OOC Shadows of Manehatten [OOC]

[Pucksterv 4,505]

Link for the rp: Shadows of Manehatten

Link for my oc: Detective Midnight

The Story:

The story begins with Detective Midnight, waiting at the entrance of the Manehatten Police Department (M.P.D) for the new rookies and transferred officers. Midnight works at the Murder and other serious crime division. After discovering that his partner was corrupted, there was incident were one of his officers got shot and killed (by Midnight's corrupted partner) and the other team members were transferred because the bureau thought it would be good idea to start over with new officers.

When the new members join the team, they are send to investigate a murder which will later turn out to be done by a serial killer, following several murders after. This does not mean that the team will only be busy with that specific case. During the story, a lot of other crimes will be investigated like foalnappings, hostage situations and other serious crimes.

I imagine the ending of the rp being that they catch the serial killer and then go out for a drink at the local bar.

If you have any problem or tips about the story, please let me know

 

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The theme

The story has a pretty dark theme but I want to be happy as well. I want the story have a little humor and maybe even a little romance (as long as it doesn't take over the story)
This is just normal ponies btw, not anthro ponies. Just try to imagine that ponies have thumbs too and can pull a trigger.

 

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The rules:

• Even though the rp involves guns and murders, try not describing stuff like blood and guts too much since it is consider NSWF
• When talking to another character, try to mention them or quote them to avoid confusion, it's okay if you forget but try not too.
• If the rp seems to go to fast and your missing to much, say it, I don't want anyone feeling left out.
• if something goes wrong, stop posting and contact me. We will fix it. If I am not available at that time, just wait patiently
• the basic rules in rp'ing

Break the rules, you are out!

 

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The team:

• Pucksterv (Detective Midnight)
• Buzz (Buzz)
• Frosty V (Frost Typhoon)
• FlutterstepHD (Firestorm)

Criminals and guest appearances:

• pucksterv (I will be controlling several npc)
• Gloomfury (Malachi Semi)
• Ice Blizzard (Carmine Backdraft)
• Peytonjay (Rebilac)
• Intercity 125 (Sparkle Sword)

Edited July 18, 2015 by Pucksterv

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

 

Name: Sparkle Sword

Name OC and link: link is in sig

How do you want your character to be introduced? (give a good description, not too short) Sparkle and White were walking back too there hotel in manehatten when Sparkle was knocked cold and his girlfriend White was taken away from him

What will your character be in this story? (Rookie/transfer/criminal/witness/victim/other) Wittness / voulenter 

Anything extra about your character that we should know? he has an extremely short fuse and it's easy too light 

What will your role be in the rp? (in background/ big role/in between, depends how much you will be posting in the rp) inbetween 'cause im in ALOT of rp's right now...

How long will you be staying in the rp? (This meaning that for instance you are a criminal (or victim/witness) and after you get caught you are no longer a part of the rp unless ye want to) until White is rescued... or i might stay it depends...

 

 

Name:White Wing

Name OC and link:https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/white-wing-r8318White Wing

How do you want your character to be introduced? (give a good description, not too short) basically the same as Sparkle just with her being taken instead

What will your character be in this story? (Rookie/transfer/criminal/witness/victim/other) victim

Anything extra about your character that we should know? quick too apologize and has a dead brother

What will your role be in the rp? (in background/ big role/in between, depends how much you will be posting in the rp) same as sparkle

How long will you be staying in the rp? (This meaning that for instance you are a criminal (or victim/witness) and after you get caught you are no longer a part of the rp unless ye want to) same as sparkle exept when she's found she won't do anything but leave

[Buzz 1,766]

Name: Buzz
Name OC and link: Buzz
How do you want your character to be introduced? In the departments firing range overlooking and testing the different firearms used by the M.P.D and how they differ to that of the A.W.P.D (Applewood police department) where he was before being transferred. 
What will your character be in this story? Transfer
Anything extra about your character that we should now? Buzz grew up in the rougher part of Manehatten from birth to his 19th birthday. He knows the locals of this area, however he doesn't like all of them. He also isn't a fan of the upper-class "snobs" in Manehatten, but will put up with them if the task requires so.
What will your role be in the rp? Big role preferable, but side character is ok if there isn't enough room
How long will you be staying in the rp? Unless something happens to my character during the RP, i hope to stay till the end.

