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(Update ) sorry it's taking me so long on these stories! Been a little busy and distracted! Got hynosparlees done and blazed time you're next! I really enjoy writing these for the community !

 

 

Hi there ! I'm trying to develop my writing style and voice,so I thought I'd take a swing at this. I'm not the best and sometimes I have problems in life, but I'll try. I really want to help you with your ocs story. I will also do poetry and stories as a gift for someone or about events in your life. Ocs are not limited to ponies.

 

I do mostly dark or slice of life. But I'm wiling to try and expand my horizons. Note that I dint do nudity. Cloppimg, graphic sex scenes or violence, and I reserve the right to say no to a request if I feel like I do not have the time or I feel I wouldn't be able to give you a good storie.

 

I'll take five require at a time.

 

1. Blazed time

2. Aritc sunbeam

 

3. Love -pony

 

4.

 

5.

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Tear drops fell from the sky , gently coating the midnight sys stars. Generations had watched and ponder these stars for years, but it wasn't far from Princess Luna's mind. Sh gave a heifty sigh and laid her head down on tye edge of the balcony. The aura of sapphire blue surrounded her , a magic spell to keep out all others. The 1000 year old mare, controller of dreams and the realm of the night could barely breath. Dimming any appearance of the scene of her in this state, only one with powerful magic could break it. Luna didn't need her sister to find her.

 

 

It seemed no matter how hard she tried to smile and pretend everything was okay, things never seemed to be as shiny and hopeful even in the brightest sun. Her eyes, misted over, didn't seem to notice a hoof placed on her shoulder.

 

"Sister, you have been avoiding me lately" Princess Celestia, a great and magical ruler of all of Equestria, said soflty.

 

Princess Luna didn't bother to look up as she let more tears blur her vision.

 

 

"I-i I don't know what you're talking about. Shouldn't you be in bed, Celestia? The sun isn't going to come up without you..' Her voice was only a whisper, barely audible except to the open ears of Celestia.

 

Celestia sighed, bending over her little sister , trying to wrap her hoofs around her. Luna pointedly jerked away, shoving her sister aside as she paced around the balchony. How could her sister ever understand the pain and torture of not being able to feel love, the darkest whispers of her former self haunting her every thought. She could barely sleep, remembering the damage and heartache she had caused for so long. Her formn as Nightmare Moon wasn't the only thing eating her up, it was the way life seemed to go well for others, their happiness and joy radiating like the sun that brighten everyone's lifes. Not the way her beautiful nighttime was ignored or taken for granted.

 

Maybe it was a lot of things. besides others being happy and the nightime. It could just be she didn't know who-or what she was anymore. Luna's vision blurred more, causing her to crash into a solid form. Gripped firmly by the shoulder's she saw the outline of her sister.

 

 

Celestia gave her a little shake and wiped the flow of liquid coursing down Luan's face. Her precious baby sibling always had these fits, ever since they were fillies and their parent's died. She always saw the haunting sadness in Luna's eyes, plaguing her even in the brightest moments of life. She could usually calm her down, but lately,things had been rocky between them and she was so busying running the castle and attending to royal affairs, she hadn't been paying as much attention to Luna as she should. Why couldn't Luna just say what was wrong? Why couldn't she figure out how to help the only family member she had?

 

 

"LUNA! You must tell what is wrong, I can't stand to see you like this.. in this much distress and pain.. Please speak to me... tell me what to do..'

 

Luna jerked away from Celstia, giving her a harsh glare and a harsh laugh. "Like you'll ever be able to comprehend anything above the sun rising . Maybe I just don't have the spark you do, so just leave me alone!!"

 

Luna rushed off the balcony and almost made it to her bedroom chambers, but was stopped short by the tight embrace of Celestia's arms. She squirmed and struggled but to no avaiil. Her sister had a tight grip on her. The warmth and their pounding hearts were the only sounds in Luna's mind. Barely able to contain a sob she buried her face in the brilliant white fur of Celestia.

 

"Why Celestia, why?! Why am I like this, why can't i feel anything besides pain... OI wish I could die... I want to die!" Her blubbered words were meant by a soft, murmuring lulaby. A song their mother used to sing to them as children.

 

 

'Hush now, my precious one, don't say such things. You are essential tot his world and to my life as well. Things will never be easy for us, but I promise you I'll always be there for you. Can-can you tell me what I can do to help?"

 

Luna sighed, and nestled close to her sister. " I can't talk as of late.. I can hardly think.. I don't know why life is worth it or even that great.... Sister, you are so precious to me. Please.. just.. stay.... "

 

The moon light night reflected two forms on the balchony. As the stars gleamed on, the ponies of canterlot thought they heard a beautiful humming with an occansial cry filled with pain. Mother's and fathers held their children closer, crickets chirped and played their music, and two sister's faced a new discovery. Even in the darkest of times, sunlight can shimne, and even when it doesn't, love will guide abpath for you.

 

It will always be a lesson worth discovering on balcony night's and dreamy, beautiful days.

I know it's not the best , but I do try . I think it's borderline b/c+ Area. I need to practice and challenge myself

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I like it.  

 

WORKS WELL: You've got a vast vocabulary, and your imagery is quite vivid.  

