Count Paradox 3,548 Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 @@Hibiscus Bloom, Well I tried with the Hawaiian theme (though I shouldn't complain since I was the one who suggested it) but if it didn't come out Hawaiian, I still think it's a song you'll like...I hope... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GHNHV_i8Bos Lyrics: From Haywaii-i, Haywaii-a There's a mare so happy-y Who's lucky, and glad to be of family with hospitality So intelligent, with witty remarks She's a pony with a heart so strong She loves humming, and dancing, Through all the days and all night long She owns a shack to the west, and does what she's best She makes drinks like you wouldn't believe Around the beaches, with crystal seas That's so beautiful, you won't want to leave She loves all her friends, until the end and she'll be happy to make more room There's no pony that's quite like her You should meet her she's Hibiscus Bloom Hopefully I won't have to go back and rework on the other songs, or that the requirements for another won't be done soon. Anyways you're free to leave ideas for your song and anything else you want me to put in. I should note that I haven't done any canon characters yet, except for a short song I made for Fluttershy, but I don't know Octavia as well as her and I didn't describe her too much in it. So what I'm saying is that I might not get characters right in the song as well as I should, especially a background character like Octavia....but I'm willing to try and see what happens. I will try and give as much detail about octavia as possible, along with info about the song in mind. It will be a little while before i can accumulate my ideas together, since im a bit busy at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibiscus Bloom 91 Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 Lyrics: From Haywaii-i, Haywaii-a There's a mare so happy-y Who's lucky, and glad to be of family with hospitality So intelligent, with witty remarks She's a pony with a heart so strong She loves humming, and dancing, Through all the days and all night long She owns a shack to the west, and does what she's best She makes drinks like you wouldn't believe Around the beaches, with crystal seas That's so beautiful, you won't want to leave She loves all her friends, until the end and she'll be happy to make more room There's no pony that's quite like her You should meet her she's Hibiscus Bloom I love it! It would have been fine if you didn't want to go through with the Hawaiian theme, but it turned out great. The lyrics are especially awesome, thanks!! I'm going to be humming this all day XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicdashie 120 Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 So I was thinking maybe we could do something kinda like the one you did for the Hawaiian pony, ya know, like how you don't know her name until the end of the song. Sorta like this (as the ending): hanging out with friends, she'll always like, Many know her as Lightning Strike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacelynUSB 286 Posted May 26, 2015 Share Posted May 26, 2015 1 I wouldn't call myself an expert... 2 It's pretty good, I could use that in the song as well as a starting point for how the song plays out 3 sorry I didn't reply earlier, was working on another request @, I tried...using two different tones of voices from one person in one song is harder than it seems for me, and trying to use them together at the same time just creates an echo (at least with the way I'm trying to it)...also I'm not sure if it's possible to sing with a british accent, as even most british singers lose their accents when singing (from what I just learned) so I don't want to create a song, forcing an accent into it...sorry Lyrics: Jam: I was young and I was hopeless Abandoned with out a home I couldn't ever see the light For a long time I was alone But you were there when needed You stood by next to me When I knew you were there I was happy as could be Plot: You were kind and so charming In ways I was yet to know I was foolish to ignore it Afraid and just said no But now I truly see you As the one that I shall love And there is no other pony That I will treat more above Both: Our love will conquer all No matter what we face As long as I have you I'll have something to embrace Jam: Some may call it strange Plot: While some may just hate Both: But when I look at you I will always say it's fate Jam: You always stayed with me Plot: As well as you did too Both: Nothing will ever break us That is always true So far we will go We will never stop There is no competition As we will always be on top Yes. You get an A. In fact, you graduate from school *gives you diploma* Seriously, though, that was a good song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humble Hymn 90 Posted May 26, 2015 Author Share Posted May 26, 2015 Yes. You get an A. In fact, you graduate from school *gives you diploma* Seriously, though, that was a good song. well this involved using new elements for me, like trying to put two different voices into one song, so I'm glad I managed to come up with something you like. Sorry you had to wait a week for this, but it was a subject that I'm not used to getting so close to, so I kinda put it off to let it sink in. Sorry if I sound like a jerk for doing that, but I guess I'm not perfect...though I managed to put my differences behind me and get a new idea of things, so I should probably thank you thank you for this suggestion of a song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicdashie 120 Posted May 27, 2015 Share Posted May 27, 2015 Oh my gosh I just realized your sig spelled Humble Hymn, I thought it was just a bunch of music notes before XD, anyway, not to sound impatient or anything, but have you come up with any lyrics for the song? Actually wait, never mind I kind of want it to be a surprise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humble Hymn 90 Posted May 27, 2015 Author Share Posted May 27, 2015 @@sonicdashie, well I'm giving myself some time before I work on another song, as I want to let you continue on contributing to it. Normally I would let inspiration flow through me and do what I can to finish my songs in one sitting, but this is my first time actually working with the person who requested a song so I'm taking these steps cautiously. I'm sure I could finish your song with the information I have, but with everything that's happening, I want to be sure you contribute with whatever you feel is necessary. Though this could turn out like that mlp episode (don't know the name or feel like looking it up) where Rarity wants to make dresses for the mane 6 and wants them to contribute, but that just makes it worse...eh, I'm sure it'll work out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicdashie 120 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 im sure it will to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicdashie 120 Posted July 6, 2015 Share Posted July 6, 2015 Hey humble, um, now that the rp is over, do u have enough info to start the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicdashie 120 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 One more thing, think u could use the picture that's currently my profile picture instead of the painting (it's a little easier to see her), but if u cant thats alright ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Nature 321 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Can you do one for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humble Hymn 90 Posted November 2, 2016 Author Share Posted November 2, 2016 Update: back for now, improved my setup, got a little bit more courage, so let's see how things work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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