[Pucksterv 4,505]

Name: Buzz

Name OC and link: Buzz

How do you want your character to be introduced? In the departments firing range overlooking and testing the different firearms used by the M.P.D and how they differ to that of the A.W.P.D (Applewood police department) where he was before being transferred. 

What will your character be in this story? Transfer

Anything extra about your character that we should now? Buzz grew up in the rougher part of Manehatten from birth to his 19th birthday. He knows the locals of this area, however he doesn't like all of them. He also isn't a fan of the upper-class "snobs" in Manehatten, but will put up with them if the task requires so.

What will your role be in the rp? Big role preferable, but side character is ok if there isn't enough room

How long will you be staying in the rp? Unless something happens to my character during the RP, i hope to stay till the end.

So is he an informant or does he go to the crime scene and help out with investigation as well?

[Yoshikupo 301]

Name: Banner

Link: https://mlpfourms.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/banner-r8273

Introduction: Banner will be approaching the police station going to talk to Midnight justice about how she was transferred from ponyville to deal with more crime here so she's a bit mad because she has been taken away from her girlfriend but nothing big ever happens there.

what will my Character be in this story?: a transfer from ponyville

extra things you should know: she is both angry and excited to be transferred from ponyville to manehatten she also works hard so that maybe she can be sent back to ponyville some time

what's her role in the rp: she is very involved in her work so hopefully a big part

How long will she be staying?: beginning to end

[Pucksterv 4,505]

I like all these characters already! 

 

I still need a rookie thou, it will make the story more interesting. Also need more female characters

[Buzz 1,766]

So is he an informant or does he go to the crime scene and help out with investigation as well?

He can do both, i put that but about growing up in Manehatten so he can help the investigations

[Pucksterv 4,505]

He can do both, i put that but about growing up in Manehatten so he can help the investigations

Alright

[Snow Frostflame 3,553]

wait whats the point of making the planning separate from the OOC?

 

Name: Snowflake Frostflame (been filling out so many job applications I nearly put my real name)
Name OC and link: Snowflake Frostflame link is below
How do you want your character to be introduced? nothing too fancy... since there is really no way of comparing it to my story there is no point in being an important protagonist... maybe have him start out along side one of the other officers... or maybe have him do something random but humerus
What will your character be in this story? an ex-adventurer who just recently joined the force
What will your role be in the rp? a side character... or maybe even a comic relief to the main character

How long will you be staying in the rp? until I have no reason to be here... or the usual the RP dies
 

Edited June 18, 2015 by Snowflake Frostflame

[P-Jay 1,985]

tempted to use rebilac for this...

[Yoshi89 4,878]

Name: Yoshi89
Name OC and link: Thrillseeker
How do you want your character to be introduced? Thrillseeker's steady job is a ride operator on Poney Island. However, with the rent for his apartment going up, he is struggling to make ends meet. He has heard about the police force looking for extra recruits and is not only looking to make a few extra bucks but to make an impact on crime reduction.
What will your character be in this story? Rookie
Anything extra about your character that we should now? Thrillseeker is a lifelong Manehattan resident. What he lacks in physical combat, he makes up for in agility and street smarts.
What will your role be in the rp? I expect to post a lot so I may have Thrillseeker see plenty of action in the RP. Since Thrillseeker is joining as a rookie, I expect it to be a wake up call for him to see what law enforcement is like.
How long will you be staying in the rp? As much as the RP is in operation.

[Pucksterv 4,505]

wait whats the point of making the planning separate from the OOC?

The other ooc was just planning, this is the official signup, I rather make a new thread that edit the other one. 

