critique wanted review cresent (my oc)

[cwhip9 1,078]

hello and welcome cwhip making another form as iv been drawing and reediting my OC Cresent I keep running into walls whether writing or drawing him out in ether RP or the ongoing backstory.

 

This is where you come in the link to him is in my signature.  

 

Note I tried to put myself into him probably hence the trouble I'm running into aaand. GO

 

(jumps behind couch awaiting reactions)

 

and because I cant upload the pic on here for some reason -_- here the link to my drawing of him http://henchman123.deviantart.com/art/Cresent-sharing-pasta-to-568783809?ga_submit_new=10%253A1446012483

Edited October 28, 2015 by cwhip9

[Gold3 36]

Hey @cwhip9! I'll be glad to help you out but what is it exactly you need help with?

[cwhip9 1,078]

what could be improved on as far as chariter and seeing him in say any action/relaxed RP from the links