music This is just a test for a song I created, I would like your thoughts.

[Eternal Nature 321]

https://goo.gl/photos/o6LLhnr5L4ZxZEwYA

 

like i said, i want your thoughts, and be respectful, this is just a test run. If you guys like it, try to get someone to make this an actual song, that would be really nice. Enjoy!

[El Duderino 878]

Well... I guess this has potential, but just because there isn't much there at all yet. There is a lot of room to improve and add. Um, I don't know what style you are imagining. Acoustic? Folk? Rock? Pop? Alternative? It's your song, so you need to provide more of what you want, unless you are OK with someone taking it and doing whatever they want artistically, but you may not like the result if it's not what you imagine.

[SugarfootWillie 383]

I like where this can go. Sounds like some post-modern punk

 

What genre do you want this to be? Is the tempo change at 0:56 and 1:45 intentional? You're not singing on key nor are you singing on time with the tempo change between 0:56 and 1:45.

 

I highly suggest you research rhythm theory

Edited October 23, 2015 by SugarfootWillie

[Eternal Nature 321]

Well... I guess this has potential, but just because there isn't much there at all yet. There is a lot of room to improve and add. Um, I don't know what style you are imagining. Acoustic? Folk? Rock? Pop? Alternative? It's your song, so you need to provide more of what you want, unless you are OK with someone taking it and doing whatever they want artistically, but you may not like the result if it's not what you imagine.

Actually it is alternative metal, but it needs work, I already know that. I just wanted your thoughts, but thanks.

I like where this can go. Sounds like some post-modern punk

 

What genre do you want this to be? Is the tempo change at 0:56 and 1:45 intentional? You're not singing on key nor are you singing on time with the tempo change between 0:56 and 1:45.

 

I highly suggest you research rhythm theory

thanks it's supposed to be at a medium fast paced song. But I can see what your talking about, thanks.

[SugarfootWillie 383]

@, Can I keep tabs on your song through this thread, or will I need to look elsewhere? 

[Eternal Nature 321]

Yes, you can. Um , I'm not going to create another song for a while, so have at it.