I need a few more people to signup, criminals prefered

After that, we can start the rp

Edited June 18, 2015 by Pucksterv

[Frosty V 309]

Name: Frosty V

Name OC and Link: Frost Typhoon (under reconstruction at the current time , any questions or concerns you can pm them to me!)

How do you want your character to be introduced?: Normally. Just arriving at the station, trying to be early and leave a good impression. This is not his first ever but pobably the most gruesome, yet in technical terms he is still very much a Rookie.

Anything extra to know about your character: He takes pride in his work, a bit stubborn but not over the top. Coupled with that he likes to speak his mind in group situations, to get his opinion heard out in on a discussion type attitude.

What will your character be in this story?: Rookie.

What you role in the RP be?: I plan on posting a lot so a relatively large role on the roleplay I would hope

How long will you be staying in the roleplay?: As long as the RP runs!

Edited June 19, 2015 by Frosty V

[Gloomfury 240]

@@Pucksterv, 

 

Name: Malachi Semi
 

link: Malachi
 

How do you want your character to be introduced?: Being caught while he's bashing the kneecaps of some pony who tried to skip town so he would't have to pay Malachi.
 

What will your character be in this story? Sub-boss to one of Manehattans top crime families.

 

Anything extra about your character that we should now? : Can see the darkness in others hearts, along with the light. He also hides his horn well and only shows it to those he really trust.
 

What will your role be in the rp? (Hopeful to be part of the story. The help of a sub-boss and son of a the Don of a major crime family could be good to have.
 

How long will you be staying in the rp?: As long as this keeps me interested. Short attention span to things that I find dull.

Edited June 20, 2015 by Gloomfury

[Pucksterv 4,505]

@@Gloomfury,

 

If I understand correctly, yer character will be some kind of informant?

[Gloomfury 240]

@@Pucksterv,

 

Kinda but not really. He's not a rat. But he'll help bring in a killer. But will want something in return.

[Flutterstep 35,383]

Name: FlutterstepHD

Name OC and link: Firestorm

How you want your character to be introduced: Firestorm was climbing around rooftops, as she does, but due to the bad rain conditions, she looses her grip after hanging on the edge of a building and slips. She falls to the ground on to a sidewalk, breaking her back-left leg and her tail. She had also hit her head, causing concussion. Some participants witnesses this happen. She struggles and picks her self back up, but is very confused, disoriented and in need of medical care.

What will your character want to be in this story: A friend and informant to the participates as well as a witness and a victim.

Anything extra about your character that we should know: Firestorm has a respect for the police force in Manehatten and has even considered to become one in the foreseeable future. She likes to help out when ever possible and loves hearing stories involving the police.

What will your role be in the RP: A main reoccurring character, but only makes brief appearances.

How long will you be staying in the RP: As long as I'm needed.

Edited June 22, 2015 by FlutterstepHD

[Anon In Equestria 57]

So I see your still in need of a criminal, I have a few ideas, a few of them are just rip-offs of certain characters from games, tv and films, but I'm sure I can come up with something more unique if you want?

[Pucksterv 4,505]

So I see your still in need of a criminal, I have a few ideas, a few of them are just rip-offs of certain characters from games, tv and films, but I'm sure I can come up with something more unique if you want?

I am indeed in need for criminals so it would be very helpful

Edited June 25, 2015 by Pucksterv

[P-Jay 1,985]

okay, if you actually need criminals, rebilac is joining this RP.

[Pucksterv 4,505]

okay, if you actually need criminals, rebilac is joining this RP.

Link for character?

[J.R. 3,178]

@@Pucksterv, 

You want a REAL criminal?

Check this guy out  https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/carmine-backdraft-r8445

[Pucksterv 4,505]

@@Pucksterv, 

You want a REAL criminal?

Check this guy out  https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/carmine-backdraft-r8445

Does this mean that you will join?

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

*blinks twice*

[J.R. 3,178]

Does this mean that you will join?

Sure, I join with Carmine.

 

As a bad guy, just have him commit crimes and such and try to avoid getting arrested?