 

WORK ON: On the other end, make sure to triple-check your posts before hitting 'enter', as there's a few typos present.

 

That being said, I think I'll bite - perhaps I could ask if you would please be so kind as to put an OC and one of the Mane 6 in a story for me?

 

My OC, Dax, is below my non-sig.  The other character I want in it would be Fluttershy.  

 

No basic plot or ideas from me; I want to see what you'll do with it on your own.  Surprise me, if you feel inclined.

 

Thank you for your time.   B)

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I like it.  

 

WORKS WELL: You've got a vast vocabulary, and your imagery is quite vivid.  

 

WORK ON: On the other end, make sure to triple-check your posts before hitting 'enter', as there's a few typos present.

 

That being said, I think I'll bite - perhaps I could ask if you would please be so kind as to put an OC and one of the Mane 6 in a story for me?

 

My OC, Dax, is below my non-sig.  The other character I want in it would be Fluttershy.  

 

No basic plot or ideas from me; I want to see what you'll do with it on your own.  Surprise me, if you feel inclined.

 

Thank you for your time.   B)

 

I'll get on it today or Tommorow :)

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Randimaxis

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Mares and gentlecolts, I would like it to be known for the record that twilight24 does excellent work!

 

She really impressed me with the way she had the characters' personalities down - she even did quite a bit of justice to my OC, and I'm PICKY!

 

Seriously, give it a chance... I believe you'll be pleasantly surprised!

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This looks like it could be interesting :) Are you up for a story with my OC Crescendo and Octavia? :)

Sure I am ! I just have a few other stories to do to work on. I'm gonna get started in my neopet stories, then I'll do yours ^^

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Mesme Rize

Okay, i think this could maybe be fun,

 

How about my OC Mesme Rize (Description and pic of the character in my Signature) is having a little 1x1 with Zecora?

 

Not sad if you turn down my offer though. ;)

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If it's allowed to be pg or at most pg-13 then yes , I will do it . I don't know how well it'll be but I'll try cx don't do sex scenes or clopping

Okay, i think this could maybe be fun,

 

How about my OC Mesme Rize (Description and pic of the character in my Signature) is having a little 1x1 with Zecora?

 

Not sad if you turn down my offer though. ;)

Okay, i think this could maybe be fun,

 

How about my OC Mesme Rize (Description and pic of the character in my Signature) is having a little 1x1 with Zecora?

 

Not sad if you turn down my offer though. ;)

If it's pg-13 at worst with no sex or clop scenes the. Yes. I'm fine with romance ^^

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If it's allowed to be pg or at most pg-13 then yes , I will do it . I don't know how well it'll be but I'll try cx don't do sex scenes or clopping

 

If it's pg-13 at worst with no sex or clop scenes the. Yes. I'm fine with romance ^^

 

Thank you very much. :)

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Also

Hi there ! I'm trying to develop my writing style and voice,so I thought I'd take a swing at this. I'm not the best and sometimes I have problems in life, but I'll try. I really want to help you with your ocs story. I will also do poetry and stories as a gift for someone or about events in your life. Ocs are not limited to ponies.

I do mostly dark or slice of life. But I'm wiling to try and expand my horizons. Note that I dint do nudity. Cloppimg, graphic sex scenes or violence, and I reserve the right to say no to a request if I feel like I do not have the time or I feel I wouldn't be able to give you a good storie.

I'll take five require at a time.

1.blazedtimed

2.kaa

3.

4.

5.

NOTE: I still have to do real life responsibilities , but I'll try my best to finish your story . im cureently writing a neopets series with a friend . And art trades for story exchanges. But I'll find time

Thank you very much. :)

You're welcome!

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BTW, please enter my name in the list as Hypnosparkle. My current name is just me being funny. :P

 

Also, take all the time you need. Real Life always comes first. ;)

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If you're up for it, I'd love to let you write something with my OC :)

Here's a link to what she looks like, and her personality is in the description :)

 

http://fia94.deviantart.com/art/My-OC-Arctic-Reference-Sheet-554196164

 

I'd love to have her and her pet arctic fox, Mishka, having fun and perhaps bumping into other ponies..

You have freedom with this, surprise me, I look forward to seeing what you write :D

Have fun! :)

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Alright I will ! :)

If you're up for it, I'd love to let you write something with my OC :)

Here's a link to what she looks like, and her personality is in the description :)

 

http://fia94.deviantart.com/art/My-OC-Arctic-Reference-Sheet-554196164

 

I'd love to have her and her pet arctic fox, Mishka, having fun and perhaps bumping into other ponies..

You have freedom with this, surprise me, I look forward to seeing what you write :D

Have fun! :)

Alright I will cx

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Do tou

Can you do a story with my oc Lilac Glow, Fleur, and Rarity?

Lilac Glow likes science, reading, magic, and fashion.

 

Do you have a pictute of her? :) and to all the others waiting it'll be a week or two , but feel free to get on my care (nicely) if I dint get yiye story started by next week . I need the reminders

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Do tou

 

Do you have a pictute of her? :) and to all the others waiting it'll be a week or two , but feel free to get on my care (nicely) if I dint get yiye story started by next week . I need the reminders

Here she is :):

 

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(Her magic color is green if you are wondering ^^)

 

 

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