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So I recently started a channel on YouTube and found out how hard it is to get subscribers. So being a brony I decided to share my work on the forums. Although it doesn't help me get more subscribers, it helps get my work into the world. So I decided I'll do what I always wanted to do, be more with the fandom.

If you can bare my terrible singing (with no music I'm sorry to say) and are willing to hear more you can request whatever songs you think I should cover (If that's even legal)

Friendship Through The Ages: Cover (This inspired me to sing/write and became my first video, )



If you can deal with my awful writing AND bare my terrible singing, you can give any song ideas as well. From ponies in MLP to ponies you made or even non-pony subjects (If that even exists). This can also be your song too so feel free to add any other ideas and I'll do what I can. (I'll ask if you want the lyrics after I make sure the song is approved by you)

I am all Alone (A song that partially represents my OC, I just made this)

(Not the happiest song but he's not the happiest pony)

Keep in mind that with just starting this YouTube channel I also just started singing/writing so don't expect the best (my recording isn't the best either) and I upload to Youtube since I'm new and it's easy

My YouTube channel is in my signature if you want to give me a chance, I would really appreciate the opportunity to practice on my work with you

Update:
An example of me improving

 

https://soundcloud.com/humblehymn/track-1-bounced-87

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So these are some short songs I made as "OC Theme Songs" if you will...

Emerald Star

Rave Darkmane

Flame Heart

The first two I did cause I was bored and the bronies were awesome people with awesome OCs (I hope they don't mind me talking about them...)

Emerald Star

JonasDarkmane

The third was a request I happily did

Luka Silver

 

If you want one done for you just ask

 

Captain Caramel

http://mlpforums.com/user/32243-pucksterv/

(Don't know how to make proper links :( ...)

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maybe I'm doing this wrong....but the link just takes me back to the start of this topic

I'm guessing you want your OC Silver Melody

Anything specific you want added?

I'm thinking country...

Here you go, I tried going country cause, Appleloosa

If there's anything you want me to change just say

Do you mind this being public?

Do you want the Lyrics?

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I have kinda a cool song idea! (And don't think you won't get subs; I might sub later =3) What about a trap song that literally samples a pair of sunglasses? You could hit 'em in different ways and get drum/perc samples.

 

Err, I guess it's a little weird, but it could be fun too! Anyway ... Best of luck /) <3

 

(Sunglasses song weirdness or not. =3 I look forward to your music ^-^)

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so I'm still new at this whole music, thing, and had to wiki what a trap song is. Came back regretting that with a small headache

(I have trouble focusing....)

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so I'm still new at this whole music, thing, and had to wiki what a trap song is. Came back regretting that with a small headache

(I have trouble focusing....)

'on't worry about it ^-^ You could always apply the idea to the genres you know a bit better.

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I'm not finished with her background, but i guess i should have taken into account your lack of focus. My bad, but i think you can do better if you find good source of motivation. I can't sing worth a crap, but i do it regardless, people told me i sound baritone, where i'll sing like a talking tone. If i try to go higher, my voice breaks up; so i keep trying to break that limit.


Here's the wiki for it if you don't know what that is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baritone

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......well.....I thought it was pretty good given with what I had to work with....but as I said if you want it changed just ask.....like I got anything better to do... I can take it down if you want...

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ok...anything in particular...or do you just want to throw into the pool hoping that I swim...I can try either way...

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ok...so....I think I managed to keep my head above water...but that's for you to decide...I should say I can't remember the last time I did a poem....barely know how to write a song...so...here we go...

 

As a mere pony

But truly a centaur

Leaving behind those

Who can't see a gift

Of true writing and heart

While avoiding a war

Hiding among others

and worried about acceptance

 

I tried...sort of....

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ok...so....I think I managed to keep my head above water...but that's for you to decide...I should say I can't remember the last time I did a poem....barely know how to write a song...so...here we go...

 

As a mere pony

But truly a centaur

Leaving behind those

Who can't see a gift

Of true writing and heart

While avoiding a war

Hiding among others

and worried about acceptance

 

I tried...sort of....

(hugs) not what i expected, but its ok. though, i also hoped you didnt rush it. I would have been willingly to wait.

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@PeytonJay

 

Hope it's like your suggestion (or maybe it's to much like it...). Just say if there's anything needed to be changed, need to make longer or I should just make a better version later.

Lyrics:

 

 

There is a pony

Not known in any story

Calls himself a traveler

Known far and wide as Caliber

He can and shall find

Any evil in mind

He'll keep you safe with his sword

Much greater than any ward

You will never hold him down

Never find an equal challenger

You can live a thousand years but can,

Never come close to Caliber

Always will he be there for his friends

Never to believe there is an end

Calls himself a traveler

Known far and wide as Caliber

 

 

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@PeytonJay

 

Hope it's like your suggestion (or maybe it's to much like it...). Just say if there's anything needed to be changed, need to make longer or I should just make a better version later.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9I-GdhDU6s

Lyrics:

There is a pony

Not known in any story

Calls himself a traveler

Known far and wide as Caliber

He can and shall find

Any evil in mind

He'll keep you safe with his sword

Much greater than any ward

You will never hold him down

Never find an equal challenger

You can live a thousand years but can,

Never come close to Caliber

Always will he be there for his friends

Never to believe there is an end

Calls himself a traveler

Known far and wide as Caliber

i luv it so much! thanks!

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@Ice Blizzard

Here you go, say if anything needs to change. 

Lyrics:

 

 

Stories of earth ponies 

Tell of one much brighter

Born of the great north

Known to be a fighter

With just one kick

He'll leave you out to dry

With just one punch

He'll send you to the sky

never will you break his shield

Or best him on the battlefield, he's,

Ice Blizzard

He's worse than any storm

Ice Blizzard

No chance of being warm

Ice Blizzard

The best there is to be

Ice Blizzard

Has power to freeze the sea

He'll cover you with ice

You'll learn how to be nice

If you ever meet his rage

You'll regret that through this age, he's,

Ice Blizzard

No better cryomancer

Ice Blizzard

With him you'll find the answer

Ice Blizzard

What more do you need to know?

Ice Blizzard 

He'll be sure to make it snow

 

 

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@rolle

I can try with a darker voice if you want, or if there is anything else that needs to change. (hope I got the name right...) 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vPqX6NsBmMk

Lyrics:

 

 

Leave a pony alone, you'd get misery

Have them face the world, you'll get strange

Punish them, you'll make them dangerous

But all together you'd get Shachange

Shachange, Shachange,

a pony who is like no other

Shachange, Shachange,

With loyalty as if your own brother

With tentacles that grow from his back

And a stomach that hungers for meat

There are no wounds that ever bother him

And a pupil glowing red with heat

Shachange, Shachange,

Deadly as a venomous snake

Shachange, Shachange,

A demon that you shall make

 

 

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think you could make me an instrumental one for Lightning Strike?
well I recently just started practicing my singing and song writing with not much to go on...out of nowhere and on my own I should add....I have no idea where to begin making new instrumental music...I probably should learn somehow, but what I'm doing now is already a huge leap for me, so it's easier said then done...sorry, I would be happy to if I could :( ....it would give me a lot more confidence than my singing does...
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its easy, you just use a music making application, i know of one but i sadly forgot the name of it  :( , but i remember the icon, the icon is a guitar, (also its a pc app)


good news, i remembered what its called, the music making app (for pc) is called GarageBand


you can still make the song have words if you want

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