A MOTHAF*CKIN PANCAKE!!!1!¡!1!1¡¡¡!!1!¡ *dubstep plays* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 May 1, 2015 Author Share May 1, 2015 you know what? okay. there'll be a large chunk of butter on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mars Orbit 729 May 1, 2015 Share May 1, 2015 HELL YEAH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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