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Its a very beautiful drawing Twilight beautiful pose looking so elegant lovely and pretty =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=) cute expression on her pony face lovely beautiful work of art =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)<3 I love seeing your drawings great job my friend YAY =)=)=)=)!

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Looks really good! As others have said, the anatomy looks good.

 

For critiques, perhaps I'm just tired since it's early in the morning, but are the shadows shaded with straight black? When shading generally you'd want to use darker/lighter colors of the shaded area, as well as making the color more vibrant (not just adding black to make it darker), not just black and white. You can also experiment with changing the colors a bit, based on where the light is coming from (some light is colored, i.e. a purple lamp would give off purple light, etc.), but that's just an extra step you can take if you really want.

 

Anyways, that's just a bit of nitpicking on the shading. I'd say it looks nice how it is as well.

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It looks really good.

The only thing I can really say is maybe work on the shading a bit. The shading looks a little bit too light (in my opinion). And make sure you focus where the light is coming from. In some areas you have it correct, like the horn and the tail, but the back of her legs it turns into the light facing in the opposite direction.

That's about the only thing I can point out about it. Other than that it's really good! The body portions are dead on and she looks very cute~

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You make her look so majestic! I like the color choice for the background, too. I agree with the above comments on darkening the shading. Also, her front legs look a bit larger than her back legs, but otherwise, great job.

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Wow, thankyou all for your great comments and helpful critique :)

And I've just noticed the shading is in the wrong direction on her back legs :)

Thankyou all so much, you've really helped my confidence :) xxx

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Great job on your drawing; it looks really nice! :D My only critique is to perhaps define the feathers in her wings a little more. I see some shading to show the allusion of feathers but I personally feel this wasn't done enough. Other than this, great job! :D

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I little thing that I can see is that her left nostril is not properly aligned with her muzzle, but other than that; everything else was already said about this awesome drawing.

 

You're right - I hadnt even noticed that :)

Thankyou again everyone :) xx

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Wow it's so neat  :catface:  very lovely! I love how soft all the colours are it makes you feel warm just looking at it  ^_^  
Very gorgeous! Don't be afraid to loosen up and curve your lines even more  ;)

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awww<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 its lovely twilight coming out of the pokemon ball such a sweet beautiful picture <3<3<3<3<3 I can already see your art improving so much <3<3<3<3 i feel so happy for you my friend YAY =)=)=)=)=)<3

 

Thankyou so much everyone :) x


What do you think of this?

Tried a new style :)

 

attachicon.gifi choose you twilight.png

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awww<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 its lovely twilight coming out of the pokemon ball such a sweet beautiful picture <3<3<3<3<3 I can already see your art improving so much <3<3<3<3 i feel so happy for you my friend YAY =)=)=)=)=)<3

 

Thankyou :)

So glad you like it :) xx

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