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I watched the mini movie "My Little Dashie" based on the popular fanfic. The story was so heartbreaking and touching that I teamed up with SrightryAmiss and we wrote this!!! This is the second song for our debut albmum!!!

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbJuCXgzJNQ

 

https://soundcloud.com/lakejones/15years

 

Since my screamo lyrics or not always the clearest, heres the lyrics:

 

The first day that i saw you

My world was coming down
The same old life in the same old town
 
I wondered where you came from
I’ve watched you live and grow
Cause you were just a filly on the street with nowhere to go
 
So do you have to go 
and leave me here by my self 
 
Before i found you 
my life was  a living  hell
 
You were always my little girl
(You were my crutch, you were my world)
 
 
so dont believe
that this is goodbye 
because of you 
these past few years
have been the best of my life
 
So can fly through the skies and be free
but in my heart you will be my little dashie to me
 
I refuse to let this day end  
 
i call up the stairs
but you never comedown
 
I know you fear the truth
but i know youll come around
 
Just remember theres an open door
(you can come in, just tell me when)
 
so dont believe
that this is goodbye 
because of you 
these past few years
have been the best of my life
 
So you can fly through the skies and be free
but in my heart you will be my little dashie to me
 
Well can you blame her
She finnaly with her kind
But dont forget me 
for this will always be your sky
and i will never forget you
 
so dont believe
that this is goodbye 
because of you 
these past few years
have been the best of my life
 
So you can fly through the skies and be free
but in my heart you will be my little dashie to me
 
so dont believe
that this is goodbye 
because of you 
these past few years
have been the best of my life
 
So you can fly through the skies and be free
but in my heart you will be my little dashie to me
 
The first day that i saw you
My world was coming down
The same old life in the same old town
 
I wondered where you came from
I’ve watched you live and grow
Cause you were just a filly on the street with nowhere to go
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
   
 

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Nice song I suppose.  Two things I notice:  The higher notes of the vocals feel a little painful, and the drums sound like wet cardboard (they go flip-flap instead of thump-thwack).

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well we cant please everypony, we worked hard on this, and this is our sound, we go, well, Against the Herd. 

Edited by StealingShad3Z

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SAY WHAT YALL WANT THIS SONG STILL MADE EquestriaDaily'S MUSIC OF THE DAY!!

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I'm not really into punk rock, and this doesn't make me any more inclined toward it. I can't really hear the snare drum and the cymbals are very loud, but the bass drum sounds awesome.

 

I also really like the guitar tone and the busy riff. My main complaint is that the build and drop of the chorus is quick and lackluster. The individual parts are fun, fast, and heavy but the interludes are too short. I found myself unprepared for the next part of the song.

 

I'm not trying to act an ass here. I think your mastering has a few volume problems but the tone of the bass, guitar, drums and vocals are all very good.

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